awww Teddy...why couldnt it have been Draco? teehee...aw and only five more chapters? I will have to check out your other stories! PAMS

Hahahaha. I actually contemplated several people- including Draco, Lorcan, George or Ron, but i felt Teddy was the best choice cause him and James are best friends. Either way Draco palys a big part later on ;)

oh goodness, can;t wait! XD

Aww you made me cry in that chapter it was written so wonderfully. I cant wait for more. :sob: please dont kill off more good people

Sarah

Can't promise anything hahaha :b But, whoever said they would die?

i knew it was coming before it happened. :( poor teddy Im so upset right now. and James was so upset. I love how he's the one coming to save everyone like his father...hey, "like father, like son" for both of them! really great!

Thanks ashfig! Yes, yes, like father like son! and nowwww you all get another chapter cause I'm bored! :D Short chapter, though. Muse is low.

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CHAPTER 7 pt. 2
Evil In this World part 2
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"James!" Called out Harry, but James was gone. He was firing spells, each and everyone he knew. Death Eaters jumped out of the way, some hit it right on, others just kinda collapsed. He ran to the school, and saw several things. Lorcan and Lysander were fighting two Death Eaters, Scorpius was not there, Albus and Rose were running past and
Shawn was behind them. James ran down the hallway, and came to the Courtyard. A rough looking Death Eater took down some windows, but James went to the right. He ran and ran and ran, not knowing where he was.

He was outside, and he was suddenly blocked by a large plume of black smoke. A man formed, his black hair greasy, his skin pale, and red under his eyes. He aimed his wand at James, until Albus ran out and began dueling the man. Flashes of light, and James fired the Avada Kedavra curse at the man. It his him full on- but no effect. James backed away, and he and Albus continued to duel the man. Soon they were joined by Scorpius, but the man just kept on firing and blocking. He waved his wand, and Albus and James flew back, hitting the ground, hard.

It was just Scorpius. He fell to the ground, and slowly tried to crawl away.
"Avada-" there was a grunt of pain, and a growl of anger, and a sudden bright flash of white. Draco Malfoy stood, tall, his wand pointing at the form on his ground.
"All of you- run! Run, I said!" he shouted. They made to run, but stopped a little far off, just barely able to see. they were joined by the others- Shawn, Rose, Lorcan and Lysander. They saw Draco and the man dueling fiercely. Bright flashes of light, and Draco yelled out a spell, and a whole lot of bright white light flashes at the man.

oooh Draco! i love the idea of him being the good guy! using his powers for good, fifty points for slytherin! (never thought I'd wanna say that)

I agree with ashfig, I love Draco being good. but I also love him being bad. so pretty much love him all the time...great chapter!

Alright guys! Here it is, the big one! The be all, end of this part of Albus' school life but ther will be more so its all good! (that was alot of typing.... o.o) ANYWAYS. 2 more chapters after this. Then at the second to last chapter I shall post YEAR 2- IT shall be called ALBUS POTTER AND THE IMMORTALS, and its will be in the High Security Vaults. So yeah.
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CHAPTER 7 pt 3
evil in the world pt 3
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Draco was dueling with all he had, oblivious to the fact that this man survived getting a Killing Curse without a mark. He yelled, then tackled the man- who the kids presumed was Atrox- and the Short ranged up, up, up, into the Astronomy Tower. The kids ran further into the field, watching as the duel continued.

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Draco snarled, shouting out curses and jinxes and hexes. Everyone was blocked, and he blocked every spell he could. He shot Stupefy, and Atrox shot some blue spell, and the exploded in midair. Draco took the chance.
"Expelliarmus!" He shouted. Atrox's wand shot out of his hand. Draco growled.
"Explodis Elun Deloris!" He shouted, his hand out to his sides. A red, slightly misty looking orb was beginning to spread around them.
"I know, now, that you killed her!" He shouted, a tear falling down his face. "You killed her, because my father didn't like her! You killed her! She was my wife!" He roared. The orb expanded more.

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Scorpius looked, curious.
"W-whats he doing?" He asked.
James didn't answer.

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Atrox yelled, walking, but struggling when he walked. It seemed Draco was holding him back.
"NO!" He yelled, and lunged at Draco, hand outstretched.
The orb exploded.

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BOOM!
The top and some parts of the side of the tower exploded, the red orb dispersing smaller red particles from it. Scorpius, stood, wide eyed, then ran to the tower. James caught him, holding him tightly.
"No- no- NO! FATHER!" He shouted, trying to get out. James tightened his grip, but Scorpius dropped down, on his side, and just cried.
James looked around, and saw a note. He walked to it, and looked at it.

Dear Scorpius,
I now know what I have to do. I must sacrifice myself to kill this monster. He killed you mother. Now, I want you to go live with the Potters. I know they will be fine with that.
I'm repaying a debt to them.
Love always,
Your father.

Oh no so sad are you kidding me, I said o more killing good people:P and I liked Draco he was good.
ayway continue on besides killing draco and teddy it is a wonderful story

Sarah

P.S? Why is the next one going to be in mature, just wondering?

thanks yous! And yes, i know. But poor Draco and teddy mean something later in the story... well their deaths, that is.

Its going to be there because its going to be more violent, but not -very- violent. Just more than this story.

EDIT: Sequel has been written and submitted! Two more chapters and its on to the sequel!

Well here's the new chapter! Mods sorry for double post! If I can't do this please tell :D

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CHAPTER 8:
brave new world
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The Death Eaters had fled, leaving ruin behind. Portraits destroyed, the Astronomy Tower in pieces, and Scorpius in pieces as well. Albus sat with him in the Hallway, joined by Rose, and James and Lorcan and Lysnder were walking around, looking for any bodies. Scorpius was in tears, only an 11 year old, who had just seen his father die.
"Scorpius..." Rose said, rubbing him on his shoulder. "He died for our cause...... he took out the evil that could have destoryed us...." She said. Scorpius just nodded, and made to get up.

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Albus and James and Rose and Scorpius began sticking together, more so than with Lorcan and Lysander and Shawn, who were in their own little group as well.
Scorpius still hadn't gotten over the death of his father, and cried himself to sleep, knowing that he had no parents now.
James put on a tough exterior like he always did, but Albus knew his brother more than anyone, and knew well how affected James was. Teddy had his body put in a Gryffindor shroud, and was placed in a conjured coffin, and put near another pedastal next to Dumbledore's body. The funeral even more difficult than James or Albus could imagine.

Albus read a speech he spent all night making, sniffling through it. James tried, but finally broke down. everyone else who made a speech could barely talk, but Victorie, who was married to him, and carrying their baby, couldn't get through it. It took her parents to be able to calm her. James walked to his common room, laying down. Harry and Ginny came up, followed by Albus, and sat down with their son. Albus also cried that night. They all cried, remembering their family member.

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Hogwarts was a mere shadow on the sky as the train departed, and Albus was looking down, James was asleep, and Scorpius was looking out of the window.

aww! is it over??? man! poor Draco, Teddy, and Victorie! great job!

Yes, sadly. I was going to do one more chapter, but there was really nothing more to do after this chapter.
Also, I'm going to leave this opened for comments and stuff like that before I ask mods to move it, and then hopefully you guys will get the sequel!

So sad *sniff* why draco? he was so good on the inside. why? (drops on to knees for dramatic affect) haha I liked this A LOT! and I really like Albus and James and Scorpius. I am very upset that its over! but i guess a sequel is fine...although i'm slightly concerned about its maturity level lol im like a 4 yr old on the inside :P

*sniff sniff* tears in my eyes. Gosh that must be sad for everyone. I am excited for the sequel, even though it is mature and I normally dont read mature, but you have convinced me it isnt to bad so I will read it. Great chapter, dont worry about the double post I have like six posts in a row at my poetry thread :lol: I will be waiting for the last chappie and sequel.

Sarah

Awwww!