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Ohmigod, I only just started reading the first line and I had me gripped, holding tightly onto the end of my seat. This is so good.
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Chapter 1, Part 5- The Creatures
“Sirius has more of a place than you do, Riddle,” Harry continued, his hand steadier than ever, never faulting compared to his counter-parts, quivering with rage. “You have no place in this world,” Harry said again to Voldemort, “You will never have a place in this world.”
“I will make a new world, Harry,” Voldemort hissed, “A world that will be the down fall of the Chosen One, and of all muggle-lovers alike.”
“You won’t have the time.”
A slight rumbling and snorting could be heard just beyond the cage, a dark blanket swept over the scene, the only light, radiating from the cage. The air was thick and fear could almost be unbearable.
“A man, a great wizard once told me that people often believe what they fear is what other people fear, he spoke the truth. You fear Death and Darkness, but not all of us do, Voldemort. Not all of us do.”
Voldemort remained silent. He knew that the end was near, something he had never known before and he, was afraid.
“So you see, Voldemort, you’re finished.”
The grunting grew louder as the creatures moved forwards, snorting every now and again. A roar was heard at a distance and Harry said, “I might not be able to kill you, but they are. And they’re good.” | |
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Wow Lena! I'm really glad that you liked it 
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Hehe. You're welcome. Nice post just then. I love it!
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Chapter 1- Part 6-Past Memories
The creatures emerged into Voldemort’s line of sight and he visibly shuddered. They were looked skeletal and almost robotic. They had black skin over rippling muscles and luminous green eyes. The creatures were almost dream-like, nightmarish. They were ready to kill. Something that Voldemort feared.
In Voldemort’s distraction, he didn’t noticed what Harry was about to do.
“Expelliarmus!”
“Stupefy!”
“Perifius Totalus!”
Harry threw every spell he could think off at the old wizard and he didn’t know what hit him. Unfortunately he wasn’t completely defenceless yet. Harry pulled out the last thing in his arsenal when all else had failed to expose Tom Riddle as the ancient man that he truly was.
“Sectumsempra!” Harry whispered at the Dark Lord and he shrieked, the effects of the spells working on him slowly. “Go,” Harry whispered and the creatures lunged forwards.
“Avada Kedavra!” shouted Voldemort frantically. That was something Harry wasn’t expecting. As the green light flashed in his eyes, he didn’t know what had hit him. Harry died before he could take another breath.
Voldemort, however, shrieked until his end. When they died something happened to the surrounding area. All of Harry’s holographic images of his friends disappeared. The darkness of the cave left the memory slightly and the creatures disappeared.
“It had to be,” said Dumbledore before he left the memory one last time.
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And that would be the end of my version of the Deathly Hallows....hopefully no spoliers!  I wouldn't know seeing as I haven't read it yet.
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Chapter 1-The Last Stand The Arrival The one with the power to vanquish the Dark Lord approaches.
Born to those who have thrice defied him, born as the seventh month dies
and the Dark Lord will mark him as his equal,
but he will have power the Dark Lord knows not and either must die at the hand of the other for
neither can live while the other survives. A lightning crack filled the air on the stormy shore. He had dark messy hair and bottle green eyes, he also had a lightning shaped scar on his forehead and round glasses. Harry Potter stood on the shore not too far from the cave that he was led to by Albus Dumbledore, the greatest wizard, the only one the Dark Lord ever feared. Where he had sacrificed himself for a mere boy. Harry stood on the hard floor of the cave, nothing seemed to have changed, and the memory was still vivid. A tear rolled down the seventeen year olds face and he hastily wiped it away. He had to keep on track. Harry walked towards the space that held the door into the cave and just like his hero, placed his hand on it. Blood was what was needed and Harry dutifully slit his hand letting the blood drop onto the stone that marked the entrance. The doorway was revealed and as it slid away Harry stepped into the familiar space that had haunted his dreams for so long.
None of it surprised him. He had seen it all before. Harry made his way carefully around the black lake to the boat that was tied of close to the edge. He carefully stepped into the boat, his presence registered by the magic that he processed. The boat gently rocked from side to side as he was floated across the space to the little island that he had been attacked by Inferi. The boat rocked a little more violently as an object broke the surface, the lake was still inhabited by them. He wasn’t afraid, just anxious for what he would find on the island. He knew Voldemort was defenceless, Harry had destroyed all of his Horcruxces but he wasn’t sure if the Dark Lord knew it too.
Harry took a deep breath, he was on the island. The boy stepped out of the slightly rocking boat careful not to touch the water around him. There was the pedestal, just as it was before but it no longer glowed with a greenish light. Now it was a shimmering reflection of white light. It was some what comforting. Harry moved towards it and looked into the shimmering contents. It was a pensive. The swirling thoughts glowed a brilliant white and Harry knew the Dark Lord was waiting for him. Harry reached into his pocket and pulled out something wrapped in plastic and set it down at the foot of the pedestal. A sherbet Lemon, Dumbledore’s favourite muggle sweet. Harry smiled at the package wistfully and then turned his attention back to the pensive.
He knew he had to go in and he didn’t have a choice. Harry dived into the memories head first. It was the cave. It must have been the first time that the orphanage had gone on a field trip, there were a number of small children in the distance and what looked like Tom Riddle tormenting two children. “Hello Harry,” a voice said. How considerate of you to visit my memory.” The Encounter Harry turned his gaze on the present day Tom Riddle. His ghostly white face and blood red eyes contrasted to the image of a handsome young boy. “It’s a shame that you are alone, isn’t it Harry?” The Dark Lord said walking around Harry, stroking his face. Pain seared his skin, bringing tears to his eyes but he held them back. He wouldn’t be weak any longer.
“Your time’s up, Voldemort,” Harry replied his voice steady and unmoving as Voldemort stepped around him once more a light his eyes that cautioned him.
“I doubt that Harry. Dumbledore couldn’t kill me and neither can you. You’re just a little boy, Harry. A little boy who thinks he’s a man.” The slits that formed his nose widened as the half-man took in a breath. “Love can’t save you Harry, not any more.”
Harry remained silent. It was all a game to him. Voldemort just wanted to bring him down, but he wasn’t going to let that happen, he was going to stay strong. “I’m older, Riddle,” Harry almost smiled as Voldemorts’ face turned to anger.
“I renounced that name years ago, filth!” He screamed his voice rising, echoing off the walls of the cave while his younger self cackled after the other two children. “You are nothing but a child!” He continued to shriek what remaining colour in his face drained. “Crucio.”
Harry began to jerk, his arms failing about his eyes rolling into the back of his head, his face white, but he did not scream he wasn’t going to give Voldemort the satisfaction. Harry stopped shaking suddenly. He took in a few deep breaths then got to his feet, “Nice try,” he said almost smiling while he drew his was secretively out of his pocket.
“That is just a taste of what I can do to you, Potter.” Voldemort said. “I would just kill you now, but I’m having fun.”
“As am I.” Harry replied waiting for the tell tale signs of movement. Voldemorts' eyes flashed and his fingers twitched. It was all Harry needed.
“Avada Kedavra!”
“Rippersesp!” Harry shouted in reply. Once again a cage of golden light surrounded them, forming an intricate shield from all around them.
“You won’t escape me this time Potter!”
“I’m not trying to.” The Smoke As the cage surrounded them both completely a bar of red light appeared along a string between their wands. Harry’s wand began to shake but he kept his hand steady, as did Voldemort. Soon both wizards’ hands were shaking violently each trying to keep steady, forcing the bar of light along to the others wand.
Harry had a plan. He slowly let some of the pressure off his wand and as his hand shook the bar came closer and closer. Harry occasionally fought back more; his wand was bending making him fear that it would break.
“See Potter? You are weak.” Voldemort said as the red bar slid down the golden string and was sucked into his wand.
“We’ll see,” Harry replied an excruciating smirk on his face. “We’ll see Uno- Poo.” Harry’s wand began to whistle loudly causing Voldemort to put his free hand to his ear. Harry waited as smoky figures began to climb out of his wand, and pat him on the back then turning to face Voldemort.
The Golden string of light remained unbroken as one by one the figures walked forwards, straight at Voldemort.
The wizard’s face froze in shock and horror as Sirius Black, Remus Lupin, Albus Dumbledore, James Potter, Lilly Potter, Nymphadora Tonks, Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger faced him off.
“What?” stammered Voldemort in disbelief. He had only seen these people two years ago, some two months and yet their smoke re-incarnations stood there in front of him.
“Miss me, Voldy?” Sirius said to the startled wizard, clutching his wand tightly. The Trap
Not all of them were dead. That Harry knew, but the spell he had used was one Hermione had created. It conjured up a hologram of the people that you loved or the people you inspire to be. Sirius was definitely both. Harry’s godfather; just taken away from him.
“Now you’ve got no where to run, Voldemort,” Harry said still holding the cage intact as his apparitions stood guard against him leaving.
“No where,” Sirius repeated, the only one out of position. He walked around Voldemort, his own smoky wand buried in the wizard’s neck.
Voldemort cringed but he couldn’t do anything about it, Sirius was still dead, that’s what mattered. He had to keep his wand steady until the right moment came, when he knew he could make it out.
“You never thought it would end like this did you Voldy?” Sirius asked, “Trapped by a seventeen year old and a crew of smoke wizards.”
“SHUT UP!” Roared Voldemort, unwittingly loosing all focus on the scene beyond the cage; missing his way of escape. “You’re dead, Black! A blood traitor killed by his own cousin! You have no place in this world!”
“You’re wrong,” Harry said coolly. The hot-tempered, uncontrollable Harry Potter was gone now. Only Harry remained. The Creatures “Sirius has more of a place than you do, Riddle,” Harry continued, his hand steadier than ever, never faulting compared to his counter-parts, quivering with rage. “You have no place in this world,” Harry said again to Voldemort, “You will never have a place in this world.”
“I will make a new world, Harry,” Voldemort hissed, “A world that will be the down fall of the Chosen One, and of all muggle-lovers alike.”
“You won’t have the time.”
A slight rumbling and snorting could be heard just beyond the cage, a dark blanket swept over the scene, the only light, radiating from the cage. The air was thick and fear could almost be unbearable.
“A man, a great wizard once told me that people often believe what they fear is what other people fear, he spoke the truth. You fear Death and Darkness, but not all of us do, Voldemort. Not all of us do.”
Voldemort remained silent. He knew that the end was near, something he had never known before and he, was afraid.
“So you see, Voldemort, you’re finished.”
The grunting grew louder as the creatures moved forwards, snorting every now and again. A roar was heard at a distance and Harry said, “I might not be able to kill you, but they are. And they’re good.” Past Memories The creatures emerged into Voldemort’s line of sight and he visibly shuddered. They were looked skeletal and almost robotic. They had black skin over rippling muscles and luminous green eyes. The creatures were almost dream-like, nightmarish. They were ready to kill. Something that Voldemort feared.
In Voldemort’s distraction, he didn’t noticed what Harry was about to do.
“Expelliurmus!”
“Stupefy!”
“Perifius Totalus!”
Harry threw every spell he could think off at the old wizard and he didn’t know what hit him. Unfortunately he wasn’t completely defenceless yet. Harry pulled out the last thing in his arsenal when all else had failed to expose Tom Riddle as the ancient man that he truly was.
“Sectumsempra!” Harry whispered at the Dark Lord and he shrieked, the effects of the spells working on him slowly. “Go,” Harry whispered and the creatures lunged forwards.
“Avada Kedavra!” shouted Voldemort frantically. That was something Harry wasn’t expecting. As the green light flashed in his eyes, he didn’t know what had hit him. Harry died before he could take another breath.
Voldemort, however, shrieked until his end. When they died something happened to the surrounding area. All of Harry’s holographic images of his friends disappeared. The darkness of the cave left the memory slightly and the creatures disappeared.
“It had to be,” said Dumbledore before he left the memory one last time.
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Lari, I just love your story, so much.
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Wow that was Awsome Lari!! I cant believe harry dies just like that! THis story is Great!!! Was that it or are you going to write more???
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Originally Posted by emma_rlz  Lari, I just love your story, so much.
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Lena xXx Aw thanks Lena! Quote:
Originally Posted by MUSTANG SALLY Wow that was Awsome Lari!! I cant believe harry dies just like that! THis story is Great!!! Was that it or are you going to write more???
*Steph* Thanks Steph!  It seemed fitting...in a way
I'll write more You'll never know what hit you! 
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Chapter 2, Part 1
As the day’s light faded from the sky above, a cloaked figure stood in the rain-drenched alley; clutching an arm in pain. The boy’s pale, sunken face, hidden behind the cloak’s hood twisted in agony while he pulled back the sleeve of his robes. With a gasp he stepped backwards and his hood fell off, him revealing his dark chocolate hair and emerald green eyes. Quickly he pulled down his sleeve and covered his face once more before he spun slowly on the spot, disappearing suddenly.
He was in a forest, the tall, thick-trunked trees towering over him. The boy did not bother to don his mask and he strode quickly to the clearing only a short walk from where he stood. It had rained recently and the leaves gave off the scent of rainwater and grass.
As the clearing emerged into his sight, the boy stepped more carefully over the branches protecting the clearing. A curious feeling washed over him as he stepped out into the light which illuminated his pale face within his clothing.
A few figures stood close together in the clearing, talking in quick hurried voices, glancing around now and again. With a start one of the wizards noticed his presence and hurried to join him.
“You found the clearing easily I see, Ivan” he said glancing down at him, looking for injuries. “I think there is something that you must see,” with that, he spun on the spot and motioned frantically to a small creature wearing an old black wrap, which squeaked and hurried over immediately.
“My house-elf,” he said quickly responding to Ivan’s raised eyebrows. The man held out his hand for something and the house elf obliged with a small vial.
“It seems,” he continued, “that the Dark Lord had left you something, Ivan. A memory, to be precise.”
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OOOOHHH!!!!!
What is the memory I wonder....
For a second I thought you were describing Harry. I was like YAY! Then I read Ivan's name and was like darn 
Great post Lari!
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Oh dear, I missed so many chapters! *hits on head* I'm so sorry, Lari...I'm now back, reading this awesome FF!
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Chapter 2, Part 2
The sky clouded and darkness dawned over Ivan, he could hear footsteps approaching him. Ivan made no move to hide but waited as a figure emerged out of the shadows, striding swiftly towards him.
The Dark Lord, didn’t not look as Ivan had remembered him. His face was not yet snake-like and gaunt as it was at the height of his power, but his skin had already become sallow and his eyes glinted crimson. There was something in his square jaw and pointed nose that made it seem as though he was once handsome.
Curious, Ivan followed the Dark Lord through the alleyways until he heard a distant noise.
Voldemort glanced in the direction inquisitively and changed his path, making for the sound instead.
As he rounded the corner, Ivan tried to keep up with the Dark Lord and suddenly, he stopped. Once again he heard footsteps and Ivan peered around the corner again. A chortle issued from behind a rubbish bin and a box lifted up into the air, spinning around aimlessly. Again, Ivan heard something giggle.
Voldemort had his wand in hand and he moved the bin carefully, as though expecting something to attack him. A baby lay in a little basket on the ground apparently levitating a box with its magic.
Simultaneously, the Dark Lord and Ivan stepped back, stunned by the thought of a child using magic so far beyond its years.
The baby cooed and suddenly the box turned a shade of bright green.
Ivan’s eye’s widened; he had never seen a child use such magic without any effort.
Voldemort was as astonished as he was, and approached the child carefully, slipping a hand beneath the child’s animated body as he picked it up. The memory began to fade; Voldemort was still looking down at the little baby.
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Who was the baby!!
Hmmm I might know
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Chapter 2, Part 3
Black, darkness surrounded Ivan momentarily before another memory began to bleed into his vision. He was staring at a small child that seemed vaguely familiar, his head stretched back as though he was looking at something twice his height.
Ivan twisted around, trying to take in the space but he could see nothing but the child in front of him, the boy’s face was so familiar...His back was against a wall making it impossible for him to move in the space. Ivan felt trapped and a sense of fear crept over him slowly.
A loud bang and clatter made Ivan shudder. The boy spun around, his eyes fixed on the bright light of the doorway now in front of them. A dark silhouette walked forwards into the room and steered the boy out of it.
Following behind, Ivan was reprimanding himself for his foolishness, he was only in a memory and he had gotten scared!
They were walking swiftly down a dimly lit hallway, the white paint on the walls beginning to peel off. The child seemed to be walking with difficulty, the man’s hand cutting into his shoulder. The man pushed the child out in front of him and through a door, the boy stumbling slightly. | |
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