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Fortune_Cookie 11-06-2006 11:52 PM

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Originally Posted by Tinkerbaby94 (Post 4119433)
awww...you're mean

*protests* I can't help it if I have an art project due in two days that I have worked on for seventeen hours so far and still have three to go! And a physics unit test which I need to boost my grade! And my other fan fictions! :P I'm trying my best!

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Originally Posted by loz315 (Post 4119667)
hey cookie
usually im not interested in FFs not about harry,ginny,hermione&ron or whatever but this one is super sweet :D
keep up the good work darls

Hee hee, thanks!

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Originally Posted by MugglePrincess (Post 4121920)
aw i love it cookie!! its amazing. i love reading from chos point of view despite the fact that i don't care for her too much but who knows maybe after your story ill like her better! <3

Thanks! I hope this story helps us all sympathize with her more.

Moxie 11-07-2006 01:44 AM

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*protests* I can't help it if I have an art project due in two days that I have worked on for seventeen hours so far and still have three to go! And a physics unit test which I need to boost my grade! And my other fan fictions! I'm trying my best!
Aww...poor cookie =) We loooooove you!!! Good luck on your physics test and hope you finish your art project!

Love,
Adrienne

pgspickles 11-07-2006 03:21 AM

loevly post dear

hmm cant wait to c wat happens nxt

ahshlyn 11-08-2006 02:28 AM

*clings to Cookie* Aahhhh. Science. *pokes the subject* I'm done my chem unit *phew* I can't wait until you post the next lil bit Cookie!!! Muscles.... *drools*

Fortune_Cookie 11-08-2006 04:58 AM

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Originally Posted by Moxie (Post 4122471)
Aww...poor cookie =) We loooooove you!!! Good luck on your physics test and hope you finish your art project!

Love,
Adrienne

Thank you! I'm studying right now! :P

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Originally Posted by pgspickles (Post 4122959)
loevly post dear

hmm cant wait to c wat happens nxt

Thanks!

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Originally Posted by harrypottersummer (Post 4126616)
*clings to Cookie* Aahhhh. Science. *pokes the subject* I'm done my chem unit *phew* I can't wait until you post the next lil bit Cookie!!! Muscles.... *drools*

Heh heh, except physics isn't just a unit for me...it's a whole class. So is chemistry. *dies*

Tinkerbaby94 11-08-2006 10:55 AM

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Originally Posted by Fortune_Cookie (Post 4121948)
*protests* I can't help it if I have an art project due in two days that I have worked on for seventeen hours so far and still have three to go! And a physics unit test which I need to boost my grade! And my other fan fictions! :P I'm trying my best!



Hee hee, thanks!



Thanks! I hope this story helps us all sympathize with her more.

hey I was kidding, I haven't updated my fan-fic because of all the work that I have due too.

danismine 11-08-2006 12:39 PM

Hi, Cookie
I am finally here to read this story too.
So far it is absolutely wonderful. I don't like Cho much but I like that there is a Ced/Cho story. I love cedric. Keep it up!
PAMS

Roshni :D

Fortune_Cookie 11-15-2006 11:06 PM

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Originally Posted by Tinkerbaby94 (Post 4127583)
hey I was kidding, I haven't updated my fan-fic because of all the work that I have due too.

:P Don't worry, I knew you were kidding, hence the smileys. ^_^

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Originally Posted by danismine (Post 4127652)
Hi, Cookie
I am finally here to read this story too.
So far it is absolutely wonderful. I don't like Cho much but I like that there is a Ced/Cho story. I love cedric. Keep it up!
PAMS

Roshni :D

Thanks!

And here is a post!

“You’re a bloody good dancer,” I complimented truthfully. I enjoyed how Ced’s hand rested on my waist, not too forceful, yet not too uncontrolled.

His eyes flicked to the floor and he blushed lightly. He was so cute! “Er, thanks,” he said. “I suppose those dancing lessons in class helped.”

I nodded. “They did.”

We danced in silence for a while, soaking in the music. I couldn’t peel my eyes away from his. By the time it was time for dinner, I didn’t want to stop. Ced held my hand loosely and a bit shyly at first. We joined my friends and his friends at one large table.

Everyone soon forgot any tension as we all conversed comfortably. I could see envious glances being thrown our way. Ignoring them, I struck up a conversation with Cedric, who easily carried it.

When the last course was finished, the Weird Sisters started to play. My table immediately perked up. “Finally, some music I can dance to!” one of Ced’s Hufflepuff friends remarked with a goofy smile. He and his date waved to us and joined the group that had already gathered.

“Wanna dance?” Cedric asked me with a smile. I couldn’t decline; not that I wanted to decline anyways. I was thoroughly enchanted by him. Nodding, I rose and he took my hand, leading me to the dance floor.

A wild number was playing when we started dancing. I was a bit unsure at first, but of course, I didn’t show it. I let myself go, dancing wildly. Ced was all smiles. He swayed with me, holding onto my wrists at times, making them tingle.

After half an hour of dancing, it was beginning to steam, or it seemed like it. I could feel my cheeks were flushing and his were too. He seemed to notice as well and suggested, “Why don’t we go out for a walk?” We gazed up at the ceiling. The night was clear, the same as it had been when we first arrived at the Yule Ball. Nodding, I settled my hand into the crook of his arm and we left through the back door.

The winter air was crisp and cool, which was relieving to my body. I breathed in deeply. My feet made clip-clop noises as we strolled on the stone in silence. Glancing over at Cedric, I studied his handsome features, lit by the soft luminosity of the flittering fairies around us.

He must have seen me staring and met my eye, one corner of his mouth turning up. Slightly embarrassed, I averted my eyes. It wasn’t till a few minutes later that I realized he was guiding me towards a bench overlooking the lake.

That_one_girl 11-15-2006 11:35 PM

Great post Cookie!:)
OOOOOH!!! OMG I wanna know what happens!!!!

Weaselby 11-16-2006 02:41 AM

Wonderful post! Can't wait for more! :D

Black Rose Tragedy 11-16-2006 05:35 AM

Very Personal very nice but exactly how personal is this going to get!!!!! lol

dannylover 11-16-2006 07:19 PM

That was a cute post; I loved it! PAMS.

peppy :upside:

Fortune_Cookie 11-16-2006 11:16 PM

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Originally Posted by That_one_girl (Post 4159225)
Great post Cookie!:)
OOOOOH!!! OMG I wanna know what happens!!!!

Thanks!

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Originally Posted by Weaselby (Post 4160080)
Wonderful post! Can't wait for more! :D

Thank you!

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Originally Posted by J.K. Rowling (Post 4160629)
Very Personal very nice but exactly how personal is this going to get!!!!! lol

:lol: We'll see...:P

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Originally Posted by dannylover (Post 4161972)
That was a cute post; I loved it! PAMS.

peppy :upside:

Thankies! :)

Tinkerbaby94 11-17-2006 04:03 PM

more please

MugglePrincess 11-17-2006 11:42 PM

i love it cookie! absolutely brilliant...i have to admitt cho is kinda growing on me a tad...lols!

danismine 11-19-2006 06:08 PM

that was so cute
loved it :loved:
PAMS

Roshni

Fortune_Cookie 11-19-2006 08:49 PM

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Originally Posted by Tinkerbaby94 (Post 4165285)
more please

In a few days!

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Originally Posted by MugglePrincess (Post 4167425)
i love it cookie! absolutely brilliant...i have to admitt cho is kinda growing on me a tad...lols!

lol...I think she may grow on you by the end of the story!

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Originally Posted by danismine (Post 4175097)
that was so cute
loved it :loved:
PAMS

Roshni

Thanks!

NannyMcPhee 11-20-2006 04:08 AM

Super cute! I've read stories written by you before, and I know this one will be wonderful!

pgspickles 11-20-2006 05:56 AM

yah super cute

hmm benching
naughty naughty!

Fortune_Cookie 11-20-2006 11:41 PM

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Originally Posted by Kimstar18 (Post 4178122)
Super cute! I've read stories written by you before, and I know this one will be wonderful!

Why, thank you! :D I hope it's to your liking. ;)

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Originally Posted by pgspickles (Post 4178433)
yah super cute

hmm benching
naughty naughty!

:lol: Thanks!

hphg 11-25-2006 08:02 PM

Hi! I'm a new reader and I just would like to say I love this story so far! I've read some of your other stories and I really like this one too! :loved:

Mrs Felton 11-27-2006 07:28 PM

Great posts. Cedric and Cho are so cute together!! PAMS!!

Fortune_Cookie 11-28-2006 01:56 AM

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Originally Posted by hphg (Post 4205576)
Hi! I'm a new reader and I just would like to say I love this story so far! I've read some of your other stories and I really like this one too! :loved:

Welcome to the story! :) Thanks!

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Originally Posted by Mrs Felton (Post 4216523)
Great posts. Cedric and Cho are so cute together!! PAMS!!

^_^ I think they're very cute, though I'm not a big Cho fan! :D

Fortune_Cookie 12-10-2006 08:52 PM

The bright moon reflected off the docile water, cascading its glow upon us. Ced let me sit on the bench first and sat beside me, our bodies touching slightly.

“So, how’s it like, being a Hogwarts Champion and all?” I asked, striking up a conversation. I liked conversation more than silence many a time.

Ced shrugged modestly. “I don’t know. It’s nice, I suppose. But also, there’s a lot of pressure on me to do well in this tournament.”

“The goblet picked wisely,” I commented, making Cedric blush a bit. I loved watching him react to compliments. It was so endearing!

His hand reached hesitantly towards mine, as if debating whether to grab it or not. When he finally decided to hold it, I felt considerably warmer. Then he turned to me and for a moment, I thought he was going to kiss me. Certainly, his face was getting closer to mine, but he didn’t act upon it and I was too nervous to initiate anything.

Instead, he told me quietly, “This has been one of the best nights of my life, Cho.” Smiling, he added, “I hope we can do more stuff like this in the future.”

Now my heart was palpitating. He really did like me. And I liked him. Blushing, I beamed at Cedric, hoping that would express what I thought about him.

The moment was ruined when I gave an involuntary shiver. Noticing that I was chilled, Ced offered, “Do you want to go back inside?” I nodded, and we moseyed to the castle once again.

Later, Cedric walked me back to Ravenclaw tower. Stopping outside the portrait hole, he grasped both of my hands gently. “Thank you for the wonderful night,” he said more sincerely than I would have thought possible.

Warming up even more, I giggled. “Thank you for inviting me.” I ran my thumb across his fingers slowly in that artful way that I was experienced in.

“Any time.” Cedric winked at me cutely and gave me a light peck on the cheek. It was such a small gesture, but it awoke the butterflies in my stomach. When his face drew away from mine, I observed that his cheeks were very rosy.

“Good night,” I whispered, my hands lingering on his before I stepped into my common room.

“Good night,” Cedric replied, the dreamiest expression on his face.

Moxie 12-10-2006 09:25 PM

Awesome post!! I loved it! Ahh...a kiss!!! Yay!! Pams!

Love
Adrienne


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