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Old 09-20-2009, 06:35 PM   #476 (permalink)
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Oh, God, it seems like it's been years again since I last posted.....
Sorry....I'll try to make it up to you by this....I have to say that it is not as well written as I would want this part to be but I hope it will do...at least it's a post with a decent length...tell me what you think...

Chapter 25 part 3

Albus and Roxanne, who have left the hospital unsuspected in order to find and bring James back, turned around the corner just in time to see both James and Lilly falling on the wall in order to avoid the curse that was coming their way. Albus swore under his breath and pulled his wand out just as Roxanne did.
James pushed Lilly back and managed to conjure a shielding spell just before Dolohov next curse hits them. He turned for a second to check on Lilly and then he realized that his brother and his cousin were there.
"What the hell are you doing here?" he asked them surprised.
"Nice to see you too James", Roxanne said ironically.
"Are you out of your mind? What on earth are you doing and why did you drug Lilly into this?" Albus asked his brother angrily.
"I'm saving her", James responded as Lilly started nodding.
"Oh", said Albus as Dolohov broke through James' protecting charm with a curse that almost blasted the whole ceiling away. "It doesn't look that way".
"Are you kidding me?" Dolohov laughed. "Now I can get all three and a Weasley all in one?"
"Yeah, keep dreaming", James said and walked forward too.
"More like predicting", said Albus. James rolled his eyes.
"Will you stop been negative?"
"ENOUGH!" Dolohov yelled. "This ends here".
James was faster this time though and had already send a curse after Dolohov before he did. Albus grunted and walked next to his brother.
"You'd better...." James started.
"No", Albus stopped him. "We came here for you and we're not leaving without you".
Dolohov smirked having heard of the boy and then he shot a curse at them. He knew that they would have to duck to avoid it, since obviously they didn't know how to stop so advanced spells, and so as they did he took a clear shot at Roxanne and as the girl was watching the two boys the curse hit her before she even realized it.
"Rox!" Lilly yelled as the girl fell on her and since she couldn't hold her, they both collapsed on the floor.
"Roxanne!" James yelled and as Albus run next to her, he turned to Dolohov. "What did you do to her?"
"Don't worry", the Death Eater smiled. "None of you has any use to me dead".
James just shook his head feeling his blood boiling again from rage and shot a curse at Dolohov, which he avoided, but there was another curse coming from the boy. Dolohov smiled as James kept sending one curse after the other against him; the boy was strong but yet too inexperienced. He blasted his last curse away and aimed the same curse that he shot the girl with at him. James managed to stop it but its force was enough to make him fall down; the wand flew from his hand. Dolohov smirked again and walked towards the boy.
Dolohov didn't expect the next curse and so he only managed to stop it seconds before it hits him. Albus walked pass James to stand in front of Dolohov.
"Al, get out of here!" James yelled.
"No", the boy responded. "Get up!"
Dolohov grunted and send the strongest curse he could use without killing the boy after him. Albus jumped to the side and avoided it and so did James. Albus aimed at the ceiling above Dolohov, planning to make it explode and trap the Death Eater but the man smiled and stopped his curse before it hit its target. He knew the boy would do that; how Potter-like. He also knew that James wouldn't do that, because he wasn't thinking of trapping him until the Aurors would come; no, that boy wanted revenge, he could see it, he could smell it. He laughed; this situation was getting more and amusing for him by the minute.
"What the hell are you laughing at?" Albus grunted as James behind him started searching for his wand with Lilly watching him.
"Your efforts", Dolohov responded. "You're not going to get away".
"Well, that doesn't mean we won't try", Albus responded and send another curse that Dolohov just waved away.
"As pleasant as this is, I had enough of it. Bye bye, kiddo".
James turned terrified to the bone because he recognized the tone in Dolohov's voice.
"NO!" he screamed. "Al, run!"
"Crucio!"
The curse broke through the boy's shielding charm and hit him before he could avoid it. Albus fell down, Dolohov used the accio charm to take the boy's wand and James turned desperately trying to find his own, just as his brother started screaming. James felt tears running down his face making it harder for him to find it; he had to find the wand though in order to stop Dolohov hurting Al, for he knew that begging wouldn't work with him, he knew it very well.
"What, are you gonna leave already?" Dolohov yelled at him over Albus' screams, as he was walking towards the opposite corner fast.
"Expelliarmus!"
Dolohov sure wasn't expecting that. Lilly had taken Roxanne's wand, since Dolohov had hers as well and managed to catch Dolohov off guard. Both his own and Albus' wands flew from his hands. The curse was lifted off Albus and the boy stayed unconscious on the floor. Dolohov screamed outraged and not wanting to use the girl's wand inside his robes he turned to take his own, but he was blasted back before he did.
James had found his wand. Actually not only had he found his wand, he was pointing it now right at Dolohov's heart. He walked pass his brother and stood right in front of the man, with his wand inches away from him. Dolohov couldn't move; yet he laughed.
"You don't have the guts to do it", he said.
"You don't know me", James responded shaking his head.
"Don't I?"
James shook his head feeling hatred boiling inside his veins just as Lilly stood up and took some steps towards him.
"James", she whispered. He ignored her though.
"You filthy, petty, heartless piece of trash", the boy said; tears of rage running down his face, his whole body shaking from hatred.
"You won't use the killing curse; it's not in you", Dolohov said.
"Like I said you don't know me; I'm not the same boy you first saw at that bus station, he's gone. You took my life and you turned it into a nightmare! And all I have thought about is that I hate you", James said and took some steps back raising his wand.
"James?" Lilly said terrified.
"I hate you", the boy repeated.
"James, stop, please", Lilly pleaded sobbing.
The boy just shook his head.
"Why should I? He wouldn't", James told her without taking his eyes from Dolohov's. He was so concentrated on Dolohov and on the need for revenge that was burning inside of him that he didn't even hear the hurried footsteps behind the man or Lilly's relieved sigh.
"James stop!"
It was his father's voice that pulled him back to reality. He raised his eyes to look at him.
"James, it's over, lower you wand", Harry said.
"Well, and I was wondering just when the pater familias would arrive", Dolohov said, who couldn't see Harry since he was standing behind him but recognized his voice.
"Shut up" James told him, with his wand still raised.
"Listen...listen to me, Jamie. This won't solve anything".
"I think it will".
"Jamie, this isn't you and this is not right and you know it. It's over for him, we'll take him to prison and he won't hurt anyone ever again".
"And that should be enough?" James asked his father.
"Yes" Harry nodded. "Because we're not like them; you are not like him, are you?"
James look at his father one more time taking deep breaths, then he turned his eyes back on Dolohov and shook his head.
"I hate you", he told him again. "I hate you so much but you're not worth any more of my time and you're not worth me becoming a murderer for you".
And with that James lowered his wand but as he did Dolohov smirked and James hit him right in the face with his fist and then kicked him on the side of his face as hard as he could and the man fell on the floor unconscious.
"Bye bye kiddo", James whispered and spit on the Death Eater.
Harry sighed and walked to hug the boy.
"Are you okay?" he asked him.
"No!" James responded when his father let go. "What took you so long?"
Harry grunted and knelt over Albus as Lilly run next to him. He hugged her with his left arm while with his right he was checking Albus' responses. That was when James noticed that his father was bleeding from several wounds; obviously the Death Eaters and Artemis had taken him so long. He sighed.
"Is Al okay?" James asked.
"Yeah, he's gonna be fine", Harry responded and got up to go near Roxanne. "She's fine too", he added after a while and hit the girl with the tip of his wand. She stirred at once and after a few seconds so did Albus.
"Whoa, ouch!" the boy complained as he sat up. "What happened?"
"How are you feeling?" Harry asked him.
"Dad?" the boy said looking at him.
"Hey", he smiled.
"Hey", Albus said back. "What took you so long?"
Harry rolled his eyes as James laughed and hugged his brother.
"Ouch, hey!"
"Sorry", James smiled letting go of him. "Thanks, Al".
"You're welcome", the boy grunted as James and Harry helped him stant up. "Is Dolohov out?"
James took some steps towards the Death Eater, just as he grunted and moved, so the boy kicked him again.
"Yep", he said turning to his family again. "Couldn't be more out".

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All i can say is Oh My God!!!!! That was just brilliant. I held my breath the whole way through, which is something considering it's such a long post

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^ lol it was a fantastic post but like the others said don't keep us waitin so long for the next one hehe ive ran out of marshmallows x
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This was amazing!!!!! I loved it!!!!!!!!! I think Albus was very brave....I also hope that James will get over this whole thing now.....what happened with Ginny? And the book? Did Apostollo get it?
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Chapter 26

Six days later and the wizarding world still hadn't overcome the shock. Not only Death Eaters attacked the Ministry but also Matthias Barge, the head of the Auror Department proved to be the traitor who helped them in. Details about what the Death Eaters wanted or what their plans for now on were, fortunately didn't got leaked, but the true identity of Apostollo and the fact that Harry Potter was now to replace Matthias made it all the way through Daily Prophet's first pages. And the bad news continued since it was obvious that the Death Eaters and their leader, Artemis, were crazed by the fact that they didn't get what they wanted. New attacks and deaths were revealed everyday and people could do nothing but panic.
Meanwhile, Ron thankfully made a full recovery and Hermione was exonerated from all charges and now they were both back at the Potter residence with their kids. On the other side however, Harry was going crazy with all the work he had to do just so he could get rid of all the reporters. It was almost impossible to convince them that everything would be alright while he wasn't so sure himself.
He still hadn't forgotten the second goal of Artemis after acquiring the book; killing Ginny. The problem was that while he would like to spend every waking hour with her, making sure she's safe, he couldn't; because as Hermione and the Daily Prophet's first page had said, the auror office would be doomed at this point without him, and God knew how much people needed aurors at this hour. So as a solution he had some aurors watching over Ginny's every move; however that proved to be not all that helpful since he was still worried about her when he was away and Ginny was so irritated by the presence of the aurors all around her, that she was driving them and everybody else crazy with her nerves; her pregnancy hormones didn't help either.
"Gin, honey, they're here to protect you; don't you think that you could at least let them use one of the bathrooms?" Harry told Ginny as they were arguing again about the aurors.
"I don't care what they're doing here! They're bossy and disobedient and messy and I want them out of here!" Ginny yelled.
"Gin, this is hard on all of us but you have to be patient and..."
"And what? What is going to happen? I don't even know why you had to bring them here, I'm perfectly safe here! I mean, what do you think is going to happen? That Artemis is gonna blast into our house with an axe and cut my head off?"
"Gin, this isn't funny", Harry sighed. "My people found four women dead last night. I can't risk losing you. Why can't you understand that?"
"Why can't you understand that I cannot breathe with those people all around me?"
Harry shook his head and closed his eyes for a few moments; when he opened them he looked at her.
"I can't keep having the same fight with you over and over again", he said.
"Neither can I, so just get rid of them".
"I can't leave you unprotected".
"I'll be fine", Ginny rolled her eyes. "Just get them out of my house!"
"Do you want me to quit my job? Is that what you want?" Harry asked her.
"What? How do I want that?"
"I can't leave you alone, so that means that either you're gonna have to tolerate the aurors or that I would have to quit my job and be here all the time!"
"But I am not alone! Ron is here! Hermione is here! The kids are here!"
"Ron is helping George with the shop half of the day, Hermione is at the Ministry with me and I won't even bother to say anything about the kids; they're going back to school in half a month anyway", Harry said.
Ginny sighed and started walking up and down the living room, while her eyes were welling up.
"Fine", she said half sobbing. "Fine then, just leave them here to mess up my bathroom, mud my carpets and eat all of chocolates you brought me!"
"Gin", Harry sighed and walked over to her. He sat on the couch and pulled her next to him, since she was now too heavy to sit on his lap. "I'm sorry but I can't work, I can't give instructions and I can't even think right when I'm worried about you; and I'm worried all the time".
Ginny exhaled and glared at him.
"I hate you when you do that", she told him.
"What?" he asked confused.
"You know what! That 'I can't imagine my life without you so please do what I ask' kind of thing! You do it all the time and you know that I cannot resist it or stay angry with you!"
"Does that mean you will allow the aurors to stay and keep you safe and me sane?" he asked her. She growled.
"Fine", she said. "BUT...only if you give them direct orders not to eat my chocolates!"
"Done", Harry laughed.
"Do not laugh for I am deadly serious! If I catch one more of those bulimic monsters with chocolate all over their mouth, I'm gonna get really really vicious!"
"Huh...at the office I've got aurors fighting off Death Eaters everyday but somehow I'm more sorry for those poor people I brought here!"
"Haha, that was really funny", Ginny said ironically. Harry laughed and hugged her.
"Will you stop driving them crazy?"
"I will", she sighed.
"Will you be really cautious and only leave the house when you absolutely have to?"
"I will".
"Will you be careful who you let into the house?"
"I will".
"Will you stop hating me for tonight and kiss me?"
"No, that's your job", she said but he was already kissing her before she could finish her sentence.
"Mr. Potter the office called..." the auror that came into the room stopped when he saw them and they jumped apart. "I'm sorry, am I interrupting?"
"Yes", Ginny replied angrily.
"No", Harry laughed. "What is it?"
"Well, Dolohov will be transported to Azkaban in a few hours and you said you wanted..."
"Oh, yeah, right", he said and got up.
"Yeah, right, what? Where are you going? It's almost midnight", Ginny complained.
"I know Gin but I wanna be the one to take that monster to prison after everything that he did to James", he told her.
"Yeah and after all it's possible that the Death Eaters will try to free him, we'll propably gonna need you sir anyway", the auror said.
"Fine", Ginny sighed. "Just make sure you punch Dolohov for me, okay?"
"Okay", Harry smiled and winked at her. "I'll propably be really late though, so don't wait up for me", he added and noticing the frustrated look on her face he went on. "But I promise you that tomorrow I'll come back at noon and I won't go back except there's a huge need".
A smile spread on Ginny's face.
"Okay then", she said and got up. "It's a deal", she added and kissed him goodbye.

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awwww so cute !!!! i love it

im just gonna tell u to save a complaint from an admin that were not allowed to swear using astericks you'd better change the word... i got vetted for be with you lol that was fun, all the swear words got highlighted in blue and it was kinda a pain to go back through the chappies and change then to harmless words!

and on a happier note I LOVED IT ! and the whole thing with Ginny being mad they ate her chocolates and Harry with the can't imagine my life with out you thing so cute lol PAMS!! Angie please x


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awwww so cute !!!! i love it

im just gonna tell u to save a complaint from an admin that were not allowed to swear using astericks you'd better change the word... i got vetted for be with you lol that was fun, all the swear words got highlighted in blue and it was kinda a pain to go back through the chappies and change then to harmless words!

and on a happier note I LOVED IT ! and the whole thing with Ginny being mad they ate her chocolates and Harry with the can't imagine my life with out you thing so cute lol PAMS!! Angie please x


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aaaaaaaawwwwww that was a brilliant chapter..but seriously inearly dieed with layghter abou the choclatte thing pure genious..and very realistic actually twas brilliant and was acually v.v.v.v.soon after the previous chapter so wooo loved it! twas great!! much love and i love this story soo much can't wait 4 more
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Okay so I'm back!!!! Yay!!!!! lol....I just wanted to let you guys know how glad I am that you're reading my story and that I'm sorry I kind of dropped off the snitchseeker planet over the summer...I was busy with some other stuff ...oh, by the way I know that I don't usually name chapters but sometimes I find titles that really fit so I can't resist the urge to put them in....

Chapter 27 (The backup plan)

It was really hard for Harry to resist the burning feeling inside him and not kick the hell out of the man that was sitting opposite him in the questioning room; yet as he had told James they were not like them, revenge wasn't the solution and more importantly there were just too many witnesses. Harry glanced at the two aurors behind Dolohov and sighed; they were supposed to be there in order to protect him but he really wished he could do the interrogation without them or the aurors behind the glass. It would be easier to...express himself.
"Who would have thought that you would actually get something out of all of these Potter?" Dolohov said.
"What's that suppose to mean?"
"Look at you; you're the Head of the department now, aren't you? Last time we were together in this room, you were just a pathetic little auror", Dolohov smirked, but Harry did so too.
"Yeah, a pathelic little auror that had basted you", Harry reminded him and Dolohov's smirk faded.
"I got away eventually".
"True", Harry shrugged. "But at least I gave you that scar on your face as a reminder of our meeting".
Dolohov growled but didn't say anything. Harry opened the file that was in front of him.
"You are accused of being a Death Eater, escaping custody, five known murders and kidnapping my son", Harry finished, the rage inside him burning. "Are you admitting to those accusations?"
"No, actually", Dolohov said and Harry raised his eyebrows. "I also kidnapped Malfoy's son and I'm admitting six murders, if you count me killing that mudblood old classmate of yours...Dean Thomas, was it?"
Harry froze.
"You did that?"
"Yeah, I did that", Dolohov laughed as Harry's hands were actually trembling from anger.
"Listen to me, you scum", Harry said with a hollow voice. "I'm gonna get you into prison for the rest of your pathetic life and I'm gonna personally make sure that your life in there will be as miserable as possible".
"And here I thought you didn't like me", Dolohov smirked.
"Go to hell", Harry said as he stood up picking his stuff. "And stay there", he added as he walked to the door the aurors behind him opened for him.
"Wait, Potter" Dolohov said and Harry turned. "Aren't you going to offer me a deal? Like letting me free if I tell you where you can find Artemis or something like that?"
Harry walked in front of Dolohov again.
"No", he said. "I am not going to do that".
"What kind of an auror are you?" Dolohov laughed.
"The kind that wants to see monsters like you behind bars. I will find Artemis and I will give her what she deserves and I don't need your help to do that", Harry replied. "Now excuse me but I don't think I'll be able to restrain myself for much longer if I keep talking to you", he added and made to leave again.
"That's too bad then", Dolohov laughed watching Harry's reflection in the glass. "You won't even get to hear my offer".
"You have nothing I want Dolohov", Harry replied.
"No, but you have the book and we need that".
That made Harry turn again and look at Doohov's back.
"Right", Harry laughed. "And of course I should just go and gift-wrap it for you to take, because you have such an advantage over us, is that it?"
"As a matter of fact that is it", Dolohov smirked. "Did you really think that we didn't have a plan B? Or that your kids could beat me in a fight if I didn't allow them to?"


Ginny was in the basement, trying to find the basinet they had used for Lilly, because she didn't want to leave everything for when the baby would come and she and Harry had agreed that since they already had like an entire pile of baby stuff they should use those. It was hard to find what she was looking for after all these years though and the pointless searching was getting on her nerves.
She dropped another box on the floor and turned to glare at the two aurors behind her.
"Since you are here", she said irritated, "can't you help me find what I'm looking for?"
"I'm sorry ma'am", the taller one said. "We're only here to protect you from exterior dangers. Our orders are not to intervene in your life otherwise".
Ginny grunted.
"Yeah, but you took those orders from my husband because I asked him to", she tried to explain. "So if I say that I want you to help me, you can do it".
"We are very sorry but this is not the time to defy a direct order", the other auror said.
"Huh", Ginny said. "So can't help me but you have no problem at all eating stuff".
"What?" the aurors said together.
"Never mind", the woman growled.
"Mum can you come up here for a second?" James's voice came from the kitchen.
"Yeah, honey, I'm coming", she yelled back and she glared at the aurors before climbing the stairs.
"That woman is a handfull", the taller auror whispered to the other. "And what did she mean about us eating stuff?"
"I don't know", the other one shrugged and they both followed her upstairs.


"Care to elaborate that?" Harry asked Dolohov standing opposite him again. The man exhaled smiling.
"You so ruined the way I had planned for this to come up when you said you didn't wanna make me any offers but anyway", he shrugged. "We want the book, Potter and you're gonna give it to us".
"Oh, and why would I do that again?"
"Because there's something you don't know", Dolohov said.
"Oh, please do tell", Harry said tiredly.
"I didn't grab your daughter that night because I wanted to use her as a bargain. I only did it because I wanted to get caught. The fact that it was your son the one who stopped me just made the whole thing easier".
"What are you talking about?" Harry asked, his curiosity overcoming his anger now.
"You should have allowed the boy to do it, to kill me. You sure gonna wish you did, same time tomorrow".
"And why is that?"
Dolohov smiled, raised his hand to his ear and pulled his earring out. He left it on the table and Harry looked at it. It was a round, golden ring totally ordinary except the fact that ever since it left Dolohov's ear a red light turned on right in the middle of it.
"What is that?" Harry asked Dolohov.
"It's a signal that I actually send off when I saw your son again. I had to wear it for a couple of days so I can make sure it worked, but now that I took it off you can just destroy it; it has already started anyway".


"James?" Ginny said entering the living room.
"Hey, mum, do you have a painkiller to give me, I have a terrible migraine", the boy said coming from the kitchen with his hand on his forehead.
"Really?" Ginny asked placing her hand on his forehead too. "Well, you're not warm, you don't have a fever. I can't give you a painkiller just for a migraine, honey".
"Oh, come on, mum. I've been having those migraines for days", James complained.
"What? Why didn't you say anything?"
"Well, you and dad were both so busy since the night at the Ministry, I didn't wanna give you more things to worry about and..."
"James, what are you talking about? Since when do you have those migraines?"
"It's not such a big deal, mum, stop yelling", the boy sighed.
"Since when, James?"
"Since the Ministry", James said.
"You should have told us" she said irritated and grabbed his hand dragging him in the kitchen. "Look, I'll give you a painkiller for now but I'll have Teddy to check on you first thing tomorrow morning, okay?
"What? No, mum, I'm fine", the boy said.
"Do not argue with me little Potter", she said strictly as she looked at the shelfs for painkillers, her voice still an octave higher than normal. "No matter what your father and I are up to, your health is always more important, you hear me?"
"It's kind of hard not to the way you're yelling".
"I hope so" she said giving him the pill and a glass of water. "There's nothing else you haven't say, right?"
James glanced at her and then looked away quickly.
"No", he said.
"Oh, God, what else?" she asked.
"Nothing".
"James", she said warningly.
"It's just...the scars around my hands", he said after taking the pill.
"What about them?" Ginny asked.
"They're kind of itchy for like some days now".
"Okay, that's it", she said. "I'm gonna send Teddy a Patronus right now".
"Mum, it's one in the morning and Teddy will probably be sleeping or doing stuff with Victoire".
"James!"
"All I mean is that it can wait until the morning", he said and she sighed.
"Fine", she said. "But first thing..."
"Yeah, okay, okay".
"Do not roll your eyes at your mother!" Ginny said narrowing her eyes.
"Do not narrow your eyes at your son".
"I made you; I can do whatever I want!"
James grunted as his mother came next to him, folded her arms around his neck and gave him a big kiss on the cheek.
"Yeah, keep talking like that and my little sis in there would not wanna come out and really meet you", James told her pointing at her stomach.
Ginny smacked the back of his head as the boy laughed.
"I'm kidding" he smiled as he took the glass from the table and walked to the fridge. "You know we..." but his voice trailed off.
"James?" Ginny said looking at his back. The glass dropped from the boy's hand and got smashed hitting the floor. "James!" Ginny shouted walking to him but she was only half way to him and the boy fell on the floor.

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great chappy
you seem to be posting a lot recently..i love it
and who ate the chocs then..???and what's wrong with James??
i hope he's fine..oohh evil writer you
ooohhh i actually just like screamed when i read that last part btw
but tis still bril & you know i loved it so
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Let me just say OMG!!!!!!! That was a great chapter but what...? how....? when....? why...?
I'm confused!!!! What happened to James? Did Dolohov caused it? Agrrrrrrrr bad Angie with your cliffies!!!!!!!!
Though I have to say that I loved Harry interrogating Dolohov, he seemed like such a pro...
And I love Ginny as a mother, she's amazing!!! James was gonna say 'you know we love you" right?
So cannot wait for more!!!!!! PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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What did he do to James!?!?!?!?!?!


brilliant chapter but don't leave us like this

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Okay, here's a little preview of what's coming; I'll post more later today

Chapter 27 part 2 (The Backup Plan)

"I don't understand", Harry said looking at Dolohov with disbelief. He was almost certain that the man was trying to pull off some trick to escape custody again. Dolohov smirked.
"Well, as fun as I've had until now, it's time to talk business, Potter", Dolohov said. Harry crossed his arms at his chest, waiting for him to explain. "This is a transmitter I turned on the day I was captured", the man said pointing at the earring on the table. "It send out a signal that set a really tiny device on".
"What kind of device?" Harry asked.
"It's something we copied from the Muggle military operations; it's this tiny thing that can contain more than...um..say...500 grams of any kind of fluid and then when it's right, release it. Muggles use what they call physics to achieve it, we just used magic".
"Okay, Dolohov, you know what, do you care actually getting to the point because I'm starting to have a feeling that you're wasting my time?"
"I will in a minute....but first tell me this: what do you know about the Pozna venom?"
"The Pozna venom?" Harry repeated.
"Yeah".
"It's a highly poisonous essence that kills through paralyzing and excruciating pain, usually after three days, but it depends on the quantity too. Why?"
"It's aslo known as the 'unstoppable poison', do you know why?"
"Yeah, because there's not one way to create it. Everytime a person makes it, it's different and that's why you cannot find the antidote in the market, the only person that can provide you with it is the one who makes the poison every time".
"Right", Dolohov nodded. "I'm glad you're already informed on that, it's gonna take less talking from me", he sighed. "Well, I guess we reached the point where I actually explain what's going on, right?"
"Tell me we did", Harry rolled his eyes impatiently.
"What if told you that when I took off this earring, a few minutes ago, the device I told you, released 200 grams of this poison, an amount capable to kill like 13 people?"
Harry didn't reply; he just stared at Dolohov. He couldn't understand if he was telling the truth or not or if the Death Eaters had actually captured those people wanting to exchange their lives for the book.
"I know what you're thinking", Dolohov said. "That we captured those people and that we're gonna kill them if you don't give us the book and you're also thinking of ways to save them without doing that, ways not to risk the book, right?"
"I will not give you the book, Dolohov, even if you have those people", Harry said. "Yes we will try to save them but you're not taking the book". Dolohov laughed.
"Really?" he said obviously relishing the moment. "And what if I told you that there are no 13 people? That this device we're talking about was planted into your son's left arm and that a few moments ago 200 grams of the 'unstoppable poison' was released into your little boy's body?"

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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Poor James.....poor Harry........
Harry has to save James, he just has to!!!!

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Chapter 27 part 2 cont.

"James!" Ginny yelled benting over her son as he was lying on the floor. "Are you okay? What happened?"
"Mum I..." he whispered shocked looking at his legs as he sat up.
"I don't like all these", Ginny said shaking her head. "Come on, get up and we'll have Teddy to come here now".
"Mum...I can't", the boy said terrified.
"What?"
"I can't get up; I can't move my legs", he said.
"What?" Ginny repeated.
"My legs are like paralyzed or something", James said in the verse of hysteria.
Ginny tried to crouch down and help him up but her enlarged belly didn't allow it to her. She turned to the aurors behind her that were keeping themselves out of all that.
"Well, what are you looking at? Come over here and help me get him upstairs; I'm not sure it would be a good idea if I used magic on him", she said.
"Ma'am we have orders...."
"...to protect us from exterior dangers", Ginny finished his sentence. "My son not been able to walk is pointing at an exterior danger. So could you please..."
But she didn't finished her sentence because James gasped and then clutched his stomach.
"James?" she said worried.
"Oh, mum, my stomach is killing me!" he said, tears of pain running down his face. She turned to the aurors.
"Get over here right now!"
Her look was so infuriating that they didn't dare defy it. They carried the boy upstairs with Ginny following them. As soon as James was on his bed she bent over him and placed her palm on his forehead again.
"Oh, God, you have fever too; I don't understand you weren't even warm before and now you're actually burning!"
James didn't listen to a word she said though. He felt like someone was stabbing him again and again and again and he couldn't even talk from the pain; it was almost as bad as the crutiatus curse. And he couldn't move his legs; why couldn't he move his legs? What was happening to him? For a few moments he lost contact with his environment and let himself sunk into the pain. He hadn't passed out but he couldn't hear or see anything around him; it was like everything that existed for him was that pain that spread slowly to his entire body.
The pain left as suddenly as it came and the boy fell back at his cushions taking deep breaths; it seemed to him that a lot of time had passed but it couldn't have, because the aurors were still standing at the door and his mother was still sitting next to him talking fast to them. His eyes were watering and his ears were ringing but he tried to focus to what his mother was saying.
"For God's sake do not argue with me! Go and bring my husband here now!" Ginny told to the taller one. "And would you please sent a Patronus to my husband's godson, Teddy Lupin? He's a healer, he can help us", she told the other one.
"Mum, I think I'm okay now", James whispered coughing. She turned to him and as she did, he realized that she was clutching his hand tightly.
"Honey? Are you back with me?" she said; her eyes were watering too.
"Yeah" he said. "I'm...it doesn't hurt anymore".
"Your legs?"
"No", he shook his head; even though the pain left, his legs still refused to obey him.
"Okay, don't worry", she said. "I'm sure it's nothing; Teddy will just do his magic and you'll be at your feet in no time", she smiled, stroking his cheek; then she turned to the aurors. "Don't stand there! Go! Do what I said!"
They looked at each other and then the taller nodded and they left.
"Mum", James said the minute they left the room. "What is this? What's happening to me?"


Harry's face had gone blank but he didn't react, move or even blink to what Dolohov said; he just looked at him staight in the eyes.
"You're lying", he said with a steady voice.
"Am I?" the Death Eater laughed. "Why don't you go find out by yourself?" he suggested.
Harry looked at him for another second and then jumped up and hurried to the door.
"Oh, and Potter", Dolohov shouted to his back; Harry turned. "If you get that thingy out of the boy's hand, you'll find that there's something attached to it; that's made from me especially for you".
Harry didn't understand what the man meant but he didn't care at the moment; he needed to go home, to see that James was okay, to prove Dolohov wrong...because it couldn't be true, if it was...
He closed the door of the room, leaving Dolohov with the two aurors in there. The next moment Hermione came out of the closest door and caught up with him. She was behind the glass and heard the whole thing.
"He's lying", she said reassuringly. "He's definitely lying".
"Nobody wishes that more than me, Hermione", Harry said as they entered the auror office almost running. "I have to go check on Jamie though".
"Of course you are. I'm actually coming with you if you haven't noticed".
Harry didn't answer that and just started walking fast through the Ministry hallways towards the exit. The few minutes in the elevator seemed like hours to Harry, as he and Hermione were waiting for the doors to open and when they did Harry sprinded out and run towards the closest apparation point.
"Mr.Potter, sir!" someone called after him.
"Not now!" Harry called back not even noticing who it was.
"Mr.Potter, I'm coming from your house!"
Harry turned to see one of the aurors that he had to protect Ginny walking fast towards him. His heart almost stopped. He knew that Ginny would never sent one of the aurors to fetch him if it wasn't an absolute necessity.
"What happened?" Hermione asked.
"Something with Mr.Potter's older son. I'm not sure what..."
But Harry and Hermione were already running down the corridor.

Harry and Hermione apparated in the kitchen as always and looked around. There was no sign of Ginny, James or of any other residence of the house; of course that wasn't so unusual given the time, but still it was a bit disconcerning. Harry didn't waste any time though and he run straight upstairs. When he reached the top of the stairs, with Hermione at his tracks, the door of James' room opened and Teddy walked out followed by Ginny. Ginny's eyes were all welled up and Harry felt his heart sank; it was true, what Dolohov said, it was all true...

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NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What happened???????
Please let James be ok
Poor James......poor Harry and Ginny

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