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HocusPocus1313 10-12-2005 02:24 AM

PAMS and BUMPS
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep it coming!

FireboltFreak 10-12-2005 04:51 AM

YAY! 5 Pages!!!!! I will be 13 in 2 hours and 9 minutes!

I really like this one, it's from OotP when Harry had that dream about Mr. Weasley and it really happened.


Watch Death Unwind

Slithering
Crawling
As I switch off the light
Death winds around tree trunks
And claws at the night

Slashing flesh
Drawing blood
Drinking it like wine
As the pulse stops
Thus ends his life-line

Dreaming
Killing
Seeing into deaths mind
Watch him die
Watch the serpent unwind

BMXguy101 10-12-2005 05:04 AM

U wher born at 12 somthing cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HocusPocus1313 10-15-2005 06:56 AM

So are they drinking the blood from our hands, the sacrifice...the wine...get it?

Red Head Lover 10-16-2005 06:59 PM

cool!!! PAMS and BUMPS!!! This thread Roxx! c-yahz!

SnoggingTom2314 10-20-2005 09:11 PM

Hi Rebecca.......
 
Yo poeples!!! it's accutually Ceci this time, so hi....
Nice peoms Rebecca......really.....Billie...

PBLOVER 10-20-2005 09:20 PM

ok, you guyz, you should stop spamming, and chatting. you know that you can edit yuor posts, so instead of posting a couple times in a row, just edit your posts.

Becca, nice poems. you're a really good poet. all my good poetry is innapproiate or it just sux.

~Afia

FireboltFreak 10-21-2005 05:20 AM

LONGEST POEM I HAVE EVER WRITTEN!!!!!!!!!!


Slytherin!!!

Slytherin was just a lad
With a hopeful dream
To educate young wizards
With only pure blood-stream

He met the young lad Gryffindor
And they became great friends
They vowed to stay together
Until the very end

They set out to make a school
For the magical at heart
Met Hufflepuff and Ravenclaw,
Then slowly drifted apart

The school was built high and strong
It seemed never would it crumble
But soon they found their ideas for it
Were quite an odd assumble

So they divided into houses
Their problem now seemed solved
I seperated the students
By around whose qualities they revolved

But Slytherin, he felt that
Only purebloods should learn this magic
The other three dissagreed,
And the results were tragic

Slytherin left the Hogwarts
But not before he planned an attack
The mudbloods in the castle
Would die in their tracks

Thus the chamber waited
For its heir, Voldemort
Who proved to be all mighty
and was feared by wizard sort

Though he did not rid the school
Of filth, as Slytherin planned
He caused an age of darkness
And no good was in command

Then came young Harry Potter
Who stopped the Dark Lord's reign
And proved again that justice
Would someday, somehow gain

Now back to the ancient Slytherin
Whose school house still remains
It has a reputation for evil
Because it inflicted so much pain

Slytherin never wanted darkness
Just a pure blood school
He never wanted evil
To raign like a dark ghoul

So don't blame good old Slytherin
For crimes he didn't commit
His heir is responsible for the darkness
He didn't want any of it

Red Head Lover 10-21-2005 05:32 AM

Yeah, 1st 2 reply! haha! that waz long.....but awesome!!! Yah! Sytherin, eventhough im in Ravenclaw! RA-VEN-CLAW! *just like luna - coinsedince? maayybbbeee...

U rok!

PAMS and BUMPS!

HocusPocus1313 10-22-2005 01:04 AM

OH!!! second 2 reply!!! What NOW?!?!? Your face? anyways...great poem! PAMS and BUMPS and APPIE

BMXguy101 10-26-2005 12:09 AM

Therd to reply.Nice poem!!!!!!!!!

FireboltFreak 10-28-2005 04:59 AM

No one else seems to be following the "HP poems rule" maybe they don't know about it, I wish I didn't know about it because no one seems to be doing anything about it when they post about other subjects. I also don't like the rule because I'm getting too used to writing HP poems and I'm afraid soon it will be hard to write non-HP because I'm so used to HP poems. That kind of happened with my storys, it sucks, I got to used to using charecters that were already so well developed. Anyway I'm just saying that if I post something that's non-hp once and a while don't freak out and remind me of the rule, I'm just trying to maintain the ability to write non-HP poems.

Red Head Lover 10-29-2005 02:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by HocusPocus1313
OH!!! second 2 reply!!! What NOW?!?!? Your face? anyways...great poem! PAMS and BUMPS and APPIE


* what the freak does APPIE mean???*

aywyz....cool poem!!!

FireboltFreak 10-29-2005 10:09 PM

Non HP... I'll keep doing HP ones though I swear.

I this dream
Known as life
I see everything so clearly

Though the ground near my feet
Does often become shaky
The air I breath
Sometimes seems contaminated
Like the nightmare
revolves around some distant metaphor

Sometimes it all seems like a dream
And If I never wake up
That’s just fine with me

Maybe we’re all just asleep
Waking as we die
And coming back for a next life
A next dream

BMXguy101 10-30-2005 02:19 AM

That is not fine whith me thoug!!!!!!

FireboltFreak 10-30-2005 06:06 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BMXguy101
That is not fine whith me thoug!!!!!!

The dream is life so it means I'm happy here and if it's all a dream I never want to wake up, I want to stay in this moment forever.

Red Head Lover 11-01-2005 02:24 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by FireboltFreak
The dream is life so it means I'm happy here and if it's all a dream I never want to wake up, I want to stay in this moment forever.


OHH, I GET IT!!!


THAT'S AWESOME!

ur really great, BMXguy101, yo DO know how 2 spell, right??? J./K.!!!

LOVE the pomes, Rebecca!!!!

PAMS ans BUMPS...and APPIE, whatever that means...

BMXguy101 11-04-2005 12:12 AM

Right soon

Red Head Lover 11-08-2005 03:45 AM

PAMS and BUMPS!

FireboltFreak 11-08-2005 10:36 PM

Sorry Sarah for doing a H/Hr one :disney: , I know you hate the ship, I can't really see how it would work between them either but... that really isn't much coming from a D/Hr shipper is it?^_^

:hmm: Credit must go to Ammiva, author of A Heart Divided

H/Hr
Yes, this is VERY hp related.

Lying next to him,
I could never immagine
such comfort, security,
This is not what friends do.

I lay here, so intimately,
This feeling rushing over me,
I'm drowning in this pleasure
Yet this is not what friends do.

So I'll deny these feelings,
He's my best friend, after all
I'm just lost inside my own daydream
Awaiting the emotional fall

_____________________________
from Hermione's PoV, page 1 of AHD.

BMXguy101 11-09-2005 01:41 AM

1st to reply,Nice poems,write more plz nice siggy my computer sux :smash:

Red Head Lover 11-09-2005 04:36 AM

^^^^Nice Poem,it's from A Heart Divided, huh..... but H/Hr????? EWWWIE!!!!!

that's like...ew....yeah.....PAMS and BUMPS!

HocusPocus1313 11-17-2005 03:52 AM

I Love It!!!!!!! It Rox My Soxxxx Pams Bumps

Red Head Lover 11-18-2005 05:27 AM

PAMS and BUMPS sooon, plx!

HocusPocus1313 11-19-2005 03:30 AM

Pams Bumps Appie


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