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Jane Delacour 11-20-2006 01:21 AM

omg me want closet lady!!!
murders viktor,and runs away with closet lady.

"Ya'll never catch me! Muhahuahuaha!"

Great post!

Ron+Hermione=Forever 11-20-2006 07:55 PM

Pams!!!
 
Pams!!!!

the.time.is.now 11-21-2006 12:51 AM

AHHH! FINALLY! I'm posting! It's taking about ten minutes a page to load here - I hate Bellsouth - now I just hope it connects long enough to let me post! Wish me luck!

**If it doesn't work, I'm going to save it to a floppy disk and get online at school tomorrow to post it. It should work, though ...

- By the way, this is NOT the last post! :)

the.time.is.now 11-21-2006 12:57 AM

Hermione slipped into a black bathing suit, and then put a big shirt on top of it. She was nervous – she hadn’t been in so little in front of many people before, especially a boy she’d dated at one time.

When she met him by the front door, she shuddered. “It’s going to be cold, isn’t it? I mean … it’s not exactly as warm here as it is at Hogwarts.”

“It vill be vhen ve valk there,” he said honestly. “But the vater vill not.”

She tried to get him to explain, but he wouldn’t.

They opened the front door and began the long walk to the lake.

“Ve could fly,” he suggested.

She looked at him nervously. “You saw me fly two days ago, but I’ll tell you now – I'm not a big fan of it. I’d rather walk.”

So they did. At first, there wasn’t much conversation – Hermione didn’t really know what to say to a man she’d dated when he was a teenager. However, after several awkward moments and only the sound of their feet against the ground, Viktor spoke up.

“I'm sorry,” he said quietly.

“For what?” she asked, surprised. He had nothing to apologize for.

“For not ever really getting to know you before. Ve … ve talked, I guess, but I didn’t put as much effort into it as I should have.”

“I didn’t, either,” she admitted. “But I had lots of other things going on then, as did you … I mean, you were a Champion, and you’re still a world-renown Quidditch player. And after Cedric … it’s a surprise we stayed together as long as we did.”

“Still, though …”

“Viktor, it’s fine,” Hermione promised. “You have nothing to apologize for. The past is the past … and there’s the lake.”

And a lake it was. From Hermione’s window at the Krum household, it didn’t look so big. However, up close, Hermione could see just how far it stretched.

Viktor opened the gate door for her and let her in. After closing it slowly behind him, he took off his shirt and smiled. “You’re vill not swim in that, vill you?”

She shook her head, blushing. “Turn around – don’t look.”

He did as she said, laughing slightly at her, and while she was stripping down to her bathing suit, he asked, “How are you going to know how to get into the lake if I do not help you?”

Hermione folded up the shirt, knowing he was right. She sighed, and reluctantly said, “All right, but only because I’m cold.”

He peeked over his shoulder, grinning. “Excellent.”

He took her hand in his and led her over to the side of the water. “Right foot first for varm vater, left for hot, both for cold.”

She looked at him, confused. “What?”

“Just try it vith me. Let’s both do varm. Just step into the vater vith your left foot, all right? Go!”

They walked forward, and the water, while cold on impact, turned warm the farther in they went.

“Wow,” Hermione said as it reached her knees.

He laughed. “Vhy, Herm-own-ninny, I thought you knew everything – I expected you to have heard of this before.”

“I have,” she smiled, pushing him away a little. “It’s just rare. And I don’t know everything – just more than you.”

“Oh, you are in for it now!” he smirked, and picked her up. Before she could barely scream, he threw her a few feet away.

She came up, spluttering. “That wasn’t fair!”

“What are going to do about it?”

She giggled, and lunged at him. He dodged it, but let her go forward. She resorted in splashing water on him, so he grabbed her wrists.

“None ov that,” he laughed, pulling her closer.

And before he knew what he was doing, he kissed her.

argentinaz_angel 11-21-2006 01:02 AM

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thats so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but Hermione belongs wid Ron :loved:

:lol:

well done my Cat!

:kitty:

~Dog

gem 11-21-2006 01:05 AM

:shifty: They Kissed?!! :shifty: *wonders what Ron would have to say about this* PAMS!!!! :loved: :shifty:

XxHPaddict17xX 11-21-2006 01:37 AM

OMG, amazing!!!

I wish all lakes, rivers, ocean, etc were like that...

JulieAnn 11-21-2006 02:05 AM

I love it! :glomp: Man that victor has everything, big house, closet ghost and a self heating lake! Where can I get one of him!!!

luv16 11-21-2006 02:07 AM

Aaaaaawwwwwww!
That was such a sweet post!! :D

Loved it!
PAMS!

starlightangel 11-21-2006 04:47 PM

Oh that was such a cool post! But why were they kissing? lol!

siriusblackliveson 11-21-2006 07:18 PM

That was so sweet i hope that the next post is just as sweet because i love it so much. Viktor is so sweet i love how he just dosn't know what to do but he can kiss her like nothing ever went wrong with them.
-sarah

Ron+Hermione=Forever 11-21-2006 07:20 PM

Great post!
 
Sweet Post!!! But I am a little lost as to why Hermione let him kiss her...I know that it was on Victor's agenda or he wouldn't have asked her to his house and to somewhere that they need bathing suits, but what is she thinking???:gasp:PAMSOID!!!

Believe 11-21-2006 07:23 PM

Awww!!! So cute!!! *giggles* I love the lake romance!!!

Post more Caitlin!

<3 Cai

That_one_girl 11-21-2006 11:40 PM

OMG that was such a great post!!!!!!!!!!!!
It was soo cute!!
What's the lake called??? lol

AsKnownAsAbby 11-21-2006 11:48 PM

NOOOOOOO VIKTOR!! lol, that was a cute post. I want a lake like that... geez, Hermione has everything... three guys, a closet lady... a magic lake. I want to be her!!

tomfeltonsgf 11-23-2006 12:44 AM

Aww.
That was cute, but when the heck is Draco going to come back?! Lol.

Agos* 11-23-2006 12:49 AM

I agree with Imi there...why are they kissing?

lol

Amazing as usual!

PAMS!

Fallon Chanel 11-23-2006 12:55 AM

eww they kissed!?? where is Draco when you need him!?? PAMS!! PAMSOiD!!

Weasleygurl 11-26-2006 01:48 AM

Wow, Victor has a very unusual home! Sorry I've been gone for so long; homework and school have consumed my life. I can't believe this story is ending alread; how many posts are left? PAMS!

Oya 11-26-2006 04:49 PM

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! that is sooo sweet!

'Ele_the_writer 11-26-2006 06:04 PM

awww that was a great post, but...

I still have major Draco withdrawals! I hope this fic still won't end... let's have Hermione realize that although Viktor is a great guy, Draco is her one and only. *prays fevrently*

PAMS!

Maxilocks 11-26-2006 06:10 PM

They kissed? Perfect. :P

the.time.is.now 11-27-2006 04:26 PM

Urgh finally I'm back! Thanksgiving took over my life! Writing writing writing!

You guys are amazing.

By the way - this will probably be the last post.

And P.S. I promise to be more dedicated to my next FF. Marching season is over (we lost Friday night, 32-29) so expect me on a LOT more! :)

luv16 11-27-2006 05:09 PM

NOOOOO!!!
Last post?! :gasp:
No! I don't want Fate to end! :no:

Where is that Ronald Weasley?! <_<
Is Hermione not going to end up with him?! :ron2: *shocked*
:cry:

Oh and I'm sorry that you lost, but I'm glad you'll be on more now ;)

siriusblackliveson 11-27-2006 06:52 PM

Wait so you mean that you will have a death eaters life up soon? oh my gosh that's so sad, but at least you had a good marching season, hope you have a good winter.
-sarah


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