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06-24-2006, 09:13 PM
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| Sirius human side K.o. Lupin's Marauder Spirit Imp
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Alekleh Thorstein First | Back Home - Sa9+ Back Home Disclaimer : Guess what? The characters belong to J.K. Rowling. By the way, English is not my mother tongue(I'm French). So forgive me if my English's poor. I just hope it won't prevent you from enjoying this fic...
He somehow knew. He was somehow prepared. But still, he couldn't face it. He couldn't face the truth whispering slowly at his ear, the cold wind despite the season. Draco Malfoy was standing there, hidden behind a mask, surrounded by lies.
Because that was what they were : lies. Living lies. Simple puppets existing through an illusion of superiority. And he was one of them. He was the enemy. He couldn't understand what happened to him, to what he used to be, to who he used to be. Despite his fierce, arrogant attitude, Hogwarts used to be his home, not the other side, like an iron giant staring coldly at him.
It reminded him of all these years before the war. When all he had to worry about was Quidditch, and making Potter's life a living hell. Well, looking at his hollowed face and his dull eyes, he somehow succeeded, but not the way he wanted to. He wanted these years back. This feeling of warmth, like a Christmas day. With hope and joy glowing in everyone's eyes.
And that's why he took off his mask and told students and teachers, the other side, Hogwarts, his family, 'I'm back home.'
And that's why he smiled as he saw a green light. Thanks for reading. There will be another chapter.
__________________ -I had a flamingo with lagoons flying over it.-    I live in a place called Earth. And it's not a cry that you hear at night, it's not somebody who's seen the light... |
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06-25-2006, 08:55 PM
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| Red Cap
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Yay! Please post more soon. Even though English is not your first language you did an awesome job with spelling and grammer. keep it up.
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06-27-2006, 12:43 PM
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| JPFC's 100th Member Twins prank master Mooncalf
Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: x.X at the beach x.X
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katie Kay |
i loved it plz write more
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06-30-2006, 10:14 AM
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| Sirius human side K.o. Lupin's Marauder Spirit Imp
Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Where the cheese is
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Alekleh Thorstein First | Thanks! Now, here goes the second and last chapter. Hope you'll enjoy it.
He had waited seven years for this day to come. Today would be the end of the war. Maybe the end of his life. Maybe the end of everyone's life.
He was tired. He couldn't stand the sound of fatality, screaming at his ear. It was a sunny day. A sad day.
He recognized someone among the dark figures he had to face. Someone whose eyes were filled with fear. Grey eyes behind a white mask.
Draco Malfoy.
He had finally made his choice.
It reminded him of his life before the war. When Hogwarts was his home, and not a battle field. When Hogwarts was his family, and not a graveyard.
He could remember this feeling of warmth. Just like a Christmas day. He could remember how everyone in Hogwarts was a member of his family. Even the ones he hated, even the ones he had never cared about.
And just like everyone, he wanted these years back.
And that's why he smiled as he saw Draco take off his mask and say :
'I'm back home.'
And that's why he cried as he saw a green light. Thanks for reading.
__________________ -I had a flamingo with lagoons flying over it.-    I live in a place called Earth. And it's not a cry that you hear at night, it's not somebody who's seen the light... |
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06-30-2006, 02:43 PM
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| Keeper of Ginny's AttitudeBatty Bella Knarl
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Dancing in the rain.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Tara Elizabeth Kensington |
wow i love dit but is that all of it???
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07-01-2006, 04:41 AM
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| Sirius human side K.o. Lupin's Marauder Spirit Imp
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Alekleh Thorstein First |
Yes, that's all
At first, it was supposed to be a one shot, though...
__________________ -I had a flamingo with lagoons flying over it.-    I live in a place called Earth. And it's not a cry that you hear at night, it's not somebody who's seen the light... |
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07-02-2006, 06:38 PM
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| Red-head Ginny Fan James' Pranks K.o. Lupin's Loyalty Firecrab
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Sitting........On the rocky coast of Maine.......my nose burried in a novel.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katie Weasley Second |
I like it! It's really good!
__________________ ~Katie and Nathan (The Current Weasley Twins)~ "Families are like fudge... mostly sweet with a few nuts." - unknown. "Piper, this is completely illegal!" -Leo Wyatt, Charmed
"Yeah? Well, so is marrying a dead guy, okay? [She holds up his death certificate] Let's not get technical now!" -Piper Halliwell, Charmed. |
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07-02-2006, 07:21 PM
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| Sirius human side K.o. Lupin's Marauder Spirit Imp
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Alekleh Thorstein First |
Thanks
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07-10-2006, 01:55 AM
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| JPFC's 100th Member Twins prank master Mooncalf
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katie Kay | hican u keep posting ur chapters coz i love them |
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