|
06-06-2007, 10:02 PM
|
#351 (permalink)
| Chizpurfle
Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a world with Dan
Posts: 10,764
Hogwarts RPG Name: Lilly Young Second Year | Keeper of Harry's Smile Guard of Dan’s Curiosity
Great chapter. Ron is so clueless its great. Can't wait for more.
__________________ *Keeper of Ginny's Heart for Harry**Keeper of Emma's Sisterly Love For Dan**Dreams Can Come True*  *Siggy By Nat**Avvy By Jen*Dan is my Mr. Darcy* |
| |
06-07-2007, 12:40 AM
|
#352 (permalink)
| SS 100 Triumphant Kappa
Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Top Ramen plz?
Posts: 13,082
Hogwarts RPG Name: Danny Logan Edwards Sixth Year x1
| Shipper Queen Hippie Quad Wait whos James? Is he a new character or is he Harry?
Im so confused!!!
Why did Cho leave? Does she like Ron? 
Hmmm...
Great post! Cant wait for more 
*Steph*
__________________ |
| |
06-07-2007, 01:05 AM
|
#353 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Canada
Posts: 2,438
| Cho is the one that likes Ron, right? 
Ooh, who is James? New character that came from nowhere or sumthin? 
Great post! Soo can't wait for another!
PAMS!
~Sarah
__________________  Siggy from Lissy and Anna's Shop of Super Frazzling Graphics |
| |
06-07-2007, 02:18 AM
|
#354 (permalink)
| Billywig
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: California, Palmdale
Posts: 3,608
Hogwarts RPG Name: Jacqueline Marie Granger Sixth Year | Run, Emma, Run! Quote:
Originally Posted by Little Trooper Great chapter. Ron is so clueless its great. Can't wait for more. LOL! Yeah that's why Ron is so funny! James is not really a new character to my FF's. He is one of Hermione's friends...he was in If You Asked Me Too so he's not that new...
Cho left because Ginny opened her big mouth...hope that clue helps! LOL! No Sarah! Where in the world did you get that from!? 
James is not that new....he is in If You Asked Me Too.
Love,
Emma
__________________  A very big thank you to Cassirin at Anna and Ern's Box of Every Flavor Beans for this wonderful siggy! |
| |
06-07-2007, 02:34 AM
|
#355 (permalink)
|  DD's Bravery Tonks' Happiness Mooncalf
Join Date: Jul 2006
Posts: 7,319
Hogwarts RPG Name: Mackayla Dawson Fourth Year | Oh gosh! I feel like I've missed so much! * s and reads 3 chapters*
Emma, I love them all! Cho and Ron would make such a cute couple, even if I'm a R/Hr shipper... |
| |
06-07-2007, 02:53 AM
|
#356 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Canada
Posts: 2,438
| Quote:
he was in If You Asked Me Too so he's not that new...
Oh ya... *ish forgot*
I forgot (I read the one-shot, I just didn't post 0.o). Is it the exact same guy from If You Asked Me Too or is it just the same name...?
__________________  Siggy from Lissy and Anna's Shop of Super Frazzling Graphics |
| |
06-07-2007, 04:16 AM
|
#357 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: In Wonderland,with Mad Hatter
Posts: 979
Second |
Awesome post!!
I seriously dint expect for Cho to like Ron!! There waqsnt even a small clue to that even happening in the other chapters (or maybe I wasnt paying close attention!) Quote:
Originally Posted by Harry and Ginny??? James is not really a new character to my FF's. He is one of Hermione's friends...he was in If You Asked Me Too so he's not that new... Ohhhh...I was a bit confused about James to but if hes been in your other F.F's then im not familiar with him because I havnt read your other F.Fs (Sorry!  )
PAMS!!
__________________
Be ~~>LIE<~~eve......Believe?? |
| |
06-07-2007, 05:09 AM
|
#358 (permalink)
| Erkling
Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: sappyville♥
Posts: 20,987
Hogwarts RPG Name: Freddy Zimmer Gryffindor Seventh Year x5
| *sappysapper* MAJNOO, YO! Ohk getting confused here. James.. Cho liking Ron..*whooosh* and itgoes up my head hehe...
Great chapter though.. hehe!
__________________  ......................let's be reckless, unaffected, running out until we're breathless ...............let's be hopeful, don't get broken, and stay caught up in the moment ♥ |
| |
06-07-2007, 05:53 PM
|
#359 (permalink)
| Horklump
Join Date: May 2007 Location: Sitting in the sweet, sweet rain
Posts: 38
Hogwarts RPG Name: Alyss Harte Second |
Keep posting!
|
| |
06-07-2007, 08:55 PM
|
#360 (permalink)
| Billywig
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: California, Palmdale
Posts: 3,608
Hogwarts RPG Name: Jacqueline Marie Granger Sixth Year | Run, Emma, Run! Quote:
Originally Posted by hermione 9 Oh gosh! I feel like I've missed so much! * s and reads 3 chapters*
Emma, I love them all! Cho and Ron would make such a cute couple, even if I'm a R/Hr shipper... Nah...you haven't missed much at all...it's only three chapters...LOL! Quote:
Originally Posted by MalfoyzBeloved Oh ya... *ish forgot*
I forgot (I read the one-shot, I just didn't post 0.o). Is it the exact same guy from If You Asked Me Too or is it just the same name...? It's the same guy...I think...no I'm kidding... Quote:
Originally Posted by HARRY LOVER#1 =) Awesome post!!
I seriously dint expect for Cho to like Ron!! There waqsnt even a small clue to that even happening in the other chapters (or maybe I wasnt paying close attention!)
Ohhhh...I was a bit confused about James to but if hes been in your other F.F's then im not familiar with him because I havnt read your other F.Fs (Sorry!  )
PAMS!! It was a surprise for everyone! lol!
It's okay hun...all you need to know is that James is in another of my FF's. Quote:
Originally Posted by Samia Ohk getting confused here. James.. Cho liking Ron..*whooosh* and itgoes up my head hehe...
Great chapter though.. hehe! Everyone is confused hun! Don't worry! LOL! Quote:
Originally Posted by Danniinwonderland Keep posting! I will post another chapter once everyone stops being confused! LOL!
Love,
Emma
__________________  A very big thank you to Cassirin at Anna and Ern's Box of Every Flavor Beans for this wonderful siggy! |
| |
06-07-2007, 10:12 PM
|
#361 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Canada
Posts: 2,438
| James is the confusing part really, since there was another James and now there's another and yeah...
That's how I see it, but Cho seems like like Ron, I understand that!
Just the James thing totally threw me
__________________  Siggy from Lissy and Anna's Shop of Super Frazzling Graphics |
| |
06-07-2007, 10:54 PM
|
#362 (permalink)
| Billywig
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: California, Palmdale
Posts: 3,608
Hogwarts RPG Name: Jacqueline Marie Granger Sixth Year | Run, Emma, Run! ^^What do you want me to clear up about James?
Maybe I should have kept him out of the story...
__________________  A very big thank you to Cassirin at Anna and Ern's Box of Every Flavor Beans for this wonderful siggy! |
| |
06-07-2007, 11:04 PM
|
#363 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Canada
Posts: 2,438
| Quote:
^^What do you want me to clear up about James?
Maybe I should have kept him out of the story...
Well... he kinda just jumped in there outta nowhere with no prior mention or anything (as far as I could tell), which is a pretty hard thing for readers (as I noticed at least). It's always nice to have some sort of lead-up or more info on him... if you want it a surprise have more info on him then, that's all...
But I have a few questions but they're kinda hard to ask so I'll just ask ones I can phrase...
Like firstly, is he the same guy from your one-shot or someone totally different with just the same name? (this one vexes me the most)
And who is he exactly/how does he know Hermione?
That's all I can really think of a.t.m...
__________________  Siggy from Lissy and Anna's Shop of Super Frazzling Graphics
Last edited by MalfoyzBeloved; 06-07-2007 at 11:04 PM.
Reason: typo =D
|
| |
06-07-2007, 11:08 PM
|
#364 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: NY(but im also in lo
Posts: 771
Hogwarts RPG Name: Hermione Granger Seventh Year |
AWESOME POST!!!!!!!!1 pams soon
__________________ Proud H/HR shipper and supporter of the trio.
Hermione: You, You foul loathsome evil little cockroach!
Ron: Hermione no!...He's not worth it.
*Malfoy whimpers and then Hermione punches him and Malfoy runs away*
Hermione: That felt good
Ron: Not good...brilliant!!! |
| |
06-08-2007, 12:25 AM
|
#365 (permalink)
| Billywig
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: California, Palmdale
Posts: 3,608
Hogwarts RPG Name: Jacqueline Marie Granger Sixth Year | Run, Emma, Run! Okay everyone is confused about James...I am sorry! I didn't mean to get everyone confused!
James is the SAME guy from my FF If You Asked Me Too.
He knows Hermione because he is one of her close friends...if you read If You Asked Me Too you will understand James significance a little better.
He supports Hermione in her relationship with Draco in If you Asked Me Too...but in this FF he doesn't...I can't really explain it.
I'm sorry everyone...here is what I will do...I will re-write chapter 14. How does that sound? I will change everything....James will not be included...I am so sorry everyone...
The new chapter 14 will be up soon...I will post it in the spot where chapter 14 is now... I am sorry... I failed as a writer...
New chapter 14 will be up soon!
Love,
Emma
__________________  A very big thank you to Cassirin at Anna and Ern's Box of Every Flavor Beans for this wonderful siggy! |
| |
06-08-2007, 01:34 AM
|
#366 (permalink)
| *poke* Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 890
Third | Quote:
Originally Posted by Harry and Ginny??? Okay everyone is confused about James...I am sorry! I didn't mean to get everyone confused!
James is the SAME guy from my FF If You Asked Me Too.
He knows Hermione because he is one of her close friends...if you read If You Asked Me Too you will understand James significance a little better.
He supports Hermione in her relationship with Draco in If you Asked Me Too...but in this FF he doesn't...I can't really explain it.
I'm sorry everyone...here is what I will do...I will re-write chapter 14. How does that sound? I will change everything....James will not be included...I am so sorry everyone...
The new chapter 14 will be up soon...I will post it in the spot where chapter 14 is now... I am sorry... I failed as a writer...
New chapter 14 will be up soon!
Love,
Emma
nuu nuu *huggles emma* you didn't fail!! You shouldnt have to re-write that chapter, we get it now!! er.. at least.. i know i do =P
i like that
and.. cho likes ron?o.o woahh interesting twisty
~Michii
__________________ Hufflepuff Honey <3 |
| |
06-08-2007, 02:18 AM
|
#367 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: With my lovely vampires ♥
Posts: 1,847
Hogwarts RPG Name: Elizabeth Way |
Last edited by hp_lvr01; 06-08-2007 at 02:24 AM.
|
| |
06-08-2007, 04:17 AM
|
#368 (permalink)
| Billywig
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: California, Palmdale
Posts: 3,608
Hogwarts RPG Name: Jacqueline Marie Granger Sixth Year | The new chapter 14! Run, Emma, Run! Okay I don't have time to go and post this new chapter where the old chapter 14 is so I'll just post it here... Once again I am sorry for the confusion! It was my mistake!
Chapter 14:
Hermione was sleeping in Draco’s arms when she felt a raindrop fall on her face.
“Draco. Draco wake up” Hermione said as she nudged Draco’s arm.
“Mom five more minutes!” Draco whined.
“Draco I am not your mother! Now wake up!” Hermione said trying to hold back giggles.
“Mione? What happened?”
“Its raining Draco let’s go”.
“No…I like the rain”.
“Draco I am wet!” Hermione snapped. The rain was coming down harder now.
“Oh really? I thought rain kept you dry”.
“Ha ha Draco! If you want to feel the rain just go in the shower and pretend!” Hermione said as she got up.
“Hermione don’t leave!” Draco whined.
“Draco I don’t want to get sick!”
“I don’t want to either! I mean imagine having to miss classes just because I have a cold! Oh no!” Draco said.
Hermione hit Draco.
“Ow! Okay then! Let’s go!”
Hermione ran towards the castle not bothering to wait for Draco.
“Hermione! Wait up!” Draco yelled. But Hermione was nowhere to be seen.
Hermione stopped at the Great Oak doors and looked back…where was Draco?
“Draco?” Hermione yelled.
No answer…Hermione heard a rustling to her left. She turned.
“Hello? Draco it’s not funny!”
Hermione was about to walk to where she heard the noise but then there was a flash and Hermione was grabbed from behind and someone covered her mouth. Hermione could not see who it was. She struggled to break free…
Then a voice whispered, “Believe me…Draco wouldn’t have the nerve to do what I’m going to do to you”.
Hermione yelled…at least she thought she did, but no one could hear her. She knew that voice…but who was it?
There was another flash and Hermione was no longer on Hogwarts grounds…
I hope you all enjoyed the new chapter! I am sorry once again! I actually like this chapter better and I can work with it a lot better so I hope you all enjoyed it too!
Love,
Emma
__________________  A very big thank you to Cassirin at Anna and Ern's Box of Every Flavor Beans for this wonderful siggy! |
| |
06-08-2007, 04:20 AM
|
#369 (permalink)
| Horklump
Join Date: May 2007 Location: Sitting in the sweet, sweet rain
Posts: 38
Hogwarts RPG Name: Alyss Harte Second |
I like it.
Keep the story going.
=]]
|
| |
06-08-2007, 04:22 AM
|
#370 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Canada
Posts: 2,438
| Quote:
“I don’t want to either! I mean imagine having to miss classes just because I have a cold! Oh no!”
That was an awesome chapter, even if it was the same (btw you could've edited your other post but whatever, it's a chapter either way )
PAMS!
__________________  Siggy from Lissy and Anna's Shop of Super Frazzling Graphics |
| |
06-08-2007, 05:10 AM
|
#371 (permalink)
| Erkling
Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: sappyville♥
Posts: 20,987
Hogwarts RPG Name: Freddy Zimmer Gryffindor Seventh Year x5
| *sappysapper* MAJNOO, YO! Quote:
Originally Posted by Harry and Ginny???
Then a voice whispered, “Believe me…Draco wouldn’t have the nerve to do what I’m going to do to you”. Ohk!! scared!!..... I mean whahh? Emma darlin' read almostall your FF, how could you fail.. Luvyour work..!!! Keep going! 
The guy who is threatning Hermione. who is..is he....!! 
Just hope its not Harry again !! hehe!
__________________  ......................let's be reckless, unaffected, running out until we're breathless ...............let's be hopeful, don't get broken, and stay caught up in the moment ♥
Last edited by Samia; 06-08-2007 at 02:45 PM.
|
| |
06-08-2007, 03:32 PM
|
#372 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: NY(but im also in lo
Posts: 771
Hogwarts RPG Name: Hermione Granger Seventh Year |
*gasps* oh no!!!! Be carefull Hermione! PAMS soon...I'm having my best friend over this weekend and so we might be on my laptop either tonight or tom. sometime... Right now im in school in comuter keyboarding...we had our exam last class so its basically a study hall right now for us...but anyway...PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
__________________ Proud H/HR shipper and supporter of the trio.
Hermione: You, You foul loathsome evil little cockroach!
Ron: Hermione no!...He's not worth it.
*Malfoy whimpers and then Hermione punches him and Malfoy runs away*
Hermione: That felt good
Ron: Not good...brilliant!!! |
| |
06-08-2007, 08:36 PM
|
#373 (permalink)
| Chizpurfle
Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a world with Dan
Posts: 10,764
Hogwarts RPG Name: Lilly Young Second Year | Keeper of Harry's Smile Guard of Dan’s Curiosity
Great post. But you didn't half to re-write it. I understand now. Keep up the good work though.
*Note to Hermione: Be careful who you trust now*
__________________ *Keeper of Ginny's Heart for Harry**Keeper of Emma's Sisterly Love For Dan**Dreams Can Come True*  *Siggy By Nat**Avvy By Jen*Dan is my Mr. Darcy* |
| |
06-08-2007, 09:06 PM
|
#374 (permalink)
| *poke* Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 890
Third |
O.o eeeep!!
pams, when you can lol
this is awesome!!!
__________________ Hufflepuff Honey <3 |
| |
06-08-2007, 10:18 PM
|
#375 (permalink)
| Nogtail
Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Hogwarts School of W
Posts: 4,746
Hogwarts RPG Name: Mindy Song |
I missed so many chapters, and I'm guilty that I did! Evil cliffie...dang, Ron is sooooo clueless! Cho and Ron...am I correct? *winkwink* Could that possibly be James? or Harry? I don't know! But I know that I just love this FF!
__________________ †Luna Lovegood,Evanna Lynch,J.K. Rowling, Sirius Black,Gred & Forge,Dumbledore's Army,Harry Potter,Draco Malfoy,Sibyll Trelawney†
†{Mindy Song, First Year Ravenclaw} {Emma's Twinnie Forever!} Luna and Nargles {Thanks to Tink for the siggy!} {Believe in yourself.}† A true friend | You're here 'til the end
†Hermione Granger,Ronald Weasley,Albus Dumbledore,Severus Snape,Neville Longbottom,Minerva McGonagall,Extra Characters,Ginny Weasley,Fleur Delacour† |
| |
Posting Rules
| You may not post new threads You may not post replies You may not post attachments You may not edit your posts HTML code is Off | | | All times are GMT. The time now is 07:31 PM. |