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11-06-2006, 11:52 PM
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|  Library WriterSirius AuthorLeftySS100 TriumphantMooncalf
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Eunice Murray
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Originally Posted by Tinkerbaby94  awww...you're mean *protests* I can't help it if I have an art project due in two days that I have worked on for seventeen hours so far and still have three to go! And a physics unit test which I need to boost my grade! And my other fan fictions!  I'm trying my best! Quote:
Originally Posted by loz315 hey cookie
usually im not interested in FFs not about harry,ginny,hermione&ron or whatever but this one is super sweet 
keep up the good work darls Hee hee, thanks! Quote:
Originally Posted by MugglePrincess aw i love it cookie!! its amazing. i love reading from chos point of view despite the fact that i don't care for her too much but who knows maybe after your story ill like her better! <3 Thanks! I hope this story helps us all sympathize with her more.
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11-07-2006, 01:44 AM
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| | Puffskein
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*protests* I can't help it if I have an art project due in two days that I have worked on for seventeen hours so far and still have three to go! And a physics unit test which I need to boost my grade! And my other fan fictions! I'm trying my best!
Aww...poor cookie =) We loooooove you!!! Good luck on your physics test and hope you finish your art project!
Love,
Adrienne
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11-07-2006, 03:21 AM
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|  SoTS Royalty
Norwegian Ridgeback
Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: ♥ TP ♥
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Klaudette Genevra Oddkoule
Sixth Year |  Rupert = *swoon* "You know I'm right..."
loevly post dear
hmm cant wait to c wat happens nxt
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11-08-2006, 02:28 AM
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| Formerly: AutumnSun Kelpie
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Fifth Year | No fun tag! | Haha, Zombie! | Nyeaarr!
*clings to Cookie* Aahhhh. Science. *pokes the subject* I'm done my chem unit *phew* I can't wait until you post the next lil bit Cookie!!! Muscles.... *drools* | |
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11-08-2006, 04:58 AM
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| Library WriterSirius AuthorLeftySS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
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Eunice Murray
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Originally Posted by Moxie Aww...poor cookie =) We loooooove you!!! Good luck on your physics test and hope you finish your art project!
Love,
Adrienne Thank you! I'm studying right now! Quote:
Originally Posted by pgspickles loevly post dear
hmm cant wait to c wat happens nxt Thanks! Quote:
Originally Posted by harrypottersummer *clings to Cookie* Aahhhh. Science. *pokes the subject* I'm done my chem unit *phew* I can't wait until you post the next lil bit Cookie!!! Muscles.... *drools* Heh heh, except physics isn't just a unit for me...it's a whole class. So is chemistry. *dies*
__________________ White shores are calling... You have entered the realm of the Lady of the Wood. We are proud to fight alongside men once more. ...You and I will meet again I <3 you, all my SS friends. Namarie! | |
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11-08-2006, 10:55 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: chillen with emmett
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Originally Posted by Fortune_Cookie *protests* I can't help it if I have an art project due in two days that I have worked on for seventeen hours so far and still have three to go! And a physics unit test which I need to boost my grade! And my other fan fictions! I'm trying my best!
Hee hee, thanks!
Thanks! I hope this story helps us all sympathize with her more. hey I was kidding, I haven't updated my fan-fic because of all the work that I have due too.
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11-08-2006, 12:39 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Pompano Beach, FL
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Hi, Cookie
I am finally here to read this story too.
So far it is absolutely wonderful. I don't like Cho much but I like that there is a Ced/Cho story. I love cedric. Keep it up!
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11-15-2006, 11:06 PM
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| Library WriterSirius AuthorLeftySS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Tinkerbaby94 hey I was kidding, I haven't updated my fan-fic because of all the work that I have due too. Don't worry, I knew you were kidding, hence the smileys.  Quote:
Originally Posted by danismine Hi, Cookie
I am finally here to read this story too.
So far it is absolutely wonderful. I don't like Cho much but I like that there is a Ced/Cho story. I love cedric. Keep it up!
PAMS
Roshni Thanks!
And here is a post! “You’re a bloody good dancer,” I complimented truthfully. I enjoyed how Ced’s hand rested on my waist, not too forceful, yet not too uncontrolled.
His eyes flicked to the floor and he blushed lightly. He was so cute! “Er, thanks,” he said. “I suppose those dancing lessons in class helped.”
I nodded. “They did.”
We danced in silence for a while, soaking in the music. I couldn’t peel my eyes away from his. By the time it was time for dinner, I didn’t want to stop. Ced held my hand loosely and a bit shyly at first. We joined my friends and his friends at one large table.
Everyone soon forgot any tension as we all conversed comfortably. I could see envious glances being thrown our way. Ignoring them, I struck up a conversation with Cedric, who easily carried it.
When the last course was finished, the Weird Sisters started to play. My table immediately perked up. “Finally, some music I can dance to!” one of Ced’s Hufflepuff friends remarked with a goofy smile. He and his date waved to us and joined the group that had already gathered.
“Wanna dance?” Cedric asked me with a smile. I couldn’t decline; not that I wanted to decline anyways. I was thoroughly enchanted by him. Nodding, I rose and he took my hand, leading me to the dance floor.
A wild number was playing when we started dancing. I was a bit unsure at first, but of course, I didn’t show it. I let myself go, dancing wildly. Ced was all smiles. He swayed with me, holding onto my wrists at times, making them tingle.
After half an hour of dancing, it was beginning to steam, or it seemed like it. I could feel my cheeks were flushing and his were too. He seemed to notice as well and suggested, “Why don’t we go out for a walk?” We gazed up at the ceiling. The night was clear, the same as it had been when we first arrived at the Yule Ball. Nodding, I settled my hand into the crook of his arm and we left through the back door.
The winter air was crisp and cool, which was relieving to my body. I breathed in deeply. My feet made clip-clop noises as we strolled on the stone in silence. Glancing over at Cedric, I studied his handsome features, lit by the soft luminosity of the flittering fairies around us.
He must have seen me staring and met my eye, one corner of his mouth turning up. Slightly embarrassed, I averted my eyes. It wasn’t till a few minutes later that I realized he was guiding me towards a bench overlooking the lake.
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11-15-2006, 11:35 PM
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| | Gnome
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Great post Cookie! 
OOOOOH!!! OMG I wanna know what happens!!!!
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11-16-2006, 02:41 AM
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| | Horklump
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Wonderful post! Can't wait for more!
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11-16-2006, 05:35 AM
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| | Doxy
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Change Has Come
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Very Personal very nice but exactly how personal is this going to get!!!!! lol
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11-16-2006, 07:19 PM
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|  Fictionally CrushingPuffskein
Join Date: May 2005 Location: If I don't know, how I can tell you?
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That was a cute post; I loved it! PAMS.
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11-16-2006, 11:16 PM
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| Library WriterSirius AuthorLeftySS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Signing off SS for good…blame the workload and the hectic-ness of life. I’ll miss you all…:cry:
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Eunice Murray
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Originally Posted by That_one_girl Great post Cookie!
OOOOOH!!! OMG I wanna know what happens!!!! Thanks! Quote:
Originally Posted by Weaselby Wonderful post! Can't wait for more! Thank you! Quote:
Originally Posted by J.K. Rowling Very Personal very nice but exactly how personal is this going to get!!!!! lol  We'll see... Quote:
Originally Posted by dannylover That was a cute post; I loved it! PAMS.
peppy Thankies!
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11-17-2006, 04:03 PM
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| | Puffskein
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more please
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11-17-2006, 11:42 PM
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| | Dugbog
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i love it cookie! absolutely brilliant...i have to admitt cho is kinda growing on me a tad...lols!
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11-19-2006, 06:08 PM
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| | Puffskein
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that was so cute
loved it 
PAMS
Roshni
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11-19-2006, 08:49 PM
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| Library WriterSirius AuthorLeftySS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Signing off SS for good…blame the workload and the hectic-ness of life. I’ll miss you all…:cry:
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Originally Posted by Tinkerbaby94 more please In a few days! Quote:
Originally Posted by MugglePrincess i love it cookie! absolutely brilliant...i have to admitt cho is kinda growing on me a tad...lols! lol...I think she may grow on you by the end of the story! Quote:
Originally Posted by danismine that was so cute
loved it
PAMS
Roshni Thanks!
__________________ White shores are calling... You have entered the realm of the Lady of the Wood. We are proud to fight alongside men once more. ...You and I will meet again I <3 you, all my SS friends. Namarie! | |
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11-20-2006, 04:08 AM
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| Formerly: Kimstar18  Beautiful Disaster
Chaos CreatorMoke
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Irish at heart <3
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Super cute! I've read stories written by you before, and I know this one will be wonderful! | |
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11-20-2006, 05:56 AM
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| SoTS Royalty
Norwegian Ridgeback
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Sixth Year | Rupert = *swoon* "You know I'm right..."
yah super cute
hmm benching
naughty naughty!
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11-20-2006, 11:41 PM
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| Library WriterSirius AuthorLeftySS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Signing off SS for good…blame the workload and the hectic-ness of life. I’ll miss you all…:cry:
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Originally Posted by Kimstar18 Super cute! I've read stories written by you before, and I know this one will be wonderful! Why, thank you! I hope it's to your liking.  Quote:
Originally Posted by pgspickles yah super cute
hmm benching
naughty naughty! Thanks!
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11-25-2006, 08:02 PM
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| K.O. Harry's crush on ChoRecent SBFC MemberKeeper of Hermione's Patronus Billywig
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Hi! I'm a new reader and I just would like to say I love this story so far! I've read some of your other stories and I really like this one too!
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11-27-2006, 07:28 PM
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Great posts. Cedric and Cho are so cute together!! PAMS!! | |
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11-28-2006, 01:56 AM
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| Library WriterSirius AuthorLeftySS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by hphg Hi! I'm a new reader and I just would like to say I love this story so far! I've read some of your other stories and I really like this one too! Welcome to the story! Thanks! Quote:
Originally Posted by Mrs Felton Great posts. Cedric and Cho are so cute together!! PAMS!! I think they're very cute, though I'm not a big Cho fan!
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12-10-2006, 08:52 PM
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| Library WriterSirius AuthorLeftySS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
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The bright moon reflected off the docile water, cascading its glow upon us. Ced let me sit on the bench first and sat beside me, our bodies touching slightly.
“So, how’s it like, being a Hogwarts Champion and all?” I asked, striking up a conversation. I liked conversation more than silence many a time.
Ced shrugged modestly. “I don’t know. It’s nice, I suppose. But also, there’s a lot of pressure on me to do well in this tournament.”
“The goblet picked wisely,” I commented, making Cedric blush a bit. I loved watching him react to compliments. It was so endearing!
His hand reached hesitantly towards mine, as if debating whether to grab it or not. When he finally decided to hold it, I felt considerably warmer. Then he turned to me and for a moment, I thought he was going to kiss me. Certainly, his face was getting closer to mine, but he didn’t act upon it and I was too nervous to initiate anything.
Instead, he told me quietly, “This has been one of the best nights of my life, Cho.” Smiling, he added, “I hope we can do more stuff like this in the future.”
Now my heart was palpitating. He really did like me. And I liked him. Blushing, I beamed at Cedric, hoping that would express what I thought about him.
The moment was ruined when I gave an involuntary shiver. Noticing that I was chilled, Ced offered, “Do you want to go back inside?” I nodded, and we moseyed to the castle once again.
Later, Cedric walked me back to Ravenclaw tower. Stopping outside the portrait hole, he grasped both of my hands gently. “Thank you for the wonderful night,” he said more sincerely than I would have thought possible.
Warming up even more, I giggled. “Thank you for inviting me.” I ran my thumb across his fingers slowly in that artful way that I was experienced in.
“Any time.” Cedric winked at me cutely and gave me a light peck on the cheek. It was such a small gesture, but it awoke the butterflies in my stomach. When his face drew away from mine, I observed that his cheeks were very rosy.
“Good night,” I whispered, my hands lingering on his before I stepped into my common room.
“Good night,” Cedric replied, the dreamiest expression on his face.
__________________ White shores are calling... You have entered the realm of the Lady of the Wood. We are proud to fight alongside men once more. ...You and I will meet again I <3 you, all my SS friends. Namarie! | |
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12-10-2006, 09:25 PM
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| | Puffskein
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Awesome post!! I loved it! Ahh...a kiss!!! Yay!! Pams!
Love
Adrienne
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