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Fortune_Cookie 10-28-2006 06:02 AM

Cedric’s Butterfly – Sa16+
 
Cho and Cedric were the golden couple of Hogwarts. How did that exactly happen? And how did it end?

“Cedric’s looking at you again, Cho,” Marietta whispered in my ear as we ate breakfast in the Great Hall. The ceiling was cloudy, yet the sun still shone through. It was going to be a cold day. The view from the windows showed snow swirling outside.

Taking a subtle peek at Cedric, who was smack dab in the middle of his friends at the Hufflepuff table, I met his gaze for a second; he blushed and looked away, as did I.

“You two are so cute,” my other friend, Isabel, cooed with a grin. “He’s bound to ask you out one of these days. Maybe to the Yule Ball! Just think about it: going up there, in front of all three schools, arm linked with the real Hogwarts champion.”

I ignored Isabel’s insult to Harry and fixed the picture that she’d just described in my head. I must admit it was very appealing. And I knew that Cedric liked me. I liked him immensely. My friends told me that Harry fancied me as well, but I was merely flattered by his attention; Cedric was the one I had eyes for. I didn’t go for younger men, typically.

My friends and I were soon finished our meal and decided to run back to the Ravenclaw common room to fetch our winter clothes, since it was Saturday. I spent a little more time in the mirror, making sure I looked alright. Who knows? Maybe today Cedric would ask me.

As we trudged outside in the few inches of snow, the crisp air surrounded me, making me thankful for my warm scarf. We heard some male voices coming from around the corner; they sounded like Hufflepuffs. Moving in one body, all of us girls crept up to the corner, hidden, and listened.

“C’mon, Ced, just ask Cho out. She won’t say no,” the Hufflepuff boys prompted. “What’s there not to like? Good looks, good grades, good athlete, good man, blimey, you have it all.”

After a slight pause, Cedric’s voice was heard: “Alright, alright, I’ll ask her sometime today, or this week, at the latest. Satisfied now?”

My friends and I squealed silently.

We could hear the other boys thumping backs and giving high fives. This was our queue. We stumbled away from the corner, my friends primping me up, fixing my hair and making sure there wasn’t anything in my teeth. We stood in a huddle in the Hogwarts yard.

I saw Harry and Ron pass us and pause momentarily. All of us looked at them, my friends having the we-dare-you-to-ask-Cho-out-but-know-you-won’t-do-it expressions on their faces. This seemed to scare the poor fourth year boys away. I felt a bit sorry for Harry, to be honest.

Then Cedric meandered up to our group, bundled in his yellow and black Hufflepuff scarf and followed by his own band of jostling friends. My friends parted, revealing me, like the Red Sea. It was completely embarrassing. I could feel my cheeks begin to blush.

“May I have a word?” Cedric asked me with a slight smile, cocking his eyebrow expectantly. My friends twittered.



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Moxie 10-28-2006 05:41 PM

AHHHHH!! I loved it!! That's awesome!!!!!
Pams!

~Adrienne

Moxie 10-28-2006 05:42 PM

Okay, sorry, the computer is very screwed up. It posted four times, when it shouldn't have.

Fallon Chanel 10-28-2006 05:52 PM

kool, it seems like it will be an awesome FF!!! PAMS!!!! PAMSOiD!!!!! :]

LauraBlack 10-28-2006 06:00 PM

I don't usually like Cedric and Cho stuff but this was cute :)
It's nice to see more hufflepuff and ravenclaw house discussions rather than the over done gryffindor and slytherin.

Mrs Felton 10-28-2006 07:09 PM

Aw Ced's so cute. Brilliant start, Cookie. PAMS!!

Fortune_Cookie 10-28-2006 09:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Moxie (Post 4074452)
AHHHHH!! I loved it!! That's awesome!!!!!
Pams!

~Adrienne

Thanks! :D

Quote:

Originally Posted by Moxie (Post 4074459)
Okay, sorry, the computer is very screwed up. It posted four times, when it shouldn't have.

:lol: That's alright.

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Originally Posted by DanIsMyMan (Post 4074505)
kool, it seems like it will be an awesome FF!!! PAMS!!!! PAMSOiD!!!!! :]

Thank you! This isn't going to be an uberly long fic but I hope y'all like it!

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Originally Posted by LauraBlack (Post 4074535)
I don't usually like Cedric and Cho stuff but this was cute :)
It's nice to see more hufflepuff and ravenclaw house discussions rather than the over done gryffindor and slytherin.

Yeah, I think they are a cute couple even though I personally think Cho's a brat.

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Originally Posted by Mrs Felton (Post 4074863)
Aw Ced's so cute. Brilliant start, Cookie. PAMS!!

Hee hee, yeah, he is, isn't he? ^_^ :blush: Thankies!

lightning_star 10-29-2006 01:51 PM

oh my gosh i love cedric i am so glad you are writing a story about him :) i was soooo sad when he died. i cried my eyes out. i love it so far :)

ronandhermione 10-29-2006 04:17 PM

You know I always wondered what happened between them, I'm really happy you're writing a FF about it for us. Great job so far Cookie, PAMS!

Audra 10-29-2006 07:18 PM

really good!! can't wait for more. PAMS!

Fortune_Cookie 10-30-2006 12:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by lightning_star (Post 4078496)
oh my gosh i love cedric i am so glad you are writing a story about him :) i was soooo sad when he died. i cried my eyes out. i love it so far :)

:D I'm glad you like my idea! Thanks!

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Originally Posted by ronandhermione (Post 4078881)
You know I always wondered what happened between them, I'm really happy you're writing a FF about it for us. Great job so far Cookie, PAMS!

Since the books didn't shed much light on their relationship, I decided to fill in the holes for them. :P Thankies!

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Originally Posted by Audra (Post 4079833)
really good!! can't wait for more. PAMS!

Thank you! :)

Granger1814 10-30-2006 12:42 AM

SQUEE! You've got a new story! :woot:

Very nice start and very good idea as for the couple. ;)

MugglePrincess 10-30-2006 12:54 AM

aw i love it! definately something new to look forward too after your dr/hermy story is over! =] can't wait to read the next post!

Weaselby 10-30-2006 04:51 AM

Not a real big fan of Cho, but this is looking good. lol
Great start too. PAMS!

Black Rose Tragedy 10-30-2006 02:33 PM

very nice me likie alot cant wait for more ur a great writer

xamyx 10-30-2006 09:57 PM

Wow! Awesome! I think Cho and Cedric make a cute couple. Harry's just getting in the way, well he was back then, until he liked Ginny who probably liked him back then. Which makes it more confusing then it already is. LOL! PAMS and PAMS

xamyx

Fortune_Cookie 10-30-2006 11:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Granger1814 (Post 4081880)
SQUEE! You've got a new story! :woot:

Very nice start and very good idea as for the couple. ;)

Welcome to the story, Sabs! :D

Quote:

Originally Posted by MugglePrincess (Post 4081968)
aw i love it! definately something new to look forward too after your dr/hermy story is over! =] can't wait to read the next post!

Yes, it's so sad that 'Seduction' is coming to a close...*tears* But I hope you enjoy reading this story as well!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Weaselby (Post 4083406)
Not a real big fan of Cho, but this is looking good. lol
Great start too. PAMS!

Heh heh, I'm not a big Cho fan either. :P I think she's a brat. But anyhow, I like Cedric. ^_^

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Originally Posted by J.K. Rowling (Post 4084205)
very nice me likie alot cant wait for more ur a great writer

Aww, thanks!

Quote:

Originally Posted by xamyx (Post 4086313)
Wow! Awesome! I think Cho and Cedric make a cute couple. Harry's just getting in the way, well he was back then, until he liked Ginny who probably liked him back then. Which makes it more confusing then it already is. LOL! PAMS and PAMS

xamyx

Yeah, quite a cute couple. :) :lol:

mrs_potter 10-30-2006 11:54 PM

New Reader!
 
[SIZE="3"]This is a really good start. I've never heard of a story that had Cho's point of view before. I think this is going to be a good one! PAMS![/SIZE]

pgspickles 10-31-2006 02:07 AM

aweosme awesome awesome

i love this story cant wait for an update!

Moxie 10-31-2006 02:11 PM

Hah! I agree, Cookie. Cho is a brat...she's just...mleh. *yes, exactly, cuz that makes sense*

Pams please!

~Adrienne~

Fortune_Cookie 10-31-2006 02:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mrs_potter (Post 4086908)
[SIZE="3"]This is a really good start. I've never heard of a story that had Cho's point of view before. I think this is going to be a good one! PAMS![/SIZE]

Thanks! I like to think of something somewhat original to do for my fanfics. ^_^

Quote:

Originally Posted by pgspickles (Post 4087408)
aweosme awesome awesome

i love this story cant wait for an update!

Thankies!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Moxie (Post 4089267)
Hah! I agree, Cookie. Cho is a brat...she's just...mleh. *yes, exactly, cuz that makes sense*

Pams please!

~Adrienne~

:yes: But I felt sorry for her at first in the 5th book, but not for long. :P

'Ele_the_writer 11-02-2006 12:13 AM

Hey Cookie! Great fic! Can't wait for more!

<3333

padfoot_rox93 11-02-2006 12:13 AM

Cookiekins has another fic!! :woot: And it's awesome, too. Cute Ced. PAMS!
Amiekins

That_one_girl 11-04-2006 06:03 AM

-New Reader!-
OMG!!
This is such a cute story!
Absolutely LOVE it!
Great Post
PAMS

Fortune_Cookie 11-04-2006 03:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by gisele (Post 4095930)
Hey Cookie! Great fic! Can't wait for more!

<3333

Thankies!

Quote:

Originally Posted by padfoot_rox93 (Post 4095934)
Cookiekins has another fic!! :woot: And it's awesome, too. Cute Ced. PAMS!
Amiekins

Yup, they just keep comin' and comin'. :P

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Originally Posted by That_one_girl (Post 4107599)
-New Reader!-
OMG!!
This is such a cute story!
Absolutely LOVE it!
Great Post
PAMS

Yay, welcome to the story! Hee hee, thanks! ^_^


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