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Come What May 06-04-2007 07:58 PM

Here is a brand new chapter my wonderful loyal readers!

Chapter 13:
“Oh yeah now you decide to ask!” Hermione snapped.

“I’m sorry! I just didn’t think you would go out with someone like me,” Draco said.

“And why would you think that?”

“Well because ever since I gave up my Bad Boy days girls have…lost interest in me”.

Hermione laughed.

“Draco you are so ridiculous!”

“Well it’s true!” Draco said turning red.

Hermione continued to giggle.

“So?” Draco asked after a while.

“So what?” Hermione said.

She wanted to make Draco wait for her answer. After all he made her wait for the question.

“Will you go out with me?” Draco asked again.

“Oh my goodness! Draco you asked twice!” Hermione gasped.

“Hermione!” Draco said getting impatient.

“Um… well I do want to focus on my school work and graduation is only a couple months away…”

“What? You don’t think you can focus if you have me by you side?” Draco asked.

“No…”

Draco frowned.

“Because if I have you by my side I will just be telling you how much I love you and how proud I am to be your girlfriend”.

Draco smiled.

“I love you Draco. Even if you are not a Bad Boy anymore” Hermione giggled.

“I love you too. Even if your not the I’ll give you an answer before you ask the question type of girl anymore”.

Hermione rolled her eyes.

“Come on Draco. Let’s go tell everyone how much you love me”.

Draco laughed.

“Or we can just go outside and have some quiet time” Draco suggested pulling Hermione towards the entrance of the school.

“Hey! You didn’t let me choose!” Hermione complained.

“To bad!” Draco said as he picked up Hermione and ran outside towards the lake.

“Draco!” Hermione laughed as she fought to get down.

The two arrived at the lake and stayed there until sunset. They missed all their classes but that didn’t matter to them. As long as they were together nothing mattered. They felt as if nothing in the world could tare them apart…or so they thought…

Up in the castle…

“Hermione if only you knew how much I cared about you. Would you have gone with me or Draco?”

I hope you all enjoyed the new chapter!

Love,
Emma

MalfoyzBeloved 06-04-2007 10:29 PM

Quote:

“Hermione if only you knew how much I cared about you. Would you have gone with me or Draco?”
Ooh, who is that? Ron?
I don't think it'd be Harry... cause he's a lying, cheeky ba... you get my drift ;) But it'd be a weird twist!
Awesome update! Loved it!
PAMS!
~Sarah

Come What May 06-04-2007 10:44 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MalfoyzBeloved (Post 5145888)

Ooh, who is that? Ron?
I don't think it'd be Harry... cause he's a lying, cheeky ba... you get my drift ;) But it'd be a weird twist!
Awesome update! Loved it!
PAMS!
~Sarah

Is it Ron? Hmmm...
Oh no! It's not Harry! I have other things in store for him! LOL!
I'm glad you like the post! I will post more often since I am on break now so yeah....

Love,
Emma

Mari of the Ocean 06-05-2007 01:12 AM

O my God!!!
Who is it!!! I'm so sure is Ron!!!
Awesome post!!
PAMS PAMS

HP1FAN2004 06-05-2007 01:16 AM

It was an awesome post...PAMS soon

HARRY LOVER#1 =) 06-05-2007 01:16 AM

OMG!! I cant belive I missed a post!!:gasp: *is ahsamed:(* Those two updated were awsome!!:yes:
In the previous one before this recent one I thought Snape was to nice!! ( not complaining though I dont like the mean Snape!)
This new post is so cute!! YAY!! Draco asked Hermione out! ( took him long enough though!:rolleyes: )
PAMS!!!

PS:Soory for all the parenthesis I got a bit carried away!:lol:

Michiko 06-05-2007 01:49 AM

O.O ohhhh shnap.

I wonder I wonder.

*cough* ron *cough* =] -innocent-

ahh cliffhanger!

PAMS por favor
(thats spanish for please xD i got skills... wow yea.)

Come What May 06-05-2007 03:10 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mari of the Ocean (Post 5146876)
O my God!!!
Who is it!!! I'm so sure is Ron!!!
Awesome post!!
PAMS PAMS

You really think it's Ron? Hmmm....think again sweetheart!

Quote:

Originally Posted by HP1FAN2004 (Post 5146895)
It was an awesome post...PAMS soon

Thanks darling! I will post soon!

Quote:

Originally Posted by HARRY LOVER#1 =) (Post 5146896)
OMG!! I cant belive I missed a post!!:gasp: *is ahsamed:(* Those two updated were awsome!!:yes:
In the previous one before this recent one I thought Snape was to nice!! ( not complaining though I dont like the mean Snape!)
This new post is so cute!! YAY!! Draco asked Hermione out! ( took him long enough though!:rolleyes: )
PAMS!!!

PS:Soory for all the parenthesis I got a bit carried away!:lol:

Don't be ashamed hun! It's okay! I'm glad you enjoyed the update...well update(s) for you! LOL!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Michiko (Post 5147112)
O.O ohhhh shnap.

I wonder I wonder.

*cough* ron *cough* =] -innocent-

ahh cliffhanger!

PAMS por favor
(thats spanish for please xD i got skills... wow yea.)

*cough* *cough* Ron? Hmmm...
I will post soon!
Haber si puedo porque tengo muchas cosas que hacer!
(I got skills too! LOL!)

Love,
Emma

hp_lvr01 06-05-2007 03:35 AM

zomg! it's harry or ron! I have a feeling :xd:
PAMSOID!!

-Bells ♥♥

Come What May 06-05-2007 03:53 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by hp_lvr01 (Post 5147847)
zomg! it's harry or ron! I have a feeling :xd:
PAMSOID!!

-Bells ♥♥

Are you sure about that?
:shifty:

Love,
Emma

MUSTANG SALLY 06-05-2007 04:21 AM

Im another vote for Ron!!! :D
That would be interesting to see how that plays out. :shifty:
PAMSOID!

*Steph*

Samia 06-05-2007 12:02 PM

It can be Ron... But then again your cliffies are always a twists hehe!!..

lol... be good to Harry!! hehe! preety please.!!!!!!!

Artist-2-Be 06-05-2007 04:25 PM

I say either Ron or............BLAISE! (as in Zabini) XD I say more of Ickle Ronnikins though. ^_^ :erm:

PAMSOID

Ickle Jennikins

Come What May 06-05-2007 05:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MUSTANG SALLY (Post 5148197)
Im another vote for Ron!!! :D
That would be interesting to see how that plays out. :shifty:
PAMSOID!

*Steph*

But it can't be Ron...he supported Hermione with Harry and then when Harry behaved like an idiot Ron was there for her but as a friend...but I don't know...:shifty:

Quote:

Originally Posted by Samia (Post 5149611)
It can be Ron... But then again your cliffies are always a twists hehe!!..

lol... be good to Harry!! hehe! preety please.!!!!!!!

My cliffies are a twist! LOL! I could bring an old character back from one of my old FF's...you never know...:shifty:

Quote:

Originally Posted by Artist-2-Be (Post 5150862)
I say either Ron or............BLAISE! (as in Zabini) XD I say more of Ickle Ronnikins though. ^_^ :erm:

PAMSOID

Ickle Jennikins

LOL! Ickle Jennikins! You are so silly! Blaise! I prefer to push him off the Astronomy tower!

I shall post soon...or maybe I shall leave you all with the suspense of this person? Hmmm...

Love,
Emma

Artist-2-Be 06-05-2007 06:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Harry and Ginny??? (Post 5151397)
LOL! Ickle Jennikins! You are so silly! Blaise! I prefer to push him off the Astronomy tower!

I shall post soon...or maybe I shall leave you all with the suspense of this person? Hmmm...

Love,
Emma

NO! Don't push Blaise off the Astronomy Tower! He's my FAVORITE Slytherin! (Along with Draco) Besides, if you do, who else shall I pair Luna with? XD


POST SOON!


Fan of BZLL,
Jenny-Wenny-Henny

Little Trooper 06-05-2007 08:00 PM

Just caught up. Those last chapters were amazing. Can't wait for more.

Come What May 06-05-2007 08:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Artist-2-Be (Post 5151526)
NO! Don't push Blaise off the Astronomy Tower! He's my FAVORITE Slytherin! (Along with Draco) Besides, if you do, who else shall I pair Luna with? XD


POST SOON!


Fan of BZLL,
Jenny-Wenny-Henny

Okay okay okay! I won't push him off the Astronomy tower...but just because you asked me too!...oh look! He's heading towards the Astronomy tower!...*sneaks away and follows Blaise*

Quote:

Originally Posted by Little Trooper (Post 5152197)
Just caught up. Those last chapters were amazing. Can't wait for more.

Thanks hun! I'm glad you enjoyed them!

I will post more soon!

Love,
Emma

Michiko 06-05-2007 09:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Harry and Ginny??? (Post 5147716)


*cough* *cough* Ron? Hmmm...
I will post soon!
Haber si puedo porque tengo muchas cosas que hacer!
(I got skills too! LOL!)

Love,
Emma

O.O dios... tu es muy bien. xD tengo dos anos de mi clase de espanol...

and im still not that great =P

Come What May 06-05-2007 09:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Michiko (Post 5152603)
O.O dios... tu es muy bien. xD tengo dos anos de mi clase de espanol...

and im still not that great =P

Yo tengo muchos anos hablando espanol...cuando era nina mis papas me habladon en espanol. Yo tengo anos hablando espanol...pero todavia no se donde van los acentos!

I'm not that great either! LOL!

Love,
Emma

Artist-2-Be 06-05-2007 10:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Harry and Ginny??? (Post 5152249)
Okay okay okay! I won't push him off the Astronomy tower...but just because you asked me too!...oh look! He's heading towards the Astronomy tower!...*sneaks away and follows Blaise*
I will post more soon!

Love,
Emma

Good. Hmm.... *Follows Emma to make sure she doesn't, if she does, little Jenni shall do the same to her* XD

You better post soon! XD

Jen-Jen-Wen-Wen-Hen-Hen O.o

live-the-lie 06-05-2007 10:34 PM

OMG. POST MORE!! (i'm in love with your FFs') heeheh

Come What May 06-06-2007 12:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Artist-2-Be (Post 5152997)
Good. Hmm.... *Follows Emma to make sure she doesn't, if she does, little Jenni shall do the same to her* XD

You better post soon! XD

Jen-Jen-Wen-Wen-Hen-Hen O.o

But if you do the same to me...who shall post the next chapter! :gasp:

Quote:

Originally Posted by live-the-lie (Post 5153022)
OMG. POST MORE!! (i'm in love with your FFs') heeheh

I will darling! As long as Jenny doesn't push me off the Astronomy Tower! LOL!

Love,
Emma

Artist-2-Be 06-06-2007 03:12 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Harry and Ginny??? (Post 5153597)
But if you do the same to me...who shall post the next chapter! :gasp:



I will darling! As long as Jenny doesn't push me off the Astronomy Tower! LOL!

Love,
Emma

Hmph, Fine. I"ll do it AFTER the story is finished...

PAMS


Huffie Jenny

Come What May 06-06-2007 08:14 PM

^^Ha Ha! I got you there!
I will post the next chapter later today!

Love,
Emma

Come What May 06-06-2007 08:38 PM

Okay everyone...here is the new chapter!

Chapter 14:
Hermione walked back up to the castle with Draco.

“Hermione you do know we missed all our classes right?” Draco asked as they entered the castle.

“WHAT!” Hermione yelled.

“Hermione calm down!”

“Draco its all your fault! If you just chose to brag about me to everyone we would have gone to all our classes!”

Draco laughed.

“Good night Draco!” Hermione said as she marched off to the Gryffindor Common Room.

Draco leaned on the doorway.

“She’ll be back,” he told himself.

And sure enough Hermione appeared.

“I only came back because I forgot something!” Hermione snapped. She kissed Draco and then said, “ I still don’t forgive you”.

“Are you sure?”

“Yes…” Hermione said.

Hermione walked away and smiled as she turned the corner.

“Why do I like him so much?” Hermione whispered to herself.

“That’s what I want to know?”

Hermione turned towards the voice... no one was there.

“Who’s there?” Hermione asked.

“Hermione, why are you putting yourself through so much pain?”

Hermione sighed as she saw the source of the voice.

Not again!” Hermione thought.

“Hermione answer me!”

“James! Will you stop it!”

“Not until you answer my question!”

“I…I guess I’m just a silly little girl in love” Hermione said.

James looked at Hermione. Hermione had just realized what she had said. Is she really in love with Draco? Or is she just using him to make Harry feel bad?

“James I have to go” Hermione said as she walked away.

“Hermione wait…” James said.

Hermione turned. She was in tears…she didn’t know how she felt anymore.

James took Hermione into his arms.

“Hermione I love you. I have ever since I met you. That Potter boy hurt you and moving on to Draco is not going to make things better for you. But if you come with me…”

“James please…” Hermione snapped.

“Hermione if you were with me none of this would have happened to you! I would never hurt you!”

“You now what’s funny? Harry said the same thing and look where I ended up for believing him”.

“Your with Malfoy…ouch I see what you mean.”

“James! You will be so lucky if you end up being at least half the man Draco is!” Hermione yelled.

“Hermione…”

“Shut up! Just leave me alone!” Hermione turned on her heel and left but she did not stop yelling.

“Boys these days! Some are Beautiful Liars, others are desperate, and some are…completely sweet,” Hermione said thinking of Draco.

Hermione arrived at the Gryffindor Common Room to find Ginny and Cho on the floor sleeping. Hermione giggled.

“Some people didn’t make it to their bed!” Hermione said as she nudged Cho and Ginny.

“Hermione where were you?” Ginny asked as she picked herself up from the floor.

“With Draco” Hermione smiled.

“Oh…wait…with WHO!” Ginny yelled.

“With Draco” Hermione repeated.

Ginny looked like she was about to burst…

“FINALLY! What took the idiot so long?” Ginny said.

“I don’t know” Hermione said, laughing at Ginny’s reaction.

“He was scared” Cho spoke up.

“Of what? That Hermione was going to kill him if he asked her?”

“No…he just thought Hermione would say no because he thought that Hermione still thought of him as a Death Eater in training”.

“Cho how do you know all this?” Hermione asked.

“He told me…well I kind of forced it out of him…he was being stubborn about it”.

“What’s going on here?”

All three girls looked up to find Ron standing at the staircase.

“We were just taking about you” Ginny said.

“You were?” Ron asked.

“Yes and about this girl who is dying to ask you out” Ginny giggled.

“Really? Who is she?”

Hermione looked at Ginny and asked the same thing, “Who is this poor girl?”

“Hey! Hermione your just jealous!” Ron said.

“Oh yeah…super jealous!” Hermione giggled.

Hermione turned to Cho to see why she was being so quiet…but the thing was…Cho was no longer there…

Hermione looked back at Ginny and Ginny nodded.

“ARE YOU TWO GOING TO TELL ME WHO THIS GIRL IS!?” Ron yelled.

Ginny rolled her eyes.

"RON ARE YOU THAT CLUELESS!"

I hope you all enjoyed the new chapter! :)

Love,
Emma


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