I right what a feel and a lot of people dont get my poetry. I have 2. I dont have name 4 them

staring into souless eyes
but cant find
helpless, but is fine on the outside
inside she see's birdless flight and poisness chaoclate
darkness looks inside without everyone, but see's everything
her thoughts are full, but heart is empty
wishing for thing never to come because she's done


my hero, protector,creator
for he is always going to be
be in my eye's, soul, body
watching the world fall apart
in frount of his eye's, wondering if he created a monster
destroying the world
wondering if thing could be different
Hating me, destroying me,helping me
harder to go because
im lost in a world with no roads

what do u think

Thats very touching, I absolutely love the last line! It is...I wish it were mine.

<span style='color:darkred'>Nice work.

I get your work,
and it's the same way I feel.
Or I think I do,
in the way that I "dechipher" your work.
That's for sure. </span>

Scared and helpless
just breaks down and cries
but not knowing why
hating life, but doesnt want to die
casue she's scared, yes.im afriad to die
only beacause i see darkness, looking around
forever more

who-hoo! I like it! especially
"I'm lost in a world with no roads"