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Danz_angel2 03-12-2004 09:49 PM

quidditch continued...

I can see it now, shimmering, shining
But wait, do my eyes deceive me?(the sun is blinding)
That shimmering cup has a fluttering wing,
And there's the other, what a beautiful thing!

Soaring swiftly through every space,
The Autumn winds whipping at my face,
I'm nearly there, but so is he...
Who will catch it - him or me?!

Blood is pounding in my ears,
What if we loose? (one of my worst fears!)
We're going to win, my hand's open wide,
Come on, stupid Snitch... jump inside!!!

I can't beleive it, this can't be true,
After everything I've just been through,
The match is over, my hand's still wide,
There's a cold lump in my mouth... in my heart is pride.

I flew too far, what a stupid witch...
But in my mouth I GOT THE SNITCH!!!

You like? I think its one of my best!

Danz_angel x

Padie 03-13-2004 12:27 AM

Hi! :flowersmile:
How are you?
The poems are great! And the riddles too!
The answer for the last one is "The Marauders" right?

Kisses :flowersmile:
HermionePotter89 :sorcerer:

Danz_angel2 03-13-2004 03:08 PM

Thanx, no the answer isn't the marauders although these two have been said to give them a run for their money..... gigantic hint! :evil:

quidditch_chick 03-13-2004 09:48 PM

I know! I know! The Weasley Twins!

And the Quidditch poem... very good, very good indeed

Danz_angel2 03-13-2004 09:52 PM

Thanx! What do you guys want next, poem or riddle? If it's a poem why not make a request on the subject..? :rolleyes:


Danz_angel x

PS It is the Weasley twins... go you!

coolant661 03-14-2004 03:03 AM

wow ur poems are fantastic!and so are ur riddles...shere genious!hey can i hear a riddle please?they are so great!

thanx

Danz_angel2 03-16-2004 09:54 PM

Thanx dude! here....

Some say I’m evil though I disagree,
There is only power and weakness, why not join me?
My half-life is cursed and it well never end,
I will go on forever, like an untrusted friend.
My power is greater than that muggle-loving fool,
I’m the world’s greatest sorcerer, no point in a duel.
I favour the serpent above all other creatures,
Their venomous bite is one of their greatest features.
Though I hate the word ‘riddle’ you can have one more clue;
A message to Harry: I will beat you.

Who is it?!

Danz_angel x

quidditch_chick 03-17-2004 12:17 AM

Ooo... that was a long one! Is it Voldemort?

Danz_angel2 03-17-2004 10:28 PM

Yep! I have another saved on my computer, but the computer has a virus so you'll have to wait! Do ya want me to do another or a poem?(what about?)

Danz_angel x

Danz_angel2 03-20-2004 03:28 PM

Hey here's somethin for ya....

I came to Hogwarts,
I felt at home,
Everyone knew me,
I was no longer alone.

I soon saved our kind,
From You know who,
I felt quite proud
Of my heroic debut.

I beat him again in
Our Second year,
I nearly got killed,
Though I showed no fear.

Third year arrived
And so did Black,
Wrongly accused
Of a vicous attack.

I was doing quite well,
In the tri wizard cup,
Tieing with Cedric,
Then he ran out of luck.

Fifth year bought anger,
Over-ridden by tears,
I lost my father-figure
After only 2 years.

Whadda ya think? It ain't amazin but I'm a bit pre-occupied at the mo lol.

Danz_angel x

Dracnyzz 03-20-2004 07:15 PM

Harry!!! :lol:

Danz_angel2 03-20-2004 10:18 PM

lol, like it was hard! What d ya want now? poem or riddle?! Please soeone tell me this time as last time I asked no-one replied!!!
*sob!*

Danz_angel x

quidditch_chick 03-20-2004 11:39 PM

It was Harry! I don't care uf you do a puzzle or riddle but if you want the fans to choose then a riddle!

Danz_angel2 03-22-2004 06:20 PM

Riddle it is...


If I was a human I'd be a weasley;
The colour of my fur matches their hair so easily.
I have four-bandy legs and a bottle-brush tail,
I'm in the upcoming movie and I'm not female.
Recognised Wormatil, Padfoot too,
Found by Hermione this much is true.
Ron didn't like me, know he's changed his mind,
Since I recognised Scabbers I've been a good find.


Who is it? Don't hold me to the not female part though!

Danz_angel x

Danz_angel2 03-23-2004 07:23 PM

Anyone...? C'mon! Don't tell me I waisted 30 minutes of my life writing this cos no-one's reading any of the stuff in here anyway, if they are they aren't posting..... that makes me feel real good inside!

Danz_angel x

harryluvsme 03-23-2004 07:25 PM

its crookshanks! :lol:
your poem/riddle is very good *claps*
heres a flower :flowersmile:

quidditch_chick 03-23-2004 07:33 PM

(sorry I didn't reply sooner!)


harryluvs me is right (I think)! It is Crookshanks!

Danz_angel2 03-23-2004 09:35 PM

Thnx 4 the flower! heres 1 for you lol :flowersmile: go peeps you got it right yet again! want another riddle or d ya want a poem?

Danz_angel x

Danz_angel2 03-24-2004 08:22 PM

OK, well I haven't written a poem for a while so here goez....

Tribute to Sirius

The world is such a lonely place,
Without you here with me,
Though I know you will be happier
Now you can run free.

I hardly ever saw you,
Hardly heard your voice,
But you were imprisoned wrongly,
So that was not your choice.

I finally met you in my third year,
I've loved you since that day,
I hate that I never told you,
You told me in your special way.

No words of your emotions
Ever rolled from your tongue,
Though I know how much you cared,
When you compared me to Prongs.

My brother, father and best friend,
Everything I could need,
You came for me when I needed you,
A truly selfless deed.

I can't blame you for leaving me,
I can't even blame Snape,
I was the reason you were there,
From that there's no escape.

At least you can be with Prongs now,
I know how you wanted him back,
But I'm proud to say I knew you,
My Godfather Sirius Black.


Whadda you think? It's quite sad!

Danz_angel x :petpet: :sad:

quidditch_chick 03-24-2004 10:22 PM

Ohhhh..... that was sad...... sad, but great!

Danz_angel2 03-26-2004 09:58 PM

Hey heres another easy riddle for ya

I take two forms, I change at will,
The idea of mischief gives me a thrill.
Wrongly accused of killing my friend,
It almost brought my life to an end.
I survived, I escaped, and I sought retribution
The filthy rat must meet execution.
More clues are needed to solve this riddle,
I’ll skip to the end and miss the story’s middle.
I escaped death twice; the end was near,
He did not know I would soon disappear.
He went to save me, save my life,
My death would soon become his strife.
It was not an act of evil or of hate,
My death had long since been veiled fate.



Who is it?
Danz_angel x

quidditch_chick 03-26-2004 11:08 PM

Sirius Black!

Andromeda428 03-26-2004 11:16 PM

I wrote this one a coupla months ago, it isn't very good. And it's based on a rumor, so that might make it a little harder to guess. But you can still try ;)


You knew I wasn’t appreciative

Of the light you shone upon me

I thirst for something different

Than a warm summer breeze

I need this darkness

That envelopes and suffocates you

I don’t mind this blinding numbness

‘Cause it turned me bitter through and through

You shouldn’t fear

My dark locks and pale height

Come closer before forsaking

Waste away in my arms from a fatal bite


Danz_angel2 03-27-2004 05:26 PM

Yes it is Sirius Black, I told you it was easy! So, what now? poem or riddle?

Danz_angel x

quidditch_chick 03-28-2004 02:56 AM

Andromeda... is yours Snape?

As for poem or riddle... neither... I'll give you a riddle!

(warning: i was rather bored and it's rather easy)


Snivellus, Snivellus, Snivelly-poo,
oh how we hate you.
Your hair is greasy by the ton,
humiliating you brings us loads of fun.

Now currently only two of us survive,
the other two lost their lives.
Both were murdered by dark arts,
both murders broke a young wizard's heart.
Snivellus, Snivellus, Snivelly-poo,
who are we? Need a clue?
Once every month one of us is out with "the flu".


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