Caitlin's Canticles - Sa13+
 

Okay so I'm not really much of a poetry person but I've decided to try something new. It's okay to laugh at me! =D Not all of my stuff will fall into the Sa13+ category, but some might, so... read with care? Nothing too terrible here.


This is a riddle I wrote today, and I dedicate it to Lizzie, cause I love her. :loved:






I fly through the air with grace
the trees rush right past me
I loop around and I miss them all
this space makes me feel free

Today's my day to be out
I feel it in deep in my core
I want to swerve, dive, and dip
so I can speed and soar

We head back to the school with haste
we're warmed up and we're ready
He puts on his gear and gives me a tug
then mounts me nice and steady

We take off with a shot, a bang
everything errupts with a bam
I've described myself in these few words
now can you guess just what I am?

Wow, it's not bad! I dare say there are a few errors, but I see that you may have a poet's potential. Yes, indeed. ^_^

Bahaha thanks >.> Like I said, not much of a poet here, but it's funnn!

Didja guess what it is??

IT'S ME IT'S ME! :P
I loved it. :3 hehehe. <3

Bahahaha, I'm not sure if it was technically you at first, but it is now! The answer is LIZZIE! lol!


I'm... working on another one? Sweeeeet.

Aw! It's great Cait! :glomp: Especially 'cause you managed to rhyme without sounding like an idiot (which I continually fail to do) :P

Last Poem 12/22/08