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LyonLover417 11-04-2006 04:17 PM

AHHH!!!!!!!! I love it Cookie! Thanks for PMing me! Can't wait for chapter 2!!! PAMS!!

Katie

Arabella Dior 11-04-2006 07:54 PM

Hey Cookie! I love it so far. Thanks for the pm. I am so sad that Seduction is ending. You are such a good writer. Can't wait for more!
~Ari

HP_Fan_09 11-05-2006 01:04 AM

I loved it. Just plane out loved it. I'm not really into the cho storys because she is a bit of a snob but i do love it.

Tinkerbaby94 11-05-2006 04:06 AM

Please write more soon, I'm dying to hear more

Fortune_Cookie 11-05-2006 04:46 AM

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Originally Posted by LyonLover417 (Post 4109635)
AHHH!!!!!!!! I love it Cookie! Thanks for PMing me! Can't wait for chapter 2!!! PAMS!!

Katie

Thanks, and you're welcome! :D

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Originally Posted by Arabella Dior (Post 4110635)
Hey Cookie! I love it so far. Thanks for the pm. I am so sad that Seduction is ending. You are such a good writer. Can't wait for more!
~Ari

No problem, it's great having you back. :) I'm very sad as well that it must end. :blush: Aw, thanks!

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Originally Posted by HP_Fan_09 (Post 4112639)
I loved it. Just plane out loved it. I'm not really into the cho storys because she is a bit of a snob but i do love it.

Ha ha, thank you! I totally know what you're talking about and agree with you.

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Originally Posted by Tinkerbaby94 (Post 4113564)
Please write more soon, I'm dying to hear more

Oh, I think I will post tomorrow. ;)

That_one_girl 11-05-2006 05:31 AM

Tomorrow huh???
YAY!

emma_rlz 11-05-2006 09:26 AM

Oh, I love this start! I can't wait for your next post! It's not often yu ofind Cho/Cedric, I think this is the only one I've seen!

PAMS!

dannylover 11-05-2006 03:52 PM

OMG soooooooo lovely, Cookie! PAMS!

peppy :upside:

Fortune_Cookie 11-05-2006 03:58 PM

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Originally Posted by That_one_girl (Post 4114042)
Tomorrow huh???
YAY!

:yes:

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Originally Posted by emma_rlz (Post 4114644)
Oh, I love this start! I can't wait for your next post! It's not often yu ofind Cho/Cedric, I think this is the only one I've seen!

PAMS!

Yeah, I thought I'd do something that hasn't been done much. ^_^ Thanks!

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Originally Posted by dannylover (Post 4115329)
OMG soooooooo lovely, Cookie! PAMS!

peppy :upside:

:blush: Thank you! I will be posting later today!

Harry4emma 11-05-2006 04:08 PM

really good so far :)

Fortune_Cookie 11-05-2006 09:05 PM

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Originally Posted by emmawatsonxfan (Post 4115383)
really good so far :)

Thankies! Here's another post!

Remembering that he was talking to me, I answered, “Oh. Yes. Sure.” Marietta gave my mittened hand a squeeze before Cedric led me away to a more isolated part of the Hogwarts ground.

“Beautiful day, isn’t it?” he commented, breathing in deeply. I could sense the nervousness in his voice. I had begun to detect that in nearly every boy that had asked me out previously.

“Yes, it sure is. I love winter.” I brushed some long black hair out of my face and I walked beside him.

“Winter. Yes. Well, I was wondering…you know, the Yule Ball is coming up, and, well,” he stopped and blushed. “Would you do me the honor of letting me escort you to the ball?” He let it out rather quickly.

My heart leapt. “That would be splendid, Cedric,” I told him with a smile that I practiced too much to admit.

Cedric breathed a sigh of relief. “Great! I’ll meet you outside the Ravenclaw common room, then, at 6:30 on that night.” When I nodded, he added, “And you can call me Ced instead of Cedric.”

~

The night of the Yule Ball finally arrived and I found myself frantic to get myself ready. My dress hung by my bed, wrinkle-free, and my shoes were placed right under the dress. Soon I was changed and then proceeded to apply make-up. Marietta did my hair, as she was the experienced hairdresser of the group.

I was done before everyone else and my friends encouraged me to go down by myself, so that Cedr—Ced and I could walk to the Great Hall undisturbed. I approved of this idea and check the mirror once more before heading down daintily to the main common room. Quite a few heads turned and some fellow Ravenclaws waved at me. Waving back, I stepped through the portrait hole.

Ced was waiting for me outside, leaning against the staircase post and brushing a hand through his hair. When he saw me, he immediately straightened up and beamed. “You look…stunning,” he complimented, and I was happy to hear that it was genuine.

With a nervous giggle, I replied, “Thank you.”

Holding out his arm for me to slip my hand through, Ced directed me to the Great Hall, where I would hear soft music playing and the sounds of mingling students. Wow, he’s got muscles, I thought to myself with an inward giggle. I felt like I was floating.

When we arrived at the Great Hall, I breathtakingly took in our surroundings. The Great Hall had been transformed; magical snow fell lightly from the enchanted ceiling, which displayed a clear, starry night. Christmas trees lined the wall and everything was sparkling.

Ced introduced me to some of his Hufflepuff friends and their dates before it was officially time to start. Professor McGonagall reminded us that we were to open the Yule Ball with a dance.

My grin widened when the opening music started and the champions along with their companions walked through the crowd of students. I waved to my friends and they gave me good-luck smiles.

Taking my waist at exactly the right time, Ced guided me across the shining floor. His hand was trembling slightly, but thankfully his other hand, which held mine, was not sweaty. I melted under his piercing gaze and nearly forgot that we were in front of everyone else. Soon, the pressure was relieved and everyone else joined in.

emma_rlz 11-05-2006 09:11 PM

I loved it! It was so sweet!

Tinkerbaby94 11-05-2006 09:14 PM

me ish need more story dude!!!

Black Rose Tragedy 11-05-2006 09:45 PM

Wonderfull and this is just the begining *relaxes into chair and watches the rest of the play*

Moxie 11-05-2006 10:11 PM

Awww...I loved it!! It's amazin! Ced's so cute =)

Love the postie!

Huggles,
~Adrienne

LyonLover417 11-05-2006 11:42 PM

Awesome Post, can't wait for more! PAMS!

Fortune_Cookie 11-05-2006 11:58 PM

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Originally Posted by emma_rlz (Post 4116886)
I loved it! It was so sweet!

Thanks!

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Originally Posted by Tinkerbaby94 (Post 4116909)
me ish need more story dude!!!

Heh heh...in a week or so...

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Originally Posted by J.K. Rowling (Post 4117110)
Wonderfull and this is just the begining *relaxes into chair and watches the rest of the play*

:) Relax all you want and enjoy the show.

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Originally Posted by Moxie (Post 4117291)
Awww...I loved it!! It's amazin! Ced's so cute =)

Love the postie!

Huggles,
~Adrienne

Thankies! Hee hee, yeah, he is. ^_^

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Awesome Post, can't wait for more! PAMS!
Thanks!

dannylover 11-06-2006 12:07 AM

That was lovely, Cookie! PAMS.

peppy :upside:

Arabella Dior 11-06-2006 12:14 AM

Brillant! I loved it. Can't wait for more
~Ari

'Ele_the_writer 11-06-2006 02:03 AM

Maybe I'm just especially partial to Christmas-themed storylines, but that post was so spectacular! It was so lovely and descriptive. Can't wait for next week!

<33

herminiefan#1 11-06-2006 03:57 AM

OMG!Awsome fanfic!Please write more soon!You're such a fantastic writer!

Fortune_Cookie 11-06-2006 04:16 AM

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Originally Posted by dannylover (Post 4117928)
That was lovely, Cookie! PAMS.

peppy :upside:

Aww, thanks!

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Originally Posted by Arabella Dior (Post 4117976)
Brillant! I loved it. Can't wait for more
~Ari

Merci!

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Originally Posted by gisele (Post 4118587)
Maybe I'm just especially partial to Christmas-themed storylines, but that post was so spectacular! It was so lovely and descriptive. Can't wait for next week!

<33

Ha ha, thank you! Hmm...maybe I should write a Christmas fanfic just for the season...*ponders*

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Originally Posted by herminiefan#1 (Post 4118921)
OMG!Awsome fanfic!Please write more soon!You're such a fantastic writer!

Welcome to the story! :blush: Thankies!

Tinkerbaby94 11-06-2006 10:48 AM

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Heh heh...in a week or so...
awww...you're mean

rawrrLAUREN 11-06-2006 01:12 PM

hey cookie
usually im not interested in FFs not about harry,ginny,hermione&ron or whatever but this one is super sweet :D
keep up the good work darls

MugglePrincess 11-06-2006 11:44 PM

aw i love it cookie!! its amazing. i love reading from chos point of view despite the fact that i don't care for her too much but who knows maybe after your story ill like her better! <3


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