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Cassie1011 05-26-2008 11:41 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kerryleanne (Post 6685979)
i have one word for you and that is MORE :D

LOL :upside:

Cassie1011 05-26-2008 11:54 AM

They walked along a little corridor and through some large doors, in there was some small carts and floating rails for them to go on. Helen and the goblin sat in the little cart.
"C'mon then!", said Helen and Cassie got into the cart behind Helen.
With a jolt the cart started moving. It picked up speed and went downwards. This reminded Cassie of that dreaded rollercoaster she went on last year.
They turned a corner and stopped. There was a large door with the number 2010 on it with a little keyhole in the centre. Helen got out of the cart and was followed by Cassie and the goblin. They walked up to the vault and waited for the goblin to open it for them. Helen stepped inside and so did Cassie. The room was half-full with Gold silver and bronze coins, it was wonderful. Helen took all of the Galleons and quite a lot of the Stickles and put them into a little pouch that she had around her neck.
They got back into the cart and went back to the first room they where in. Helen took back the key and put it in the same pouch as the money.
"So where next?", asked Helen
"I dunno, should I get all of my school stuff first?", said Cassie
"Oh yeah, you better be getting you're wand", said Helen as they walked toward the black shop with gold writing.
"A what? Is that what you're stick thing is? A wand?", Asked Cassie, she had a habbit of asking questions fast.
"Yes, it's a wand", Helen said taking out the stick she had used to open the wall. They walked into the black and gold shop and Cassie looked around, it looked a bit like an old library but not with books, with small boxes. A very old man was sitting at a desk in front of Cassie.
"Ah, you've come to purchase you're wand Miss McKerron?", Said the man
"How do you know-" But the man had already got out of his seat and began looking through his library of boxes. He emerged a few moments later with a thin brown box. He opened it and took the wand out. The wand was white and had a few engraved markings on the handle, thought it didn't have any parts that stuck out like Helen's it was just one thin, smooth stick. He turned it round so that Cassie could take the handle. She reached out and took it, straight away there was a sudden warm feeling as she took it and she just stood there staring at it.
"Wave it then", said Helen and Cassie did so. A soon as she did it there was massive yellow sparks coming from the end of it and Cassie nearly dropped it.
"Well this is definitely the one for you, Yew and unicorn hair, 10 inches", said the man that Cassie took to be called Olivander.

Hope you all like it

mathi 05-26-2008 12:19 PM

Awesome!! I luff the flow of your writing dear<33 :glomp:

Keep going... :)

alyweasley 05-26-2008 12:26 PM

Naw Cassie i absolutely luff it!!
it is def getting better!
i am so subscribing now!!!

Love always
Jade xxxxx

Cassie1011 05-26-2008 12:29 PM

I'm still writing the next bit, I think it might take longer for me to write it all but never mind. :-P


I don't know if I should go on to when Cassie's at school.... Tell me if you want me to people!

Cassie1011 05-26-2008 01:02 PM

As Helen and Cassie walked out of Olivander's Cassie stopped and looked up at a very tall, hairy man wearing a brown cloak. She was just about to ask Helen if she knew him when Helen said
"Cassie, that Hagrid, hes a teacher at Hogwarts, he's really nice one you get to know him". The sisters walked up the path a little bit and came to a shop called Madam Malkin's, they walked in. "This is a clothes shop Cass, we'll need to get you you're school robes", Helen said as they walked up to the counter.
"Hello dear, you'd need some school robes I expect", said the Lady behind the counter. Cassie nodded and looked around, the shop wasn't very big but it was full of dresses and cloaks.
"Skirt or trousers?", asked the lady who was now in her store room. Cassie, who hadn't worn a skirt or dress for years said,
"Trousers please" as the lady emerged from the store room with some black clothes.
"You will need a plain school tie until you get sorted and a plain sweat shirt, you'll need to try the clothes on too", said Madam Malkin, coming from behind the counter with the school clothes. Helen was leaning on the wall looking amused, she knew how much Cassie hated trying on clothes.
"Try these ones first, go into the changing room with them", said Madam Malkin indicating the changing rooms for Cassie.
A few minutes Cassie came out of the changing room with the school clothes on. The trousers where a little short and the cloak was too long, so long Cassie nearly tripped over it as she walked over to Helen and Madam Malkin.
"Hmm.. I better get some more trousers and another cloak", said Madam Malkin as she walked into her store room again.
"This is fun ain't it?", sniggered Helen and Cassie scowled at her. Madam Malkin came out of the store room yet again and gave Cassie the new trousers and cloak.
When Cassie came out of the changing room yet again the clothes where a comfortable fit.
Cassie went back into the changing room to take off the school clothes as Helen paid for them.
They walked out of Madam Malkin's with a box each (Cassie was holding her Wand) and along the cobbled path.
They visited some other shops called Flourish and blotts (where they got Cassie's books), a shop which sold potions and ingredience (Cassie was too dazzled by the shop window to look at the name of the shop) and the ice-cream shop Cassie had noticed before (Cassie got a large toffee ice-cream in there). They where going to goto Eeylops Owl Emporium next and Cassie was excited to be getting an owl even if she already had a cat, Helen had said you need an owl to send letters to people.

I hope it's ok for you all
Man I really need to stop writing so fast!

kerryleanne 05-26-2008 01:08 PM

i think its awsome so far hun, its up to you if you continue into school, it would be wiked either way

alyweasley 05-26-2008 01:12 PM

hey hunni.
great job once again! write as it comes to you. otherwise you will lose the beautiful flow you've got going on!
i would love it if you kept going! it would be so nice but it really is up to you!
well done and keep up the great work!
love always
Jade and Kildara xxxx

Cassie1011 05-26-2008 01:31 PM

When they got to Eeylops there was millions of owl cages stacked on top of each other and lot of boxes labled owl nuts or owl food. It was amazing to look at all of the different shapes and sizes of the birds.
"So.... See any you like?", asked Helen
"Well, I don't really mind. I 'd rather have one that most people don't want, like when we got Mousey", said Cassie
"I'll go and ask", said Helen, leaving Cassie near the door. She heard Helen saying something to the lady at the counter and saw the lady getting a large black owl from the right hand side of her.
"Cassie, come and see if you like it!", Helen called over to Cassie. Cassie walked up to the counter and looked at the bird.
"It's beautiful!", said Cassie
"Her name's Shaddow and she's free if you want her", the lady behind the counter said.
"Free?", asked Cassie
"Free", said Helen
"Yeah, OK I'll have her, does she - you know - send letters?", said Cassie uncertainly
"Of course", said the lady, handing over Shaddow to Helen. Helen turned round and started to head to the door.
"Er....Bye", said Cassie, following her sister
"Wow, a free owl!", said Cassie as she catched up with Helen. They where heading for a very, very brightly coloured shop that Cassie had seen before, called: Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes.


Mousey is Cassie's black cat by the way, This one is shorter because I like ending on cliff hangers >:-)

alyweasley 05-26-2008 01:36 PM

again i praise you! very good!
love Jade xxx

Prongs999 05-26-2008 02:18 PM

Awesome!

Cassie1011 05-26-2008 02:22 PM

Just to say this story is set in 2008

and My RPG Character is a decendant of the one in this story

Elwood J. Blues 05-26-2008 02:29 PM

It's great Cassie, I want more.

BeccaBear 05-26-2008 02:35 PM

LOVE THE STORY!! You should definatly keep it going!! I like that its set in 2008, Olivanders still alive?? haha jk I love him.
PAMS!
~Becca~

Cassie1011 05-26-2008 02:48 PM

Sorry but I need a little break.

A kids gotta get out side and enjoy the rare sunshine (in Scotland that is)!

kerryleanne 05-26-2008 03:55 PM

enjoy the sun hun, wish we had some, (east anglia)

Cassie1011 05-26-2008 04:10 PM

As soon as they walked into the shop Cassie knew she'd like it. It was full of people looking at every shelf. There was loads of boxes put on top of one another, there was so much most of the piles touched the roof. Cassie could just make out two red haired men behind the counter. Helen lead the way towards the counter. The more Cassie went into the shop the more wonderful it became, there was some boxes with the name Skiving Snackboxes on them and some other ones that Cassie couldn't see because of the massive crowd huddling over them. When Cassie got to the counter she had a better look at who was behind it. The taller man looked a bit younger than the slightly smaller one. They both had magenta coloured robes which went with their red hair.
"So... Is there anything you might want?", asked Helen
"Hmmm.... What about those daydream charms?", said Cassie staring at them
"Do you really think I'll let you have some of them? You can't consentrate on anything important already, why on earth would you need them?", said Helen
"Erm..... I could use them... Er... Ah... OK you do have a point", said Cassie a little disappointed.
"Well, what about..... You choose something for me. I dont know what to get", Said Cassie secretly hoping for one of those skiving snack boxes.
"OK, but its a surprise so wait out side", said Helen. Cassie squeezed her way through (still holding half of the things she had bought) the crowd of people. She wasn't sure weather Helen would get her something good or not, but she didn't care that much.
After waiting outside for a few minutes Helen came through the door holding a large box.
"What did you get?", Cassie asked. Helen tapped her nose as if to say 'you'll see'.
They walked along a little more and came to a shop called Quality Quidditch supply, Helen walked in and Cassie followed. This was the shop with all the brooms in it, and Cassie had no idea what Quidditch was. 'Mabye its another word for cleaning or something' Cassie thought.

Hope you like it!

ClockCollector 05-26-2008 04:22 PM

Nice!

BeccaBear 05-26-2008 04:33 PM

cute chapter...I ♥ Fred and George..I wonder what she will get???
~Becca~

Prongs999 05-26-2008 04:39 PM

Is one of the men Ron?

BeccaBear 05-26-2008 04:41 PM

oo, i just remebered Fred died. It dont matter tho, I am still in denial about that!! haha
PAMS!!
~Becca~

Cassie1011 05-26-2008 04:44 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by HPobsession33 (Post 6686847)
cute chapter...I ♥ Fred and George..I wonder what she will get???
~Becca~

I was going to write before but my comp crashed

Fred died in 1997

so the other man is Ron

Sorry

BeccaBear 05-26-2008 04:47 PM

haha, i kno, i just forgot when I wrote that. but I still ♥ Fred and George. And I am still in denial about Fred dying, and I always will be. Just to make that clear, lol!
~Becca~

Cassie1011 05-26-2008 04:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by HPobsession33 (Post 6686896)
haha, i kno, i just forgot when I wrote that. but I still ♥ Fred and George. And I am still in denial about Fred dying, and I always will be. Just to make that clear, lol!
~Becca~

:-P
:dobdance:

kerryleanne 05-26-2008 04:55 PM

i would love some daydream charms :D


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