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Didn't took too long, did it? Tell me what you think.

Chapter 27 part 5 cont.

The night had passed and a really hot and sunny summer day had begun but Ginny Potter was never less thrilled to see the sun rising; for that meant that her son's time was running out. According to Teddy's calculations it would be impossible for James' body to keep resisting the poison for more than twelve hours. He only had until noon and that was the best case senario.
And Harry hadn't returned home last night. It seemed to her that he couldn't bring himself to face her. And she knew that he had made a choice that he was afraid to tell her because he wasn't sure if she could handle it...and she dreaded that he hadn't chosen James.
Those thoughts were crossing Ginny's mind as she was holding her son's hair back while he was throwing up, bent over his bed into a basin his mother had placed next to it. She wiped his mouth and helped him lay back to his pillows, whispering words of consolation in his ear. When James looked at her, he looked like all life had drained from him already. He was exhausted from the cough and from throwing up and dazzled from the fever, so much he couldn't keep his eyes open. She didn't know what to do; how could she help him? How could she take the pain away? She got really worried every time one of her kids would get sick, but this was different and way worse than just that. She just couldn't handle seeing James slowly dying in front of her eyes. And Harry wasn't there...why wasn't he there?
The door behind her opened and she turned eagerly and for a split of second as she saw the jet black hair she thought it was her husband; but it was Albus followed by Lily.
"Mum?" Albus said. "What's going on?"
"What's wrong with James?" Lily asked as they both approached the bed.
"Your brother is sick", she said, turning her face away so she could wipe her tears without them seeing her. "Quite sick".
Lily climbed the bed and sat next to her mother looking down at her brother.
"But he's gonna be okay when we leave for Hogwarts in a couple of weeks, right?" she asked.
"Yeah, sure", Ginny lied and Lily sighed relieved but Albus was looking at his mother unconvinced and Ginny knew he sensed that there was something else that was wrong with James.
"But mum..." Albus started but stopped as James opened his eyes and looked at them.
"Hey, big brother", Lily grinned and bent over him to kiss his cheek.
"Hey", he smiled.
"Guys maybe you should get out and let your brother rest..." Ginny started saying.
"No", James said with a drown voice. "Let them stay mum, please".
"Fine", Ginny nodded stroking his cheek.
All the power of Albus' intuition was telling him that there was something wrong, but he chose not to express his worries and walked closer to James' bed and clutched his hand. His brother turned slowly to look at him.
"You look awful", Albus commented and James laughed.
"Still looking better than you though, Al", he said and the boy grinned. Then James looked around and when he didn't find what he was looking for, turned to his mother. "Where's dad?" he asked her.
"I don't know", she said.
"But I want him here", James said. He wanted all of them there; if he was going to die and he knew he would, he wanted his family to be with him. And more than anything he wanted his father to be with him; because his father was the strongest person he knew and he wanted to drain courage from him in order to keep his terror away.
"I know you do, honey", Ginny said. "He'll be here soon".
Or at least I hope so, she added in her head.

Harry was following the man in front of him without paying much attention to where he was leading him. They walked deeper and deeper into the unknown forest and Harry was thinking every step he was taking. He knew what that would mean. He knew that this wasn't what greater men than him would have done; not what Dumbledore would have done.
But he kept walking. He kept walking behind Dolohov for the same reason he had freed him. For the same reason he had taken the book away from the Ministry and had agreed to meet Artemis. For the same reason he was going to give her the book. And it was a rather simple reason actually: he loved his son. He loved James and he couldn't let him die not matter what the boy said.
He didn't care much about what would happen to his career neither about what the wizarding world would think of him. He was only hesitating bacause he knew that if they managed to do it, to bring Voldemort back, then there was the possibility that he would lose all of them. So he would have to stop them before they bring him back but for now...for now he had to help them. Dolohov came into a halt and Harry stopped too. There behind some trees was Artemis, looking at him with that irritating smile craved upon her face.

Tears were running down Ginny' face as she and Albus were trying to stop James from screaming and wriggling. It's been like that for the last quarter. Pain had completely taken over the boy and he just couldn't fight it anymore. Ginny had sent Lily away but Albus wasn't leaving no matter what his mother said.
"Honey, please stop, everything will be okay", Ginny said to James, but she wasn't sure he could even hear her and even if he could she knew that those were just empty words.
After a while James suddenly stopped screaming and became quiet. For a moment Ginny feared for the worst but he wasn't dead. He had passed out from the pain. Albus looked at his mother.
"What's wrong with him?" he asked her and Ginny knew that Albus wouldn't believe what she had told Lily; not after what he saw.
"They had planted something inside him...the Death Eaters...and now it's killing him", she told him and the boy brought his hands to his mouth.
"He's going to die", he whispered and it wasn't a question, it was a realization. Ginny didn't say anything, she just looked down at her older son, stroking his face. No, he wouldn't die. Her son wouldn't die. She couldn't allow herself to think of something like that. She had lost a brother during the last war, she couldn't lose a son in this one; she wouldn't survive it.
The door opened again and Ginny turned to tell Lily that she should get out, she shouldn't be there for this. But it wasn't Lily.
"Where the hell have you been?" she yelled at her husband standing up from the bed and walking to him. He didn't answer her, he only looked at James.
"Tell me he's still alive", he said as he rushed to his side.
"He is", Albus told him and Harry exhaled relieved; then he retreated a small purple bottle from his robes.
"Hold him up, Al", he told the boy and Albus hurried to do as his father said.
Harry opened the bottle and placed it on James' lips, slowly making the boy take a sip from whatever was in there.
"What is that?" Ginny asked him as Harry was keeping James' mouth shut with his hand in order for him to swallow. Harry didn't answer her until James had drunk all of it. Then he gestured Albus to let the boy lay back down and stood up to look at her.
"It was the antidote", he told her looking straight into her eyes. Her chest rose and fell rapidly.
"You gave them the book?" she asked him.
"Yes", he nodded.
"So if we don't stop them they will be able to bring You-Know-Who back?"
"Yes", he said and behind him Albus gasped.
"James will be okay now though?"
"Yes", he said and looked back at the boy. "At least I hope so", he added and turned to look at her again.
She was looking at him with that blazing look he loved so much but he wasn't sure what she thought of him now and of what he had done. But the next moment she had walked to him and hugged him tightly.
"Thank you", she told him as tears run down her face. "I thought...I thought you wouldn't...you would let him..."
"There was no way", he said and she hugged him even more tightly.
"Dad? Mum?" Albus said and they turned. James had just stirred and turned his head to look at them.
"What happened?" he asked them. Ginny sighed relieved; he already seemed better and color was returning to his face. Harry let go of her and sat back next to his son.
"How are you feeling?" he asked him.
"Ten minutes ago I would tell you that I was about to die but now I don't know...I think...I think I feel better" he said looking slightly confused.
"You're not gonna die, you're gonna be okay", Harry said and then sighed. "I gave you the antidote".
James stared at him for a few moments trying to take what he said in. And then he started shaking his head, his eyes welling up.
"Dad, what did you do?" he said and wincing a little he sat up. "I told you not to do it!"
"James..."
"You gave them the book?"
But before Harry could say anything Ginny walked next to them and looked at her son.
"James above everything we're your parents and we have to protect you anyway we can! And that's what your father did".
"But mum don't you understand...?"
"Trust me, honey, I undestand way better than you do what might happen because I have live it once already", she told him. "But even if you died they would find another plan to take the book then and they would finally succeed and then how would we have the strength to fight them, if we had lost you?"
"But..."
"Yes, James they took the book, but now we can fight them, together all of us and make sure thay won't bring him back", Ginny finished and James looked from her to his father.
"What about your job?" he asked him and Harry sighed.
"I don't know" he replied. "We'll see".
"Dad..."
"I couldn't lose you Jamie", Harry told him and the boy hugged him.
"At least we'll get rid of the aurors in the house", Ginny said and Harry laughed. "Don't laugh, they were getting on my nerves and eating my chocolates!"
"Um...mum?" James said. "You mean that white box with pralines dad brought?"
"Yeah..."
"I ate those".

When Harry walked into the kitchen holding Ginny's hand he came face to face with Hermione standing there with six aurors behind her. Her eyes were all welled up and she seemed really upset.
"What's wrong?" Ginny asked her but she was looking at Harry.
"Are you here to arrest me, Hermione?" he asked her.
"No", Hermione replied. "Althought the only reason the Minister won't do that is because he's worried that the wizarding world will turn against him. I'm here to tell you that you're no longer an auror. You're fired".

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Yayyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!! James is okay!!!!!!! Oh, but wait Harry is fired?!?!!??!!?!? FIRED?!?!?!!?!?!?!? And now who's gonna stop them from bringing Voldie back??? PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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SO GOOD!! so happy James' ok but no what about Voldie and crazy Artimis surely the ministry could see that Harry was right to do what he did *sigh*

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Here I am again!!!!!!

Chapter 28

4 MONTHS LATER

Nothing. Nothing happened for almost four months. No sign of Apostollo or the Death Eaters, no attacks no anything. It was like they had vanished from the face of the earth. The Daily Prophet and the Ministry supported that they had given up and that they wouldn't hear from them again.
Harry knew though that it wasn't true. Artemis was just too ambitious to give up like this, especially after she took the book. That was exactly what he thought they were doing; trying to figure the book's instructions out, trying to translate the spells. There was just no other explanation. And as the days stretched into weeks and the weeks into months he was getting more and more worried; this silence was scaring him. It was like the stillness before the storm.
In the mean time the kids had gone back to Hogwarts. It was hard to be separated from them after everything that happened during the summer, especially from James, but at least they were safe there. In their letters they appeared to be fine and to be enjoying their return, even if their letters were more frequent than any other year. However the time for them to come back home was almost there as Christmas, Ginny and Hermione's favourite holiday, approached. And Harry just couldn't wait to have all of them, James, Albus, Lily, Rose and Hugo back.
Meanwhile Ginny had gotten huge and according to Teddy she should be having the baby any day now. She wasn't very patient about it though, since she had gotten pretty tired of her pregnancy and now that it was about to end she was driving everyone around her crazy. Harry didn't mind though. He spent all of his day at home now since he didn't have a job anymore and he was certain that if he didn't have Ginny's requests and complains he would be bored to death. Hermione was now their only connection inside the Ministry and to what was really happening, since Harry didn't let her quit when he got fired, but she didn't seem to have any exciting news; only that the auror office seemed to be falling apart without Harry and that they all missed him very much.
He missed his job too. It wasn't a matter of money, they had money, but being an auror was something he used to do since he was seventeen and it had somehow become part of his existence. But he wasn't worried. He knew that once Artemis attacked again the Minister wouldn't be able to stick to his decision and he would call him back in action; Hermione thought that he would be forced to do it sooner, since the entire wizarding world had turned against him for firing their Chosen One.
And as December came Ginny and Harry were counting the days until their kids would come. And finally the day came. Harry and Ron would be going to the train station to pick them up since Hermione had to be at work and Ginny was just too huge to come along (something she complaint about for a couple of hours).
"Oh, God, they're growing so fast!" Ron sighed as he and Harry were waiting for them. "Did we used to grow that fast?"
"No, Ron, it's a new ability our kids have!" Harry laughed.
"Hey, don't mock me, mate! I'm right and you know it! I mean Hugo, my Hugo, it's in his third year!"
"Lily is in her third year too", Harry shrugged.
"Remember our third year?" Ron grinned.
"Vaguely", Harry said. "Wasn't the year I thought Sirius was a madman who wanted to kill me?"
"That was the one", Ron nodded. "Seven years at Hogwarts and we never had a normal and quiet one".
"You're wrong", Harry said and Ron raised his eyebrows. "We never went back for the seventh year", Harry explained and Ron laughed.
"Right, we went camping all over England".
"Yeah", Harry laughed. "And it was really fun if you leave out the Death Eaters, the Horcruxes, the Hallows, dragons..."
"Yeah, yeah, I got the idea, I was there!" Ron stopped him and Harry laughed. "Hey, do you remember that girlfriend Malfoy had at school? I think I run across her the other day and I just couldn't recall her name. What was it?"
"Pansy Parkinson", a voice behind them said. Harry and Ron both turned to see Malfoy waking up to them. "Her name was Pansy Parkinson", he said again.
"Right", Ron nodded.
"Hey", Harry said.
"Hey", Malfoy said back.
"Are you here to pick up Scorpius?" Ron asked him.
"Yeah", he nodded. "Guess you're picking up your kids?"
"No, we just love trains", Ron said ironically.
"That sounds like something I would say", Draco said narrowing his eyes.
"I think they're here", Harry said as kids were emerging out of the wall among platforms nine and ten.
"Ten galleons that Hugo is almost as tall as I am", Ron said searching for them.

Ginny was trying to cook lunch but it wasn't all that easy with her enormous belly getting in the way. She was really sick of being pregnant. She was tired of having morning sickness and Harry's overprotective attitude was getting on her nerves. Although if she wanted to be honest with herself it was easier this time because he was around all the time, ready to satisfy her craziest wishes and she had to admit that she would miss taking full advantage of her husband any time she wanted when they would call him back to work. But she knew that he couldn't keep staying home all the time, he wasn't happy and when he wasn't happy she wasn't happy, but still she would miss having him there anytime she wanted him.
She jumped out of her thoughts when Hermione apparated next to her with a loud pop.
"Hermione!" she yelled irritated. "You scared the hell out of me!"
"Sorry Gin", Hermione said. "Are they here yet?"
"No", she replied. "But they will be here soon", she added looking at the clock behind Hermione's head. "I thought you had to work".
"Yeah, I thought so too", she shrugged. "But there was nothing to do really".
"No sign of that sea turtle then, huh?"
"You mean Artemis?" Hermione asked.
"Yeah".
"And why do you call her a sea turtle? What do you have against sea turtles?" Hermione asked intrigued.
"Hermione, do you have any news or not?" Ginny said tiredly.
"Not", Hermione replied. "You think she gave up?"
"Please", Ginny said ironically as she put salt on the chicken. "She wouldn't. She's just too far demented to do so, believe me. Let me tell you something if we ever..."
"GIN!" Hermione yelled clutching her hand.
"What?"
"You almost spilled the entire salt on the food!"
"Oh, man!" Ginny said irritated. "Great! The kids will be home any minute now and I ruined the food! Why didn't you tell me?"
"I just did!"
"I meant before I spilled it!"
"How would I know that you're going to spill it before you spill it?" Hermione demanded but Ginny just grunted. "Okay, okay, don't worry we'll see what we can do".
"That's all her fault, you know!"
"Yeah, because that's Artemis' life ambition to bring back Voldemort and to ruin your lunch!" Hermione laughed but Ginny didn't laugh with her.
"Oh, no", she said.
"Come on, Gin, it's not a big deal, I'll just cast a cooking spell and..."
"No, Hermione", Ginny said shaking her head and looking down at her feet. "I think my water just broke".
"What?!?" Hermione said turning to look at her.
"I think...I think I'm having my baby!"

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Ahhhh the baby's coming!!!! I hope Harry makes it home in time *fingers crossed*
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Baby is coming, baby is coming, baby is coming!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But you skipped four months...can't wait to see why the Death Eaters were gone....
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Just wait and see...... I hope you'll like it...
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Okay I'll post soon but before I do that I need your opinion on something....
See, I have come up with two different ends for this fic...the first one is not gonna take too long and soon I'll have the fic finished...the second one has some more adventures and ups and downs and stuff in it so it's gonna take longer...I think a lot longer...
So I want your opinion on which one I should do, so I'm gonna put up a poll, please vote and help me decide..
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I think you should do the long version too....I love this fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Longer lol ! see if u can beat me hehe - ur writings so good that I want more !

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Well, the poll is still open but I figured I should post this chapter cause it's gonna be the same either way....

Chapter 28 part 2

"Where's James?" Lilly asked Roxanne as she came next to her, Albus and Scorpius, dragging her trunk behind her just like they did.
"Oh, I don't know", she replied looking around. "He was behind me when we got off the train but I lost track of him after that".
"He's probably saying goodbye to his new girlfriend", Albus smirked.
"Al, when are you gonna stop?", Scorpius said. "He has already told you about twenty times that he doesn't have any girlfriend".
"Oh, yeah right", Albus said ironically. "Like I don't know my brother!"
"He doesn't Al", Roxanne said too. "Don't you think I would know?"
"Fine", Albus shrugged obviously not convinced. "Whatever you say".
"Do you see any of our parents?" Lily interrupted looking around in the crowd.
"Well..." Roxanne said trying to make out any familiar face. "Oh, there's my mum!" she said shaking her hand to a woman that looked exactly like her, only older and with brown hair. "Where's F?" she asked then looking around for her brother.
"We're here, we're here", Rose said as she, Hugo and F joined them.
"Hmmm", Albus said raising his eyebrows. "Still no James, huh?" he asked with a smug smile as Roxanne and F waved goodbye to them and joined Aunt Angelina.
"What are you talking about?" Rose said. "He's already there with Uncle Harry and dad", she added pointing at them a little more than ten feet away. James was already next to them, hugging his father. Albus growled.
"Is it my imagination or my dad is with them?" Scorpius said with disbelief as Draco saw him and started coming his way. "Come on then!" Lily said excited and as ever she abandoned her trunk to run and hug her dad. Albus rolled his eyes and started dragging Lily's trunk with him too. He walked pass the two Malfoys and the three Weasleys just as Lily let go of their dad and he could hug him too.
"Hey dad", he smiled when he let go.
"Hey, Al", Harry smiled back. "So James tells me Gryffindor goes for the Quidditch cup this year, right?"
"Huh? How would James know? He left the team!" Albus said looking at his brother irritated. James just shrugged.
"It was either the team or the band, Al. I had to choose what I like the most, right?" he said.
"Weird", Albus said. "Every other year you used to be able to handle both. What happened now? You have new activities?" he smirked.
James rolled his eyes but Harry didn't manage to ask what's going on Draco and Scorpius walked near them.
"I say Slytherin will win the cup", Draco said and the others looked at him for a moment and then started laughing.
"That's a good one", James said.
"Yeah, keep dreaming", Ron said.
"Father", Scorpius said. "They're all Gryffindors and more than us; you'd better not irritate them".
"I think you're right, son", Draco laughed just as something in Ron's pocket started glowing.
"Oh, it's my mirror", Ron said. "It's probably your mother calling to see if you're here", he added walking away to talk to his wife.
"So...um..." James said looking at Scorpius and then back at his dad. "Scorpius, you can come and visit us during the holydays if you want".
"What?" Harry, Draco, Scorpius and Albus said together.
"What?" James asked back. "He can't?"
"Well...", Harry stammered looking from Scorpius to Draco and then to James' raised eyebrows. "Well...see...the thing is..."
"That's okay, James", Scorpius said hastily. "We'd probably go away for Christmas, anyway, right?"
"Yeah", Draco nodded.
"No, you can come", Harry said as James was looking at him irritated. "It's just...it's just my wife...she's having the baby soon and she's kind of...well..." Harry tried to explain.
"HARRY!" Ron yelled running next to his friend.
"What?" Harry asked alarmed.
"Ginny...Ginny...she's..." Ron stammered out of breath.
"Ginny what Ron?"
"Hermione says...says her water broke".
"WHAT?" yelled together the four Potters, Rose and Hugo.
"Oh, yay, the baby's coming!" Lily said jumping up and down excited.
"We gotta go to the hospital", Harry said. "And we gotta alert Molly and everybody else".
"I'll send Patronuses", Ron said as they bid a short goodbye to the Malfoys and started running down the train station with five kids, five trunks and five owls behind them.

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Okay, I'm confused...what's up with James? He's got a girlfriend or not? Anyway.....
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Okay so the poll is closed and I guess I'll do the longer version...
The next post will come any day now and I promise it will be a happy one (haven't done one of those for like six to five pages now!)
Oh, and if you guys could do me a very very very very big favour and go check out my new fanfiction, it would be amazing!!!!!! It came out sooner than I thought but I'm really excited about it!!!! It's called a redheaded witch!!! Check it out!!!!!!
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