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Fallen_Angel1721 06-08-2007 11:49 PM

I LOVE UR STORY i have been reading it for ages but havnet posted PAMSPAMS. I just finished reading all ur other stories they are fantastic
Caity

lena lovegood 06-09-2007 01:20 AM

!!! I missed so much, but now i'm all caught up. Ahhh, I hope hermione will be ok! Draco will save her, I know it! It is so cute that cho like ron, awwwww. PAMS!
-Lena

HARRY LOVER#1 =) 06-09-2007 04:13 AM

This was a really nice post!!:yes:
I wonder who that was!! I hope Hermione is okay!:worried:
PAMS!!!

hp_lvr01 06-09-2007 05:21 AM

ZOMG! that was so good but you need to post now!!! PAMSPAMSPAMS PAMSOID!

-Bells
♥♥

MUSTANG SALLY 06-09-2007 08:31 AM

OOH! I like the new chapter 14!!! :)
I wonder who it is? :hmm:
You need to post ASAP!
PAMSOID!!!!!!!!!!

*Steph*

Come What May 06-10-2007 03:38 AM

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Originally Posted by Danniinwonderland (Post 5169022)
I like it.
Keep the story going.
=]]

I'm glad you liked it hun. A new post will be up soon...

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Originally Posted by MalfoyzBeloved (Post 5169029)
:rotfl:

That was an awesome chapter, even if it was the same (btw you could've edited your other post but whatever, it's a chapter either way :lol:)
PAMS!

Thanks, and I know I could have done that but I was in a hurry...sorry...

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Originally Posted by Samia (Post 5169163)
Ohk!! scared!!..... I mean whahh? Emma darlin' read almostall your FF, how could you fail.. Luvyour work..!!! Keep going! :glomp:

The guy who is threatning Hermione. who is..is he....!! :erm:

Just hope its not Harry again !! hehe! :whistle:

Thanks Samia! I really appreciate the support...and no...it's not Harry...

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Originally Posted by HP1FAN2004 (Post 5170891)
*gasps* oh no!!!! Be carefull Hermione! PAMS soon...I'm having my best friend over this weekend and so we might be on my laptop either tonight or tom. sometime... Right now im in school in comuter keyboarding...we had our exam last class so its basically a study hall right now for us...but anyway...PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I will have a chapter up soon...

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Originally Posted by Little Trooper (Post 5172437)
Great post. But you didn't half to re-write it. I understand now. Keep up the good work though.

*Note to Hermione: Be careful who you trust now*

Thanks! And yes I did...too many people were confused and I felt bad...

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Originally Posted by Michiko (Post 5172557)
O.o eeeep!!

pams, when you can lol

this is awesome!!!

Thanks hun!

Quote:

Originally Posted by jkrsong96 (Post 5172908)
I missed so many chapters, and I'm guilty that I did! Evil cliffie...dang, Ron is sooooo clueless! Cho and Ron...am I correct? *winkwink* Could that possibly be James? or Harry? I don't know! But I know that I just love this FF!

Don't feel bad Twinnie...it's okay...and no it's not Harry or James...James will have no part in this story...

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fallen_Angel1721 (Post 5173412)
I LOVE UR STORY i have been reading it for ages but havnet posted PAMSPAMS. I just finished reading all ur other stories they are fantastic
Caity

Hello Caity! I'm glad you like my work...it means a lot that you like it...

Quote:

Originally Posted by lena lovegood (Post 5173776)
!!! I missed so much, but now i'm all caught up. Ahhh, I hope hermione will be ok! Draco will save her, I know it! It is so cute that cho like ron, awwwww. PAMS!
-Lena

Yeah...maybe Draco will save Hermione...maybe not...it could be someone you would least expect it to be...

Quote:

Originally Posted by HARRY LOVER#1 =) (Post 5174595)
This was a really nice post!!:yes:
I wonder who that was!! I hope Hermione is okay!:worried:
PAMS!!!

Thanks hun!

Quote:

Originally Posted by hp_lvr01 (Post 5174849)
ZOMG! that was so good but you need to post now!!! PAMSPAMSPAMS PAMSOID!

-Bells
♥♥

I will post soon...I don't know when but a post will come...

Quote:

Originally Posted by MUSTANG SALLY (Post 5175401)
OOH! I like the new chapter 14!!! :)
I wonder who it is? :hmm:
You need to post ASAP!
PAMSOID!!!!!!!!!!

*Steph*

I will post soon...

Thank you all for being patient with me...

Love,
Emma

Samia 06-10-2007 03:44 AM

Yay!! its not Harry, oh yeahh !!!!...... *dances,looks around nobody watching continues dancing* Waiting for the post Emma.

MalfoyzBeloved 06-10-2007 06:38 AM

Quote:

I know I could have done that but I was in a hurry...sorry..
Nothing to be sorry about!
Just making sure you know about it. Some people don't, so you never know these days, eh? ;)

Anyways, pamsoid soon :D
~Sarah

Come What May 06-11-2007 11:04 PM

Here is a new chapter my loyal readers!

Chapter 15:
Hermione fell to the floor…what was going on? She tried to get up but before she could someone else did her the favor and picked her up and tied her to something. Hermione tried to see who it was but she was blindfolded as soon as she was done being tied up.
But the odd thing was…who ever it was didn’t bother covering her mouth…

There was silence…then someone spoke…

“Oh look…you actually brought me the mudblood! Good job Malfoy…I knew I could count on you”.

“Malfoy?” Hermione gasped.

“No you silly girl! Not the useless thing you call your boyfriend!” Voldemort snapped.

“Lucius Malfoy then? Or are their any other annoying Malfoys I need to know about?” Hermione snapped back.

“I wouldn’t be talking that way mudblood…you are going to marry Draco aren’t you? Or were you just planning on playing with him?” Voldemort teased.

“I would never play with someone I care about!” Hermione snapped.

“Hmmm…Lucius what does your son see in this one? Horrible temper. Well it’s a shame she won’t make it out of here tonight anyways so don’t worry about Draco’s future with her”.

“Why do you have me here?” Hermione asked, no longer in her snappish tone. She was scared for her life now.

“Well as you know…you are one of Potter’s friends and I needed to use you as bait to get him here” Voldemort answered.

“Well if you would like to know Potter and I don’t talk to each other anymore!”

“Oh? And why is that?”

“Because he cheated on me!”

“Cheated on you?” Voldemort laughed. “What? Did he promise you he would be your best friend forever but didn’t keep his promise? Oh yes…I understand that must hurt”.

Voldemort laughed. Hermione started crying but not because she was upset but because she was getting annoyed by Voldemort's laughing. She hated when people laughed at her. Lucius spoke.

“My lord Granger and Potter dated a while back but Potter decided to have some fun and go out with another girl at the same time”.

Voldemort stopped laughing.

“Oh…so he…wow…Potter does have the ability to hurt the people he loves. So that means he’s not so clueless after all! I guess I am brilliant!”

Voldemort removed the blindfold from Hermione’s eyes.

“What do you mean you’re brilliant?” Hermione asked facing Voldemort.

“I put Potter under a spell. Controlling his every move…”

“So it was you! You made Harry cheat on me!” Hermione yelled.

Voldemort nodded…

He then looked straight at Hermione and said, “Then I guess it won’t be necessary keeping you alive? I mean since Potter won’t come after you… I guess you’re useless. I didn’t think my plan would cause so much damage but I thought wrong… Good-bye my little mudblood”.

Voldemort wrapped the blindfold around Hermione’s eyes again and all Hermione could do was wait…wait for her end to come…she started to cry…

“Harry I’m so sorry! If I knew…”

Back at Hogwarts…

“Hermione?” Draco called as he searched for her. “Hermione it’s not funny!”

Draco was getting worried…he had seen the flash of light but he didn’t know where it came from…and where was Hermione?

Draco continued looking and by accident he bumped into Harry.

“Ow! Oh sorry Malfoy” Harry said.

“It’s…wait why are you apologizing?”

“What?” Harry asked slightly confused.

“You apologized to me…are you alright?” Draco asked as he watched Harry.

“No…I feel a bit weird…like a spell was just lifted from me…” Harry said.

“Oh…have you seen Hermione?”

“No…I haven’t seen her in forever!”

“What are you talking about? You saw her a few days ago”.

“I did?”

Draco looked at Harry and realized what had happened right away…he had heard his father talking about a plan Voldemort was going to do. But Draco didn’t pay any attention to it. He ignored his father every time he talked to him about something. Voldemort must have done something to Harry…and Hermione…

“Harry what would you say if I told you Voldemort had Hermione?”

“WHAT!” Harry said grabbing Draco by the collar. “What did you do?”

“Nothing! Harry let go!” Draco said. “All that matters is that I know you didn’t cheat on Hermione on purpose and…”

“Cheat on Hermione? I never even dated her?” Harry said.

“Harry we need to save Hermione…”

“Well we would have been gone if you hadn’t taken five minutes to blab about something like me dating Hermione!” Harry snapped.

The two boys then ran to Mcgonagall’s office…hoping Hermione would still be alive once they found her…

I hope you all enjoy! I'm sorry it took so long for me to post...I wasn't motivated to write...I mean when depression hits you you don't feel like doing anything!

Love,
Emma

hp_lvr01 06-11-2007 11:22 PM

ZOMG. Hermy!I hope she's okay!!! PAMSOID!!

-Bells
♥♥

HP1FAN2004 06-12-2007 12:11 AM

Awwww poor Hermione! I hope Draco and Harry get to her fast enough. PAMS soon

Samia 06-12-2007 02:54 AM

OMG!!!!! yeee-haaa!!! Harry is back on!! thnx Emmaa you rokkk!!!!!!...


rellybelly 06-12-2007 12:09 PM

Wow!! Emma, this was a really good chapter! I am soo sorry, I misse dlike three of your chapters, I just have this big final in math and I suck! It's tomorrow and i'm so nervous but I needed a break from studying.
Please write more soon- PAMS!!
-*~ Shirel ~*-

Come What May 06-12-2007 10:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by hp_lvr01 (Post 5189791)
ZOMG. Hermy!I hope she's okay!!! PAMSOID!!

-Bells
♥♥


She will be...maybe...


Quote:

Originally Posted by HP1FAN2004 (Post 5190068)
Awwww poor Hermione! I hope Draco and Harry get to her fast enough. PAMS soon

They will...maybe...

Quote:

Originally Posted by Samia (Post 5190923)
OMG!!!!! yeee-haaa!!! Harry is back on!! thnx Emmaa you rokkk!!!!!!...


I decided to make Harry smart and brave and loyal again!

Quote:

Originally Posted by shirelbb (Post 5192484)
Wow!! Emma, this was a really good chapter! I am soo sorry, I misse dlike three of your chapters, I just have this big final in math and I suck! It's tomorrow and i'm so nervous but I needed a break from studying.
Please write more soon- PAMS!!
-*~ Shirel ~*-

Good luck darling! I know you will do well!

Love,
Emma

MalfoyzBeloved 06-12-2007 10:44 PM

ZOMG! Poor Hermione... what's gonna happen?
:gasp: For a second I misread it being Lucius and I was like 'no wonder Draco was interested in her!' then I read it again and was like 'Oh...'

AWESOME update! So can't wait for more!
~Sarah

lena lovegood 06-13-2007 01:50 AM

gahhhh! this is so intense. I love it! PAMS!!!!
Lena

Artist-2-Be 06-13-2007 02:02 AM

GREAT two updates!

I thought it was Blaise who kidnapped Hermy for a second XD Never thought it'd be Voldie O.o

PAMSOID

MUSTANG SALLY 06-13-2007 02:04 AM

Awsome post!!!!!!!!!!! I cant belive Harry was under a spell. It was great kind wait for more!!!

*steph*

Come What May 06-13-2007 02:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MalfoyzBeloved (Post 5194861)
ZOMG! Poor Hermione... what's gonna happen?
:gasp: For a second I misread it being Lucius and I was like 'no wonder Draco was interested in her!' then I read it again and was like 'Oh...'

AWESOME update! So can't wait for more!
~Sarah

You got me confused a little but I got you now! LOL! I'm glad you liked the update!

Quote:

Originally Posted by lena lovegood (Post 5195847)
gahhhh! this is so intense. I love it! PAMS!!!!
Lena

Is it really? Intense...I don't know....I guess I don't feel that way because I know the fate of all the characters! LOL!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Artist-2-Be (Post 5195903)
GREAT two updates!

I thought it was Blaise who kidnapped Hermy for a second XD Never thought it'd be Voldie O.o

PAMSOID

Blaise? Why would he do such a thing! And besides he in the hospital wing...:shifty:

Quote:

Originally Posted by MUSTANG SALLY (Post 5195912)
Awsome post!!!!!!!!!!! I cant belive Harry was under a spell. It was great kind wait for more!!!

*steph*

Yup poor old Harry was under a spell....

Love,
Emma

MalfoyzBeloved 06-13-2007 05:53 AM

Quote:

You got me confused a little but I got you now! LOL! I'm glad you liked the update!
:lol: First you confused me and I confused you by my confusion!
Hahaha... *has never done that b4*

Artist-2-Be 06-13-2007 03:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Harry and Ginny??? (Post 5196026)
Blaise? Why would he do such a thing! And besides he in the hospital wing...:shifty:

:gasp: MEANIE! I know you did it! I'm gonna poke you! :poke: :poke:

:lol:

PAMSOID

Blaise lover Jenni

Michiko 06-13-2007 10:14 PM

O.O ZOMG. that was unexpected!!!

=] its so good i loveee it.

depression? *huggles* aww hun im sorry, you feeling better?

Come What May 06-13-2007 10:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MalfoyzBeloved (Post 5196737)
:lol: First you confused me and I confused you by my confusion!
Hahaha... *has never done that b4*

:lol: That is funny! Confusion is so...confusing!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Artist-2-Be (Post 5197958)
:gasp: MEANIE! I know you did it! I'm gonna poke you! :poke: :poke:

:lol:

PAMSOID

Blaise lover Jenni

NOOOOO! IT WAS NOT ME!...HERMIONE MADE ME!
*Runs away*


Quote:

Originally Posted by Michiko (Post 5199559)
O.O ZOMG. that was unexpected!!!

=] its so good i loveee it.

depression? *huggles* aww hun im sorry, you feeling better?

Thanks hun!
Yes I'm fine now...thanks for the hug! *huggles back*

Love,
Emma

Come What May 06-13-2007 11:29 PM

Here is Chapter 16 to Beautiful Liar!

Chapter 16:
“Draco if Hermione is dead when we get there I will strangle you!” Harry snapped as he and Draco traveled to the Malfoy Manor.

“She won’t be dead!” Draco snapped back.

“So are you trying to tell me Voldemort just invited Hermione to a party and that when we get there they will by hitting a piñata!”

“Harry will you calm down!” Draco yelled. He was worried sick and having Harry yell at him was not helping.

“Sorry” Harry said.

“Second time you apologize to me…amazing!” Draco smiled.

“Yeah well don’t get used to it”.

“I won’t”.

“Good…now will you open your damn door! We have been standing in front of your house for five whole minutes already!”

“I can’t open it” Draco said looking down.

“What!” Harry snapped. “You are a Malfoy and you can’t get into your own house!”

“Harry I can’t get in because I’m not what my father calls a “true” Malfoy”.

“Well then can I blast the door open then?”

“Be my guest” Draco said as he moved aside.

Harry blasted the door open and stood where he was…he didn’t know what was inside. What if Voldemort just popped out of nowhere?

“Are you going to go in?” Draco asked.

“Um…it’s your house. I mean me just walking in just like that…that is so rude” Harry stuttered.

Draco laughed, “Is the famous Harry Potter scared of a wizard who he has fought more than six times? And won each time!”

“No…well why don’t you go in! Your father has been bestest friends with him since before I was born!”

“My best friend is not in there!”

“No but your girlfriend is you idiot!”

Draco stayed quiet. Harry who was growing impatient due to his severe headache grabbed Draco by the sleeve and dragged him inside the house.

“Where would Voldemort be?” Harry asked out loud.

“In one of the thousands of rooms we have in this house…not including the dungeons!” Draco said.

“Not helping!” Harry snapped.

“Sorry…look you go look in the dungeons and I’ll go look in the rooms” Draco offered.

“Why…never mind…I’ll meet you back here in ten minutes…” Harry said as he walked off.

“Okay…” Draco said as he walked up the grand staircase.

In the dungeons…

“Crying isn’t going to save you!” Voldemort snapped as he watched Hermione.

“No it’s not but it helps me realize how stupid you really are!” Hermione snapped back.

“Why you little! I should kill you right now! And I will too!” Voldemort yelled as he picked up his wand.

“AVANDA…” Voldemort yelled.

Experlliarmus!” Harry yelled as he burst through the door.

Hermione looked up, “Harry?”

“Gosh Voldemort if you wanted to throw me a party you should have sent out invitations…capturing people like that…god no wonder no one showed up” Harry laughed.

“Harry…Harry….Harry….but you are the life of the party. There’s no party without you now is there?” Voldemort laughed.

“No I guess not” Harry said. He looked over at Hermione and said, “But look you have Hermione here! She can make a party go wild! Isn’t that right Hermione?”

Harry walked over to Hermione and untied her.

“But keeping her tied up will not help”.

“Potter! Just shut up and stand still!” Voldemort yelled.

Voldemort raised his wand and yelled “ AVANDA KEDAVRA!”

Harry ducked just in time. Hermione ran to the corner of the room, she realized she didn’t have her wand with her. So what help was she to Harry?

Harry stood up and laughed, “You missed Voldie!”

There was another flash of green light and then a scream…silence followed…

“Harry?” Hermione said.

There was no answer…

Tada! There is Chapter 16! I hope you all enjoyed it!

Love,
Emma

Artist-2-Be 06-13-2007 11:43 PM

Evil girl! You made Harry die!!!!

PAMSOID!

JENNI

*chases after her with a sign that says: 'You hurt Blaise! You hurt Harry! Now it's YOUR turn!'* XD


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