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Federov4eva 04-14-2007 08:52 PM

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Originally Posted by Harry and Ginny??? (Post 4907320)



Thank you darling! And by the way what is your name?







Oh my name is Ashley

Come What May 04-15-2007 01:58 AM

^^ Okay Ashley! I will remember that I promise!!!!!!
And welcome!!!!!

dancerbookl 04-15-2007 03:54 PM

I love it! The HarryandGinnyness and the HarryandHermioneness and the GinnythinkingHermionewasthinkingaboutRonness. pams
Jessica

Come What May 04-15-2007 11:51 PM

LOL! You're silly Jessica!

dancerbookl 04-16-2007 01:38 AM

thank you! i live for sillyness. Is Harry going to end up alone and shrivled? pams
Jess

Little Trooper 04-16-2007 02:53 PM

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Originally Posted by Harry and Ginny??? (Post 4907320)

Oh and Amy I promise to remember your name! LOL!


:) thats funny. Great posts. Harrry is so cheating. But I hope he goese for Ginny. I'm a big h/g r/hr. shipper. so hope it endes up that way. :) can't wati for more.

MalfoyzBeloved 04-16-2007 10:22 PM

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I'm a big h/g r/hr. shipper.
You like the canon (couples from the book) stories then? :)

jkrsong96 04-16-2007 11:19 PM

When are you going to post Emma? If it sounds rude or impatient, I'm terribly sorry.

Come What May 04-16-2007 11:25 PM

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Originally Posted by Little Trooper (Post 4917303)
:) thats funny. Great posts. Harrry is so cheating. But I hope he goese for Ginny. I'm a big h/g r/hr. shipper. so hope it endes up that way. :) can't wati for more.

I wouldn't be so sure about that Amy.....

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Originally Posted by MalfoyzBeloved (Post 4918980)
You like the canon (couples from the book) stories then? :)

I,to be honest, don't really support R/H and H/G. But who am I to make others change their mind?

Come What May 04-16-2007 11:44 PM

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Originally Posted by jkrsong96 (Post 4919210)
When are you going to post Emma? If it sounds rude or impatient, I'm terribly sorry.

Well I'm not sure... I have the chapters ready but for some reason I don't like them! I've changed them so many times but I still can't get what I want! I'm sorry but I will post soon!

jkrsong96 04-17-2007 01:05 AM

I'm sure your chapters are great! Nothing negative that's related to you.
☆★☆★
Mindy

HP1FAN2004 04-17-2007 01:15 AM

New Reader!!!! Its awsome!! Keep posting and post some for Lady in Red! PAMS

ylprincess 04-17-2007 01:49 AM

Emma! I found your other story! I am sorry it took so long! I love it! I am devoted to your ffs!!!
~your #1 fan,
Rebecca!

MalfoyzBeloved 04-17-2007 02:47 AM

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I,to be honest, don't really support R/H and H/G. But who am I to make others change their mind?
Ditto :)
I don't mind H/G, and I've used it as a minor ship in other F.Fs, and a few times in other F.Fs, but I'm no big fan of them :D Even f I had an idea for both an H/G f.f and a R/Hr oneshot... but those will not work most likely

Anyways, post when ya can!

Come What May 04-17-2007 10:44 PM

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Originally Posted by jkrsong96 (Post 4919766)
I'm sure your chapters are great! Nothing negative that's related to you.
☆★☆★
Mindy

Awww! Thank you darling!!

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Originally Posted by HP1FAN2004 (Post 4919809)
New Reader!!!! Its awsome!! Keep posting and post some for Lady in Red! PAMS

Hey there! I'll post as soon as my chapters come together!

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Originally Posted by ylprincess (Post 4919984)
Emma! I found your other story! I am sorry it took so long! I love it! I am devoted to your ffs!!!
~your #1 fan,
Rebecca!

It's okay darling! I'm just glad to have you here!! I'm glad you enjoy my FFs!

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Originally Posted by MalfoyzBeloved (Post 4920228)
Ditto :)
I don't mind H/G, and I've used it as a minor ship in other F.Fs, and a few times in other F.Fs, but I'm no big fan of them :D Even f I had an idea for both an H/G f.f and a R/Hr oneshot... but those will not work most likely

Anyways, post when ya can!

Same here... I mean there not bad ships but still I'm not a big fan.
I'll post soon!

Love Always,
Emma

MalfoyzBeloved 04-18-2007 03:52 AM

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I mean there not bad ships but still I'm not a big fan.
Yeah :)
To me... they're... to canon (too close to the book). I mean, it's just not as fun to write (coming from me writing more than reading F.Fs :D I have trouble staying with F.Fs cause most of the ones I start take to long for me to get into, so basically if I stay a faithful reader to any F.F that's a good sign ;)) to write a R/Hr+H/G cause it could be like the four go out on double dates and then Voldemort gets in the way and kidnaps Ginny and Harry saves Ginny with Ron and Hermione and the four have a double wedding...
Not as imaginative as like... I dunno, D/Hr or D/G or... H/Hr :)

But H/G+R/Hr is still a good ship, no doubt about that.
Just book-wise (I find)
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Anyways, PAMS! :P

HARRY LOVER#1 =) 04-18-2007 04:14 AM

Hi:hello: Im a new reader.I really like this story so far.Bad boy Harry for cheating on Hermione and Ginny!!! I hope that they find out before it gets to far into their relationships!
P.S i really like Beautiful Liar it has a really catchy tune and it tottaly makes sense!!:yes:

Come What May 04-18-2007 04:17 AM

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Originally Posted by MalfoyzBeloved (Post 4924312)
Yeah :)
To me... they're... to canon (too close to the book). I mean, it's just not as fun to write (coming from me writing more than reading F.Fs :D I have trouble staying with F.Fs cause most of the ones I start take to long for me to get into, so basically if I stay a faithful reader to any F.F that's a good sign ;)) to write a R/Hr+H/G cause it could be like the four go out on double dates and then Voldemort gets in the way and kidnaps Ginny and Harry saves Ginny with Ron and Hermione and the four have a double wedding...
Not as imaginative as like... I dunno, D/Hr or D/G or... H/Hr :)

But H/G+R/Hr is still a good ship, no doubt about that.
Just book-wise (I find)
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Anyways, PAMS! :P

I so agree!!!!! And you're right...the H/G and R/HR ships don't really let you be creative, you know? All you can say in a FF is like what you said, they go out, Voldemort gets in the way, Harry saves Ginny, and they live happily ever after. You have to write all that in a H/G or a R/Hr FF because that's what is expected because it's in the books. And with the H/Hr,D/Hr, and D/G ships you can imagine many things. You don't have to stick to one certain thing because those ships aren't in books.
But I'm not against the H/G and R/Hr. I support who ever believes in those ships.

I think I'll post tomorrow... yea I'll post tomorrow! I haven't posted because Harry was giving me a lot of trouble! But he decided to cooperate! LOL!

MalfoyzBeloved 04-18-2007 04:39 AM

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You don't have to stick to one certain thing because those ships aren't in books.
Exactly :) Like, with Draco and Hermione, there are millions of ways to get them to hook up and stuff, while with H/G and R/Hr they already know each other, all you need to do is like, make Ron kiss Hermione and suddenly BAM! They're boyfriend and girlfriend.
With Draco and Hermione, they could be... as commonly used, Head Students having to work together, doing an assignment together forcibly, masked ball, etc.
You get to broaden your imagination with D/Hr and D/G and H/Hr and stuff compared to a whole double-wedding-after-killing-Voldemort story...

Actually that was my idea for an H/G... 0_o
Having Ginny be captured by Voldemort and Harry has to find her before she gets killed... (very creative, eh?). And my R/Hr idea was using the song The Kill and using it in a way that makes it so Ron loves Hermione and he's doing everything he can for her to notice him but in the end she breaks his heart... (that was a one-shot idea, haven't bothered to try, I tried a D/Hr with that but bleh, didn't work)

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Harry was giving me a lot of trouble! But he decided to cooperate!
:lol: Harry is FINALLY being a good boy now, is he? ;)

MUSTANG SALLY 04-18-2007 04:49 AM

New reader!:hello: Harry is a bad boy *shakes finger at him*
Like your story. post more soon!

I be Steph!!! :lol:

Come What May 04-18-2007 11:17 PM

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Originally Posted by HARRY LOVER#1 =) (Post 4924343)
Hi:hello: Im a new reader.I really like this story so far.Bad boy Harry for cheating on Hermione and Ginny!!! I hope that they find out before it gets to far into their relationships!
P.S i really like Beautiful Liar it has a really catchy tune and it tottaly makes sense!!:yes:

Yes Harry is a bad boy! LOL! But will Hermione and Ginny find out soon enough?? You'll have to wait and see!!!

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Originally Posted by MalfoyzBeloved (Post 4924406)
Exactly :) Like, with Draco and Hermione, there are millions of ways to get them to hook up and stuff, while with H/G and R/Hr they already know each other, all you need to do is like, make Ron kiss Hermione and suddenly BAM! They're boyfriend and girlfriend.
With Draco and Hermione, they could be... as commonly used, Head Students having to work together, doing an assignment together forcibly, masked ball, etc.
You get to broaden your imagination with D/Hr and D/G and H/Hr and stuff compared to a whole double-wedding-after-killing-Voldemort story...

Actually that was my idea for an H/G... 0_o
Having Ginny be captured by Voldemort and Harry has to find her before she gets killed... (very creative, eh?). And my R/Hr idea was using the song The Kill and using it in a way that makes it so Ron loves Hermione and he's doing everything he can for her to notice him but in the end she breaks his heart... (that was a one-shot idea, haven't bothered to try, I tried a D/Hr with that but bleh, didn't work)


:lol: Harry is FINALLY being a good boy now, is he? ;)

Exactly! You could broden your imagination! And as for the H/G story line... it was in the 2nd book. Ginny got captured by Voldemort and Harry saved her...and Ginny did have a crush on Harry, but then again,Harry didn't like her...who knows! All I know is that with D/H ships and H/H ships you could use your imagination more!
And yes... Harry decided to behave but not with Hermione and Ginny...


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Originally Posted by MUSTANG SALLY (Post 4924446)
New reader!:hello: Harry is a bad boy *shakes finger at him*
Like your story. post more soon!

I be Steph!!! :lol:

Welcome Steph!!!!!! I'm always happy to get new readers! It makes me feel happy!! And yes, Harry is a bad boy! And I'm glad you like my story!

Okay my loyal readers! I promised you all a post and a post is what you all are going to get! So...here it is!

Chapter 3:
Hermione and Ginny walked down to breakfast the next morning together.

“Hermione I can’t hold it in any longer” Ginny said as they descended the

stairs.

“Hold what in?” Hermione asked.

“I have to tell someone who I am crazy about”.

“Oh Ginny! Finally! Well who is it?”

“It’s…”

Ginny stopped talking. Someone bumped into her and made her drop her

books.

“Watch it Weasley! God now I have blood traitor germs on me!” Draco Malfoy

said.

“Why don’t you watch it Malfoy! And these…” Ginny said pointing to her

robes “are brand new! Now I have to burn them!”

Hermione laughed at Ginny’s comeback.

Draco turned to Hermione. “What are you laughing at mudblood?”

“At your horrible Death Eater face!” Hermione snapped.

Draco smirked at Hermione and said, “My horrible Death Eater face is going to

look pretty good when you realize what kind of face your boyfriend has”.

“What is that suppose to mean?” Hermione snapped.

“He may look sweet and innocent but he is not just to let you know”.

“Malfoy want in the world are you…”

Draco walked away laughing.

Hermione watched Draco until he was out of site.

“What was he talking about?” Hermione thought. Just then Ginny hit her on

the arm.

“Ow! What was that for?”

“How come Malfoy knows who you are dating and not me?!” Ginny yelled.

“Gin shut up! Remember I don’t know who you are dating either!” Hermione

yelled back.

“Oh yeah. Well fine I’ll tell you… I am dating the one and only…”

“Don’t touch me you idiot!” yelled a voice.

A girl of about twelve was yelling at a boy. She took out her want and

yelled “Expelliarmus!”

The boy was thrown back and he hit the floor.

“Ginny I have to go” Hermione said and she ran off.

“Hey! No fighting in the hall!” Hermione yelled.

“Stay out of it!” The second year yelled.

“I am Head Girl damn it! So I will meddle in anything that I want too! You are

going to Professor McGonagalls!”

Hermione grabbed the second year by the arm and dragged her away.

Ginny laughed, Hermione and her Head Girl duties.

“What’s going on?” asked a voice.

Ginny turned… it was Harry.

“Hey sweetie!” Ginny said and she walked up to Harry and kissed him.

Everything would have been fine if Harry had not decided to deepen the kiss

at that moment. The conflict that followed after would not have occurred.

Hermione had just returned from leaving the little brat of a second year at

McGonagalls office. She arrived just in time to see Harry deepen the kiss

Ginny has started.

Hermione stopped in her tracks and stood there, unable to move.

Harry pulled away from Ginny and looked up. He saw Hermione. His face

paled. Ginny turned towards the direction Harry was looking in and saw

Hermione as well.

“Hermione! This is who I am dating!! Harry!”

Hermione ignored Ginny and stared back at Harry and the anger and sorrow

that had erupted inside her grew until she could no longer hold it inside and

she burst into tears.

“I hate you Harry! How could you do this! And you!” Hermione said pointing

at Ginny “You little B****! How could you! You knew perfectly well!

Ginny let go of Harry and looked at Hermione.

“Hermione what are you talking about!?” Ginny asked.

Hermione ignored Ginny and walked past her to slap Harry.

“Stay away from me!” Hermione yelled and she ran. She ran out of the

castle, past the lake, and past Hagrid’s hut. Hermione ran into the Forbidden

Forest where she knew no one would find her.

Hermione sat down at the bottom of a tree and sobbed. Back at the castle

the bell rang to signal that breakfast was over.

Back at the castle…

“Harry what was that about?” Ginny asked as everyone who had stopped to

stare and watch Hermione go ballistic walked away.

“I…it’s just that I had promised her something and I didn’t keep my promise

that’s all” Harry stammered.

“Oh… well then why was she yelling at me?” Ginny said

“Because you… I don’t know!” Harry snapped.

“Oh whatever. I’ll talk to her later. Let’s get to class.”

“No…I think I’m going to go apologize to Hermione…”

“Harry do you know where exactly she runs to when she has problems?”

Ginny snapped.

“No but…”

“Let’s go!” Ginny said and she grabbed Harry by the arm and led him to DADA

class.

In the forest…

“I told you so” said a voice behind a sobbing Hermione.

Hermione turned, and right there leaning on a tree was Draco Malfoy.

“Told me what?!” Hermione snapped.

“That your boyfriend was a liar” Draco grinned.

“Wipe that stupid grin off your face before I do it for you Malfoy! And leave

me alone!” Hermione cried.

Draco didn’t leave.

“Listen Granger…I mean Hermione. I’m sorry but you had to know the truth

one day!”

“I told you to leave!”

“Aren’t you going to go to class?”

“School isn’t important to me right now! Nothing is important anymore!!!

Leave me alone!”

Draco sighed and left Hermione.

Hermione felt stupid after Draco had left. Why was she acting like a child?

Hermione searched her pockets for her ipod and she searched for her favorite

song. Hermione listened to the song but only certain words out of the entire

song stuck out to her…

…I walked in on your love scene…
…Just a beautiful liar…


“He’s nothing but a liar! And Ginny! God Ginny! You knew I was dating him!!!!”

Hermione yelled.

After she calmed down Hermione whined, “And Draco was right! His stupid

Death Eater face does look good now that I know Harry is a two timing little …

idiot!”


There you all go! I hope you enjoy it!

Love,
Emma

Cedric_Lover 04-18-2007 11:25 PM

New Reader! Great story! I actually just heard Beautiful Liar yesterday in the car and I really liked it! I am so glad that you made a ff out of it! I can't believe that Harry cheated! Poor Hermione...
Pams
<3 Danielle

jkrsong96 04-18-2007 11:34 PM

Emma you posted! This is just great (I mean the post), even though Hermione said the B word. (I'm telling on her!) Ginny still doesn't know, and Harry is still a LIAR. L-I-A-R. Draco...well...can't say that he's bad anymore, can I? I think he chose the right thing. Yay, he called her Hermione! PAMS
☆★☆★
Mindy

Sweet.Nightmare 04-18-2007 11:35 PM

Wonderful!! But Harry is bad *pokes him* PAMS!

~Nikki

Come What May 04-18-2007 11:48 PM

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Originally Posted by Cedric_Lover (Post 4927675)
New Reader! Great story! I actually just heard Beautiful Liar yesterday in the car and I really liked it! I am so glad that you made a ff out of it! I can't believe that Harry cheated! Poor Hermione...
Pams
<3 Danielle

Welcome Danielle!!!!!!!!! I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far!

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Originally Posted by jkrsong96 (Post 4927715)
Emma you posted! This is just great (I mean the post), even though Hermione said the B word. (I'm telling on her!) Ginny still doesn't know, and Harry is still a LIAR. L-I-A-R. Draco...well...can't say that he's bad anymore, can I? I think he chose the right thing. Yay, he called her Hermione! PAMS
☆★☆★
Mindy

Hermione exploded...she got really upset.And Draco was being honest and nice...so we can't say he's evil anymore can we?

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Originally Posted by hermione 9 (Post 4927720)
Wonderful!! But Harry is bad *pokes him* PAMS!

~Nikki

Welcome Nikki! I'm glad you like the story so far! And I've noticed that Harry is getting poked a lot! LOL! I feel sorry for him!


Love,
Emma


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