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HPlover_09 10-14-2006 01:44 AM

NO! Hermione can not end up with Victor! She and Ron are meant-to-be! Anyhoo, the last two posts were awesome! I can't wait for more!

padfoot_88 10-14-2006 09:43 AM

I love this fic, Caitlin! I can't wait for the next post! I've been reading for a while, just not replying, so I'm an old reader and a new poster!

Harry4emma 10-14-2006 02:04 PM

i chose to re read this one and i really hope HG and victor get 2gother :icecream:

Pandalicious 10-14-2006 02:17 PM

Whoa! Where did Vicky come from? LOL! Awesome post :glomp: :loved:

dancerbookl 10-14-2006 02:55 PM

Why is Victor here? He's going to ruin everything isn't he? PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! Please! Great post!
Jessica

siriusblackliveson 10-14-2006 09:25 PM

i can't wait for another post soon. Whoot whoot.
-me

the.time.is.now 10-14-2006 11:51 PM

Aww hey everyone, new readers and old! ^_^ Well, yesterday, I meant to say I will be writing soon, but now I am going to be posting soon! You guys make me so excited to write!

Oh, by the way - Maxie, I believe - you said my writing gets a little better with each post - thank you! I try very hard to improve it! That's why I LOVE constructive criticism. Anyone can send it to me whenever they'd like! ^_^

Maxilocks 10-15-2006 07:59 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Caitlin
Oh, by the way - Maxie, I believe - you said my writing gets a little better with each post - thank you! I try very hard to improve it! That's why I LOVE constructive criticism. Anyone can send it to me whenever they'd like! ^_^

*pets* I don't have anything to criticise yet, or I would have. XP Lol, anyways, post again soon, pretty please. As always, I’ll be waiting. *nod-nod* ^_^

Oya 10-15-2006 09:11 PM

Viktor!!! Aagghhh!!!!

BrightestWitch 10-16-2006 06:30 AM

What the cracker!? :faint: Viktor!? :rotfl: Oh Dear!!! Hmm...dressed in black? :shifty: Okay, this is getting odd. But I love it. :yes:

I know I was late in reading again. :head: But I read it and I :loved: it! Can't wait to see what happens next. ^_^

Hermionespell 10-16-2006 07:58 PM

Whoa! I've sure missed a lot!

That was a twist I did not expect, I have to say...

MadameMalfoy 10-17-2006 12:24 AM

Awww....MAN! Post SoOoOoOoN!! I cant wait to read more! Viktor? How unusual! PAMS!

NEW READER ALERT! :P

tomfeltonsgf 10-17-2006 08:48 PM

What the heck is Viktor doing here? He's kinda cool I guess, although we all know that Hermione really belongs with Draco.

siriusblackliveson 10-18-2006 04:23 PM

Wow this is suspenceful you know that. lol well i hope you post sometime because i get addictied to your writeing.
-me

the.time.is.now 10-18-2006 05:38 PM

Hi new reader! :glomp: What's your name??

OMG, you guys, I am such a retard! I'd thought I'd already posted the post - and then I get online and realize that I didn't! *dies*

Well, I'm posting now! I'm really sorry about the delay! *smacks self*

the.time.is.now 10-18-2006 05:57 PM

“Viktor?” she cried, flinging her arms around him. “What’re you doing here?”

“Vell,” he began to explain. “Ven I invited you to my house for the summer, you said no, so I was thinking instead I’d come see you. You fly much better than I imagined, Herm-own-ninny. I vos watching.”

“Thank ... thank you,” she said breathlessly, still trying to sort things out. “How long are you here for?”

“I just stopped by to see you – I did not want to be a hindrance. I am leaving very soon.”

“You’re not a hindrance,” Hermione laughed. “Would you like to come in and get something eat? I bet supper is almost ready.”

He smiled. “I vould love to.”

As Hermione opened the back door, she heard Ron call through the house. “Hermione, who was it that came to see you? Don’t tell me it was that prat, Malfoy …”

Hermione shook her head and led Viktor to the kitchen where Ron was sitting with his back to the two. Harry looked fun from their game of Exploding Snap and grinned.

Wondering what he was on about, Ron turned around and his jaw dropped open. “Krum?”

“Yes,” he nodded. “It is good to see you again, Ron, and Harry …”

“Krum, in my house,” Ron said faintly.

Mrs. Weasley swooped into the kitchen, stirring a pot of potatoes. “Are you staying for dinner, Viktor?”

“Yes, if you do not mind.”

“Not at all,” she smiled sweetly, turning around. “Harry, Ron, come set the table. Arthur should be home soon, so we’ll get ready to eat. Hermione, if you’d like, you and Viktor could go to the living room and catch up for a while.”

Hermione was amazed at how Mrs. Weasley could take everything in stride. She acted like having a world-renown Quidditch player in her house was an every day occurrence. Laughing, she sat on the couch and pulled Viktor to her side.

“How did you get here? Don’t tell me that you flew!”

He smiled. “No, even I am not that crazy. Mrs. Vesley let me arrive by Floo Powder. She is a very nice voman.”

“Yes, she is,” Hermione agreed.

….

Dinner came and passed, with mixed conversations about Quidditch, school, and the future. Afterwards, Hermione and Viktor sat at the table in the backyard, eating dessert. A lamp was glowing softly between them as they joked about their past together.

“Ah, that one time, vith vot was his name? Filch?”

“Yeah!” she laughed, tears spilling over the corners of her eyes. “I can’t believe he actually thought you were possessed by the spirit of his old cat!”

“Vell, the random bits of meowing helped!”

They giggled for a couple minutes longer, but then silence fell upon them.
“Herm-own-ninny,” he finally spoke. “I … I vanted to know if you vould like to come to see me at my house, sometime during the summer.”

She twisted a strand of hair around her finger thoughtfully, sighing. “I … I’d love to, Viktor.”

AsKnownAsAbby 10-18-2006 06:07 PM

*NEW READER!* Ok, I've been reading anonymously for a little while... but I've finally decided to share myself. Hi, I'm Abby your *new* reader
Good job!! PAMS! Viktor... how unexpected.

Believe 10-18-2006 06:40 PM

Awww! Hermione and Viktor sitting in a tree... K-I-S-S-I-N-G!

Well, technically not, because they weren't in a tree and they weren't kissing... but it was so sweet. But, really Caitlin... stop confusing us! What's going to happen with Draco? And what about Ron? Come on, you can tell me... hee hee!

If you ever need a Beta Reader... remember I'm here!

<3 Cai

Maxilocks 10-18-2006 06:47 PM

I so want 'Mione && Viktor to get together. :shifty: But Hermione's going to land herself in trouble again, if she continues as she is going on. =[ First Draco, now Viktor. 0_o

Fallon Chanel 10-18-2006 08:38 PM

NO!!!!!!!!!!!!! BRiNG MY DRACO BACK!!!!!!!!!!!! HE AND HERMiONE BELONG TOGETHER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KiLL ViKTOR OFF OR SOMETHiNG!!!!!!!!!!! YEAH! LET DRACO KiLL ViKTOR!!!!!!!!!!! YEAH, DO THAT!!!!!!!!! PLEZ!!!!!!!!!! LOL PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!! PAMSOiD!!!!!!!!

Agos* 10-18-2006 08:46 PM

If she ends up with Victor, I'll go and kick him!

PAMS!

Lovely as usual dear!

pgspickles 10-18-2006 08:55 PM

aww herimone is so cute

but victor on the other hand ICK!

she should kno better silly hermione

PAMSOID!

XxHPaddict17xX 10-18-2006 09:15 PM

Aw! J'adore your story!!! PAMS!!!!

dancerbookl 10-18-2006 10:25 PM

WHAT! She's going to his house? pinch me someone!

lUnAlOvEgOoD4lIfE 10-18-2006 10:56 PM

ew. viktor. eww. make him GO! more soon!!

*Danielle*


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