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09-08-2009, 06:54 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Behind a book
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Yes!!!! I do!  Awesomeness!
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09-08-2009, 06:54 PM
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#177 (permalink)
| Doxy
Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Mystic Falls
Posts: 6,032
Hogwarts RPG Name: Karly Lockwood Third Year | <('_'<) (>'_')>
more more more more more!!!!! Luvs youuuuuu
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09-08-2009, 07:02 PM
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|  SS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Yonder ♥
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Carve Hetcher Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute
Here it is  AHH im so excited!! Draco’s Pov.
Why was it so hard to walk away? He had one job to do; give her the packages, and leave. Maybe throw a few insults in there for good measure. But he had failed to do one of those things, and very nearly failed to do another.
Draco was confused. He was angry at himself that this should be happening to him. NO, he told himself, this isn’t happening. You’re wrong. But how can i be wrong? A voice sneered inside his head. We feel the same things, you and I. We see the same things, experience the same scenes. Where we disagree is on the path. You know the correct path, it would be simple. She could love you.
He shook his head to clear it before he could linger on that idea.
But he couldn’t deny that it had been hard. Hard to leave, and hard to walk away from those eyes. They fascinated him. They were warm, honey coloured and beautiful. But at the same time managed to convey so many emotions at the same time. You saw something in those eyes, the voice in his head sneered. Something you don’t want to admit to yourself. That is why I am here. You wanted to touch her skin, to feel her hair. And you will not stop wanting to, never. You can keep me out if you try, but I will win. You know I will.
Draco broke into a run along the corridor, trying to clear his head.
Any more? Im in a writy mood! xxxx
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09-08-2009, 07:16 PM
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#179 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Behind a book
Posts: 797
First Year | SS Junior Reporter Junior Varsity Cheerleader
:O OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yes! Another one! YAYS!
*hyperventales* (SP?) Lol
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09-08-2009, 07:21 PM
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#180 (permalink)
| Pogrebin
Join Date: May 2009 Location: London
Posts: 32,850
Hogwarts RPG Name: Alexander River Hirsch Gryffindor Third Year Hogwarts RPG Name: --
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| urine trouble | Pat's Strong Confident Other Half | Pees Like a Champion Unicorn Racehorse OMG! OMG! OMG! I can't believe i nearly missed such a brilliant story! Bad Kita! Ok. Back to the post. Wow! Hermione loves Draco! Eep! Hope Draco loves her back! By the sounds of this post, he sounds like he does! Lets wait and find out. Hope he does, though! *crosses fingers* That's so sad on Hermione! Ron is being so silly! Wonder who gave Harry that parcel and letter? Wonder who it's from? Hm... Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita
PS: New reader! To answer your question: yes please!
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09-08-2009, 07:27 PM
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#181 (permalink)
|  SS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Carve Hetcher Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute Quote:
Originally Posted by cursedkatie :O OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yes! Another one! YAYS!
*hyperventales* (SP?) Lol Dont Hyperventalate!! Maybe my story is unhealty for you LOL! well we will have to see my dear. Ron is a silly boy  he will get a good poking  lol 
Luffs ya
New post in 10
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09-08-2009, 07:32 PM
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#182 (permalink)
|  SS 100 Triumphant! Ramora
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: PININ for the FJORDS
Posts: 5,639
Hogwarts RPG Name: Hadley Taylor Fourth Year | Canon Niffler || Neville's Yorkshire Pudding | | Teddy's Biographer || P + R = ♥
Ah, the power of advertising! Kita's here
That Draco, a coward in any story!
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09-08-2009, 07:33 PM
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#183 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Behind a book
Posts: 797
First Year | SS Junior Reporter Junior Varsity Cheerleader Quote:
Dont Hyperventalate!! Maybe my story is unhealty for you
It could never be unhealthy for me!  Well.....
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09-08-2009, 07:38 PM
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#184 (permalink)
|  SS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Yonder ♥
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Carve Hetcher Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute Quote:
Originally Posted by HannahLongbottom Ah, the power of advertising! Kita's here
That Draco, a coward in any story! *taps you on back*
"excuse me...err.......are you dissing my boyfriend?" Quote:
Originally Posted by cursedkatie It could never be unhealthy for me!  Well..... Good Good!
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09-08-2009, 07:48 PM
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#185 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Behind a book
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First Year | SS Junior Reporter Junior Varsity Cheerleader
Lol, I think that she is dissing him and just so you know, he's cheating on you. Apparently my BFF, Anika, (dracoroxmysox) and Tom are married  sorry
__________________  Thanks so much Marcy!
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09-08-2009, 07:59 PM
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#186 (permalink)
|  SS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Yonder ♥
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Carve Hetcher Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute
New'n
Hermione turned the packages over in her hands, slowly making her way back into the common room. The names on the packages were written differently. The first said “Harry Potter” in the writing that was obviously a girl’s. It was rounded and loopy. The other, read, “Hermione.” No second name. The writing was neat, small and spiky.
After quietly running Harry’s up to his dorm, she settled herself in the largest armchair by the fire to open the package. It was slightly bulky, and it rattles a bit. She gently tore the paper back.
The first thing she saw was a letter in the same spiky penmanship. She held it by the fire so that she could read: Quote:
Dear Hermione,
I cant really explain why I am doing this. It’s not because i am trying to conceal anything from you, it’s just that I don’t know myself.
Something hit me the other day. I saw you on the train, looking upset and red eyed. I don’t know why, but seeing you like that, it...well, it made me think. I didn’t like seeing you upset, not at all. I think the reason why I’ve never seen thins before is because you’ve never had that reaction before. When you are angry, you are funny. You get annoyed, but never upset. It surprised me, and i hate myself for being the one to bring you so much misery.
But why wait till now to have that reaction? I have to know. You don’t owe me anything, but i need to know.
I want to get to know you, Hermione Granger. If you would like, that is.
Truly,
Draco
She shook the rest of the paper out, and something jangled out of it, falling into her lap. When she looked down, she gasped.
It was a long, silver chain – real too, by the weight of it. The chain itself was beautiful. Tiny markings ran around it in dips and swirls. But it was not this that made her gasp.
Two pendants swung from the chain. The first was a lion, unbelievably realistic, and beautifully carved. Next to it, swung a tiny silver snake, half-coiled. Hermione fumbled for the clasp and put it on, and it fit perfectly around her neck, as though it was always meant to be there. The mini Gryffindor and Slytherin pendants swung side by side.
Next post (i dunno when) will be dracos pov...  luff you all
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09-08-2009, 08:00 PM
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#187 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Not the beach
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Fantastic post! Can't wait for more!(: PAMS PAMS please...
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09-08-2009, 08:08 PM
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#188 (permalink)
|  SS 100 Triumphant! Ramora
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: PININ for the FJORDS
Posts: 5,639
Hogwarts RPG Name: Hadley Taylor Fourth Year | Canon Niffler || Neville's Yorkshire Pudding | | Teddy's Biographer || P + R = ♥ Quote:
Originally Posted by firenjen *taps you on back*
"excuse me...err.......are you dissing my boyfriend?" Uuuuuummmmm, maybe I am Pansy P and maybe I'm not!
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Excellent Chapter!
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09-08-2009, 08:37 PM
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#189 (permalink)
| Billywig
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Athens,Greece GMT+2
Posts: 3,518
Hogwarts RPG Name: Aphrodite Papadakis Seventh Year | Proud Greek speaker| | Romione ♥ I've missed so many posts!!!!!!!(Bad Christina)!!! ...I Loved it so much!!!<333 I can't wait for more!!!Please post soon!!!
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09-08-2009, 11:05 PM
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#190 (permalink)
| Doxy
Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Mystic Falls
Posts: 6,032
Hogwarts RPG Name: Karly Lockwood Third Year | <('_'<) (>'_')>
Ohh hunni that was brilliant, the necklace truley made me awww out loud i loved it.
I love how you write and how the story is coming together  you
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09-09-2009, 03:52 AM
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#191 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: May 2009 Location: Missouri
Posts: 1,534
Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily Adams First Year |
WOW! I love it please please pleasepleae post more soon i have been at the barn and school all day please post more soon!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it what is harrys packagae!
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09-09-2009, 11:51 AM
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#192 (permalink)
|  SS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Yonder ♥
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Carve Hetcher Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack Fantastic post! Can't wait for more!(: PAMS PAMS please... Glad you like it Quote:
Originally Posted by HannahLongbottom Uuuuuummmmm, maybe I am Pansy P and maybe I'm not!
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Excellent Chapter! hmmmm......pansy.........  LUFF YOU! LOL LOL!! Ill forgive you  thanks for reading, glad you loved it Quote:
Originally Posted by kerryleanne Ohh hunni that was brilliant, the necklace truley made me awww out loud i loved it.
I love how you write and how the story is coming together  you  Thankyou *bows*  yeah, i kinda want that necklace Quote:
Originally Posted by PotterGirl714 WOW! I love it please please pleasepleae post more soon i have been at the barn and school all day please post more soon!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it what is harrys packagae!
Same with school  Glad you love it, and as for the package.....teheehee
__________________ ♥♥♥My heart is out at sea. And my Head's al over the place.  I'm losing sense of time, and everything tastes the same.
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09-09-2009, 01:58 PM
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#193 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Behind a book
Posts: 797
First Year | SS Junior Reporter Junior Varsity Cheerleader
:O O M G!!! Awesomness in one goody post! PAMS! I lurve the story!!
__________________  Thanks so much Marcy!
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09-09-2009, 02:49 PM
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#194 (permalink)
| Pogrebin
Join Date: May 2009 Location: London
Posts: 32,850
Hogwarts RPG Name: Alexander River Hirsch Gryffindor Third Year Hogwarts RPG Name: --
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| urine trouble | Pat's Strong Confident Other Half | Pees Like a Champion Unicorn Racehorse That letter was so sweet! I couldn't help but cry even more. Draco's so confused. The part where Draco said in the letter that he wants to get to know Hermione was probably one of the best parts in this post! And then there's the gift. Can i just say: i never knew Draco was such a sweet guy! That gift is so nice! I couldn't help saying "Aw"! Wonder what Harry got? Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita
PS: HannahLongbottom: I'm so glad i'm here. I'm glad that you're glad that i'm here. Haha!
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09-09-2009, 05:33 PM
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#195 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hobbiton
Posts: 1,996
Hogwarts RPG Name: Evie Delilah Fourth Year | "It's a wonderful life"
Am so unbelievably sorry!  I had to go off before I could read it! But it is AMAZING! GREAT! AMAZING! PAMS! I love it so much! Can't wait till you post more, it's getting really exciting! xxx Luffs you xxx |
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09-10-2009, 06:22 AM
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#196 (permalink)
|  SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sarani Glass Graduated x12
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That was beautiful, it really was, Firengine.
I love how you described the chain, simply lovely!
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09-10-2009, 11:19 AM
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#197 (permalink)
| Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
Posts: 12,756
Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla Reeser Graduated | ♥ Socelyn | #Jeness | S W A G | ShortPerson&TallPerson | Nade ♥ OOOOOOOOOOooooooOOOOoOoOOOooohhhhh!!!! tehe. xDD
I want that necklace!!!!!
MINE!! 
PAMS!! Jess
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09-11-2009, 08:18 AM
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#198 (permalink)
|  SS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Carve Hetcher Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute Quote:
Originally Posted by cursedkatie :O O M G!!! Awesomness in one goody post! PAMS! I lurve the story!!  Good!!  thankyou Kat Quote:
Originally Posted by hermionesclone That letter was so sweet! I couldn't help but cry even more.
awwww! sorry kita, didnt mean to make you cry  Quote:
Originally Posted by hermionesclone Draco's so confused. yes indeedy, little pally  Quote:
Originally Posted by Kitaluffie The part where Draco said in the letter that he wants to get to know Hermione was probably one of the best parts in this post! oooooh thankyou  Quote:
Originally Posted by Kitaaaaa And then there's the gift. Can i just say: i never knew Draco was such a sweet guy! That gift is so nice! I couldn't help saying "Aw"! Wonder what Harry got? Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita
PS: HannahLongbottom: I'm so glad i'm here. I'm glad that you're glad that i'm here.  Haha! Lol, thankies luff, im glad you liked it  x Quote:
Originally Posted by ♥♥♥Bella♥♥♥ Am so unbelievably sorry!  I had to go off before I could read it! But it is AMAZING! GREAT! AMAZING! PAMS! I love it so much! Can't wait till you post more, it's getting really exciting! xxx Luffs you xxx  Thankies luffie  (btw, i think we more or less have everyone in for the rp now Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie OhMyGosh!
That was beautiful, it really was, Firengine.
I love how you described the chain, simply lovely!
I can't wait for MOORRRE!   thankyou maxieluffie I want it too! lol! i think jan (elpez) makes jewellery. Maybe we could make her make the chain
__________________ ♥♥♥My heart is out at sea. And my Head's al over the place.  I'm losing sense of time, and everything tastes the same.
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09-11-2009, 01:14 PM
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#199 (permalink)
| Imp
Join Date: Mar 2009
Posts: 400
Hogwarts RPG Name: Monica Brennan First Year | RED VINES!! * AVPM
more more plz!!!
*Sammy*
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09-11-2009, 03:48 PM
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#200 (permalink)
|  SS 100 Triumphant! Ramora
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: PININ for the FJORDS
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Hadley Taylor Fourth Year | Canon Niffler || Neville's Yorkshire Pudding | | Teddy's Biographer || P + R = ♥ Quote:
Originally Posted by firenjen hmmmm......pansy.........  LUFF YOU!  You want to be Pansy  Are you feeling alright? I thought that you'd want to be Astoria Greengrass, she's the one he married.
Luff you too!
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