Becca's Poems
 

Greetings one and all, this is my poetry thread, incase you failed to notice, the sensable thing for you to do at this moment would be to read my poems. :)


I don't know
What image I put
in other peoples minds
For honesty and loyalty
are the two hardest things to find
My name, said out loud
Is just another to hear
It's too time consuming to wonder,
I fear
Another name, another life,
Trajety, and death
I have no time to think,
It seems so recently you left
My mind seems like a puzzle now
I'm trying so hard to figure out
exactly how I feel about you
There's too much to think about
When you hear my name
Do you give it second thought?
I just want to figure out
My feelings so distraught

Tell me what you think, I'll post more soon.

omg that was really good. i'm 12 2 and i have a poetry thread. i hope u go back and read more. :D

YAY! a response! :D

anyway, here's another one!
This is about my sister, when her best friend she's known since she was... I dunno 5 moved to Australia, and she never saw him again.

Scrunched up in a little ball
Tears falling on the floor
A small girl cried
Loosing someone so special
She knew his plane would leave that night

Running, running through the night
To see his face again she had to fight
The wind, the rain, the slippery street
And other obstacles she did meet

Again and again she slipped and fell
She always got back up to run
Past some buildings, down the road
To his house,
She was too late

Scrunched up in a little ball
Tears falling on the ground
A small girl cried
Loosing someonne so special
She knew his plane had left that night

omg that was beautiful. :D

Woah, I'm like, 13, and Your poems are better than mine! Conrats! I love em'! Please post more soon. ^_^
-Ali

I watch my life go by
Sunlight turn to dusk
I enter a different world,
There's only the two of us
I lay beside you
Your shoulder by my head
This could never happen,
So I do this instead
Everyday I stare at you
Nights I dream of what could be
My life is nothing now
So lost and in-between

ur good
 

fireboltfreak im older than u. i write poems. i post them.by tellin people bout u, U will gain a sympathy audiance but nothin permanent. u rite good i say u can do better no need to be 'just 12 put it on the shelf' u gotta stand up and be a poet nothin else. :balloon:

omg. dude u're such a good poet.

thanx SOOO much dude!
anyway... here's one I wrote 4 school in 5 grade

Once
Not twice
Not three times,
Just once
There was a time
There was a place
These things are not important
In this time there was a girl
The girl was always asleep
Stirring as she slept
Never once waking
Never once stepping out of her cage
Imprisoned
Without bars
Nothing holding herback
Nothing except herself
Then one day
She woke up

hmmm.... could be better in my oppinion, but I want it to stay the same as I wrote it.

fine, don't reply. I'm posting anyway
here's a different type of writing style, I guess. first time I've written something like this, so..... yeah. anyway, here it is.

Where water drips from waterfalls
Where rain pours on the ground
Where darkness is the dawn of peace
Where no one else may wander
Where you may find me singing out
To the raging winds
Where I smiled my first smile
Where I cried my first tear
Where my dreams come to life
A world I've never let anyone see
Where raindrops fall like destiny
The only thing they cannot bind
Welcome to the world
Inside my mind


personally, I kinda like it. The world isn't perfect, real life has some effect on it. It's just a type of refuge.

you're pretty good......
I know I probably couldn't write something like that

thanks

are you online now?

how do you create such great poems being only 12 and oly experencing those many yearsof events?

short post, must finish HBP. got it last night at midnight. must keep reading.

short one:

There's a vague door in the distance,
They say it leads to reality
They say I must go through
To the other side
All I want is to stay here
With you.
Lost in time, in space
Suspended in this vast, void place

I haven't been able to post in like 5 days, and I'm at my friends house now so I don't have the little poetry book I wrote. I'll post tomarro, when I have it with me.

I see nobody's commented since then. :erm: :worried:

PLEASE POST COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

no way? ...i never knew u were that good FireboltFreak! how come u didn't enter that Poetry contest @ Amphi in 6th?

~Sarah~

I did and I won. :yes: and thanks ALOT Sarah.

A frozen doorway between us
Blocking even sight
Too cold to feel your prescence
When you're so near
I've been wishing for this
For so long
Now that you're here
It all seems so sureal
Like you're just another dream
Sent to blur my reality
To screw up my sanity
To me, you're not here.

you're really good. You won a contest?

yea, Rebecca won a poetry contest @ in our school in 6th grade, she's one of my best friends! :lol:

I can tell. Do any of you think magic is real. If so please post a poem about it.

hmm... okay, I'm gonna go write one.

Hey u r so good...u sud write songs for sorting hat!!

Harry Potter theme!!!

Magic

A power everyone wishes to have
To put everything right
To guide you toward the light
Slow me when I fall
Support me as I crawl
Even in magic
Many things go wrong
Death and destruction
It’s hard to stand strong



another:

I wish I could
Wave my wand
Watch my troubles
disappear.
But life isn’t that easy
even with magic here
This life is no exception
The murder,
the heartache,
The grief
The dark lord
brings everything good
to an end.
Takes my happiness
Takes my joy
My life is here
For him to destroy.

wow...awsome,gr8, cool,and yet sad - :rip: [a certian charcater]