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Jewelia Merlow 03-19-2004 12:24 AM

Confused
 
This poem is called--------"Confused"


When I told you I like you,

I was confused,

I know I made you feel,

Like you were being used,

I realize now I only like you,

Back then I'm sorry,

I still liked him too,

You liked me alot and I took that for granted,

And look on the floor where my heart has landed,

Why didn't I think before I had acted?,

Because of me look at the way you felt and reacted,

Because I was confused,

I chose the other guy,

I can't believe I did that,

How can I let life go by,

I thought you still liked me and talking we'd try,

But look where I'm left in a corner to cry,

I like you alot but see how long it took,

And now you have a girlfriend,

And I can't bare to look,

I hate it I'm not confused anymore,

But I guess it's to late for that I'm sure,

I wish you could see the I am feeling,
Because my feelings for you should now be leaving.....

Hearts_Hurt14 05-02-2005 03:21 AM

That poem relates to wat happened to me once.

hpstarr101 05-10-2005 07:31 PM

hey great poem i realy could feel it ........ keep up the great work .....

dannylover 05-31-2005 02:37 AM

Wow!!! That was fantastic!! Do more! :D

FairyHr 06-01-2005 02:30 PM

that was a great poem!
i felt like i could tryely relate...(different subjuct thouth)

(sorry about spelling)

i realy hope that u'll keep writing!!!

PBLOVER 06-25-2005 08:11 PM

omg ur poem was soooo good.

GothDude 07-08-2005 08:37 AM

*does monkey butt dance ::Monkey::*


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