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Sk8er girl 08-08-2005 07:33 PM

aww thanks! I feel special lol I never share my poems with anyone though I just mainly write of stuff that makes me mad or sad these re mostly all of friends and guys I've liked who dont like me cause they say "Im a goth"

Sk8er girl 09-13-2005 11:12 PM

I just wanna..


I just want to be loved like when a couple look into each others eyes, and they know they'll be together for eternity.

I just want to be noticed, like when someone walks in a room and it gets all brighten up with their smile and their presence.

I just want to live my life without giving a care of what my parents will say or if tomorrow is my last day

I just want to be me, but if you dont notice me, then I guess theres no us....

Theres no you theres no me, there's no walking aimlesly around the park, just talking about stupid random stuff...no laughing at my stupid jokes or yours...



Theres no us, theres no you, and like always theres no me....

Sk8er girl 09-28-2005 11:14 PM

Will you ever notice me?

Probably not, maybe I should say smething, maybe I shouldnt?

I'm too scared to say what I feel I guess you are too?

Why am I asking all these questions if I know I wont tell you them?

Maybe were not meant to be until someone says something? I want to tell you, but I'm scared so I guess you wont know until you say something? I mean if you fell the same way I do?

cocogodessmegrly1 09-28-2005 11:20 PM

this stuff is good! keep posting ore so I can read it!!

Sk8er girl 10-01-2005 11:37 PM

thanks! I'll post more as soon as I write another one!

Angel8807 10-04-2005 06:35 PM

ohh nice updates! :)
I normally write in questions also, and I normally question my questioning too. lol
- Angel

Sk8er girl 10-05-2005 11:02 PM

lol thanks heres another one in sort of a question sort of thing :D


I see my reflection in the mirror.

I dont like what I see, it brings back memories........

I see m friend and there sad, makes me sad. Wish I could help them?



reminds me of myself, reminds that how I feel is empty, cold, sad....... maybe it's not maybe it's you?



Maybe its you who has made this way? maybe its not?



Maybe it's me?

Angel8807 10-15-2005 05:26 AM

Nice ending I like the twisting feeling that it causes, great job!

Sk8er girl 10-15-2005 11:01 PM

thanks!

Sk8er girl 11-01-2005 03:29 AM

I feel like crying...........

I dont know why?

Is it you is it me? is it what I want to have? or is it what we use to have?

I feel like crying I dont know why?

I see your face and it makes me happy, you walk away and its like my soul escapes.....

I feel like crying I dont know why?

I dont know why I feel like this? I feel like I'm dying can't you help me as I fall?

I feel like crying I dont know why?

I see all these images of what I could of been, of what we could of been?

I feel like crying I dont why.............?





Please can you help me?


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