................my.......draco.....and.......hermi one?.....d...e....a.....d? :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

my poor draco and hermione, im crying right now......please say ur writing another chapter? they can't die like this! No! what about Dezi? *goes in room and doesn't leave forever, waiting for Draco and Hermione to live again*

if they were alive, they wouldn't be buried, would they? :) It would be a good twist to... naw, stupid title of f.f...
They're definitely dead. In the last few paragraphs of the chapter, it kind starts to say what happens after they (actually) died. And that's the final chapter of this f.f, cause like I said, I was waiting for at least one new reader until I posted it, and now I have two.
IF I can get started on a workable idea for the next f.f, I'lll get it up. I'll say if it's officially going to be up or not in my other Dramione f.f Fallen.
And I did actually want to make them live, I thought about them Apparating out of the manor, but then I realized the title wouldn't really work into the story as well as I wanted it to :)
So I stand on...
I MIGHT have another F.F, and if I do, it'll be about Dezi. I've got this cool idea for it (I tried using a diferent version, but it proved difficult, so I'm retrying the idea with a different twist). If I do actually get working on it (I can't start, it's hard man!), I'll bring Draco and Hermione in somehow (no, they won't be alive when it happens, most likely... I'll have to see how it works out)
So ya... if I do get to another f.f, since Draco and Hermione are definitely dead, it'll be about Dezi :)
I swear the idea came from when I found out my mom had to kill my horse (the last few chapters, from when Draco and Hermione's wedding chapter and on)... so in a sense, it's a good thing that happened... but no so good cause Poco's gone, but whatever :)
Anyways, not making any promises about another F.F. It MIGHT happen, it MIGHT NOT....
I feel like rambling, don't ask :D

Wow, I used the :) smily four times in that post...
NEW RECORD!

P.S: Tehehe, yesterday (last night really), I was SUPER bored and my mind raced, and I eventually came up with a hilarious version of Harry Potter. It went from normal Harry Potter to Harry Potter: Horsie Style! It's about how Hogwarts is a stable 'Hogwarts Stable for Magical Riding', and small things about the actual book are changed. The Sorting Horseshoe, Hogsmeade trips are trips to horse shows and there are stores where they buy things with their hay, 'wandering castle grounds' is going into the paddocks, there are four different barns; Gryffindor, Hufflepuff, Ravenclaw and Slytherin, and all the hard-to-handle and bad horses come from Slytherin, the horcruxes are the same, Dumbledore is the (human) man that runs the whole stable, the 'heads of house' are the 'head stable hands', professors are riding instructors, and the years Harry goes through are the same, but horse style.
Voldemort gave Harry a lightning-bolt shaped star on his forehead when he attacked Harry as a foal (baby horse), and his Avada Kedavra curse backfired on him and yeah. Voldemort in this story is the evil guy that wants to take over the magical horse world, and in the end Harry destroys all horcruxes and in the final battle, Voldemort and Harry stike each other at the exact same time and they both die (I believe in the 7th book both of 'em are gonna die, it's most likely in my opinion, but you might think differently).

Yeah, I was that bored I created a horse version of Harry Potter! Odd, eh?

OMG THEY DiED!?? twinneh!!! how dare you kill them!! *pokes twin* omg i'm so sad!!! I'm telling mommy!!! lol j/k
i loved it, tho!! i hope u do write a sequel!!! great work!! :D

Well at the time my horseh had to be put down... :P It kinda turned out for the better now (and I know you were joking :)). (if anyone wants to see what my horse looked like, well before he died... I made a vid on youtube, found here, if you wanna know that is. Barely any pics cause I only had him for two months, but ya)

-is poked- OWIE! -cries- I'm telling mommy! (jk) But thankies! :) (not for the poke! I mean thankies loving the story and reading it all the way to the sad end :D)
And I didn't feel like writing a sequel at the time and I thought that was the only way to make sure I don't do a sequel... dang I shoulda killed off Dezi as well! (jking)
I have a great idea for a sequel, but it's so hard to do! I finally got through the first chapter and I'm stuck on the 2nd now... depending on how it goes... ya...
I just like getting ahead of the story cause like, it's easier for me to post (I take a lot of time to write chapters! :)), and it helps me think of titles cause I suck at thinking of titles :P

H.O.M.G. O.O O.O O.O O.O :cry::cry::cry::cry::cry::cry::cry::cry::cry::cry: :cry::cry::cry::cry::cry::cry: i.can't.believe.they.are.dead.homg.:cry::cry::cry: :cry::cry:*spechless and crying* you're a super writer omg. i just can't belive it lool *cryes some more* god.:cry: loool i'm sorry i'm kind of a lot emotionnal....*wipes away tears* okay lol i'm okay now.. i hope loool Awsome! Spectacular lol no words to describe it... it's a sad ending... but's it's a good one too...


Well i'm from Quebec Yay!! lool but i'm originally from Romania came to Canada 6 years ago...loool god u moved a lot... lol well anyhow now i have to go to sleep it's like 11pm... so yeah...great job on the story lol still can't belive it lool*wipes away one last tear*

P.S.: my name's Diana... lol i don't know.. just felt like saying it lol again! Awsome post!!! Oh and Tell me when u're doing another story...and well i'm reading u're other story ..Fallen.. It's great... left a comment there too...

Thanx -blushes-
And it's good to be emotional enough to cry over a story :) If not, you'd be like... stone or sumthin :gasp::P

Awesome! Only six years in Quebec so far... Wow. Must be fun :)

I lived in Ottawa for 7 years (moved there when I was 2 and a half, first memories there). I used to go to Quebec all the time, it was a great way to learn French :P (I was in this suburb about half an hour away from Hull, QB, so it was very French-influenced). Military dad... man, people are all 'you're lucky to move so much!'. Of course those are the people that've been in one town their whole life, and I'm like, 'you might think so, I think different'. I liked it in Ottawa, I used to go to the Museum of Civilization (in Quebec), a lot as a kid... went back again since I have family in North Bay and it's like, 'WOW! So many French/English signs!' (since in B.C it's just all English, I completely forgot what it's like in Ottawa, let alone North Bay, which is like, six hours away from Wuebec but still has French/English signs everywhere, I relearned the 'north, south, east and west' words because of it tho :P).

I'm on and off, I finally figured out how to get past this hard spot in the POSSIBLE sequel... so I'm kinda on and off now

SARAH NOT FAIR YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE LET THEM DIE THAT'S NOT COOL I'M MAD NOW BECAUSE YOU KILLED THEM I'M NOT GOING TO TALK TO YOU....
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OKAY NOW I WILL.... but i loved it very touching and such but it's very un cool to do that but i will wait to see if you make a sequel but still you need to message me if you are making one because i want to keep in touch.
-sarah

well like I said, at the time I didn't want to write a sequel cause I wouldn't have any ideas... and this f.f would've gone on and on forever and I still wouldn't have any ideas and the title wouldn't work :)
And I wrote that like, the day my horse had to be killed, so I got... the death idea from that.

But ya, I think it's working with a sequel so far... it's hard to say exactly, but I'm getting somewhere in this new version of the sequel, so ya :P I'll see if it'll go up or not... but I'll definitely PM ya if it goes up Sarah :D

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wow...that was really unexpected....why did they have to die??? and Ron never got to say sorry to hermione...how sad...but i still loved it...it was really good...so now I am reading your other fan fic Fallen...that's really good too...I love it...

like I say, at the time I had no ideas for a sequel so I wanted to end it...
but I have a totally cool idea for the next f.f! I'm kinda working on it right now, I just gotta add some things b4 this secret comes out and it'll probably be up (still no promises it will or will not be up tho).
And my horse was kinda killed when I wrote that so I felt like writing something sad/dark like that...
But ya, I'm working on a sequel and... ya, you get it now :P
Besides, it WAS unexpected, wasn't it? :) Besides, when I wrote that I hated the thought of killing them off (it's like what J.K said about not wanting to kill off Dumbledore, but she had to...), and I tried to think of any way to change it, but I realized the title wouldn't exactly work with the story as well as I wanted it too, AND this f.f would continue on and on for a long long long time and I'd have no ideas for another possible part. I had an idea, but it was the idea used in this story called 'Cedric Diggory, NOT DEAD?!' or sumthin (that love brought Cedric back, I wanted to do something along those lines but that would kinda be taking from the other story and that's not good)

WEll i still love it. but i understand some of the things in my life have been like this story... but not to this extent but anywas i just really hope that you will keep in contact.

wow... that's kinda weird actually, how close the story relates to your life.
Like the whole story or just the last few chapters or sumthin?
But ya, I THINK I'll end up posting another sequel... I've found my ways of incorperating Draco and Hermione into the story, and a few others :P It's gonna be kinda short, that's all I can say. Lately I've had a buildup of creative blocks on the road, and I"m trying my best to take it down :) (don't ask why I decided to make a metaphor of having a creative block... I'm that bored).
But I'll make sure to PM ya when I have time :) And if the sequel does get posted

right now I"m working on a song fic actually. MY FIRST SONG FIC/ONE SHOT THAT DOESN'T HAVE ANY FORM OF DEATH AND THAT KINDA SADNESS! YAYNESS! :) (my backstory to why I chose the song is longer than the explaination of the story... actually the story explaination is barely one sentence, the backstory is like, nearly two paragraphs! :P).
It'll be up eventually... when I finish it of course :D I'm gonna try and do the whole song for once... I'll see how that works out. I'll posteh the link to the song fic when it's up on my other thread Fallen (I'm posting a lot of possible futures there, I know).
Anyways, ya, off for now! -gets back to song fic-
And it might say I'm 'viewing this thread' cause I'm to lazy to click the big large red X button... I'm on, just not active... as always!

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eh, my horse died the day I wrote that, realized how horrible it was but I had no ideas for any endings that were happy yet related to the title, so it stuck to them dying...
But they do return (not physically of course, they're really dead), in the sequel.
Which if NO ONE KNOWS, THERE WILL BE! It'll be kinda short cause I don't have many ideas, despite my awesome idea all together :P I'm debating on a title, cause there are two main parts to the story, and my other fan fic has the title I wanna use, but it'll either be called Dezi's (or 'Desiree's') Dreams (cause I can't use Dreams, my other thread is titled that), or... wait that one is taken (That Boy would be great for a title but it's being used by DanIsMyMan :P), and ya...
Anyways, SEQUEL WILL BE UP EVENTUALLY BUT IT'LL BE KINDA SHORTER...
And probably not as good, but WHATEVER! It's got a cool outline/story to it I think.

But ya, not all stories have happy endings, and even tho I really wanted one after I read what I wrote about Draco and Hermione's deaths, well ya... I realized I couldn't change it (and at the time I didn't wanna continue with a sequel and thought it was the only way out... should killed Dezi... joking of course).
Anyways, ya, sequel eventually. I'll PM everyone when it's up! (just tell me if you want to be on my 'list of to be PMed' by posting or... PMing me :P)
Sarah

Pm me when you decide my lurvly Sarah because you are a great writer.

Well I did decide I'll post the sequel, but I dunno when, because I'm still having trouble with it (on chapter 8, it's kinda fast-moving cause of my lack of ideas, but Draco and Hermione ARE in and a big part of the story, EVEN IF THEY ARE DEAD... :P)
I'll PM ya the link of the sequel when I do get it up Sarah :) It's now just a matter of when it goes up.

P.S: The sequel has been up for a bit now, but I've been forgetting to add the link to this post (since you can't add new posts).
You can find it here