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rellybelly 10-19-2007 10:03 AM

Aww! loved it Krissy!!! ^_^
It was so romantic! lol
POst when you can, soon! ;)
-*~ Shirel ~*-

dracosmine** 10-19-2007 06:09 PM

Oh darn!! Well enjoy yourself!! Everyone deserves a break!! Tell Mickey I said hi!! lol!
Cant wait for the next post!!
Jen

Mell 10-20-2007 06:23 AM

Another great post Krissy, I love it!!! Have fun at Disneyland, I so want to take my daughter there but it probably won't be for another year or two.

PAMS when u get back.
Mel
xoxo

Krissy Moon 10-24-2007 08:40 AM

Chapter Eleven: Things go wrong
 
Yes it's short, and yes it's a cliffie. I apologize, but hey, atleast I've updated! lol! I hope you all like it. I've been trying to find the right way to make this happen for a while now. sorry it's been so long since I last posted. Mickey says hi to all of you!
Love,
Krissy Moon

Harry woke up to a soft bit of light crossing the bedroom. Rolling over he wrapped his arms around Ginny and kissed her temple gently.

“Would you like a cup of coffee love? I’m going to make you breakfast in bed.”
Ginny looked up at him sleepily. “Mmm yes please.” she smiled and snuggled down under the covers as Harry left the warm bed and headed toward the kitchen.

Ginny stretched and yawned smelling the coffee and bacon. Getting out of bed she wrapped herself in Harry’s large bathrobe and shuffled to the kitchen. Standing in the doorway she watched as her husband cooked like a muggle. He was frying the bacon by hand while whipping eggs with a whisk. Walking up behind him she wrapped her arms around him from behind.

“You know you shouldn’t fry things bare-chested, you may scar that amazing physique.” Ginny whispered giggling.

“Fine, then give me my bathrobe.” Harry said turning on her with a silly gleam in his eyes. Ginny began to run off to the bedroom. “No! I’ve claimed it in the name of Ginnervaland!”

Harry turned off the heat on the stove and chased after her. Catching her in the hallway Harry threw his wife over his shoulder and took her to the bedroom.
They’d be eating breakfast cold again.
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“Oh Molly! It all looks so lovely! I’m sure Harry and Ginny will love this party!” Hermione was sitting at the table gently rubbing her ever growing belly. She had been so tired lately that Ron was helping her teach. She would explain the lesson and Ron would demonstrate. Hermione felt slightly humiliated by that.

“Thank you dear, would you like some tea? You look awfully tired.” Molly hovered over her daughter-in-law. Putting her hand to Hermione’s forehead.

“Oh she’s fine mum, that little girl is just sapping all of her energy. Probably overactive just like her dad” Ron said proudly.

Hearing some loud pops Ron abandoned his wife and mother to run for the door. Opening the door he saw Harry kissing his sister, “Oye Harry! Ger’off me sister! Oh I mean your wife!” Harry looked up and gave Ron a big hug.

Hermione waddled to the door and was watching the scene her husband and brother-in-law were creating. Venturing further into the garden she hugged Ginny.

“How was Ireland? Did you miss the family? Aren’t you happy to be Mrs. Potter?!” Hermione shot out question after question not even giving Ginny a chance to answer.

Ginny looked at Hermione closely, “Are you ok Mione? You don’t look so well.” Hermione just waved Ginny’s question off and headed to give Harry a hug. Nudging Ron out of the way Hermione reached out to welcome Harry home and fainted.

“Mione!” Ron shouted as he caught her before she fell.
Ginny rushed to their side “MUUUUUM! Come here! Hermione passed out!” She shouted towards the open door to the burrow.

Running outside wiping her hands on a towel Molly looked at her daughter-in-law. “Ron, Harry! Both of you lift her and apparate to St. Mungos. Something is wrong with the baby. Go now! We’ll meet you there!”

Ron lifted his very pregnant wife into his arms. “No Harry, I’m taking her alone. Stay with the women until they can come” With a loud pop Ron and an unconscious Hermione disappeared.

Seady93 10-24-2007 09:45 AM

OMG!!! what's happening with Hermione is she going to be okay????
post more NOW!!! (lol)

rellybelly 10-24-2007 01:00 PM

Loved it but what's wrong with Hermione? Is she having the baby now?????
PAMS!!!
-*~ Shirel ~*-

Krissy Moon 10-24-2007 06:06 PM

I'll write more soon if all of you promise to be good! haha! I'm glad you're so worried about Hermione, that is what I was going for. seriously though, I will try to post more tonight, but no promises. Life is getting in the way of all my writing lately. thanks for reading and keep posting! It makes me feel special! lol
Love,
Krissy

Little Trooper 10-24-2007 09:42 PM

Harry and Ginny are so cute together. Love that she claimed his bathrobe. So hope Hermione is okay.

Evil Cliffy.


Can't wait for more.

dracosmine** 10-24-2007 11:29 PM

OMG!!! I knew somthing way going to happen. When you first stated that she wasn't felling well. OMG!!! Please don't let anything appn to the baby!! OR Hermione!! That would not be good!!

Ginny and Harry are so cute!! lol! Cold breakfast again??? lol!!
Cant wait until next post!! I am so anxious to know!!
Pams!!
Jen!

Mell 10-27-2007 03:28 AM

Hey Krissy,

Another great chapter and you've left us with a cliffie. Hope Hermione and the baby are going to be alright!!

PAMS
Mel

Krissy Moon 10-29-2007 09:43 AM

Chapter 12: testing
 
sorry it took so long guys, I was debating on which route to take this, but I went with the one I think you all would prefer. Thanks for being so patient!
Keep reading and I'll keep writing!
Love,
Krissy
“Stay with the women?! That git is bloody mad!” Ginny apparated with a look of anger and concern on her face.

Molly looked at Harry, “you go too dear, I need to tell Arthur and the rest of the family. We’ll be at the hospital as fast as we can. Harry nodded and quickly disappeared.
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Ron was pacing the waiting room of St. Mungos when Ginny appeared with a loud Pop. Walking over to her brother she lightly punched him in the arm. “As soon as Mione is alright I’m going to jinx you for making us stay behind, even if it was only for a second.”

“Not now Ginny.” Ron spat out angrily. While they weren’t paying attention Harry had arrived and came up quietly. “Oi, Ron! I know you’re worried but don’t take it out on Gin, she’s just as worried as you are…we both are.” Harry put a hand on Ron’s shoulder.

Ron just shrugged off Harry’s kind gesture and stepped away. “No! You’re not! That is my wife Harry! Don’t you get it? She’s my bloody wife! She’s carrying MY BABY! You have no bloody idea how worried I am!” Ron shouted

Harry looked at Ginny feeling very hurt, but he understood where Ron was coming from. He led Ginny to a nearby sofa and took a seat so that Ron could pace until they had word on Hermione.

About twenty minutes after Ron’s outburst the entire waiting room was filled with redheads. Every member of the family had come to get news of Hermione’s condition.
“Mr. Weasley?” A nurse called into the room. Seeing all the men but Harry jump up she sighed. “I mean Mr. Ronald Weasley.”

“That’s me” Ron walked over to her as calmly as he could. He wanted to grab her and shake her in hope that she would give him the information he desired.
“Sir, your wife is muggle born, is that correct?” Ron nodded
“Well she seems to have some sort of disease that we don’t normally see in the Wizarding world. She needs a blood transfusion from someone with the proper antibodies, or she will die.” Ron turned a pasty shade of white and looked at Harry. Seeing that Ron needed a little support Harry walked up to the nurse. “What about the baby? Is she alright?” Harry asked.
“She seems to be stable, but if Mrs. Weasley doesn’t get a transfusion soon, she will pass before her mother does.” the nurse looked at the men with empathy written all over her face. “We have brought in the top Muggle specialist we could find and he will be conducting blood tests on the entire family. Because Mrs. Weasley is pregnant, we prefer the blood to be a genetic match to the child, but sometimes we have to resort to desperate measures.” turning to Harry she stated bluntly, “You’ve saved the wizarding world once, perhaps your blood will save this woman and child as well. Please get yourself tested Mr. Potter.” Harry nodded

After several needles sticking several Weasley arms all who was left to be tested was Harry. “Now Mr. Potter, it is highly unlikely you will have the antibody seeing as none of the Weasley’s do, but we do appreciate you being tested.” The doctor stated as he stuck Harry’s arm with the needle. After looking at the drop of blood under a microscope the doctor shook his head. “I’m sorry, you’re not a match.”
Harry looked around the room of people that had become his family. He couldn’t stand the thought of putting them through this sort of pain. Closing his eyes he concentrated on what he wanted, no needed, to have happen.

“Test me again.”
“Mr. Potter, it’s useless. We will try to find another treatment.” Harry shook his head.
“No, you won’t, now test me again.” Harry nearly growled at the doctor. Every moment the doctor argued was a moment they were losing on helping Hermione and her baby.
“Very well then.” The doctor took another sample of Harry’s blood and looked at it under the microscope.
“this is impossible!” the doctor exclaimed
“No sir, it’s magic” Harry smiled. He had found a way to control his recently acquired power.

rellybelly 10-29-2007 11:03 AM

OMG!!! That chapter rocked! I love you Harry!
Is the babby a girl or a boy?????????????????????????? Can you just please, just tell us that??? Please!!!!
PAMS! PAMS! PAMS!! NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
-*~ Shirel ~*-

Krissy Moon 10-29-2007 11:39 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by shirelbb (Post 5824064)
OMG!!! That chapter rocked! I love you Harry!
Is the babby a girl or a boy?????????????????????????? Can you just please, just tell us that??? Please!!!!
PAMS! PAMS! PAMS!! NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
-*~ Shirel ~*-

Re-read the first line of this story and you will have your answer.

rellybelly 10-29-2007 12:37 PM

Ohhhhh! *blushes* so in that case, :woot: IT'S A GIRL! IT'S A GIRL!!!! :woot: :woot: She's finally having a baby!! :woot: :lol:

nytingale 10-29-2007 06:59 PM

aww a girl. Im glad he realized how to control his power for the right reason. Yay G.

michalice 10-29-2007 08:40 PM

OMG this fan fic is sooooo great, ive read your story before this and went straight to this one.
I cried when Ginny and Harry got married, i loved their vows and the fact that Ron ahd made the ring for him.
Please PAM very very very very very soon

dracosmine** 10-29-2007 08:49 PM

Awwww!! This is great!! Yeah! Harry found out a way to use his power! This is so amazing how you put that in. I love that last line Harry said. Cute!

Cant wait and hopefully everything is going to be ok!!
PAMS!!
Jen!

Ltnt. Raven 10-30-2007 09:25 AM

Krissy, I'm new to the site. (as of tonight LOL!) I read your first fan fic and it was great. I had to come over here and read this right away. I really enjoy your writing. You have an interesting voice when it comes to the romance aspect of the stories. It's not all hearts and flowers like so many women write, there is humor and sarcasm. I am impressed!

Edited to add: I'm the first guy to read your fic? wow those guys don't know what they are missing!

Mell 10-30-2007 09:55 AM

Hey Krissy,

Another great chapter, Harry to the rescue again you just got to love him. Can't wait to read more.

Mel

BLOOM 10-30-2007 01:30 PM

OMG!!!!!!!!!!
its great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i hope hermione survives!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PAMS!

STELLA 10-30-2007 01:32 PM

one of the best chapters u have written so far!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i hope hermione is okay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PAMS!

Little Trooper 10-30-2007 03:57 PM

such a good chapter. happy she's having a girl though. Harry rocks. He can change his blood how cool. He saved the day. Poor Ron.

Agos* 11-03-2007 06:39 AM

Great story! I read it all! I want to know what's going to happen next!

Moxie 11-03-2007 02:18 PM

NICE!



Wowwwwww this is getting suspenseful :DD

Love
.:Adrienne:.

Krissy Moon 11-07-2007 08:34 PM

Hey guys! I'm sorry I've been lagging on updates. I have been dealing with some "stuff" and haven't had the will to write. I'll post soon though! Don't leave me faithful readers!
Love,
Krissy Moon


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