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01-06-2007, 08:53 PM
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| Puffskein
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oh ya, I offically found a song for this F.F.
In... a far ahead coming chapter you'll see what it is 
I'm not giving it away! (I was searching on a lyric-giver-finder site thingy and I saw the song and went crazy! It totally works for Harry, especially Dom! It works for them together!) I'm actually gonna keep a secret this time... (I have so much trouble with them in f.fs. I only held in one before cause I wanted to see how many people would say 'It's Harry!' in Fallen when I left that cliffie 'evil obvious cliffie' which wasn't so obvious...)
Ya, I'll post in a few days... I finished chapter 11, another dramatic climb on the (stupid) 'plot map'... bad memories with those. (I've got the rest of the story planned... well most, one blank spot, but I just gotta get it into words. That's what nearly made me quit the first time... it was so difficult! So many blank spots with working ideas I had... some are now have since one of them was the Dom thing...)
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01-06-2007, 09:39 PM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: California, Palmdale
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jacqueline Marie Granger Sixth Year | Run, Emma, Run!
I wonder what the song is!?
I wanna know!
As for the story... post, post, post!!!! But since I won't post in mine until I get more readers and I am making you wait... I'll wait patiently for you to post.
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01-06-2007, 09:45 PM
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#53 (permalink)
| Puffskein
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It's a secret! I might not be the best at keeping secrets, but I try my hardest! 
This Ttme I am NOT gonna say... other than what's below (about the song). Trust me, when you see it (I heard it really), it's like, matching! Parts work more for Harry and now for Dom, parts work more for Dom than Harry... it evens out!  (it's short, but the song is long when listened to cause it's a slow song.... not much a hint there so that's why I said it) All I'm saying... it's not all that related to the STORY par say... but more... character traits  Kinda... only a tad related to the story...
You'll find out when it happens. Since I'm pretty much at the point of what I'm writing comes next... so I haven't written the part so since I haven't done that, I'm not saying (I might've just... slipped a bit more if I have, but... I haven't)
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01-06-2007, 11:35 PM
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| Billywig
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jacqueline Marie Granger Sixth Year | Run, Emma, Run!
That's very good info... maybe i'll try and search for the song?... but no that's not nearly enough info...
Who's the singer?
Oh... I'll just wait until you post it... even if I am going crazy wondering! lol!
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01-06-2007, 11:39 PM
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#55 (permalink)
| Puffskein
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I'm not saying anymore about the song. -listens to Broken by Seether featuring Amy Lee-
You'll find out soon enough. And no, the Seether thing was NOT a hint! That's honestly what I'm doing... listening to that and another song I can't say cause that's the artist of which you are attempting to search for... well for 'Dom's song'... Hehehe, that sounds funny... technically "Harry and Dom's Song', but 'Dom's Song' is more so it than Harry's... it's both but mainily goes for Dom...
Tehehehe, I'm listening to the song that's 'Dom's Song' now! HAHA! I'm LISTENING TO THE SONG AND YOU DON"T KNOW IT!
Sorry, that's taunting... but HAHA! I'm listening to the song and you don't know it!
Ok, I'll stop now... seriously, I'll stop now...
Something else about the song... in it... it says...
'I'm a friend'
There. There's a hint. In the song, 'I'm a friend' is said about twice, and once it says 'You're a friend'. If you guess the song I'm gonna say no, even if it's actually the song for Harry and Dom.
Maybe I'll start saying 'yes' to confuzzle ya...
Naw, I'll just say 'maybe' or 'no', even if its right 
-stops rambling and giving away hints that don't even really say much
Ok... THAT'S ALL I'M GONNA SAY ABOUT THE SONG! If you actually got it right just by using those three words... I would clearly be amazed, and say that in the chapter I use the song in 
But until then...
NO MORE!
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01-06-2007, 11:51 PM
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#56 (permalink)
| Billywig
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jacqueline Marie Granger Sixth Year | Run, Emma, Run!
Well your lucky I am so confused!
I don't know any songs that has "I'm a Friend"!!!!!!!!!!
Your so ebil!!!! lol!
tell me!!!!!!! please!
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01-07-2007, 12:21 AM
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#57 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Canada
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BUHAHAHA! I'm listening to it AGAIN!
You can... naw, I'm not giving any ideas. And the more you pester me about my decision about not telling the more I'm considering not posting it at all without any word of it. You'd NEVER find out what I had in mind before that way 
And that's NO hollow threat, it'd happen
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01-07-2007, 01:37 PM
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#58 (permalink)
| Mackled Malaclaw
Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Maryland
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you must me happy. I lost you at like the top of the page. (your posts, I mean) Why is it that I never understand other authors, yet I'm one myself? I wonder . . .  lol Do you want us to try and guess the song of do you want us to never find out who was the song was written but or . . . well, you know what I mean.
Jessica
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01-07-2007, 06:15 PM
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#59 (permalink)
| Puffskein
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if you wanna guess the song, you can go ahead 
Just don't ask me what it is, it's gonna be a surprise.
You can guess, but I'll most likely just respond 'maybe', but if I feel likewise, it'll be 'no' (that that'll be rare  ). Even if you get it right, I'll say maybe.
And the artist who actually sings the song... not a popular choice from what I see anyways, so I'll be surprised if someone actually gets it
But you can guess all you want.
I'll just say maybe
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01-07-2007, 06:43 PM
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#60 (permalink)
| Mackled Malaclaw
Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Maryland
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well, if the author isn't popular I won't have a clue. I (this is an exact quote from my friends) "live under a rock and am never knowning what is new in the world." I act (again another quote) "like an old lady." lol and then I like kill 'em but all the same, if it someone who isn't all that big, Iwouldn't know. PAMS!
Jessica
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01-07-2007, 08:48 PM
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#61 (permalink)
| Dugbog
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In a dark forrest, high on a mountain, near a shadow river.
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Love your story and I'm looking forword to more post, no matter what song you choose. PAMS!!!!!!!!
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01-07-2007, 09:08 PM
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#62 (permalink)
| Puffskein
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well... I guess it depends on your... choice of music (style). My computer classifies is as 'pop' (I s'pose that's kinda a hint, depends on how you look at it), but it doesn't seem like it... but that's the only way you can describe it really... I like the artist because he (yeah... it's a guy. That'll narrow it down a fair bit) writes some pretty good songs (as you'll find out), even if some are fairly explicit (again, a slight hint but there's tons of singers that use 'explicit content'. Course the song I chose by him is like... the only one that isn't 'bad'), and I don't mind his voice...
So it depends on your favourite genre of music.
And I'm kinda stuck again! (on chapter 12. I could post chapter 11 but I don't really feel like it...)
Thanx (and welcome!) Shadow Mage
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01-07-2007, 09:11 PM
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#63 (permalink)
| Mackled Malaclaw
Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Maryland
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I could post chapter 11 but I don't really feel like it...
Are you sure? Maybe you just think that you don't feel like it. Maybe you really, really, wanna but not of rememberance of how to copy and paste? Maybe-- ok, I'll shut up there. PAms!
Jessica
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01-07-2007, 09:27 PM
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#64 (permalink)
| Puffskein
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Maybe you really, really, wanna but not of rememberance of how to copy and paste?
I ALWAYS use copy and paste 
I just... don't... feel like it... cause I'm stuck... in cahpter 12... and it'll be a long long wait... if I posted chapter 11 now
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Reason: me being an idiot and not putting the Quote tags in
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01-08-2007, 05:30 AM
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#65 (permalink)
| Dugbog
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In a dark forrest, high on a mountain, near a shadow river.
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It would be nice to read chapter 11, but I can wait til you get unstruck, which I hope is soon.
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01-08-2007, 08:51 PM
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#66 (permalink)
| Mackled Malaclaw
Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Maryland
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^^ Same here.
Last edited by dancerbookl; 01-08-2007 at 08:51 PM.
Reason: changing a typo
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01-10-2007, 06:24 AM
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#67 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Canada
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Ok, I unstucked myself  (felt like saying that).
I WOULD post now but I'm technically not even supposed to be up...
So I'll post the next chapter TOMORROW!
Sorry... but it'll definitely be up tomorrow.
Sarah
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01-10-2007, 03:41 PM
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| Puffskein
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Nothing to say really...
Enjoy! Chapter 11
Suspicions The sound of shoes upon stone echoed throughout an empty hallway. Looking around, the only light was a torch in the distance. I started walking, tip-toeing really, until I came up to the torch. It was across from a window. I peered into the window and saw a dark and dank room. I couldn’t see anything other than the black inside, but after a few minutes, I saw an outline. A faded outline directly across from where I stood. The torch seemed to get brighter, and I saw a redish-brown head, the person’s face hidden in their knees, which were brought up to their chest.
I heard distant footsteps. My heart beat faster; what if I got caught? What would happen then? Would I join the person inside the room? Left to starve and die a slow, painful death?
The footsteps stopped suddenly, and a creaking noise bounced off the stone floors and walls. I looked through the window and saw two people crowded in front of the person. The stranger refused to look up at the two, so one of them grabbed the long hair of the person.
I looked into the face of a pained and anguished Dom. Horror took over me; an anger I wished to unleash upon who I only assumed were Death Eaters. They killed one I loved before, they don’t the same again. A saw a light in the distance, and fear overtook my horror and anger. I don’t know why, even if I knew the Death Eaters didn’t see me where I was.
“Harry...”
I looked inside the room again; who called my name?
“Harry...”
I shrunk against the marble wall, my fear increasing.
“Harry!”
Harry’s eyes opened slowly; the room he was in was way too bright. Looking around, he couldn’t find the source of the voice that called his name. Sweat trickled down his face and stung when it met his eyes.
“Harry...?”
He recognized the voice that spoke to him, but he couldn’t seem to place the name. His head flopped to the right side; he saw Hermione. She sighed in relief. Harry looked up and around the bright room. It was the hospital wing.
“Uh...?” was all he got out while attempting to ask ‘why am I here?’ Hermione grabbed something and started wiping away the sweat on his face.
“Why’m I ‘ere?” Harry finally asked. Words seemed to come back to him, but he still had difficulty getting them out.
“Do you remember your... nightmare?” Hermione asked him. It took Harry a moment to recall; as soon as he did his face went pallid once more. He couldn’t get out the simple word ‘yes’, so he gave a shaky nod.
“I don’t know how, and sure as hell don’t know why, but... somehow you saw what actually happened; Dom’s nowhere in the castle, all the professors double checked, even the grounds. Hagrid went into the Forest just in case,” Hermione responded. “She’s somewhere with whatever took her...”
“Death Eaters,” Harry corrected.
“But the professors are baffled, especially Dumbledore. It’s not in anyway possible to Apparate within the grounds without having something happen to you, but with them just popping in like that, the whole school was shaken by what happened,” Hermione continued, her voice fading until it became a barely audible whisper.
“She’s... not in the castle at all?” Harry whispered; his voice deserted him. Hermione nodded slowly.
“But... how... ugh...”
“What...?” Hermione asked attentively.
“Another... well... I dreamt... there was a large, stone hallway and at the far end... well, there was a torch. Across from the torch... there was a room. It was very dark... but after a few moments my eyes adjusted and I saw... I saw Dom. I only assumed...”
“Did you get a good look at what the area actually looked like?” Hermione cut in.
“Well no... But there were stone floors and walls, that’s all I really know. That’s why I thought...”
“Only really fancy places can have all stone... was it marble or stone?” Hermione cut in again.
“I think it was marble flooring... but it seemed like a dungeon to me...”
“Well it definitely isn’t the Hogwarts dungeons, the professors spent the most time looking there,” Hermione once again cut in.
“Think outside of Hogwarts, Hermione!” Harry snapped. “Where else has a dungeon?”
“Uh... really expensive places that’re probably as big as the owners think they are...”
“Who do we know that’s a bighead?” Harry realized. Hermione’s eyes widened.
“Harry, in your nightmare, did you see anything other than hoods and masks?” Hermione asked quickly.
“Well I did see a certain someone sitting in a certain chair...”
“Harry!” Hermione snapped.
“You mean... did I see anything beyond the hoods and masks?” Harry clarified. Hermione nodded.
“Well...” Harry started thinking; did he see anything else? He envisioned the common room in his dream (even if it sent shivers down his spine), and tried to notice anything out of the ordinary. “I didn’t see the back of their heads, Mione,” he realized.
Hermione huffed. “Did you see the Death Eaters in your previous dream? Did you notice anything else that was... out of the ordinary?”
Harry had an easier time envisioning the place this time. When he looked in... he gasped.
“What?” Hermione asked hurriedly.
“Hair... long...”
“Blonde?”
Harry nodded.
“Are you thinking what I’m thinking?” Hermione asked mysteriously. A sly grin broke onto Harry’s face and he nodded.
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01-10-2007, 11:02 PM
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#69 (permalink)
| Billywig
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: California, Palmdale
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jacqueline Marie Granger Sixth Year | Run, Emma, Run!
You posted.... and I loved it!!!!!!!!
Post more soon please.
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01-12-2007, 04:00 AM
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#70 (permalink)
| Mackled Malaclaw
Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Maryland
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ooo, Malfoy. I wonder . . .  maybe . . .  I think more and get back to you. 
Jessica
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01-12-2007, 04:23 AM
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#71 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Canada
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|  I haven't really started the chapter after next, so I'm not posting til I at least start it  I have the idea for the chapter and everything but there's still blank spots... not as many but some
Anyways...
with the song, just an update.
It does suit Dom and Harry, but it really goes with the scene I have in mind  It goes with them but also really works with the scene. Without the scene, well... song doens't flow as well, but... ya, you get it 
That's all for now!
-can't feel knuckles cause of dad's stupid window being open during -5 degree (Celsius! About... 10-15 degrees fareinheit or however the heck you Americans spell it  Don't remember and could never get it right while even living there myself)
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01-13-2007, 04:53 PM
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#72 (permalink)
| Dugbog
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In a dark forrest, high on a mountain, near a shadow river.
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What a cliff hanger and who is the blonde? PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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01-13-2007, 04:59 PM
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#73 (permalink)
| Mackled Malaclaw
Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Maryland
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| Book Club Babe
^^ How many blonds are mentioned? I has to be Malfoy!!!!!!!!!
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01-14-2007, 01:26 AM
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#74 (permalink)
| Billywig
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: California, Palmdale
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jacqueline Marie Granger Sixth Year | Run, Emma, Run!
It has to be Malfoy! How many evil blondes do we know?!
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01-14-2007, 03:41 AM
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#75 (permalink)
| Mackled Malaclaw
Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Maryland
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| Book Club Babe
That's what I said!
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