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Alexa's Poems Okay, I usually only write poems after bad or good things happen to me. I don't remember any right now, so I'll write about a topic that has happened to me this year. I bet you'll understand what it means real fast. Connection's Gone Whenever I used to hold you You would hug me Whenever I would hold your hand You would kiss tenderly I would look straight into your eyes And you would be looking at me too So I would feel your presence in your soul There would be that connection with you But now darkness overcomes us And now the connection is broken I just feel angry and i hear myself cuss Because i cant stand that i dont hear you I want to keep lookin into your eyes But we both now that it's gone Now when i look i see what others used to despise And now I feel the jealousness too. |
Here's another one, when a close person to me .. died. This one doesnt rhyme but it means a lot to me. It was hard to write, so it's kinda sad, but it's the way i felt. If a close one never died to you you may not understand, but i was so confused at the time. Gone Gone. I can't explain it It's just so empty Nothing can replace it Gone. I cant hear the laughter Or the crying Or the heartfelt Or the anger Gone. I try to find hope I try to replace it It's so hard Why did you do this to me? Gone. How could you leave me Dont you have any respect The truth is i love And i always will Gone. How can i not Still feel you Memorys they say Its different. It's just... Gone. I love you so much Sarah. |
That is so deep. :( :( |
Thanks. Okay I'll make a funny poem now about Harry Potter. It's Potter! Who is that boy with the weird hair? It's Potter! It's Potter! Who is that boy with not a care? It's Potter! It's Potter! Many think he's quite weird. Potter's strange! Potter's strange! Snape says once he grew a beard. Potter's strange! Potter's strange. Draco said that Potter flunks. Potter fails Potions! Potter fails Potions! Ron said Harry creaks in the bunks. Potter's annoying! Potter's annoying! What is my conclusion, wizards and witches? That indeed, our friend Potter has many glitches! It's Potter! It's Potter! |
Dedicated to TOM FELTON Can't you look into his eyes forever? You never want to stop, never. He's so handsome and plays Draco well. If his face is on a magazine, that magazine sure will sell. Many know this young man as Tom The young girls call him "Da Bomb!" The teenage girls call him hot And elders don't really know what he's got. But still, with Harry Potter fanatics, Tom will live on We'll remember him as Draco, our memory of him will never be gone. |
I Can't Believe I can't believe we used to sit together on that bench. I can't believe used to play with each other all the time. I can't believe you used to tease me and call me "wench!" I can't believe you would be with me when I made a rhyme. I can't believe that we used to watch TV on that couch. I can't believe that when my phone rang it would always be you. I can't believe how we would play hide-and-seek, and you would always crouch. I can't believe how I would always laugh with you, and you would laugh with me too. I can't believe that I'm actually writing this out. I can't believe that you aren't ever, ever here to help me. I can't believe that my life has taken a different route. I cant believe this all happened just 'cause we weren't meant to be. That's prolly one of my favorite poems. Please, PLEASE, reply and tell me what you think about it. If you don't like it, just tell me, and I'll stop writing and stuff, but please it would mean so much if i could see the different views on my poems. Thank u!!! |
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lol thanks a lot k i'm postin my next poem up soon.. |
Nature Walk As I walk through the woods, there are leaves under my feet They crunch with every step in a rhythemic beat The music sounds in my ears while my back is warmed by the sun The natural sounds put me to peace, so there's no need to run Because I love being part of nature, just so everything's one. |
Hey can people comment on how they like my poems, and which ones? Then I'll write more thanks. |
This is really good poem...good job |
Harry Potter Couples Who is the greatest couple there could be? Which Harry Potter characters make symmetry? Could Harry and Hermione come as one? They've been friends, so they'll have fun. Or is it Ron and Hermione that make it nice? Ron would entertain Hermione.. and at a low price! ;) Hermione and Draco.. hmmm.. what about that? Draco wouldnt be as mean to Gryffindor.. not so much as a rat. Or do you want Ginny and Harry, together at at last, yes, so cute! They would socialize, 'cause Ginny wouldn't need to be, then, so mute. There are many, many, other choices of boys and girls It all depends on JK Rowling, or your imagination, with so many twists and twirls! Comment please and I'll write more! Thank you so much! |
Okay, now, I feel like writing a lot of poetry. Serious poetry, not having to do with Harry Potter. Glass Tears Glass tears fall From glazed eyes Jumping from the wall A wall made of lies They shatter When they hit the floor Pieces of sadness scatter For a love that is no more She bends and sweeps Away all the glass But a few pieces she keeps They will remain even after the tears pass Sleep evades her each night All the glass she had, she broke Happiness is out of sight All dreams of love gone up in smoke A shard of a tear cuts her Her blood freezes She cries and the world is a blur A blur of sharp glass and cureless diseases |
Inferior You can't ever understand what goes on Inside the mind before out words have gone It's hard to know that it's my life I'm living Not anyone else's life that I'm giving It seems so simple to another So it's like they don't bother But they say that everyone is the same And I want to believe that goes with my name I can't express how it feels to be inferor And how other's aren't supposed to be the superior But then I remember that it's my life And then I understand the blade of the cold, hard knife. |
Shrill The sounds goes through her mind It's shrill ringing repeating and repeating She can't leave her past behind But she turns around and walks away Her heart madly beating It stops and she lightens a bit But then she freezes Unable to breathe Unable to think Unable to remember As the shrill sound goes through her mind again Then she walks further away Images still in her mind Fear gripping her heart Unimaginable places to go And yet she stays. With the shrill tone of the phone Still ringing Still keeping her staying Unable to leave She can't go into the future She can't leave the past. |
Don't Know Me They don't know me. This is the low key. Judge me by my appearance. Think I'm an interference. Don't want to get to know Just look at the show That's not the way it's supposed to We're not in a movie, actors and go at the que This is real life I'm talking about This is the path of everyone's route |
These are really good! My favorites are: Shrill, and Don't know me... |
Thanks for the comments. :) I'll write more today prolly, but right now I have to go upstairs, so I'll be back later. |
Fire Only she can feel it The smoke choking them Noone else is in it's prescence But she goes on to death Trying to save herself But only running away From her own self Others cannot tell What happens in her mind It's enclosed with the flames The flames licking her brain Taking over when noone watches She tries to get out But she's trapped in her own nightmare It's not situation that's wrong It's her Just look into her eyes And see the fire that once arose. |
I like Don't Know Me, pretty flexible, nice rhyming. These lines: "Don't want to get to know Just look at the show That's not the way it's supposed to" are confusing to me, not fully finished? |
Hmm, I wrote that yesterday, I probably missed a word by accident, I can't remember now though. Remember It's your golden touch that led the way Your voice was the one I hear whenever I pray Even though you're not really here with me I still know that you're watching our whole family We still remember you and always will You're memory is the one thing no one can kill All I have is one favor for you to do When I try to talk to you, let me feel your prescence too If you can't do that, it's fine of course I'll never forget you, I will always remorse. Or I'll take my life on the high way like you always did And I'll be thankful for every moment of my life, be as happy as any kid But remember, remember, that every time I feel happiness around It's only because I can feel that your prescence is to be found. |
Arrow Through My Heart Can't you see my heart It's bruised and it's broken By so many others It's so easy for them to make a dent So many did, it's breaking But only you can put the arrow through it And you did How could you do that Don't you get that my heart's fragile? Don't you understand I devoted all my heart to you And you took it and used it And tore it apart But your heart is still full Because you took another To fulfill it While I lay here In purple and black bruises My heartache. |
These poems are really good. You're really talented. :up: You can show that you can both rhyme in your poems well, and you can also do other kinds of poems, showing a lot of emotions. Write more! :) |
Really good poems! Keep up the good work. |
Thanks :) Depths of My Soul It's into the depth that you must look My mind is not to be read like a book Look deeper, look harder, see more Don't you know my heart's the door? Go through and memories you will see And all the heartaches you will be Look in deeper, you're not looking hard enough And you'll see all the times I was tormented and tried to be tough Or the time when I was a kid when I was abused And then, when I got older, by boys I got used Then, older, I didn't get into college at all And I started smoking so I didn't stand tall Then, look, later it goes At the reunion I meet up with my foes Do you see any friends there? No, no one would dare Now finally look at me now Want to die but don't know how All I wanted was for you to look inside earlier than this Then maybe when I was innocent, I would have gotten the gist. |
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