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Wow! That was a great chapter, as usual! Do you still have school, or did you finish? -Shirel |
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I can't believe I missed two great chapters! Those are awesome! That must have been a pretty nice thing Petunia did for Harry. Along with the others at the surprise party. PAMS |
Okay, Steph. I am finally posting here. Your Fan Fiction is awesome! It's really good for your first time. Keep up the awesome work. - Zoe |
I have to dedicate the next post to the Awsome Lari! Thanx Mindy!! :) Zoe!!!! :glomp: Ok Im dedicateing my next post to the Awsome Lari!!! (Linda Hagrid) Cause she was the one who made my awsoms siggie :P Ok so for the next post... Chapter 4 Harry woke up late the next morning. Ron wasn’t in bed when Harry looked over. He got out of bed, changed his clothes, and walked out the door. When he walked past Ginny’s door, it opened. Her ponytail was messed up and she had no make up on, but her face was glowing. “Oh! Um, hi.” She said. “Hi. Uh…you going down to breakfast?” he asked. It was lame way to make conversation, but he didn’t want to ask her how her summer went since he pretty much knew. “Yeah.” Ginny replied and closed her door. They walked down the stairs together, not saying much. If Harry thought nothing would be awkward between them, he was wrong. Walking beside her was uncomfortable. He didn’t mean (or even want) it to be so uncomfortable, but he couldn’t think of anything to say. As they walked into the kitchen, they saw Bill and Fluer sitting at the table. Fluer was giggling like a little schoolgirl. “Bill your mustache iz tickling me.” She chuckled. Bill just laughed and kissed her again. Ginny rolled her eyes and sat down at the table. Harry sat down also, as Mrs. Weasley came into view. “Good morning, dears.” She greeted them. “Hungry?” “Sure.” Harry replied. “Mum, where are Ron and Hermione?” Ginny asked. “I don’t know. They were here just a minute ago.” Mrs. Weasly responded, cracking some eggs into a bowl. The mystery of where Ron and Hermione were, was solved, when Ron yelled out in anger. “CROOKSHANKS!” he shouted from the living room. Everybody in the kitchen migrated to the living room, just as Hermione was rushing down the stairs. “Ron? What is the matter?” Hermione asked. “Your bloody cat chucked all over my shoes!” Ron screeched. “Why do you blame it on Crookshanks?” Hermione said, turning pink. “Because do you know anybody else that could of done it?” Ron asked through gritted teeth. “No. But it might not have been him.” “You know it was him, Hermione. Stop sticking up for him!” “He’s my cat Ronald. How can I not stick up for him?” Ron’s eye starting twitching. Harry could tell Hermione was just getting him more frustrated. “Your cat-“ “Oh Ron, get over it.” Mrs. Weasly said. She took out her wand, and with a flick, his shoes were clean. “Now lets all go back in the kitchen and eat some breakfast.” Bill, Fluer, Ginny, and Hermione follwed Mrs. Weasly back into the kitchen. Ron stood still, his face slightly red. “Come on mate. It was only a little vomit.” Harry said trying to cheer him up. “It’s not that.” Ron said quietly. “Then what is?” Harry asked. “Nothing.” He said and walked into the kitchen. Sorry I know, I said I was going to post yesterday, but it was really late when I got home :P I hope you liked chapter 4!! *Steph* |
*NEW READER ALERT* i really like ur story pams pams pams |
Good post Steph. It's only a little vomit. :rotfl: Ooo...do I smell love in the air? :rotfl: I always said that when I was little, but anywho...haha Bill and Phlegm...I mean...Fleur and cute. :P PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!!!!!!! |
Ohhhh, I smell with my lil nose...LOVE! Ron+Hermione=Mwa!! PAMS. -Shirel |
new reader :d love your posts! post more soon :p i am kinda sorry 4 harry and ginny... i hope they will get back together... |
:lol: great post steph! and Lari that siggy you made is really good :yes: aww poor ickle Ronnie... bless his cotton sockies... please get Harry and Ginny back together! :cry: pams! |
I loved them both Steph.but what is up with ron*sighs*again with the cliffies.Pams if you get the chance. ~Heather~ |
Love the last chapter. Can't wait for more. YOu are such a good writer. |
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Ok I have finals coming up this week so I dont know when Ill be able to post but Ill try to post as soon as I can *Stupid end of the year finals* *Steph* |
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New reader! You're story is awesome and you are a great writer. PAMS!! Kami |
new reader i loved it pams! |
Welcome my new readers :hello: Im glad you liked it ;) Ok here is a post for all my loyal readers :D Chapter 5 Ron never told Harry why he was in such a bad mood, but it lightened over the next week. The twins would stop by around dinner, after they had closed their shop down for the night. Bill had taken a month off from work. He was still healing from Greyback’s attack. Usually around lunchtime he would get a weird craving for raw beef. On Saturday, the twins had taken the day off and they, Harry, Ron, Bill and Ginny got their broomsticks and played a game of quidditch in the garden. It felt so good to be back on his broom and just flying. Harry was on George and Ron’s team. Fred, Bill, and Ginny were on the opposite team. They were having so much fun, it was well past dark before Mrs. Weasly had come to get them. ************************************************** ****** The next morning, Harry and Ron both went down to breakfast in their pajamas. Hermione and Ginny were sitting at the kitchen table, with Mr.Weasly. Harry had only seen Mr. Weasly a few times after his appearance at his birthday party. Exhaustion coated his eyes and he looked at any minute he would collapse onto the table. “Hi dad. You don’t have to work today?” Ron asked, sitting across from Ginny. Mr.Weasly took a couple of seconds before answering. “No. I need to go back in a couple of hours.” He said tiredly. “Your father has worked twenty hours straight. Why don’t you go get some sleep Arthur.” Mrs. Weasly said. “Yeah I think I will.” He said, getting up from the table, rubbing his eyes. He walked out of the kitchen and they heard the soft thud thud thud, of him walking up the stairs. Just then a barn owl flew through the window and landed on an empty chair, leg extended. “Looks like your Hogwarts letters are in.” Mrs. Weasly said taking the envelopes from the owl’s leg. The owl hooted and flew back out the window. As she handed out the letters to the right person, another owl flew through the window. This one was a multicolored brown, with amber eyes. He took a sharp turn and landed in front of Hermione, holding out his leg. Hermione shot a glance at Ron, before taking the letter. Harry looked around at Ron too. He was looking down at the table cover, not looking at anybody. “Whats that about?” Harry wondered to himself. Hermione opened the letter and began to read to herself. Harry could tell she was trying to conceal a smile. When she finished, she handed the letter to Ginny, who began to read. “Are you going to say yes?” Ginny asked Hermione, after she had finished skimming it. “We’ll talk later.” Hermione replied, giving her a warning look. “So I think we will all head to Diagon Alley today, after breakfast.” Mrs. Weasly said, bringing the attention off Hermione. “Sounds great mum.” Ginny said cheerfully from her chair. “Yeah. I’ve been needing a new quill.” Hermione commented. Harry nodded his agreement and looked back at Ron. He looked like he was trying to look happy, but Harry could tell he was miserable. Why did a letter put him in such a down mood? Ther you all go :) Its a little slow right now, but I promise it will get better. *Steph* |
I think I know what's going on! I wish to say it...but I don't think I can. ^^ |
Great post. So can't wait. Also wonders why rons not happy. Post more soon. |
Great post! I think I know what's going on. But I'l wait to see if I'm right. PAMS Kami |
great post i have an idea, but i don't know if its right anyways, pamsies pamsies |
**NEW READER ALERT!** Hi. I read the whole ff so far and I have to admit. This is really good. Even though I don't go in the ff section alot I think this is really really good! Oh and I have a question. What does PAMS mean? Hannah |
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