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07-18-2007, 04:05 AM
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| Tonks' Werewolf Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Alana Colarossi Fourth | WOAHH haha totally unexpected haha
jeese harry first candi now ginny wow
eeekkk i love H/G ships, even though i know this is a H/Hr storyy
haha awww jeese ron was so mean, poor ginny
haha awesome postiess
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07-18-2007, 05:31 PM
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| Formerly: DanFan4eva  Billywig
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| *pokes you* PAMS sis! I'd really love to read more of this FF. :] |
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07-18-2007, 08:52 PM
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| Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Xylina Samuels Third Year | You are kidding me. God, Harry, what is it with you and the girls at the moment? *pokes Harry gently*
Great post!
PAMS!
Lena xXx
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07-24-2007, 02:13 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sylvannas Quickspeed Sixth | Chapter 7 Candi wrapped a towel around her soaked head and came out of the showers, singing a little tune. She finally made a friend that her parents could be proud of. Not that her other friends were unworthy. Still....making friends with the blood traitor family wasn't putting her in her father's good graces. But Harry Potter was a worthy catch and a nice person.
She hopped down the last few stairs and entered the Common Room. There were Ron and Hermione, Hermione comforting Ron, who was looking angry.
"What happened? I was only gone for 20 minutes." Candi towel dried her hair next to Hermione. "What did I miss?"
"Oh, Harry and Ginny just ran off to make out, and Ron's all in a tizzy." Hermione said apologetically. Candi shook her head.
"Idiot. Excuse me please." Candi rushed out of the Coomon Room, her hair streaming, looking for Harry.
She finally found him in the kitchens corridor, snogging Ginny Weasley. She coughed loudly, and Harry disengaged himself.
"Oh....Gin, could you excuse me for one brief moment?"
"As long as it's brief." Ginny gave Candi an 'I'm-Happy-To-See-You-But-I'm-Still-******-At-You' look. Candi ignored it for the time being.
"Harry....did you forget about Hermione?"
"No.." Harry said, a little uncomfortable.
"Well, you sure aren't convincing me otherwise. Cause I'm not going to help you with Hermione if you go snogging with Ron's sister. OK?"
Harry became a little red in the face. "Look, I'm not saying that I don't love Hermione. But that can wait. I'm with Ginny right now, and-"
"Sure, right now. But what about tomorrow? The next day? Harry, if you're just pulling my leg, please let me know, and I'll-"
"No Candi, you're right. But I'm not ready for Hermione yet. After she breaks up with Ron, then maybe we can do something about Ginny. But for now, let's just play by ear, ok? See you later." He gave Candi a grateful look, then trotted back to Ginny.
Candi shook her head. She didn't understand some people. Not at all. She made her way back to the Common Room, where Ron and Hermione were still there.
"Little git...I woulda said yes...why didn't he ask me?" Ron asked Hermione, his head in his hands.
"Look Ron, I'm sure this was spur-of-the-moment. I know Harry would have sat down and talked, but you know Ginny. She's a little....um....excitable-"
"EXCITABLE??" Ron interrupted Hermione. "She's excitable? I would say a little unpredictable, maybe kinda spontaenious, but certainly not exciable. Excuse me please." Ron shoved Hermione and Candi out of his way, and went up to the dorms.
"Why can't guys sit and talk everything out?" Hermione asked Candi.
"Well, you know guys. They always have to be in action. They're big attention-babies."
Hermione laughed. "You're exactly right! Where did Harry find you anyway?"
"Under a rock." Candi said amiably. Hermione had tears streaming down her face.
"Candi, you're awesome! Wanna hang out, no boys?"
"My pleasure." The two girls linked arms and headed outside.
Whew! Finally an update!
Katie
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07-26-2007, 01:51 AM
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| Formerly: DanFan4eva  Billywig
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| Great update Sis! More soon,ok?
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07-26-2007, 04:32 PM
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| Puffskein
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LOVED IT!
LOL, Candi's funny =D I *heart* her and i'm glad Harry and Ginny are together =D
Much love
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07-30-2007, 01:55 AM
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| Tonks' Werewolf Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Alana Colarossi Fourth | Awww that was so cute...
i hate to say this but i am a definite H/G shipper haha
*cough*harryginnny*cough* haha
eekkk cannot wait for more 
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07-30-2007, 09:05 AM
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| Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Xylina Samuels Third Year | Candi's got me laughing so much in this story! And I have to say stupid Harry! If you like 'Mione get with her now!
Sorry. Harmony shipper at heart.
Can't wait for your next post!
Lena xXx
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07-30-2007, 03:51 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sylvannas Quickspeed Sixth | Chapter 8 "Now, the problem with boys is, they're way too serious." Candi noted as the two of them went out of the castle. They strolled towards the Lake.
"True. And they're very egotistical." Hermione added as she watched the Giant Squid. It came lazily to the surface, and snatched a bird out of the air. The water rippled outward.
"Yes. Especially Harry and Ron. They're the worst cases I've ever seen."
"Really?"
"Oh yes. Harry's all gung-ho for saving the day, and Ron tries to make himself appear just as good as Harry. It's sickening." Candi threw a rock into the Lake. Hermione did the same.
"I never noticed it in Ron befo-" Hermione was cut off by Candi's responce.
"Never? Hermione, they do it every day! Every single day! How can you not see it?"
"I suppose it's because I do see them every day, and it's just regular being them for me. I don't notice anything different. Now, if they were acting selfless, then I'd notice a difference." The two girls giggled.
"You'd have to check for a fever." They burst into laughter.
"RIGHT!" Hermione was holding a stich in her side. Candi was rolling around on the grass, laughing hysterically. Just then, a shadowy figure approached the girls.
"Mind if I join you?"
"Sure. T-Take ah-ah-a s-s-s-seat." Candi gasped. Luna Lovegood sat down and looked at them mildly.
"Having a good time?"
"T-time of our l-lives. Wh-what about you?" Hermione tried to gain some control.
"Oh, just got a letter from Daddy." She said. "He's found a book that tells exactly how to capture a Reef-Blown WaterGirckle."
"A what?" Candi sat up.
"A Reef-Blown Watergirckle. They live in Lake that hold a vast multitude of sea-creatures. Like the Lake." She looked at it. "Daddy wants to do an expedition into this Lake. But Dumbledore's afraid it will disturb the peace."
"Oh really?" Hermione almost went into another fit of giggles. "How so?"
"Reef-Blown Watergirckles are very dangerous." Luna warned them.
"I'll be sure to look out for them when we go swimming." Candi said seriously. Hermione almost lost herself.
"Good idea Canderia. You'd be in trouble if they caught you." Luna got up. "I'd better write him back. Good-bye girls."
"Bye Luna." They said in unison. She waved and left.
"What a strange girl." Candi murmered to herself. "And how did she know my name's Canderia?"
"She's Luna, she knows everything. That's why she's in Ravenclaw." Hermione remarked, watching Luna's figure get smaller and smaller.
Katie
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07-31-2007, 06:05 AM
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| Nogtail
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New reader here! Katie, your FF is awesome! Keep up the great work!
Mindy
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07-31-2007, 07:53 PM
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| DA News Officer Puffskein
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Thank you very much Mindy! I'm glad you like it!
Katie
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08-01-2007, 01:21 PM
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| Puffskein
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GREAT JOB!
I love Luna, she's a piece of work  Nice job!
Love
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08-01-2007, 01:43 PM
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| Tonks' Werewolf Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Alana Colarossi Fourth | Ahha Luna is sucha funnyyy character i love her
eekkk cannot wait for more 
Awesome postie
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08-01-2007, 02:12 PM
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Thanks guys! New post soon!
Katie
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08-01-2007, 02:55 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sylvannas Quickspeed Sixth | Chapter 9 Ron was up in his dorm, relishing for the first time that he was all alone. He needed to think. Think about Ginny, Harry, Candi, and the most painful of all: Hermione.
Ron loved Hermione. Simple as that. But who was Candi? When did she arrive at school? Ron didn't remember her being at the Sorting. And what right did she have to come in and ruin their lives? Ron was feeling ver mean at that moment. He decided to confront her and her possible lies.
Candi and Hermione were just walking in the the Common Room.
"Candi, I'd like to have a word with you."
"Of course Ronald. Excuse me please, Hermione." They went over to a pair of overstuffed chairs. "How may I help you?"
"Who are you exactly?" Ron said right out.
"My name is Caderia Summers." Candi said. "Who are you?"
"I-I'm...this isn't what we're talking about!" Ron exploded. "What year are you in?"
"Yours." She said calmly.
"Why weren't you at the Sorting?"
"I was away. On personal business." Candi emphasized personal. Ron didn't take the hint.
"What could be more important than your education?" Ron shot at her.
"Family business. Problems. Issues. But I wouldn't expect you to know about that." Candi's remark hit home. Ron stared at her, stunned.
"I had a brother leave the family to take sides against it. Percey dumped his family for the Ministry. The Ministry! Don't tell me I don't know about family problems! That practically killed my mum and dad!"
"Then show some sympathy!" Candi threw herself out of her chair. "I was in Algeria, caring for my parents. They were sick with Yellow Fever."
"Yellow Fever?" Ron asked, caught off guard.
"Yes idiot. Yellow Fever. I cared for them for 5 years, and they both managed to die on me. I was alone. I managed to get back to England only because my mother wanted me to finish my education. Ring a bell?"
Ron was flustered. He didn't know what to say.
"Candi, I-"
"I suppose you think I'm doing something wrong, being Harry and Hermione's friend? Something stupid like that, right?"
"I...erm..."
"Well, if you wanted to keep your friends to yourself, you could have just told me. I'll go now." Candi went to leave, but Hermione grabbed her arm.
"No Candi. I still want you as a friend. Ronald, I can't believe you. I want you to apologize to Candi."
"Not on your life!" Ron folded his arms.
"Then until you do, we're through!" Hermione said fiercely, her eyes tearing. She whirled away up to the dorms, Candi dragged at her side.
Katie
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08-01-2007, 03:30 PM
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| Puffskein
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OOH!
HERMIONE!
You rock, girlie =D
Nice job, Katie, I looooooved it!
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08-01-2007, 10:52 PM
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Thanks Adrienne!
Katie
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08-02-2007, 05:21 AM
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| Nogtail
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I love it! Please post more soon~
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08-02-2007, 01:05 PM
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| Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Xylina Samuels Third Year | Katie, I loved it. I love how you explained Candi's absence from the school yaers before.
I can't wait for your next post.
Lena xXx
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08-02-2007, 02:18 PM
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Thanks alot you guys! Next post!
Katie
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08-02-2007, 02:34 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sylvannas Quickspeed Sixth | Chapter 10 That night, Candi stayed awake for a long time. She had alot to think about. What right did that Ron have, to think he can just order her around? Like her parents?
Flashback Candi walked over to the sink to fetch the cool water rag. She layed it against her mothers burning forehead.
"Candi! Get over here!"
"I can't, I'm caring for Mom." Candi called. At 13 years, she was very responsible.
"I told you to get here b*tch!" Candi hung her head and went.
She shook her head. It didn't help to think ill of the dead. On her left, she could hear Hermione's steady weeping. Candi felt terrible. She had ruined their relationship.
Flashback "Candi, dear?"
"Yes mother?" Candi was by her side in a flash.
"See what's keeping your father, please?" Her mother fell back against the pillows, her eyes a sickly yellow color. Candi grasped her hand.
"Of course." A bang at the door. Heads turned.
Her father in the doorway, his face pale, his eyes shot with blood. He stumbled in the doorway, then collapsed. Black vomit flew from his mouth, and Candi realized he also had Yellow Fever.
She began to scream. So much screaming....so much...
Candi screamed herself awake. Jerking up from the bed, she tossed a fearful glance to the door, where she was sure her father would come, eyes bloody and yellow, her mother fainting as she screamed.
"Candi, are you ok?" Candi gave a little yelp as Hermione's head came out of the darkness, stained with tears.
"I-I'm fine......fine." She gave a not-so-reassuring smile, and Hermione gave her a Look, but went back to bed. Candi turned on her side, away from the door.
It was a long time before she fell asleep.
***** The first morning of Hermione and Ron's break-up was awful for both. In that tiny 9 hour span, everyone seemed to know that the Hogwarts power-couple had broken it off. Girls were warding off guys attempts to talk to Hermione, and guys were clapping Ron on the back, saying it was ok, more fun to play the field than sit in the box.
Candi was devestated by what she caused, and confronted Hermione about it at lunch.
"Hermione, do you hate me?"
"Of course not! What a thing to say!" Hermione said, and took a bite of her ham sandwich. Harry gave Candi a queer look as well. He was the only boy allowed within the wall of females.
"Well, I did help you and Ron break-up." Harry choked on his peanut butter sandwich. He hadn't heard this part.
"It wasn't your fault Candi. Ron's so thick-headed, did you really think I was going to support him insulting you?" Hermione whacked Harry on the back calmly. "Harry, you need to take smaller bites.
"S-sorry Hermione." Harry coughed. He looked at Candi, then finished eating. Candi knew what he was thinking.
This was his chance at taking Hermione for his own!
Katie
P.S. I have an idea to write Candi's story, what do you think?
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08-02-2007, 02:40 PM
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| Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Xylina Samuels Third Year | You should go ahead and write Candi's story. I'm really intrested in learning more about her past now! And I love the end of that post!
Can't wait for the next one!
Lena xXx
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08-03-2007, 12:55 AM
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| Puffskein
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^^Definitely agree =D
Great job, lovely
Keep up the work!!
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08-04-2007, 03:21 AM
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| Formerly: DanFan4eva  Billywig
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| Been so long.I been able to finally get to read the chapters.
Great so far sis.
Go for the candi story.
PAMS!
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08-04-2007, 05:48 PM
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OK! I'll let you know when it's up!
Katie
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