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Danz_angel 03-05-2004 06:40 PM

Danz_angel's poetry... + add your own!
 
Hey people jus thought I'd do this for the grin, no-one will read it anywayz!

Danz_angelx :flowersmile:

Danz_angel 03-05-2004 06:44 PM

Here iz a lil poem called Alone(about Sirius written from Harry's point of view.) You might have seen it posted elsewhere but it's my own work lol.

My friends are great
I'm quite well known
But since he's gone
I feel Alone.

My life is full of people
My friendship circle's grown
But one person's gone
I feel Alone.

I'd not known him for long
When I saw him I felt at home
But he left me here
I feel Alone.

I worshipped Padfoot
The king with no throne
He left without warning
I feel alone.

You like???

Danz_angel 03-05-2004 06:53 PM

Here iz a poem by Snuffles

Thousands of creatures wanted me for a kiss,
It was there greatest desire,
Though none of the beasts had romantic thoughts
Of setting my soul on fire.

I was imprisoned,
though I committed no crime
I had to escape;
There was so little time.

Wormtail was the traitor,
He gave the position away...
Lily and James did live no more
Once Voldemort had his way.

He found The Potter's hideout
He took their lives away,
Then turned to the crib
where baby Harry lay...

He raised his wand to end the life
Which had only just begun...
The spell backfired,
This was the end to the Dark Lord's fun.

I got the blame for Wormtail's betrayal
And for his so-called death too,
But I knew he was a filthy rat..
A secret known by few.


xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxx I'll finish this another time but only if sum1 actually readz the thing!!!!!
Reply on here if you actually read it! :/

Danz_angel x

Danz_angel 03-05-2004 07:29 PM

Here is the easiest riddle to solve... ever!

I live in the office of Dumbledore
I knew each one of the Hogwarts four.
I'll make a point (though I already have one)
Of showing you your qualities: brave, sly, clever or fun?
I have a brain, but I can keep yours warm,
Of Godric's hat I take the form.
I have a mouth but no eyes to see...
Can you guess who I could be?

Post your guesses, after 3 posts I'll tell you anywayz! :sorcerer:

Danz_angel 03-05-2004 09:54 PM

I kow no-one iz readin these but if any1 duz then thnx!

quidditch_chick 03-06-2004 05:24 AM

I think your poetry's great! Love it!

PS) Is the answer the sorting hat?

Danz_angel 03-06-2004 06:22 PM

Yea it is the sorting hat. tell any1 you know from the site to check my poetry out plz, thnx

Danz_angelx

stardancer488 03-06-2004 06:58 PM

great poetry... please check mine out and tell me what you think (poems... by amber)or stardancer488 the title is poems!!! i loev these thoughs any more ridde poems? i like those!

Danz_angel 03-07-2004 12:19 PM

This is only the second riddle I've ever written, the sorting hat was my first one oviously. Thanx for the comments don't forget to spread the word! Here goez....

I hate life, or at least i did
I'm rather old, though I'm still a kid.
I am known for my tears, I cry alot
You might hurt my feelings, though feel I cannot.
If you still haven't got it, I'll give you a clue:
It's such a cleche that my favourite words 'boo'.


Can you guess who it is? :eyebrows: that smilie iz so kool!

Dracnyzz 03-07-2004 05:13 PM

i haven't a clue! that one's harder.....it's cool that you write riddles!!! ^^

Danz_angel 03-07-2004 08:13 PM

Want another clue?! :whisle:

quidditch_chick 03-07-2004 10:32 PM

Is it moaning myrtle?

Danz_angel 03-07-2004 10:41 PM

Congrats! You got it in 1! D'ya like the poems n riddles so far? honest opinions plz!

Danz_angel 03-07-2004 10:54 PM

I don't really see the point in finishing the snuffles poem (the second one posted). If any1 really wants it finished just ask, if I get 3 requests then I will

Danz_angel x

quidditch_chick 03-08-2004 12:52 AM

YAY! Go me! :monkey: :yoshi: :kirby: :dance_banana: And yes! I love the poems and riddles!

Danz_angel 03-08-2004 09:26 PM

Hey people, here's another poem 4 y'all, it ain't one o my best but it'll do!
Here goez...



Death eaters

All that was visible of their faces
Were cold, pit less eyes.
The slitted hoods hid their identities,
Though they could not hide the evil inside.

Empty of all traces of emotion,
Empty of every thought,
Except for thoughts of evil
As they tortured those who fought.

Their voices were full of icy coldness,
More evil than the look in their eyes,
Unforgivable curses rolled from their tongues,
As easily as the lies.

Innocent wizards tortured,
Clueless muggles killed,
No words can describe the evil
That made these monsters thrilled.

please post ur opinions, I ain't really too impressed with this 1 lol
Danz_angel x :/

quidditch_chick 03-09-2004 01:48 AM

Good as ever! :sorcerer:

Danz_angel 03-09-2004 06:34 PM

Thanx! :flowersmile: There have been lots of people viewing these poems but only 1 person seems to reply....

Danz_angel x

Danz_angel 03-09-2004 08:49 PM

Hey wut d'ya want now? poem or riddle?! banana_wtf

quidditch_chick 03-10-2004 01:50 AM

Eh... how about a riddle? (thanks!)

Danz_angel 03-10-2004 08:35 PM

Okies, this gets harder by the riddle! this is quite easy too...

We look alike though we aren't the same,
We laugh and joke, life's one big game.
We bend the rules-they were made for that,
Put in Gryffindor by the sorting hat.
Quidditch is great, soaring through the air
If you can't spot us, just look for red hair.

Could I make it any easier?!?!?! :rolleyes:

Danz_angel x

Harry-Ron-HermioneONLY 03-11-2004 03:21 PM

This is great!

Danz_angel 03-11-2004 07:07 PM

Thanx, dnt forget to spread the word!!!!!! Someone please solve the riddle!

Danz_angel x

Danz_angel2 03-12-2004 07:25 PM

Hey I'm now Danz_angel2! Don't ask why I have changed, it's a long story and I don't have the time or energy!


Danz_angel x

Danz_angel2 03-12-2004 07:38 PM

Hey my first poem in my new name! Each verse is a different stage in the game.....

Quidditch

Soaring swiftly through the air,
The Autumn breeze whafts through my hair.
Flying fearlessly high above,
Free as a bird, peaceful as a dove.

Sneering Slytherins chant their taunt,
Empty words with no real point.
Hopeful Hufflepuffs watch with glee,
Finaly, a chance to set the cup free!

I'll finish this later..... dinner is ready!

Danz_angel x


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