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09-02-2009, 03:49 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Candy Mountain
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Ahhhh, Jen.
I am now obsessed with this story!
Sorry that I missed your last chapter, please don't hate me!
I love this chapter, and Ron needs to have some sense knocked into him! (I wouldn't mind doing it for you  )
Post more soon please :heart2:
LoveYou 
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09-02-2009, 03:58 PM
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#102 (permalink)
|  SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sarani Glass Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ] You write great, Firengine!
New reader alert, by the way. *begins to make camp here* I've only started reading your FF today, and it may take me a day or two to catch up, but I love you, and how you write. Go, go you! |
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09-02-2009, 03:58 PM
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#103 (permalink)
|  SS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Carve Hetcher Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute Quote:
Originally Posted by Amerleigh Ahhhh, Jen.
I am now obsessed with this story!
Sorry that I missed your last chapter, please don't hate me!
I love this chapter, and Ron needs to have some sense knocked into him! (I wouldn't mind doing it for you  )
Post more soon please :heart2:
LoveYou 
-Amy xx  yay! obsessions are a GOOD thing! (speaking of obsessions, you are online, so pleeeeeeeeeeease say thiat means you are updating nobodys perfect and Perfection!! pretty please with cherries on top?!?!)
I dont hate you, infact i LOVE you  dont cry *pats on back*
Yep, feel free to give him a good kicking. ill come and help you if you want.
posting soon (ish)
luffs ya ammyyyyyy
Jen
__________________ ♥♥♥My heart is out at sea. And my Head's al over the place.  I'm losing sense of time, and everything tastes the same.
I'll be home in a day. I fear that's a month too late. ♥♥♥ |
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09-02-2009, 04:00 PM
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#104 (permalink)
|  SS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Carve Hetcher Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie You write great, Firengine!
New reader alert, by the way. *begins to make camp here* I've only started reading your FF today, and it may take me a day or two to catch up, but I love you, and how you write. Go, go you!
Maxie Dearie!
oooh ta, thats a compliament coming from the winner of the golden goblin thingy 
*gives you a pillow to make your camp nice and comfy*
take as much time as you need lovie
Jen xx
__________________ ♥♥♥My heart is out at sea. And my Head's al over the place.  I'm losing sense of time, and everything tastes the same.
I'll be home in a day. I fear that's a month too late. ♥♥♥ |
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09-02-2009, 05:58 PM
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#105 (permalink)
| Billywig
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Athens,Greece GMT+2
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aphrodite Papadakis Seventh Year | Proud Greek speaker| | Romione ♥ I'm a new reader round here but i Love this story!I can't wait for more! |
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09-02-2009, 07:22 PM
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#106 (permalink)
|  SS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Carve Hetcher Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute Quote:
Originally Posted by BonnieGinnyfan I'm a new reader round here but i Love this story!I can't wait for more! Hello!
i love new readers A LOT!
*special wave*
Welcome to the Echo's Family 
Jen x
__________________ ♥♥♥My heart is out at sea. And my Head's al over the place.  I'm losing sense of time, and everything tastes the same.
I'll be home in a day. I fear that's a month too late. ♥♥♥ |
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09-02-2009, 08:18 PM
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#107 (permalink)
|  SS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Carve Hetcher Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute
Just a Shortie.
************************************************** ************************************************** *** Walk
Because the christmas holidays were fast coming to an end, and because they knew that they would have no sucess whatsoever at tackling Malfoy in his natural environment, Harry and Hermione agreed that they would wait untill they were back at school to talk to him.
The journey back to school was not a pleasent one. Ron was still talking to neither Harry or Hermione, Hermione felt increasingly nervous and tense about the next time she would see Malfoy, and Harry couldn't believe that, at some point, he was going to have to be civil to Malfoy and would be working to bring him closer to the group whe, on any other occasion, he would be running in the other direction. However, the time came further than they thought.
They had been on the Hogwarts Express for about an hour, sitting in a kind of awkward silence, when the compartment door slid open. "Ah!" Malfoy stood at the door, flanked by Crabbe and Goyle, looking triumphant. "Here we are! Weasle, King Potter and the Mudblood."
Harrys hands balled into fists. But he stared strait ahead, not acnolaging the blond boy at the door. "What, not speaking today are we?" he smirked. "Not even you Weasley?"
Ron looked up in distaste.
Malfoy turned his attention to Hermione. It was easy bait, to insult them while they sat there and took it. He sniggered. "You're quiet too," he said, accusingly.
She looked up at him, tears in her eys, and he froze. For just a moment, the tiniest flick of movement. Then he turned, and walked out of the compartment. "What the hell was all that about?" Said Ron, speaking for the first time in days. Hermione wiped a tear from her cheek.
__________________ ♥♥♥My heart is out at sea. And my Head's al over the place.  I'm losing sense of time, and everything tastes the same.
I'll be home in a day. I fear that's a month too late. ♥♥♥
Last edited by firenjen; 09-03-2009 at 09:22 PM.
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09-02-2009, 08:35 PM
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#108 (permalink)
| Gnome
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Wales Matie (Y) :)
Posts: 254
| OMG Jeneee duude..
i just realised ive missed like loads of posts on this story but i aint got a clue how.. 
im sowwy 
loved the post feel soo sorry for hermione .. poor girl hehe
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09-02-2009, 09:18 PM
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#109 (permalink)
| Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla Reeser Graduated | ♥ Socelyn | #Jeness | S W A G | ShortPerson&TallPerson | Nade ♥  -pets'mione- 
BAD JEN!!! hahahaha.  Just kidding!!!
I can't wait for the next chapter Jenluff!!!! <333333
PAMS!!!  Jess
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09-02-2009, 11:11 PM
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#110 (permalink)
|  SS 100 Triumphant! Ramora
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Hadley Taylor Fourth Year | Canon Niffler || Neville's Yorkshire Pudding | | Teddy's Biographer || P + R = ♥
Ah Jen with these tiny chapters you are really spoiling us! Not like me, really mean and make my reader wait for ages because I don't like the chapter
(realises that Jen has probably never seen the advert she just referenced)
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09-03-2009, 07:08 AM
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#111 (permalink)
| Billywig
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Athens,Greece GMT+2
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aphrodite Papadakis Seventh Year | Proud Greek speaker| | Romione ♥
I can't wait for the next chapter!!! |
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09-03-2009, 10:43 AM
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#112 (permalink)
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Carve Hetcher Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute i know  but you never know, things might take a turn up in the way of luurve...but then again they might not.....or will they??  *taps noes*
teehee
hmmmm the mystery of the missing post.....maybe dobby ate them?? he's seen the socks you are planning on wearing to the wedding and thought he'd get revenge Quote:
Originally Posted by Hermione<3Ron  -pets'mione- 
BAD JEN!!! hahahaha.  Just kidding!!!
I can't wait for the next chapter Jenluff!!!! <333333
PAMS!!!  Jess sowwieeee  next chapter soon jessiluff x Quote:
Originally Posted by HannahLongbottom Ah Jen with these tiny chapters you are really spoiling us! Not like me, really mean and make my reader wait for ages because I don't like the chapter
(realises that Jen has probably never seen the advert she just referenced) AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! lol!  that made me chuckle, and i have no idea why!!! Quote:
Originally Posted by BonnieGinnyfan I can't wait for the next chapter!!!  eeeeep! next chapter up sooon hopefully
__________________ ♥♥♥My heart is out at sea. And my Head's al over the place.  I'm losing sense of time, and everything tastes the same.
I'll be home in a day. I fear that's a month too late. ♥♥♥ |
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09-03-2009, 01:36 PM
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#113 (permalink)
|  SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sarani Glass Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ] GREAT post!
It was short, but definitely sweet.
I loved it, so gimme MORE. 
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09-03-2009, 04:02 PM
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#114 (permalink)
|  SS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Carve Hetcher Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie GREAT post!
It was short, but definitely sweet.
I loved it, so gimme MORE. 
-waits-
heres more vvv
__________________ ♥♥♥My heart is out at sea. And my Head's al over the place.  I'm losing sense of time, and everything tastes the same.
I'll be home in a day. I fear that's a month too late. ♥♥♥
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09-03-2009, 06:18 PM
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#115 (permalink)
|  SS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Carve Hetcher Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute
new post 
************************************************** ********************************* Illusion It was dark. Hermione stood in the shadows of the castle, just watching. Taking in the sounds and the scents of her surroundings. A slight breeze streamed around her, curling her hair around her shoulders and face. She let them linger. No one was here to observe.
She looked up automatically. The sky was a deep, velvet purple, glittered with a thousand diamonds, each of which sparked to their own rhythm. And at that moment, she felt weightless. She had no troubles, or worries, or thoughts. Just those of the beautifulness of her surroundings. She could do anything tonight; she could fly and not fall, she could swim to the bottom of the lake and not drown, she could jump off of the highest turret of the castle, and land softly on her toes. It was a good night, she thought to herself.
Footsteps were approaching - breaking though her silent reverie. Muted slightly by the dark grass, they stopped beside her. But she did not jump or start, because nothing would hurt her tonight.
For a few minutes, Hermione and the owner of the footsteps stood side by side in silence. When she turned, she was still calm. It was as though she had known who the footsteps belonged too all along, and so the owner came as no surprise to her. He was a little taller than her, wearing black with his hands tucked in his pockets by his side. His silver hair shone brighter than the moon. He was looking at her. Not scowling like he usually did, but looking with polite, knowing interest. She returned his gaze, feeling contented.
Draco Malfoy reached out a white hand – made paler in the darkness. He put his arm around her waist, and curled her into him. She felt secure, locked against his chest. His other hand found the back of her head, and began to softly stoke her hair. She listened to the steady rhythm of his heart, his even breathing.
Eventually, she looked up, longing to see his face. He gazed down at her with intense eyes. Slowly, in the light of the moon, he bent his head to meet hers. Their lips gently brushed, testing. He smiled and bent again, this time kissing her harder, and she obliged. They remained like that for a long while. When they broke apart, Draco‘s lips moved to Hermione’s ear.
“I love you, Hermione Granger,” he whispered. His voice silky smooth...
Hermione suddenly awoke, breathing heavily. As she looked around her, her heart plummeted. She was in her dormitory, and she had never left it.
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__________________ ♥♥♥My heart is out at sea. And my Head's al over the place.  I'm losing sense of time, and everything tastes the same.
I'll be home in a day. I fear that's a month too late. ♥♥♥
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09-03-2009, 06:50 PM
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#116 (permalink)
| Billywig
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Athens,Greece GMT+2
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aphrodite Papadakis Seventh Year | Proud Greek speaker| | Romione ♥ That was so amazing!!!!i loved it!!!
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09-03-2009, 06:57 PM
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#117 (permalink)
|  SS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Carve Hetcher Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute Quote:
Originally Posted by BonnieGinnyfan That was so amazing!!!!i loved it!!! eeeeeps!  im in a writing mood atm. and a very big hermy/draco mood. i love him
im glad you loved it  ta
__________________ ♥♥♥My heart is out at sea. And my Head's al over the place.  I'm losing sense of time, and everything tastes the same.
I'll be home in a day. I fear that's a month too late. ♥♥♥ |
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09-03-2009, 08:30 PM
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#118 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Behind a book
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First Year | SS Junior Reporter Junior Varsity Cheerleader
Aww! That was awesome but sooo sad :'( I'm so sorry that I haven't been up with the posts lately! I'm ashamed
__________________  Thanks so much Marcy!
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09-03-2009, 08:33 PM
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#119 (permalink)
|  SS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Carve Hetcher Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute Quote:
Originally Posted by cursedkatie Aww! That was awesome but sooo sad :'( I'm so sorry that I haven't been up with the posts lately! I'm ashamed  Why?? lol no need to be ashamed my darling
__________________ ♥♥♥My heart is out at sea. And my Head's al over the place.  I'm losing sense of time, and everything tastes the same.
I'll be home in a day. I fear that's a month too late. ♥♥♥ |
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09-03-2009, 09:23 PM
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#120 (permalink)
|  SS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Carve Hetcher Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute
deleat..
__________________ ♥♥♥My heart is out at sea. And my Head's al over the place.  I'm losing sense of time, and everything tastes the same.
I'll be home in a day. I fear that's a month too late. ♥♥♥
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09-03-2009, 09:42 PM
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#121 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Behind a book
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Lol, then I won't be!  But still, poor Hermione! I hope that they end up getting together! *wink wink, nudge nudge*
__________________  Thanks so much Marcy!
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09-03-2009, 09:46 PM
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#122 (permalink)
|  SS 100 Triumphant! Ramora
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That was amazing! Every word is perfectly pitched, just wonderful.
I loved this bit Quote:
Originally Posted by firenjen She looked up automatically. The sky was a deep, velvet purple, glittered with a thousand diamonds, each of which sparked to their own rhythm. And at that moment, she felt weightless. She had no troubles, or worries, or thoughts. Just those of the beautifulness of her surroundings. She could do anything tonight; she could fly and not fall, she could swim to the bottom of the lake and not drown, she could jump off of the highest turret of the castle, and land softly on her toes. It was a good night, she thought to herself. but this was my favourite and I hate Malfoy! Quote:
Originally Posted by firenjen Draco Malfoy reached out a white hand – made paler in the darkness. He put his arm around her waist, and curled her into him. She felt secure, locked against his chest. His other hand found the back of her head, and began to softly stoke her hair. She listened to the steady rhythm of his heart, his even breathing. Keep up the good work! More please!
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09-03-2009, 10:03 PM
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#123 (permalink)
|  SS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Carve Hetcher Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute Quote:
Originally Posted by cursedkatie Lol, then I won't be!  But still, poor Hermione! I hope that they end up getting together! *wink wink, nudge nudge* wink wink nudge nudge say no more. i dunno  hermy may even fall for Hagrid at the end.....you never know.. Quote:
Originally Posted by HannahLongbottom That was amazing! Every word is perfectly pitched, just wonderful.
Ah thankyou thats a great thing to be told  *snuggles you* Quote:
Originally Posted by HannahLongbottom but this was my favourite and I hate Malfoy!
you....hate...malfoy??  well perhaps we can change that. Come over to the dark side, you know you want too
__________________ ♥♥♥My heart is out at sea. And my Head's al over the place.  I'm losing sense of time, and everything tastes the same.
I'll be home in a day. I fear that's a month too late. ♥♥♥
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09-03-2009, 10:43 PM
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#124 (permalink)
|  SS 100 Triumphant! Ramora
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Hadley Taylor Fourth Year | Canon Niffler || Neville's Yorkshire Pudding | | Teddy's Biographer || P + R = ♥ Quote:
Originally Posted by firenjen Hmmmm, I doubt it! Maybe I can love your Draco and hate cannon Draco???
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09-04-2009, 01:35 AM
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#125 (permalink)
| Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla Reeser Graduated | ♥ Socelyn | #Jeness | S W A G | ShortPerson&TallPerson | Nade ♥
Jenluff!!!!!!
Ahhhh!!!!!!
I actually thought that was happening!!!!
LUFFED IT!!!
PAMS!!  Jess
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