Danz_angel's poetry... + add your own!
 

Hey people jus thought I'd do this for the grin, no-one will read it anywayz!

Danz_angelx :flowersmile:

Here iz a lil poem called Alone(about Sirius written from Harry's point of view.) You might have seen it posted elsewhere but it's my own work lol.

My friends are great
I'm quite well known
But since he's gone
I feel Alone.

My life is full of people
My friendship circle's grown
But one person's gone
I feel Alone.

I'd not known him for long
When I saw him I felt at home
But he left me here
I feel Alone.

I worshipped Padfoot
The king with no throne
He left without warning
I feel alone.

You like???

Here iz a poem by Snuffles

Thousands of creatures wanted me for a kiss,
It was there greatest desire,
Though none of the beasts had romantic thoughts
Of setting my soul on fire.

I was imprisoned,
though I committed no crime
I had to escape;
There was so little time.

Wormtail was the traitor,
He gave the position away...
Lily and James did live no more
Once Voldemort had his way.

He found The Potter's hideout
He took their lives away,
Then turned to the crib
where baby Harry lay...

He raised his wand to end the life
Which had only just begun...
The spell backfired,
This was the end to the Dark Lord's fun.

I got the blame for Wormtail's betrayal
And for his so-called death too,
But I knew he was a filthy rat..
A secret known by few.


xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxx I'll finish this another time but only if sum1 actually readz the thing!!!!!
Reply on here if you actually read it! :/

Danz_angel x

Here is the easiest riddle to solve... ever!

I live in the office of Dumbledore
I knew each one of the Hogwarts four.
I'll make a point (though I already have one)
Of showing you your qualities: brave, sly, clever or fun?
I have a brain, but I can keep yours warm,
Of Godric's hat I take the form.
I have a mouth but no eyes to see...
Can you guess who I could be?
Post your guesses, after 3 posts I'll tell you anywayz! :sorcerer:

I kow no-one iz readin these but if any1 duz then thnx!

I think your poetry's great! Love it!

PS) Is the answer the sorting hat?

Yea it is the sorting hat. tell any1 you know from the site to check my poetry out plz, thnx

Danz_angelx

great poetry... please check mine out and tell me what you think (poems... by amber)or stardancer488 the title is poems!!! i loev these thoughs any more ridde poems? i like those!

This is only the second riddle I've ever written, the sorting hat was my first one oviously. Thanx for the comments don't forget to spread the word! Here goez....

I hate life, or at least i did
I'm rather old, though I'm still a kid.
I am known for my tears, I cry alot
You might hurt my feelings, though feel I cannot.
If you still haven't got it, I'll give you a clue:
It's such a cleche that my favourite words 'boo'.

Can you guess who it is? :eyebrows: that smilie iz so kool!

i haven't a clue! that one's harder.....it's cool that you write riddles!!! ^^

Want another clue?! :whisle:

Is it moaning myrtle?

Congrats! You got it in 1! D'ya like the poems n riddles so far? honest opinions plz!

I don't really see the point in finishing the snuffles poem (the second one posted). If any1 really wants it finished just ask, if I get 3 requests then I will

Danz_angel x

YAY! Go me! :monkey: :yoshi: :kirby: :dance_banana: And yes! I love the poems and riddles!

Hey people, here's another poem 4 y'all, it ain't one o my best but it'll do!
Here goez...



Death eaters

All that was visible of their faces
Were cold, pit less eyes.
The slitted hoods hid their identities,
Though they could not hide the evil inside.

Empty of all traces of emotion,
Empty of every thought,
Except for thoughts of evil
As they tortured those who fought.

Their voices were full of icy coldness,
More evil than the look in their eyes,
Unforgivable curses rolled from their tongues,
As easily as the lies.

Innocent wizards tortured,
Clueless muggles killed,
No words can describe the evil
That made these monsters thrilled.

please post ur opinions, I ain't really too impressed with this 1 lol
Danz_angel x :/

Good as ever! :sorcerer:

Thanx! :flowersmile: There have been lots of people viewing these poems but only 1 person seems to reply....

Danz_angel x

Hey wut d'ya want now? poem or riddle?! banana_wtf

Eh... how about a riddle? (thanks!)

Okies, this gets harder by the riddle! this is quite easy too...

We look alike though we aren't the same,
We laugh and joke, life's one big game.
We bend the rules-they were made for that,
Put in Gryffindor by the sorting hat.
Quidditch is great, soaring through the air
If you can't spot us, just look for red hair.
Could I make it any easier?!?!?! :rolleyes:

Danz_angel x

This is great!

Thanx, dnt forget to spread the word!!!!!! Someone please solve the riddle!

Danz_angel x

Hey I'm now Danz_angel2! Don't ask why I have changed, it's a long story and I don't have the time or energy!


Danz_angel x

Hey my first poem in my new name! Each verse is a different stage in the game.....

Quidditch

Soaring swiftly through the air,
The Autumn breeze whafts through my hair.
Flying fearlessly high above,
Free as a bird, peaceful as a dove.

Sneering Slytherins chant their taunt,
Empty words with no real point.
Hopeful Hufflepuffs watch with glee,
Finaly, a chance to set the cup free!

I'll finish this later..... dinner is ready!

Danz_angel x

quidditch continued...

I can see it now, shimmering, shining
But wait, do my eyes deceive me?(the sun is blinding)
That shimmering cup has a fluttering wing,
And there's the other, what a beautiful thing!

Soaring swiftly through every space,
The Autumn winds whipping at my face,
I'm nearly there, but so is he...
Who will catch it - him or me?!

Blood is pounding in my ears,
What if we loose? (one of my worst fears!)
We're going to win, my hand's open wide,
Come on, stupid Snitch... jump inside!!!

I can't beleive it, this can't be true,
After everything I've just been through,
The match is over, my hand's still wide,
There's a cold lump in my mouth... in my heart is pride.

I flew too far, what a stupid witch...
But in my mouth I GOT THE SNITCH!!!

You like? I think its one of my best!

Danz_angel x

Hi! :flowersmile:
How are you?
The poems are great! And the riddles too!
The answer for the last one is "The Marauders" right?

Kisses :flowersmile:
HermionePotter89 :sorcerer:

Thanx, no the answer isn't the marauders although these two have been said to give them a run for their money..... gigantic hint! :evil:

I know! I know! The Weasley Twins!

And the Quidditch poem... very good, very good indeed

Thanx! What do you guys want next, poem or riddle? If it's a poem why not make a request on the subject..? :rolleyes:


Danz_angel x

PS It is the Weasley twins... go you!

wow ur poems are fantastic!and so are ur riddles...shere genious!hey can i hear a riddle please?they are so great!

thanx

Thanx dude! here....

Some say I’m evil though I disagree,
There is only power and weakness, why not join me?
My half-life is cursed and it well never end,
I will go on forever, like an untrusted friend.
My power is greater than that muggle-loving fool,
I’m the world’s greatest sorcerer, no point in a duel.
I favour the serpent above all other creatures,
Their venomous bite is one of their greatest features.
Though I hate the word ‘riddle’ you can have one more clue;
A message to Harry: I will beat you.
Who is it?!

Danz_angel x

Ooo... that was a long one! Is it Voldemort?

Yep! I have another saved on my computer, but the computer has a virus so you'll have to wait! Do ya want me to do another or a poem?(what about?)

Danz_angel x

Hey here's somethin for ya....

I came to Hogwarts,
I felt at home,
Everyone knew me,
I was no longer alone.

I soon saved our kind,
From You know who,
I felt quite proud
Of my heroic debut.

I beat him again in
Our Second year,
I nearly got killed,
Though I showed no fear.

Third year arrived
And so did Black,
Wrongly accused
Of a vicous attack.

I was doing quite well,
In the tri wizard cup,
Tieing with Cedric,
Then he ran out of luck.

Fifth year bought anger,
Over-ridden by tears,
I lost my father-figure
After only 2 years.

Whadda ya think? It ain't amazin but I'm a bit pre-occupied at the mo lol.

Danz_angel x

Harry!!! :lol:

lol, like it was hard! What d ya want now? poem or riddle?! Please soeone tell me this time as last time I asked no-one replied!!!
*sob!*

Danz_angel x

It was Harry! I don't care uf you do a puzzle or riddle but if you want the fans to choose then a riddle!

Riddle it is...


If I was a human I'd be a weasley;
The colour of my fur matches their hair so easily.
I have four-bandy legs and a bottle-brush tail,
I'm in the upcoming movie and I'm not female.
Recognised Wormatil, Padfoot too,
Found by Hermione this much is true.
Ron didn't like me, know he's changed his mind,
Since I recognised Scabbers I've been a good find.

Who is it? Don't hold me to the not female part though!

Danz_angel x

Anyone...? C'mon! Don't tell me I waisted 30 minutes of my life writing this cos no-one's reading any of the stuff in here anyway, if they are they aren't posting..... that makes me feel real good inside!

Danz_angel x

its crookshanks! :lol:
your poem/riddle is very good *claps*
heres a flower :flowersmile:

(sorry I didn't reply sooner!)


harryluvs me is right (I think)! It is Crookshanks!

Thnx 4 the flower! heres 1 for you lol :flowersmile: go peeps you got it right yet again! want another riddle or d ya want a poem?

Danz_angel x

OK, well I haven't written a poem for a while so here goez....

Tribute to Sirius

The world is such a lonely place,
Without you here with me,
Though I know you will be happier
Now you can run free.

I hardly ever saw you,
Hardly heard your voice,
But you were imprisoned wrongly,
So that was not your choice.

I finally met you in my third year,
I've loved you since that day,
I hate that I never told you,
You told me in your special way.

No words of your emotions
Ever rolled from your tongue,
Though I know how much you cared,
When you compared me to Prongs.

My brother, father and best friend,
Everything I could need,
You came for me when I needed you,
A truly selfless deed.

I can't blame you for leaving me,
I can't even blame Snape,
I was the reason you were there,
From that there's no escape.

At least you can be with Prongs now,
I know how you wanted him back,
But I'm proud to say I knew you,
My Godfather Sirius Black.


Whadda you think? It's quite sad!

Danz_angel x :petpet: :sad:

Ohhhh..... that was sad...... sad, but great!

Hey heres another easy riddle for ya

I take two forms, I change at will,
The idea of mischief gives me a thrill.
Wrongly accused of killing my friend,
It almost brought my life to an end.
I survived, I escaped, and I sought retribution
The filthy rat must meet execution.
More clues are needed to solve this riddle,
I’ll skip to the end and miss the story’s middle.
I escaped death twice; the end was near,
He did not know I would soon disappear.
He went to save me, save my life,
My death would soon become his strife.
It was not an act of evil or of hate,
My death had long since been veiled fate.


Who is it?
Danz_angel x

Sirius Black!

Yes it is Sirius Black, I told you it was easy! So, what now? poem or riddle?

Danz_angel x

Andromeda... is yours Snape?

As for poem or riddle... neither... I'll give you a riddle!

(warning: i was rather bored and it's rather easy)


Snivellus, Snivellus, Snivelly-poo,
oh how we hate you.
Your hair is greasy by the ton,
humiliating you brings us loads of fun.

Now currently only two of us survive,
the other two lost their lives.
Both were murdered by dark arts,
both murders broke a young wizard's heart.
Snivellus, Snivellus, Snivelly-poo,
who are we? Need a clue?
Once every month one of us is out with "the flu".

The Marauders? lol

Danz_angel x

Yep!!! Easy... wasn't it?

Riddle;


You cannot see me, Unless you saw the most dire,
To solve this rhyme, a description you'll require;
Vacant eyes in my dragonish head,
Powerful wings and a colour of lead.
I'm great at flying, I can find any place,
Don't be put off by my daunting face.

what am I?
Danz_angel x

Yep, it was quite easy though! Which one has been the hardest?

Personally I think the thestral one. I had to thinka bit then when I saw Andromeda's answer I read back, thought and was like, "Oh yeah!" So to answer your question: the thestral one.

Weird, that was one of the easiest to write! Here's another....


I'm wise, intelligent, powerfull too,
My hair is grey, my eyes are blue.
Kind and gentle, though feared by one,
I care for Harry like he was my son.
Small next to Hagrid, though tall by most,
I'm feared by the darkest, but I'm not one to boast.


Who is it? quite easy really!

Danz_angel x

Professor Dumbledore!

Uh huh! Do y'all like my new avatar?

haha i like your riddles! keep em going!

:sorcerer: Your avatar is beautiful!

Lol, thnx. Here's a riddle for ya


I don't live in the castle, don't live in the trees,
But when I open my door I'm in the breeze.
I love the outdoors, I love my job too,
I think Dumbledore's great, this much is true.
I can't do much magic, I was expelled from school,
Dangerous creatures are the height of cool.

Who/What is is?

Danz_angel x

Um... is it Hagrid? :ermsmile:

Yea! The height of cool was a hidden clue... did ya get it?

Yeah, I did. And Actually what agave it away for me was "can't do much magic, I was expelled from school"...

Lol, I thought that would give it away.....


Boys are untrustowrthy, Girls are okay,
You'll learn about me in Magical Creatures one day.
I've lived in the forest since the day I was born,
A snow-coloured coat and a beautiful horn.
It's a terrible crime to slay pure as me,
But the resistance of death runs through me freely.

Who/what is it?

Danz_angel x

It's a Unicorn!

Yep! I'm thinking of writing a fanfic, what type do you think I should do? Romance or Epic/advenure? Don't worry, I'll still post here every day! Another riddle coming soon,

Danz_angel x

Well, personally I like Romance stories, but it depends what you like!

I've just started an epic/adventure one lol. There will be a lil romance too though....


I do not breathe, I do not eat,
I have n blood and no heart-beat.
It is true I died, but I know not of death,
I 'stayed behind' after my last breath.
I live at Hogwarts, not as student or staff,
Gryffindor's are best; at me they do no laugh.
My name isn't Myrtle, nor the Friar (he's fat!)
I'm not the bloody barron and that is that!
Who/what is it?

Danz_angel x

Hey, I know this isn't in the right place but I jus did this and thought I'd show ya!

Fawkes pic

U like? oh and the riddle too lol?

ooo... ic. British OotP cover then?
And the riddle.... is it Nearly Headless NicK?

Yes to both lol, another riddle coming soon, jus gotta check somethin first...

My first ff has arrived! It's in the Epic/adventure section and it's called The war begins, a life will end. I've only written the first part so far but I'm half way through the next bit and it will be posted as soon as I've had a reply/review on the first bit! I'm planning on trying to get some riddles in there somewhere, if you've read all of these you might find a few later in the ff lol. Here's one for now though...

Purebloods are the greatest, muggle-borns are scum,
Each last one should be tortured, that would be great fun.
Slytherin had the right idea, only pure-bloods in the school,
I wish I was the heir though, that would totally rule!
Potter this, Potter that, everyone worships Potter
All because of that hideous scar, it makes him look a rotter!
That Granger doesn't seem to think so, but she is a mudblood,
And the Weasley's aren't much better, you wouldn't know they were pure-blood.
My hair colour would give it away, so I'll just tell you this,
If you couldn't lose me in a crowd, my head you cannot miss!

The lastbit gives it away, Danz_angel x

Draco Malfoy!!!

Yep! Did the last line give it away? Another riddle in a mo...

Ohkay, I've just added part 2 to my ff and I only got 1 reply to the first part! *sobs*. You can have a riddle anyway though....

A traitor, a liar, sneaky like a rat,
If you look a little closer, I'll be on the map.
The Dark Lord returned, all thanks to me,
I've already got revenge on two thirds of the three.

I can't really think of anything else that wouldn't make the answer jump out at you lol, if you can't get it you can have another line or two,

Danz_angel x

Peter Pettirgrew, aka Wormtail...

Oh... how sad :sad:

I know lol, I think that's one of my favourites.have you checked out my fanfic yet? I've just added the third part. I think the above riddle will come into it soon, but some of the lines will have different meanings if you get my drift! Here's another one for ya....


I take two forms, though not at will,
My strife gave others a monthly thrill.
It caused me pain, though I must admit,
I always smile remembering it.
I was never alone, they were there for me,
Then one died, we were down to three.
Another one went, we were down to two,
Though he did not die (as known by few).
The next one left, I was alone,
Tatty and tired, I found a new home.
I returned to school and the third came back;
He had escaped to kill the rat.

I think this is easy :ermsmile: don't forget to check out the ff!
Danz_angel x

I think I've done this right! here is a link that will take you to my ff (I hope)
My ff: the war begins, a life will end

danz_angel x

Yeah , I have checked out your fanfic.

And the riddle 'tis Lupin.. right?

Right!
What do you think to the ff? Pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty please with a cherry on top with loads of hundreds n thousands make a comment in the thingy bob?! I will give you a flower if you do lol, Danz_angel x

Here's a poem for a change from a riddle;

Hand-me-down robes, second hand books,
I've also inherited the Weasley looks.
Flaming red hair, a freckly face,
A rather long nose and not much grace.
'The boy who lived' is my best friend,
Friends forever, until the end.
We are together on the house team,
Seeker and keeper, to be gryffindor captain is my dream.
I've alot to live up to, it won't come easily,
But how I love being the only Ron Weasley.

A riddle next time
Danz_angel x

Loved it! Very good!

thnx, riddle in a mo...

Hey, do ya like my pic of a Hungarian Horntail?

When I fly I need no broom,
Through the air I swiftly zoom.
You'll probably be happy if you grasp me,
Though I'm hard to stop once I am free.
Hard to spot, though I glitter with gold,
Catch me before the game gets old.

who/what is it?
Danz_angel x

The picture... not how I pictured a Hungarian Horntail... but a Dragon all the same!

And its the golden snitch! ---> >O<

LOL, it was the snitch, go you again!

Not having a good day today; I've just added more to my ff. It was pretty sad so now I can't think of a riddle! Sorry!!

Danz_angel x

Yes, go me! :D

That's ok if you can't think of a riddle! Happy Easter :flowersmile: !

Thanks, back at ya!
Danz_angel x

Hey, it's getting too hard to do a riddle every day, so I think I'll cut it down to a couple a week. I'll try and do a poem everyday though! If you want to know why or have any other questions or suggestions, please PM me,

Danz_angel x

Okay!

lol, here's a poem for you....

The woes of Harry Potter.

My parents are dead, now Sirius too,
I'm all alone, but what can I do?
My friends are great, Hermione and Ron,
When we are together we have such fun.
But they can't understand why I complain;
Everybody magical knows my name.
I'm the boy who lived, I beat you-know-who,
But I'm not that great; they don't have a clue.
They don't know how it feels, gawped at all the time,
All because of a stupid scar; it's just a stupid line!!
I wish I was like Tonks; change whenever I feel,
But I'm stuck like this, and with that I'll have to deal.
I'll swap if you want, you can be me, I can be you,
You'll have no parents, Your loved ones are few,
But they'll all know your name, they'll all stare,
They won't understand you; but what do I care?
I'd be free from it all, free from my mind,
Free from my scar; that terrible bind.

what do you think?
Danz_angel x

Ohh! Poor Harry! *pat pat*

It's very Order-of-the-Phoenix-ish! (and yes, that's not a bad thing)

Thnx! I was trying to get Harry's feelings of anger across and the fact that he feels trapped inside his own body lol.

OK, I've only just realised how many pages I've got here, and how many people have viewed them. I just wanted to say thanks to everyone who took the time to read here, especially quidditch_chick; everytime I do something new she always reads and reviews.. thnx!
OK, now that's outta my system here's a poem for ya, it's basically a comparison between Harry and your average person.

The thing that binds us all.

He's loved and lost, he's lost and loved,
Something that hapens to most of us.
His parents love him, his godfather too,
The same thing should be said for me and you.
So he can do magic, he's the boy who lived,
But we all should share the greatest gift.
The thing that binds us, And I don't mean a scar,
If you are looking for magic, don't look very far.
You don't need Hogwarts, (thought that would be fun)
You just need the thing that binds everyone.
You may think it's soppy, but you know it's true,
Love is a magic that binds me and you.
The one thing we share with the world around,
Is that no matter what, by love we are bound.


Whadda you think? Danz_angel x

Thank you! And your welcome!

And the poem... it's true!

I'll have a poem for later, just been a bit busy with my new programme thing. I know take requests for avatars in 'AA Ltd' (go to the siggy and avatar forum).

Danz_angel x

Nice poems . they are really good .do me a favor and check my poems out(I'm almost positive they suck) and tell me what you think.I think it's under Chimaera's Poetry.good work keep it up!