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Danz_angel2 04-07-2004 12:59 PM

Yep! Did the last line give it away? Another riddle in a mo...

Danz_angel2 04-07-2004 01:27 PM

Ohkay, I've just added part 2 to my ff and I only got 1 reply to the first part! *sobs*. You can have a riddle anyway though....

A traitor, a liar, sneaky like a rat,
If you look a little closer, I'll be on the map.
The Dark Lord returned, all thanks to me,
I've already got revenge on two thirds of the three.


I can't really think of anything else that wouldn't make the answer jump out at you lol, if you can't get it you can have another line or two,

Danz_angel x

quidditch_chick 04-08-2004 01:04 AM

Peter Pettirgrew, aka Wormtail...

Quote:

I've already got revenge on two thirds of the three.
Oh... how sad :sad:

Danz_angel2 04-08-2004 12:51 PM

I know lol, I think that's one of my favourites.have you checked out my fanfic yet? I've just added the third part. I think the above riddle will come into it soon, but some of the lines will have different meanings if you get my drift! Here's another one for ya....


I take two forms, though not at will,
My strife gave others a monthly thrill.
It caused me pain, though I must admit,
I always smile remembering it.
I was never alone, they were there for me,
Then one died, we were down to three.
Another one went, we were down to two,
Though he did not die (as known by few).
The next one left, I was alone,
Tatty and tired, I found a new home.
I returned to school and the third came back;
He had escaped to kill the rat.


I think this is easy :ermsmile: don't forget to check out the ff!
Danz_angel x

Danz_angel2 04-08-2004 01:01 PM

I think I've done this right! here is a link that will take you to my ff (I hope)
My ff: the war begins, a life will end

danz_angel x

quidditch_chick 04-08-2004 02:32 PM

Yeah , I have checked out your fanfic.

And the riddle 'tis Lupin.. right?

Danz_angel2 04-08-2004 03:38 PM

Right!
What do you think to the ff? Pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty please with a cherry on top with loads of hundreds n thousands make a comment in the thingy bob?! I will give you a flower if you do lol, Danz_angel x

Danz_angel2 04-09-2004 02:10 PM

Here's a poem for a change from a riddle;

Hand-me-down robes, second hand books,
I've also inherited the Weasley looks.
Flaming red hair, a freckly face,
A rather long nose and not much grace.
'The boy who lived' is my best friend,
Friends forever, until the end.
We are together on the house team,
Seeker and keeper, to be gryffindor captain is my dream.
I've alot to live up to, it won't come easily,
But how I love being the only Ron Weasley.


A riddle next time
Danz_angel x

quidditch_chick 04-09-2004 07:24 PM

Loved it! Very good!

Danz_angel2 04-10-2004 01:27 PM

thnx, riddle in a mo...

Danz_angel2 04-10-2004 03:35 PM

Hey, do ya like my pic of a Hungarian Horntail?

When I fly I need no broom,
Through the air I swiftly zoom.
You'll probably be happy if you grasp me,
Though I'm hard to stop once I am free.
Hard to spot, though I glitter with gold,
Catch me before the game gets old.


who/what is it?
Danz_angel x

quidditch_chick 04-10-2004 09:36 PM

The picture... not how I pictured a Hungarian Horntail... but a Dragon all the same!

And its the golden snitch! ---> >O<

Danz_angel2 04-11-2004 02:06 PM

LOL, it was the snitch, go you again!

Danz_angel2 04-11-2004 03:31 PM

Not having a good day today; I've just added more to my ff. It was pretty sad so now I can't think of a riddle! Sorry!!

Danz_angel x

quidditch_chick 04-11-2004 07:02 PM

Yes, go me! :D

That's ok if you can't think of a riddle! Happy Easter :flowersmile: !

Danz_angel2 04-11-2004 08:19 PM

Thanks, back at ya!
Danz_angel x

Danz_angel2 04-12-2004 06:12 PM

Hey, it's getting too hard to do a riddle every day, so I think I'll cut it down to a couple a week. I'll try and do a poem everyday though! If you want to know why or have any other questions or suggestions, please PM me,

Danz_angel x

quidditch_chick 04-12-2004 09:48 PM

Okay!

Danz_angel2 04-13-2004 11:25 AM

lol, here's a poem for you....

The woes of Harry Potter.

My parents are dead, now Sirius too,
I'm all alone, but what can I do?
My friends are great, Hermione and Ron,
When we are together we have such fun.
But they can't understand why I complain;
Everybody magical knows my name.
I'm the boy who lived, I beat you-know-who,
But I'm not that great; they don't have a clue.
They don't know how it feels, gawped at all the time,
All because of a stupid scar; it's just a stupid line!!
I wish I was like Tonks; change whenever I feel,
But I'm stuck like this, and with that I'll have to deal.
I'll swap if you want, you can be me, I can be you,
You'll have no parents, Your loved ones are few,
But they'll all know your name, they'll all stare,
They won't understand you; but what do I care?
I'd be free from it all, free from my mind,
Free from my scar; that terrible bind.

what do you think?
Danz_angel x

quidditch_chick 04-14-2004 10:50 PM

Ohh! Poor Harry! *pat pat*

It's very Order-of-the-Phoenix-ish! (and yes, that's not a bad thing)

Danz_angel2 04-15-2004 02:07 PM

Thnx! I was trying to get Harry's feelings of anger across and the fact that he feels trapped inside his own body lol.

Danz_angel2 04-15-2004 05:04 PM

OK, I've only just realised how many pages I've got here, and how many people have viewed them. I just wanted to say thanks to everyone who took the time to read here, especially quidditch_chick; everytime I do something new she always reads and reviews.. thnx!
OK, now that's outta my system here's a poem for ya, it's basically a comparison between Harry and your average person.

The thing that binds us all.

He's loved and lost, he's lost and loved,
Something that hapens to most of us.
His parents love him, his godfather too,
The same thing should be said for me and you.
So he can do magic, he's the boy who lived,
But we all should share the greatest gift.
The thing that binds us, And I don't mean a scar,
If you are looking for magic, don't look very far.
You don't need Hogwarts, (thought that would be fun)
You just need the thing that binds everyone.
You may think it's soppy, but you know it's true,
Love is a magic that binds me and you.
The one thing we share with the world around,
Is that no matter what, by love we are bound.



Whadda you think? Danz_angel x

quidditch_chick 04-15-2004 11:08 PM

Quote:

OK, I've only just realised how many pages I've got here, and how many people have viewed them. I just wanted to say thanks to everyone who took the time to read here, especially quidditch_chick; everytime I do something new she always reads and reviews.. thnx!
Thank you! And your welcome!

And the poem... it's true!

Danz_angel2 04-19-2004 11:16 AM

I'll have a poem for later, just been a bit busy with my new programme thing. I know take requests for avatars in 'AA Ltd' (go to the siggy and avatar forum).

Danz_angel x

Chimaera135 04-22-2004 07:27 AM

Nice poems . they are really good .do me a favor and check my poems out(I'm almost positive they suck) and tell me what you think.I think it's under Chimaera's Poetry.good work keep it up!


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