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MalfoyzBeloved 06-02-2007 04:46 AM

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WE LOST HER! YAY!...
OH NO!!!! SHE'S COMING!
AH! *screams and nearly flies into the Fat Lady*
Sorry... *quickly gives Fat Lady password and runs inside Gryffindor Tower*
CRUD! MCGONAGALL KNOWS THE PASSWORD! *runs upstairs and into dorm room and locks door and lets out panting breaths*

Hermy99 06-02-2007 12:14 PM

Hi,I am a new reader.I am a very big H/G shipper.I loveeeeeee your story so far.

Come What May 06-02-2007 05:33 PM

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Originally Posted by jkrsong96 (Post 5132254)
I missed soooo many chapters, and they're all awesome! It's like Draco and Harry switched. Harry has the original Malfoy character, and Draco has the original Harry character. Well, I think Harry deserves it. ^^

How do you know Harry and Draco are not under a spell? :shifty:

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Originally Posted by MalfoyzBeloved (Post 5132336)

AH! *screams and nearly flies into the Fat Lady*
Sorry... *quickly gives Fat Lady password and runs inside Gryffindor Tower*
CRUD! MCGONAGALL KNOWS THE PASSWORD! *runs upstairs and into dorm room and locks door and lets out panting breaths*

Sarah sorry but...MCGONAGALL IS A WITCH! She can simply say Alohamora(sp?) and the door opens!


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Originally Posted by Hermy99 (Post 5133221)
Hi,I am a new reader.I am a very big H/G shipper.I loveeeeeee your story so far.

Welcome new reader! I'm very glad you are enjoying the story so far! A new post will be up soon.

Love,
Emma

MalfoyzBeloved 06-02-2007 07:53 PM

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MCGONAGALL IS A WITCH! She can simply say Alohamora(sp?) and the door opens!
Then why'd you think I put my most powerful spells on the lock??
Sheesh xD

Come What May 06-03-2007 02:34 AM

^^Well sorry! Goshness! LOL!

Samia 06-03-2007 03:19 AM

Ohk!! A new reader.!!! Love the story but just cant sallow the fact that its Harry is the bad guy!!! Come on man.. Its our Harry. He can never be a player. paleezzz a dearly wish dont make Harry the bad guy!...... End him good!!! yay to Draco and Hermione but Harrry can never do this to his bestfriend. Real big fan here.. paleeeeezzz End him good.

Come What May 06-03-2007 03:26 AM

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Originally Posted by Samia (Post 5136650)
Ohk!! A new reader.!!! Love the story but just cant sallow the fact that its Harry is the bad guy!!! Come on man.. Its our Harry. He can never be a player. paleezzz a dearly wish dont make Harry the bad guy!...... End him good!!! yay to Draco and Hermione but Harrry can never do this to his bestfriend. Real big fan here.. paleeeeezzz End him good.

Oh believe me! It pains me to have to make Harry evil! But I have too! If I didn't the story would not flow! LOL! But don't worry he won't end completley evil...:shifty:

And welcome! I love new readers!

Love,
Emma

Samia 06-03-2007 03:30 AM

Lol!! ... "not completely evil" means more jinxes on him!! Hehehe. Poor Harry.

Samia 06-03-2007 03:47 AM

Ohk so I hadto post this. This story was posted on a fanfic site -> HarrynHermione.. thsi is real cute part of the story he wrote

Do you want me to jump off the astronomy tower while I shout it to the Heavens?” he asked, still gazing at her. “Do you want me to throw Lee out of the announcers box during the next Quidditch match and announce it?” He was getting a bit irritated, and finally Hermione was getting flustered.

“Honestly, Harry….”

“Do you want me to stand on top of Honeydukes and scream it at the top of my lungs for everyone to hear? Do you want me stand up on our table during dinner some night and shout it?”

“What on Earth are you talking about?” she asked incredulously.

Harry closed his eyes, shook his head, and let out a deep breath. “You are the most impossibly stubborn witch I have ever known, Hermione Granger.” Harry just looked at her.

The girls held their breaths, the boys were too mesmerized by the possibility, and Ron inhaled a gasp. He's going to do it!

“I'M IN LOVE WITH YOU!” Harry suddenly shouted loud enough to make the portraits in the room start with surprise.

Parvati let out a squeak which was quickly silenced by Lavender's hand going over her mouth. Ginny's eyes filled with tears. The boys were silent and unmoving.

Hermione's mouth fell open and she gapped at him. “You…you're what?”

In two strides Harry was nose to nose with her. He took her face gently in his hands and looked right into her eyes. “Harry….” He silenced her with a kiss that would have made Eros and Aphrodite proud. Never before in the history of kisses had a kiss ever made a woman swoon like this one did.

Real cute Fic... hehe... Harry aint bad!! Hape you dont mind Ashley me posting this here.! Its juts cute thats why I posted it here.!

Come What May 06-03-2007 03:55 AM

That was cute! And no I don't mind!
But if you read my other FF's Harry is wonderful!

Samia 06-03-2007 03:56 AM

Thats what i was just going to do. On my way to check out your other Fics. Love your writing style.

Come What May 06-03-2007 04:01 AM

^^Aww Thank you! Do you know my other FF's?

Well before you do here is the new chapter to Beautiful Liar!
I hope all my wonderful readers enjoy!

Chapter 12:
“What are all of you doing in my office?” Snape asked as he watched Hermione, Cho, Ginny, and Draco enter.

“Sir we all got detention” Hermione said.

“Detention? Well Miss Granger there’s one more bad thing to add to your records”.

Hermione looked down.

“Snape shut up! Hermione was defending herself because stupid Potter was acting like a fool,” Draco snapped.

“Draco! I didn’t notice you were here,” Snape said in surprise.

“I wish you hadn’t” Draco whispered.

Hermione had heard Draco and she giggled. Draco looked at Hermione and smiled which caused Hermione to blush.

“So what shall I make you all do?” Snape said.

“You should be nice for once and let us off the hook” Draco said.

“But then I would not be doing my job” Snape answered.

“Do you ever?” Draco snapped.

“If I didn’t would you have the brains you have now?”

Draco rolled his eyes.

“Can we leave?” Ginny said.

“I guess. I have better things to do than baby sit children” Snape answered.

“I asked you if we could leave a long time ago!” Draco yelled.

“No you asked me to basically prove to you if you had a brain”.

“No I did not!” Draco snapped.

“Draco I have things to do” Snape said as he opened his office door for them.

“So do I and it involves shoving my foot up your..”

“Draco!” Hermione said.

“All right!” Draco said and walked out the door silently.

“Hermione lets go. I’m super tired!” Ginny complained.

“Me too!” Cho yawned.

“Um you two go ahead. I need to go talk to McGonagall about something” Hermione said.

“Okay” the two girls said and left, leaving Draco and Hermione alone.

“Do you really have to ask McGonagall something?” Draco asked getting closer to Hermione.

“It’s not that important” Hermione replied.

Hermione allowed Draco to move closer but Draco just did the complete opposite of what Hermione thought he would do.

“Okay well good night!” Draco said as he walked away.

Hermione stood there in shock. What had just happened?

Hermione walked to the Gryffindor Common Room upset that Draco had decided to freeze up.

A week later…

“Draco come here!” Hermione snapped one day after class.

“Yes Hermione?”

“What is your problem?”

“Nothing. Why?”

“Why have you been avoiding me? You won’t talk to me or even look at me in the eye…like right now! I don’t think the floor is prettier than me!”

Draco looked up and laughed. That caused Hermione to smile. She loved it when he laughed.

“I just have a lot of things on my mind that’s all”.

“Well I can help you with any problems if you like” Hermione offered. Hoping Draco was getting the hint.

“No it’s okay I just…”

Hermione lost her patience again. Draco was never this slow in asking a girl out.

“Draco do you like me?” Hermione snapped.

“What?” Draco said, shocked by the question.

“Do you like me?” Hermione asked again.

“Well yes…I”

“Then why haven’t you asked me out yet!”

Draco turned red.

“I just thought you didn’t feel the same way” Draco mumbled.

“Well obviously I like you to! But since you’re slower than I thought you were!”

Hermione turned to leave. She was angry that Draco still wouldn’t ask her out even when she made it obvious. But Hermione never got the chance to leave. Draco had grabbed her by the arm and pulled her back. Pulling her into a kiss. When Draco pulled away…

“Hermione Jane Granger? Will you go out with me?”

I hope all my loyal readers enjoyed the new chapter!

Love,
Emma

Samia 06-03-2007 04:09 AM

Yay! Go Draco..!!...hehehe nice Post.

any yeahI am readingHidden Love at the moment.! Harry looks good so far!!Lol!

P.s am sorry i wrote your name worng..wasa silly mistake.. Sorry Emma.

Mari of the Ocean 06-03-2007 04:12 AM

Awesome post Emma!!!
Draco has some sirius problems asking out Hermione!!
hehehehe
PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS:clown: :clown:

hp_lvr01 06-03-2007 04:23 AM

awww cute :loved: haha draco's so slick :xd:

-Bells

MalfoyzBeloved 06-03-2007 04:35 AM

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“So do I and it involves shoving my foot up your..”
“Draco!”
:rotfl:

FINALLY! Sheesh Draco, what took so long?

AWESOME update!
Pams!!

Come What May 06-03-2007 04:48 AM

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Originally Posted by Samia (Post 5136856)
Yay! Go Draco..!!...hehehe nice Post.

any yeahI am readingHidden Love at the moment.! Harry looks good so far!!Lol!

P.s am sorry i wrote your name worng..wasa silly mistake.. Sorry Emma.

Thanks hun! Hidden Love my first ever FF! *sigh*
It's okay hun! To be honest I thought that was your name! So what is your name?


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Originally Posted by Mari of the Ocean (Post 5136873)
Awesome post Emma!!!
Draco has some sirius problems asking out Hermione!!
hehehehe
PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS:clown: :clown:

Thanks Mari!
Draco was just nervouse!


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Originally Posted by hp_lvr01 (Post 5136920)
awww cute :loved: haha draco's so slick :xd:

-Bells

Yeah! Draco has some moves! LOL!

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Originally Posted by MalfoyzBeloved (Post 5136963)

:rotfl:

FINALLY! Sheesh Draco, what took so long?

AWESOME update!
Pams!!

He was waiting for Hermione to corner him! LOL!

Love,
Emma

Samia 06-03-2007 04:57 AM

I am on the last chapters at the moment..The cruise is happening.. still wondering If Pter is going to Hijack or something hehe.or much worse ask Hermione to marry him.. hehe

Well Samia here...


EDIT: myGod is Peter going to give his life..you like Titanic a lot dont you!! hehe


Another Edit... Running to the squel!!!!!!!!

HP1FAN2004 06-03-2007 01:41 PM

hey awesome post...PAMS soon

live-the-lie 06-03-2007 01:45 PM

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“No you asked me to basically prove to you if you had a brain”.

“No I did not!” Draco snapped.
^^hehe AWESOME post!! :D^^

ylprincess 06-03-2007 09:56 PM

sorry i have been so late in reading but it is wonderful...pams~!

Michiko 06-03-2007 10:37 PM

OMG. *squee*

Emma, you don't know me but i love you. XD after reading this story that is

i love it so much, and its not that often that harry's concidered a jerk (even if i like harry this is an awesome twist)

Sorry if im so late, but I'm a new reader of yours *subscribes* i read all of it an im all caught up. i feel proud

and my rating of Draco just went up cauze of you!! =D

*sighs* poor Ron, who does he get *laughs* the sidekick deserves some love tooo *huggles ron*

Hermy99 06-04-2007 11:03 AM

wow that was so awsome!

Artist-2-Be 06-04-2007 03:07 PM

YAY! Great update Emma! :woot: Yes! Drakey finally asked Herm-own-ninny out! :upside: Can't wait for the next one!

PAMSOID

Jen

Come What May 06-04-2007 05:50 PM

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Originally Posted by Artist-2-Be (Post 5143965)
YAY! Great update Emma! :woot: Yes! Drakey finally asked Herm-own-ninny out! :upside: Can't wait for the next one!

PAMSOID

Jen

Actually Hermione kinda made Draco make the move but Draco did finally ask! LOL!

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Originally Posted by Hermy99 (Post 5143017)
wow that was so awsome!

Thanks hun! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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Originally Posted by Michiko (Post 5140559)
OMG. *squee*

Emma, you don't know me but i love you. XD after reading this story that is

i love it so much, and its not that often that harry's concidered a jerk (even if i like harry this is an awesome twist)

Sorry if im so late, but I'm a new reader of yours *subscribes* i read all of it an im all caught up. i feel proud

and my rating of Draco just went up cauze of you!! =D

*sighs* poor Ron, who does he get *laughs* the sidekick deserves some love tooo *huggles ron*

Hello there my new reader! I'm super happy to get new readers! Welcome to the family!
I'm glad you like my story! And it's true...not many FF have Harry as the jerk! LOL!
I'm glad you think differently of Draco now! YAY!
Ron...hmmm...maybe he will get some love. But I can't promise you anything!


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Originally Posted by ylprincess (Post 5140412)
sorry i have been so late in reading but it is wonderful...pams~!

It's okay darling!:)

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Originally Posted by live-the-lie (Post 5138333)
^^hehe AWESOME post!! :D^^

Thanks hun!

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Originally Posted by HP1FAN2004 (Post 5138320)
hey awesome post...PAMS soon

Thanks! I will post soon!

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Originally Posted by Samia (Post 5137041)
I am on the last chapters at the moment..The cruise is happening.. still wondering If Pter is going to Hijack or something hehe.or much worse ask Hermione to marry him.. hehe

Well Samia here...


EDIT: myGod is Peter going to give his life..you like Titanic a lot dont you!! hehe


Another Edit... Running to the squel!!!!!!!!

Lots of edits there! LOL! I'm glad your enjoying this FF as well as my other ones! It makes me feel happy!
Samia is such a pretty name! I like it!
I love Titanic! I watch it all the time! And I cry everytime!

Love,
Emma


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