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03-13-2006, 01:06 AM
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| | Billywig
Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: avvy by linda hagrid
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
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^who said we wont kill her?  j/k
wow  that was so sad
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03-13-2006, 11:20 AM
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|  Moaning MyrtleImp
Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: best campus in Toronto
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
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I agree with everyone, that was sad!! Please write more really soon!! i want to read what happens really bad!!
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03-25-2006, 06:42 AM
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|  Alex && Jay = Obsessed!Luff Gnome
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: *Permanently Glomping Nabs & thanking her for the Wonderful Avvy she's made me*
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PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love,
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04-03-2006, 12:04 PM
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| | Nogtail
Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Middle of nowhere
Posts: 4,526
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Cherrinell Baron
First Year  x3
|  JayMay ♥ Big, yellow duckie <3
*Clears throat* *Slaps forehead* OhmyGod! I did it again - I missed out so many posts on this ficccie. 
Well, what can I say, Raider????? Just post more, darling. You're great with this stuff.
Loveness and Unicorns,
~~Jay~~
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04-03-2006, 10:31 PM
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| | Jarvey
Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Canada
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Wow, nice fic, it's awesome so far, soo sad too...omg..i think i know what's going on with the weird deaths and not normal screaming or w/e u wanna say...but anyways, its awesome and i luv it
Keep posting!!
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04-06-2006, 06:27 PM
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| | Mooncalf
Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Farm country, MA USA
Posts: 7,650
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Toni Wheeler
Third Year | The Truth Resident Hippie
Sorry I havent updated in a while *is very busy at the moment*
Heres a new one! Its not that long but it reveals alot  Zirconia sat in her room staring at the ceiling, the scream still echoing as they had before. 'This is it' she thought 'How can I keep going now, I have no one' But then a thought struck her 'I'm not alone. I have Sam!' and in that moment Zirconia made her descision.
Later that night she packed a bag and left for the woods intent one finding the one person she knew she could trust.
After four days of wandering the woods, Zirconia felt as low as she had ever been. She set up her camp for the fifth time and lay down to sleep. When she awoke she spotted something that had not been there before. A piece of the dress Sam had been wearing when she dissapeared along with a note.
Go to the great cave by the creek.
Was all the note said.
Immediatly Zirconia packed her things and set out at top speed for the creek which was on the other side of the wood. Stumbling and falling many times she finally reached the creek and began to walk along until she came to the great cave.
She peered inside and saw nothing, but then she heard a voice. "Your friend is here but cannot be seen. Find her and you may save her"
Zirconia paniced. How was she suposed to find someone that could not be seen? She sat heavily on the ground and began to think. All of a sudden it hit her. "Revalio" she said waving her wand hopeing that what ever was concealing Sam would reveal her.
Out of the woods came a voice. "Zirconia Stone you are here by condemed to be burned on the account of witchcraft. Your burning shall be next week." Out of the woods stepped Mr Lecar and the other witch hunters and with them was....
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04-06-2006, 06:33 PM
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| Moaning Myrtle Imp
Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: best campus in Toronto
Posts: 428
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Naomi Brown
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No!! that cant happen!! whats coming next?? please post more super soon!!
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04-06-2006, 06:57 PM
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| | Blast-Ended Skrewt
Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: CrazyTown
Posts: 16,126
| The Sweetest Thing Lissy De Vil
I am behind in here! 
BUT!
It's all in my master plan!  Now I am immune to the latest evil cliffie 
Will catch up... in time... hehehehe
Loves you,
Lissy
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04-06-2006, 07:26 PM
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| | Augurey
Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: It rains a lot. . .
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I knew it. . . how did I know it. . . she couldn't be trusted! I figured it out because of your title, so I was thinking who can be the betrayer. . . I KNEW IT!!!
*gasp* how will she get out of this one. . . I think I know. . .
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04-08-2006, 02:22 AM
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#35 (permalink)
| | Manticore
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Stalkers United Club
Posts: 43,121
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Flourish and Blotts Shopkeeper | Potter Nurse || Hockey obsession <3 | Go Wings! || Geaux Tigers!
Squee! You finally updated Rache! Another excellent chappie but..but..but why Sam...? Hmm, I suppose I'll have to find out later. *Ponders this new development* Post more soon!
*Luffs on you*
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04-11-2006, 01:02 AM
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| | Billywig
Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: avvy by linda hagrid
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
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that's it??????????????
I WANT MORE. I WANT MORE. I WANT MORE. I WANT MORE. I WANT MORE. I WANT MORE. I WANT MORE. I WANT MORE. I WANT MORE. I WANT MORE. I WANT MORE.
I WANT MORE. I WANT MORE. I WANT MORE. I WANT MORE. I WANT MORE. I WANT MORE. I WANT MORE. I WANT MORE. I WANT MORE. I WANT MORE. I WANT MORE. I WANT MORE.
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05-07-2006, 03:54 PM
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|  Potterwatch! Momma Chizpurfle
Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Yarn Shop
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| Viva Buymoria! Love you Twin!
Last update 04-06-2006
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05-08-2006, 05:34 PM
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| Potterwatch! Momma Chizpurfle
Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Yarn Shop
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| Viva Buymoria! Love you Twin!
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05-08-2006, 06:50 PM
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| | Mooncalf
Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Farm country, MA USA
Posts: 7,650
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Toni Wheeler
Third Year | Last one! Resident Hippie
LAST CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!! That was six days ago. So here I sit in my cold little cell awaiting my death. At least I'll see mom and Marie again. Well, I'm going to sleep now good night.
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All night she sat and cried wondering how Sam, her best friend, had betrayed her. After all they had been through together and hpw many secrets they shared, that now ment nothing. Finally she fell into a uneasy sleep.
The next day Zirconia awoke to find a small note like then one she had found in her camp when looking for Sam. It said, In a matter of hours your time will come. All you have to do is scream and go limp, we will take care of the rest.
Zirconia read the letter again and again trying to figure out where it had come from. As she heard the guards coming to bring her to the stake she descided her only choice was to follow the note.
Marching through town, her bare feet hurt and she was being scorned by the people. The ropes bit into her hands and she was tied securely in place. As they were placing the wood at her feet, her breathing became more labored as she realized this was it. Her eyes came to rest on the black hooded figure she had seen twice before. Before she could focus in on the figure her vision was blocked by the man carrying the torch.
As the flames met the sticks, Zirconia felt the heat rise around her face. As the heat was starting to become suffocating, all of a sudden it was gone. For a moment she stood, confused at what was going on. Then she remembered the note and began to scream.
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Later that day the people of the village dumped our little hero on the outskirts of town as they had done with the other witches. But Zirconia was still alive. She didnt know how or why, but she was alive. She shed the remains of the ropes and got to her feet. Looking around she once again saw the black hooded figure. It walked over and stopped a few feet from Zirconia. She didnt know whether to run or stay, but opted for the later.
The figure reached up and grasped the edges of its hood and lowered it slowly.
"Mom???" Zirconia said bursting into tears. "W-w-w-what? How? Why?" she stammered between sobs.
Mrs. Stone smiled. "Zirconia dear. We knew the villagers would find us sooner or later. We created a spell that would repel fire and protect the person it was cast on. All of the witches you saw burned are safe."
"But mother," Zirconia began, "what about all the innocent girls that were burned??"
Mrs. Stone bowed her head. "Unfortunetly we couldnt risk someone finding out about our plan and turning us in. I'm sorry dear."
Zirconia's eyes filled with tears again as she thought about Ms. Black, she would have helped them, not turned them in.
Seeing the look on her daughters face Mrs. Stone guessed what she was thinking. "But.." she said with a small smile, "There was one young lady who spotted me in the woods after my burning and was quite helpful." And before the words had left her mouth, Marie Black stepped out of the woods.
Zirconia let out a little squeak at seeing her 'dead' friend and ran to her. Throwing herself into Ms Black's arms, Zirconia was over come by joy. After a few minutes they walked back to the witches camp and sat down around the magical, non-smoking fire. Zirconia was updated on what the witches had been doing since their 'burnings' and that they planned to go West after all the witches had joined them. Though she was happy to see her mother and everyone else, her happiness was ebing away at the thought of Sam. By all rights Sam should be sitting next to her amazed at the way the older women outwitted the hunters.
Her mother, seeing Zirconia become quiet, smiled and said, "Zirconia? Dear? I have one more thing I'de like to tell you. I lied when I said Marie was the only non-witch that knew of our plan.''
Zirconia looked up as her mother said this hopeing what she was thinking was true. "Samantha was acting on our orders." her mother said.
Zirconia's heart soared. Sam was still as loyal as ever. But if they were moving West, would she ever see her friend again.
Later that evening Sam showed up at the camp. After a long discusion with her best friend, Zirconia asked the dreaded question. "Sam... What are you going to do when I leave?" Sam smiled smugly, "Well, you see, I sort of...let myself be seen fiddling with your wand about an hour ago. So... Your stuck with me forever hun."
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And thats my story. A young witch who thought she lost it all, only to find she had it all and more. So I'm off with Sam, mother, Marie and the other witches to start a new life in the West.
Ta-da! All done guys! PLEASE comment. Thanks to everyone who stuck with this story through all my writer blocks  Thanks again! *luffs*
Rachel
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05-08-2006, 07:02 PM
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| | Billywig
Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: avvy by linda hagrid
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
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YOU FINALLY POSTED!!!  i loved it so much. it was a one-of-a-kind story. i was getting so mad that you weren't posting but you did so yaaay. you are a great writer. are you gonna start another FF? if so tell me cause i wanna read(even if you take along time to post).  evlpez: PLEASE do not use such a large font in a thread, it's very rude, like shouting. And hard on the eyes. Thanks. I've edited it down to size 3.
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05-08-2006, 07:08 PM
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#41 (permalink)
| | Manticore
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Stalkers United Club
Posts: 43,121
Diagon Alley Proprietor:
Brett Carlen
Flourish and Blotts Shopkeeper | Potter Nurse || Hockey obsession <3 | Go Wings! || Geaux Tigers!
*cries* It's over?! *giggles* Awesome post Rache. Congratulations on your first fan fic. I do hope you consider writing another one. Very nice twists and cliffies. I really enjoyed it. | |
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05-09-2006, 08:55 AM
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| Moaning Myrtle Imp
Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: best campus in Toronto
Posts: 428
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Naomi Brown
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Its done?? Oh well!! It was a great story and i hope you write more!! It was different than all the others!!
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