Broken and Bleeding
 

This is a poem I guess you could call it of how I feel sometimes about things like friend and all. I wrote this when I was mad at my friends because they were being really mean and stuff like that and it's sort of how I feel when Im at school..........I guess Hope someone likes it I'll be adding more of my writing later on http://www.darkmark.com/forum/html/emoticons/smile.gif



Hurt

Have you ever been hurt by someone you trusted.
I have one year when you meet them they're nice,cool.
The next year they turn on you.they say "why don't you leave,just kidding" or "no one likes you,why dont you leave". They say it's cuase there playin' but you know they aint,that hurts.


You dont say anything you just laugh along with them cause you think it wont hurt if you laugh along with them and they'll forget.
But deep inside it's cutting you like a knife. you wanna say something,but you dont cause your afraid of being alone again.
They make fun of the way you walk,dress,and act.you dont say anything cause again your afraid of being left alone.
that hurts.


Then one day you just snap because all that anger boiled over inside of you!
You tell them to "stop" and one of them say "what! I didnt do anything"
But you know they did it because they have a big stupid grin on their face.
You say "shut up" and they just say "shut up" to you like your The one who did something but you didnt do anything.
that hurts.



You walk away to a "friend" you think they'll understand...
but there with there "new friends" so you just ask for the time.
You wanna tell them but you dont have the guts to tell them.
While doing all that you get looked weirdly by people likes Your from space or something....
that hurts


The bell rings and you go to class by yourself.
Your so mad that you blame everything on yourself and you stay quiet all day long.
People ask you if "your ok" you lie and say "yeah im ok"
you go home and you fall asleep with all the things that happened during the day.
You fall asleep waiting for what's going to happen on Monday,while being hurt.

Heres another one of my poems my friend read it and she liked it so hope someone like it on here :)

"Drowning"
As I hold on to you...you slip away with my heart and my soul. I'm trying to hold on to the little pieces of what we had when we were together. But I'm so scared that I'm drowning with all your lies and your broken promises that I dont know what to do. I'm so lost and lonely that you dont even care that I'm drowning in what we used to have. What I thought was love but really it was lies and broken promises, you made me feel so stupid and foolish. I loved you but I guess that love is gone....... So I stay here drowning until I find what we once had.

These are good poems, and I'm sure people can relate.
Keep up the good work. :)

(and if you ever need to talk to some one the SS Support Group is in the Charing Crossroads section. People will be glad to listen and help.)

It's still good work. You're a budding poet in the making.

Heres another one of my poems Im glad someone is enjoying my writings :) This poem has like a little story to it, ok whenever I'm mad or something I write so this was when I wrote some guy a note telling him how I felt about him. But he tottally ignored me cause everyone at school thinks I'm goth and all which I dont care and that a pretty stupid reson to ignore someone.

"Heartbroken"

I told you I liked you, I slipped all my feelings for you on a piece of paper, just for your eyes to see. First thing you do to break my heart is ignore me and act like I don't exist. Second you talk to me like nothing is going between us your all nice and cool. Then when i think something is about to happen between us and that I might have a chance with you, you crush my heart into a million little peices that can't be put back together. I hate you for that, but I still like you.......well I thought I liked you. "You know why cause you broke my heart so I'm gone for you, because you broke my heart.

Glad you liked it :)

I wrote this one about the same time I wrote "Drowning

"Right one"



Once upon a time there was this guy and this girl. The girl told him she liked him, he thought it was one big joke. Now it looks like he wants to tell her something,but he doesn't. She thinks she has a chance, but it looks like the guy likes her "supposedly friend" and her friend like hims back. So she watches as they flirt and go out. She doesn't say anything she rather see her friend happpy then miserable. So she weeps inside and she gets depressed everytime she see's them. She keeps a smile on her face like a happy trooper but really she's crushed inside like when you squish a cracker, until the day she finds her prince.

your poems are great Zee the first one was phenominal, i mean it was lengthy it told a story it had the same line ending (which i love) and it was still a poem. Keep up the good work.

I'm glad you guys like it, and most of these poems I write when I'm sort of sad or ahving a bad day or something. This poem I wrote at school I write most of my stuff at school. Well this one is sort of like how I feel when I'm at school since people portray me as some "goth/punk" girl.



"Lonely"

I feel so lonely, like a lost kid that you can't find. It seems like no one understands me, like if I'm alone with no help. Like I'm on a deserted Island, I write S.O.S but no one responds I send out messages no one responds. My soul feels so empty I feel like crying. I hear people talking about me I don't care and I walk off, but really deep inside I just wanna scream and say "SHUT UP!" Everyday feels like I'm some experiment and people are looking at me judging me, when they don't even know me. My friends act as if I'm stupid and weird, sometimes I just wish I could walk away from everything sort of like "Walk away (maybe) from Good Charlotte. If only people could take time to get to know me they'd find out I'm a really a nice person and I'm not some "goth chick" or some "punk loser" Thats how lonely I feel.

Hope you guys like that one it doesn't really make sense to me, but oh well lol

i love that poem, the amazing factor about that poem is you can read it and you read it as short sentences butyou havent put the full stop, this is good cause it means people understand your poems more, keep up the good work.

this stuff is really good. I like it, don't stop now.

lol its cool Zee just post more, great new update it sure is deep and i am positivemany people can relate to it.

Wow. you've add alot since I've last been here. They are are great. I agree with lee there are alot of people who can relate to what you are writing about. It helps people to better understand themsleves and know that they aren't alone.
-Angel

opps i totally forgot to check out poesm *hits head* anywayz your updates are awesome ZEE, more soon pleas :)

ohhh it sounds good so far. When you finish the song please post it so we can all read it.

ur poems r good. i can relate to Hurt.

Thanks I'm still wrking on the song, I have another poem but I thik it's against the rules to post it

I can really relate with "Hurt" and "Loving You", you are a really good poet. Keep doing what you love and never give up.

aww thanks! I feel special lol I never share my poems with anyone though I just mainly write of stuff that makes me mad or sad these re mostly all of friends and guys I've liked who dont like me cause they say "Im a goth"

I just wanna..


I just want to be loved like when a couple look into each others eyes, and they know they'll be together for eternity.

I just want to be noticed, like when someone walks in a room and it gets all brighten up with their smile and their presence.

I just want to live my life without giving a care of what my parents will say or if tomorrow is my last day

I just want to be me, but if you dont notice me, then I guess theres no us....

Theres no you theres no me, there's no walking aimlesly around the park, just talking about stupid random stuff...no laughing at my stupid jokes or yours...



Theres no us, theres no you, and like always theres no me....

Will you ever notice me?

Probably not, maybe I should say smething, maybe I shouldnt?

I'm too scared to say what I feel I guess you are too?

Why am I asking all these questions if I know I wont tell you them?

Maybe were not meant to be until someone says something? I want to tell you, but I'm scared so I guess you wont know until you say something? I mean if you fell the same way I do?

this stuff is good! keep posting ore so I can read it!!

thanks! I'll post more as soon as I write another one!

ohh nice updates! :)
I normally write in questions also, and I normally question my questioning too. lol
- Angel

lol thanks heres another one in sort of a question sort of thing :D


I see my reflection in the mirror.

I dont like what I see, it brings back memories........

I see m friend and there sad, makes me sad. Wish I could help them?



reminds me of myself, reminds that how I feel is empty, cold, sad....... maybe it's not maybe it's you?



Maybe its you who has made this way? maybe its not?



Maybe it's me?

Nice ending I like the twisting feeling that it causes, great job!

I feel like crying...........

I dont know why?

Is it you is it me? is it what I want to have? or is it what we use to have?

I feel like crying I dont know why?

I see your face and it makes me happy, you walk away and its like my soul escapes.....

I feel like crying I dont know why?

I dont know why I feel like this? I feel like I'm dying can't you help me as I fall?

I feel like crying I dont know why?

I see all these images of what I could of been, of what we could of been?

I feel like crying I dont why.............?





Please can you help me?