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Chapter 7, Part 1
“Yes!” I screamed applauding Harry. We had won! It was only a practice run but we had won! It felt great. After all that...Sam lost! The poor guy sweating through his robes and he didn’t get to win. The crowd was roaring and I really couldn’t believe it!
The Ravenclaw seeker was kicking up dust and frowning. It had been her fault really and she knew it. It must have been hard for her. “Teams shake hands!” Madam Hooch called as we landed, “Congratulations Gryffindor, and a wonderful game played by both sides!” She had said to the lot of us. It had been tough. Harry just about saved it for us though. He was the best seeker Hogwarts had, we were pretty lucky.
I shook each of the players’ hands but when I came to Sam I couldn’t resist giving him a little punch. “Hey!” He said grinning. Then I went to the Gryffindor Common room to celebrate. Even a practice matches win is a good thing. “Brilliant Ari!” “Nicely done!” “Perfect!” It was almost like being famous. One of the reasons I had stayed on the team for so long.
My robes were dragging on the ground but I didn’t care, although I needed to get my hair down. As I pulled it out of its bundle it kind of unfolded onto my shoulders with my green stripes in my eyes. I had to look cool.
I pushed through the portrait hole and a bunch of hands pulled me in. “Ari! That was brilliant mate!” I grinned. “You were great too, Weasley” I said back to him. The boys had gone all out. There were tankards of butterbeer everywhere as well as some new Weasley’s Wizard Wheezes stuff and what looked like chocolate éclairs. Basically everything that made a party. | |
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Chapter 7, Part 2
Sam walked back to the locker room with a small smile on his face. She was too perfect. He walked into the room and was greeted by a hoard of unhappy, brooding faces. He knew what they were thinking about; they were wondering if it was their fault that Ravenclaw had lost. Or if not was thinking about how the catch was taken and if the Ravens could have won. It was all a matter of thought and for the Ravenclaw captain teamwork, speed and practice.
It was going to be a long hard week, but not as hard for him as today would be for Ari. She had detention today with Flitch which meant she would be cleaning something. Earlier in the week the caretaker had told her to be in the dungeons at eight, he just hoped she wouldn’t forget.
Sam changed in silence as did the rest of the team and when he walked out of the changing room her felt slightly downhearted. Misery was infectious. He stopped by the lake on his way to the castle and sat down, then he stood up, he squatted picked up a flat rock and skipped it across the lakes surface.
He liked to do that a lot; the giant squid didn’t seem to mind much so he skipped another. Sam sat down. He knew he had to tell her soon but he couldn’t find how, or when, even why and he was sure if he didn’t step up soon, she would be gone. He just needed a little push in the right direction and it was proving hard to find. | |
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Chapter 1- The Meeting
Progreto. I was repelling the spells with difficulty, from bubble head charms to the basic shield charm I couldn’t launch a counter-attack. “Everyone!” Harry called the class. He had become more confident as a teacher and he own abilities since his first year and handled the group quite well. “We’re going to be using non-verbal spells on a Boggart. I don’t want you to get rid of it exactly but perform spells that will be funny and interesting. Does anyone have any questions?” No one raised their hands and after pausing for a moment after looking around Harry continued, “Okay, Ari and Sam, you two can start us off.”
Ari wasn’t really my name, it was Arora. I hated the name and didn’t use it if I could help it because it was nothing like me. Ari just sounded more...well natural. Sam and I stood facing the chest Harry was holding onto. “Are you two ready?” he asked us. I nodded while thinking of all the spells I knew. Sam just said, “Yeah, let a rip.” Harry undid the catch and pulled open the chest.
Out of it climbed a girl. It chose my fear. She had black hair with dark Emerald green highlights she wore black clothes, shorts and a t-shirt, trainers too they contrasted slightly with the girl’s pale skin. Oh it’s me. I thought. Although she-I seemed sort of different. Shadowy in a sense.
The Boggart raised its wand and I imagined the lunch lady at my muggle school – wearing the clothes I hated. Ridiculus. I thought and immediately a dumpy woman in a tight dress with uncomfortable shoes appeared. She looked horrified and there was a wart on the end of her nose. I burst out laughing as much of the class did and then as I looked up Sam shot the Boggart with a spell and she flew up in the air standing on a thin plank. She was so shocked that she hardly had time to find another person to concentrate on. I flipped her around and let her land on the plank then Sam pulled it from beneath her feet.
A shriek erupted from her as she fell and I decided she needed some help. I taped her mouth shut and conjured some ropes, as Sam commenced the puppet show while I ripped off the tape. She screamed as she rose and fell and then I cut the ropes- with her in the air and she landed right into the chest Harry held open. He quickly put his weight against it and did the latch. “Very nicely done guys,” he said. I grinned and extended a fist and Sam did the same. They met in a light punch and Sam grinned at me. “That was great guys!” Cendie said coming up behind me. “Thanks,” I said. Sam shrugged, “All in a days work,” he said and smiled. I punched him and Cendie shoved him causing him to lose balance completely that he fell backwards. Cendie almost tripped herself if I hadn’t grabbed her shoulder in time.
Sam sat up. “Thanks for the help guys,” he said getting to his feet and I felt my legs lock together I looked at Cendie she was too. “You’re so dead,” I said sending a full-body-bind at him but he ducked and I sent another in just the right area. Sam went rigid and I could see his eyes moving. He looked kind of disappointed but only for a second, and then they were pleading. I recited the counter curse for leg-locker to my self and felt freedom return to me; I looked over at Cendie who was searching frantically for her wand. Realising she had been standing in front of it she hopped forwards and around then picked up her wand, but then she fell forwards.
I laughed and repeated the counter curse for her so she could get to her feet. Then I went over to Sam and made to jump on him and his eyes went wide. I grinned and landed safely with a leg on either side of him. I moved over to his face and recited the counter curse for Full-body-bind and stood up. I gave him a hand up and looked at Cendie. She was stretching the stiffness out of her legs. “Ah that’s better,” she said when she saw me and grinned.
A hoard of laughter went up. We all looked around to see a bogeyman with bright teeth and rosy cheeks grow a wig of blond hair and blue eyes. “Oh, are we supposed to be watching?” I asked. “Yeah,” Cendie said and grabbed my arm. “Come on.” She dragged me up to the group and we looked on at the unique bogeyman make his changes.
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“Hmph,” escaped Arora’s lips as she caught the bludger and lay struggling on the ground with it. She managed to force the chain around it and the ball was restrained. Arora quickly made her way back from the Qudditch Pitch. She was steadily getting better and she wanted to try out for the Gryffindor quidditch team. Ari wasn’t the perfect build but she was wiry and strong and that was good on a windless day. Arora was pale and thin; she was tall for her age and had raven coloured hair.
The most unusual thing about her was the vivid streaks of green flowing through her straight black hair. She’d dyed it when she was much younger and it wasn’t likely to come off now. Also she’d been forbidden by her hair dresser to re-dye it. It would “destroy your beautiful locks, dear” and her mother had listened. So Ari had the strangest hair in her muggle school as well as at Hogwarts.
Arora hurried through the portrait hole which had served as the secret entrance to the Gryffindor common room for centuries. She spied Cendie in a corner finishing off some kind of work or another. She sat beside her but a little closer to the fire and pulled out a stack of books out of her bag. “Hey,” she said and went straight to work. Potions. Arora sighed and pulled the book towards her. She began making lengthy notes on the different kinds of Wargltof and the importance of it in a Cleansing potion. She had just about made it though her piles of hand written notes on the potions they had done in class when Cendie threw up her pen saying, “It’s hopeless.” “What is?” Arora asked hardly looking up from her work. She finished off her sentence with....and this side effect can be conquered by the scrapings of Morgle root.... and looked up at her friend.
Cendie was Jamaican and she had been blunt with Arora when she had first met her by declaring loudly, “Hey, I’m Jamaican in a school that teaches you magic. Any one got a problem with that?” Cendie had gotten square in her face and glowered at her and Arora had found her first friend at Hogwarts. Sitting in the large arm chair with her face turned upwards and her eyes closed Cendie looked quite comical. Arora burst out laughing. “What?” Cendie sat up and stared at her as though she was mad which made Arora laugh harder. “Ah come on....what’s so funny?” Cendie punched Arora in the gut and Arora clutched her stomach while the laughter subsided. “You...just....looked....weird....” Arora was unable to go on, tears starting form at the sides of her bright green eyes. “Ha-ha. Very funny.”
Cendie looked rather annoyed so Arora tried her best to stop laughing and then she managed to continue with her potions assignment. Arora’s pale unblemished skin contrasted with her striped green and black hair while her eyes shone out of her face like a breath of fresh air. While Arora was consumed in her work she wouldn’t notice anything much but a teacher, and this was a blessing for her. She seldom wore her hair up and usually let it flutter around her face and blow her shoulders, the layers blowing across her face in the wind. She had a bracelet she wore around her left wrist. It was sincerely important to her, that you could tell, but she wouldn’t say how-even to Cendie.
Arora leaned back and stretched. Potions homework was dull work, but she enjoyed the sense of achievement it gave her. She then started on the piles of notes she had on Herbology. This was slightly easier; she could put things down in point form and draw tables in stead of writing 3 foot long essays on a mundane ingredient in Professor Grelding’s store cupboard. She listed down the magical properties of several magical plants and set aside the bundle of parchment. “Accio quill,” she whispered to herself, under her breath and a quill flew into her hand. “Wingardium Leviosa.” It floated upwards. “Morblilius.” It flew across the room and settled beneath Cendie. “Well homework’s done,” she declared. “I’m going down for dinner. D’you want anything?” she asked and was answered by a shake of the head. “See you later then.” “Yeah, sure, whatever.” Cendie replied and Aurora left the room.
Chapter 2-Strange Nights
“Hey man I’m going to supper, you coming?” Sam asked his friend Rane. “Nah, I’m gonna cram for tomorrow.” Rane’s hazel eyes hardly left the parchment he was frantically scratching on. Sam smirked and left the Ravenclaw common room, it was so typical of the boy not to study until the night before and then just barely pass a test. Astronomy wasn’t Sam’s subject but he didn’t fail it that often, after all the studying he shouldn’t at all. The thirteen year old boy was blond and had grey eyes. He was a good build and quite muscular, but the most interesting thing about him was his smile. Or smirk rather.
Sam was Welsh. He had transferred to Hogwarts only a year previously and was quite at home now. He and Rane had been friends for that long and Sam enjoyed every moment of it. He and Aurora became friends in their History of Magic class and she introduced him to Cendie.
Sam walked down the flight of steps from the common room and whistled a little, it was a peaceful day to say the least. He stepped out on to the last flight of stairs and looked up. “Ari!” The girl looked down and grinned at him. “Where’s Rane?” She asked leaning on the banister. “He’s cramming for an Astronomy test!” Sam replied and walked down a few more steps. “Test?” “Yeah, I’m alright with it.” Sam said and his black sneakers stepped lightly on to the ground floor. Arora was speeding down the steps as she usually did and Sam met her as she made it to the ground.
“You sure?” Arora said grinning at him. Last time he’d failed. “Yeah, no prob I studied all week."Some how Arora’s eyes were disbelieving. “Yeah, sure,” “What? It’s true!” Arora laughed and her voice echoed around the space. Sam smiled faintly and led the way to the entrance hall, his hands in his pockets.
The Great Hall was bustling with activity, none of the students would bother staying in their seats and were mixing with the other houses, and the Slytherin tabled was the only table that was detached from the rest of the houses. Sam stepped into the Great Hall followed closely by Arora. “Well look who it is!” A simpering voice projected out into the crowd and Sam looked behind him. It was a Slytherin girl. She was tall and a red head.
“Arora and a boy?” Arora, that would surely get Ari angry. “Tina? Your boxers are on fire.” And they were. Arora’s eyes were glinting dangerously, no one had seen her pull out her wand and cast the spell but no one seemed to care. There was a small group of people forming around them and laughing as Tina frantically stamped on her flaming robes. “Help me you trolls!” she called out to her friends and they grimaced at her.
Finally after laughing for about a minute Arora out the smouldering robes with a little water and walked away leaving Tina holding up the burnt fabric in her hands. Sam smirked at her evilly and followed Aurora to the Gryffindor table. “Nicely done Ari.” He said still smirking. “Thanks, she had it coming to her,” Arora said piling food on to her plate. “That may be so but it wasn’t necessary.” Sam’s head snapped up. There was the Gryffindor head of house, Professor McGonagall frowning down on them.
“You will be serving detention tomorrow with Mr. Filch.” Arora’s face was blank and McGonagall left them on their own. “There goes a perfectly good Friday afternoon,” Arora said in an undertone while spearing a piece of chicken. “At least it’s not going to be with Snape.” Sam replied. He had served a detention with Snape after maliciously exploding a potion that spattered on the Professor’s face.
“Yeah but still.” Arora was eating slowly, thinking of what Filch had planned for her. “It can’t be too bad right?” Arora’s first detention. Sam knew it. “Your first ever detention?” he asked her tactfully. “No!” she said quickly and then realising that he knew, she continued, “Well yeah.” “It’s no big; they just make you clean up some muck.” “Great!” Arora replied sarcastically. “Hey! What’s up? I just finished the stupid potions!” Cendie asked standing close to Arora’s shoulder.
Oh, hi Cendie, Sam thought to him self. What a great way to but in! The Jamaican girl sat down next to Arora and said, “So what’s up?” “Ari’s just got herself a detention.” Sam replied grinning at the girl. He was a great actor. “How’d that happen?” Cendie asked her eyes wide. “Set Tina’s robes on fire.” Arora said a small smile appearing on her face. Nice. “I was wondering why she was so ticked.” Cendie said smiling hugely; there was nothing funnier than that, even though she’d missed it. “...with a boy?” Tina had said as thought they were announced to be married. Sam smiled slightly again while he hunched over his food.
“You enjoying yourself?” Cendie asked sarcastically and Sam smirked and replied, “That’s strange isn’t it?” and Arora snorted. Cendie laughed warmly and piled some food on her plate. Why’d she laugh? They talked about vague things for a while and when they were all ready to leave Sam and Arora heard Tina whisper, “My robes! They were new! I’ve got to buy more now!” and they burst out laughing. “What?” Cendie asked, oblivious and Sam explained to her quietly.
The plates were wiped clean and many benches screeched as they were pushed back. All the students that were left in the Great Hall walked away in different directions, a perfect display of no order. Sam was enjoying himself despite Cendie’s presence. She talked for them both. Sam and Arora hardly had to say anything to her and she talked on and on about mundane things that interested neither Sam nor Arora. Finally they made it to the hall in which Sam had to part from the other two. “Night!” he called to them as he climbed a flight of stairs and disappeared to callings of good night. Sam’s mind was full of nothing but Arora.
Her absolute difference from all the other girls attracted hi and he had no idea why. Maybe it’s puberty. Sam walked along a corridor in deep thought, unaware of anything that might be happening around him and managed to walk into a suit of armour. “Hey you! What d’you thing you’re doing? You better watch where you’re going from now on!” “Sorry man,” Sam said rubbing his head while sitting on the floor. “I’m a woman!” the suit shrieked at him. Sam hurried away from it and down the corridor.
Soon Sam got to the entrance of the Ravenclaw common room and whispered the password to the guard when a horrible scream echoed from outside. Sam hurried in as soon as the entrance was opened by a suit of amour and his eye’s widened at the scene he was before him. Sam gasped and climbed through the hole but his robes got caught on the side. They’ve really got to fix this! Sam thought while he freed himself and landed on his feet on the other side of the entrance. “Help me!” Sam tensed his muscles, ready for anything.
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I landed on my feet, cat-like and stood up. In front of me were a gaggle of guys grouped around a girl crying and shrieking on the floor. Rane stepped forwards and she screamed, “Get away you freak! Leave me alone!” and then the next second, “Help me!” The guys had no idea what to do and Rene looked especially abashed. He was standing a good five feet away from her now. I stepped forwards and she smiled at him for some reason.
“I’m glad you came,” she said. “These idiots have no idea what they’re doing.” What?!? I’d expected her to scream at me like all the others but she hadn’t, she’d been nice-sort of. I must have looked really funny because Rane burst out laughing. I ignored him and stepped forwards again. Nothing, okay cool. I managed to get within two feet of her without another out burst when one of the guys on the outside moved.
“Sam! Sam! He’s going to kill you! Sam!” I spun around and saw the kid; he had gone very white and looked very shocked. I smirked at him and he visibly relaxed. No one dared move after that, so I got out my wand and levitated her above my head. “Oh! This is so much fun!” she squealed and I levitated her out of the Ravenclaw common room. Where the heck should I take her? She was kicking and pretending to be swimming all the way and it was starting to get really annoying.
“Wheeeeeeeeeee!” I smirked. There wad definitely some thing wrong with that child. It just wasn’t normal to act like a five year old when you’re....eleven? Twelve? I had no idea but I knew she didn’t act like this normally. She would probably need to see Madam Pomfrey.
I levitated her down the halls and all the staircases until I got her to the hospital wing and she seemed a little drowsy now. “Madam Pomfrey! There’s a something wrong with her.” I said awkwardly. What was I supposed to tell her? “Well what is it?” the healer said impatiently when she’d come out of her office.
“Urm...she’s acting like a five year old. Not talking like one but like behaving weirdly.She sat on the floor in the Ravenclaw common room and didn’t let anyone help her, and she kept screaming at them like they were hurting or were going to hurt her.” I said. It sounded pretty stupid. There I was levitating a girl that was “acting like a five year old”. I tried to stop myself from laughing but it was kind of hard so I looked at the floor and then smirked.
“I’ve never heard of that happening before!” the healer exclaimed and looked at the girl. “Lay her on one of the beds dear.” I did as I was told and the healer went up to the girl, “How old are you dear?” “Eleven!” The kid giggled and curled up into a ball. “This is strange isn’t it?” I just managed to see her nod her head and put her thumb in her mouth. “Thank you....?” “Sam.” “Thank you Sam, she’ll be safe here.”
So I left and was pretty glad to tell you the truth. I was tired, like you wouldn’t believe and now I had a Qudditch practice tomorrow as well. I walked back up all the steps and down the corridors and made it passed the weird suit of armour that guarded the entrance.
“What was that all about?” Rane was still up. “Dunno.” I said to him. “Madam Pomfrey just took her in.” Rene asked a few questions and then he stopped for a bit. Maybe he wanted to keep talking but I don’t know, I was already asleep and loving it because I didn’t wake up when Rane tried to awaken me and then left because I didn’t react and all the different people that went through the room because the room was spotless when I woke up-just in time for class that was too.
Chapter 3-The Dream
Arora was asleep in the girls’ dorm, her head resting lightly on her pillow and her hair flowing over the pillow. The sheets were heavy on her skin, keeping it warm on a cold night. A tapping could be heard as the night’s breeze fluttered over her face through the window that was slightly ajar. Wait, how could the breeze come in? She had made sure the drapes were firmly shut last night! There wasn’t a gap in it and it wasn’t going to roll out, she was sure of it. Then everything changed. She was in a hotel room, the breeze fluttering in through the slightly ajar window, the shutters billowing. Arora’s toes were just peeking out of the end of the bed her long tanned legs perfectly straight and her arms pulled up beside her as she lay on her stomach.
She was in an exotic land, the air was hot and sticky and yet a cold but pleasant breeze filled the room now and again. Arora’s eye snapped open and she rolled over taking in a tinge of fruit in the air. Her hair was short now and no longer had the bright green strips of hair in her face but a shock of auburn hair that flowed in every direction. Arora pulled her legs up, they were surely longer that she had remembered and smoother too. Her arms were tanned and more muscular as well. Arora sat up; this must be in a different time and place obviously. Britain couldn’t be so warm; perhaps she was back in America? In Florida by the looks of it. Yet the air smelled different like it was really a very exotic place.
She ran her hand through her hair; it was wonderfully clean and shiny. Arora went to the mirror, she had really grown up. At a guess she looked at least nineteen or twenty. She was wearing shorts and a simple T-shirt; thankfully it didn’t look like she had become too girly. She looked quite muscular but not to much. That was definitely a good thing. Arora ran a brush through her hair and tied it up behind her. She looked out of the window a saw a palm filled beach, nothing in Florida would be that beautiful. Arora was lost in the beauty of the landscape when a pair of arms wrapped around her. She almost panicked when she turned around and her muscles relaxed.
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Arora woke with a start. There was sweat on her forehead and she was breathing heavily. She was back to normal, her old, pale self again. Who did I see? She had been having the dream for a fortnight.
It was almost a half dream, like she was half conscious the whole time. Arora was a little shaky as she ran a brush through her black and green streaked hair, this was the first time she had gotten this far into the dream and she remembered it all. There was no time to think of things like that now, her early wakening had forced her to struggle to get to sleep until it was almost 3AM and she had slept into the morning. It was Friday, the day of her detention with Filch and she knew she would be kept up late. It was also the day of quidditch practice, she and Sam had tried out together in their second year and this year as well; Cendie wasn’t one to play sport, she was more of a speaker, if that made any sense.
Arora wasn’t going to be able to have breakfast at this rate, she grabbed her tote bag that was bursting at the seams and hurried down the stairs and out of the portrait hole. Cendie had just been coming back to get her with a couple of slices of buttered toast when Arora had reached the end of the hall. “Oh! So you finally got up!” Cendie said handing her the toast. “Thanks! I was worried about food.” “Aren’t you always?” “Funny.” Arora replied sarcastically. The two of them scrambled off to the Transfiguration classroom for their first class. It was going to be with the Slytherins which most definitely wouldn’t be pleasant.
As it was expected they came face to face with their least favourite people, Trina and Dain, the two most annoying Slytherins. Dain was a boy but from what he looked like and his name you wouldn’t guess it was so. The pair were sneering as best as they could at the two girls as they approached the classroom and Tina decided to put in a scathing remark. “Did you just get up? Oh wait, your always that ugly, Arora!” Arora was about to do something along the lines of what she did in the Great Hall but Professor McGonagall appeared her face as stern as ever.
The students were ushered into the classroom to what was undoubtedly a very hard lesson. “Today we are going to be Transfiguring a rat into a cat,” Arora groaned audibly. Cendie giggled and Tina made a rude noise. The lines around Professor McGonagall’s mouth were getting even more taunt as she told them off. There was something bothering her and it wasn’t a trifle topic at all.
Chapter 4- The Hospital Wing
Sam was ready and pumped for quidditch practice. Not only was he going to be on a broom again but he would she Arora playing too. The two of them were chasers and they tried out together each year. This would be the only time one could see Arora with her hair up, she looked beautiful, not that she knew it and Sam wasn’t going to be the one to tell her. The practices were more like matches; two of the houses played each other for pure fun and in the process found out what the opposing team’s weaknesses were. Today it was a practice match between Gryffindor and Ravenclaw and Sam got to play against his friend. Ironic isn’t it?
Sam walked down to the Quidditch pitch with changing into his robes and fetching his broom in mind. He entered the Ravenclaw changing room to a cheerful atmosphere. Their captain was very lax when it was off-season but not when it came to the real games. In those he could almost kill a player for one wrong move. “Hey Sammy!” That was one of the things he hated being called. “Sam!” he said, his voice slightly muffled because of a headlock that had been put on him. “Yeah sure,” his captain said to him finally letting go and Sam shook his head slightly. “Let’s go out there and kill them!” Sam’s captain said growling rather like the “wrestlers” Sam had heard about, muggles that fought for a living.
Sam had put on his robes and said to him, “Gees let me get my broom at least!” and walked out of the changing room, his bright blue robes a nice change from the usual black. He saw Arora walking along the pitch towards the Gryffindor changing room. Hmm...She looks just as good with her hair down as when it’s up. Must be the wind then. Sam wrenched his eyes away from the sight of his friend towards the broom closet that he had left his broom in at the start of the term. The door creaked open and Sam stepped inside, he found his broom when he heard a loud creaking behind him and he looked over his shoulder. There was nothing there. I’m losing my mind. Sam heard yet another rather ominous sound that grew louder and louder but didn’t seem to come from any direction when suddenly, Ahhhhhhhhhhhh!
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Sam ran outside of the broom closet and found Arora gingerly getting up onto one foot. She was grimacing and cursing under her breath. “You okay?” Sam asked moving to her side. “Urm, no, not really.” Sam smirked and cast a levitating spell on the girl. As she floated up into the air the grimace tuned into a frown. “I can walk! Put me down!” So Sam gently floated Arora to the ground where she could get up. Arora started off towards the hospital wing wincing at every moment. “Okay well at least let me help you,” Sam said. She’d only made a few steps in the general direction of the castle. Arora knew that her case was lost already as she said, “Fine.”
Arora leaned her weight against Sam and he tried to move in unison with her. He was built well enough for Arora’s weight not to bother him at all and the two of them slowly made their way out into the open. “Mate? Are you coming to the game?” It was Sam’s captain. “Yep! Let me just help her to the hospital wing!” “Why don’t you just levitate her there?” “She didn’t want me too.” Sam’s captain smiled almost knowingly and let his chaser go; one of the reserves would get a chance to play at least. Arora was silent during this exchange, her already pale skin going slightly white. It must have been really hurting her, but she didn’t wail or gasp once.
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“Are you sure you don’t want me to levitate you there?” Sam asked getting a little worried about her. Arora shook her head. “No, It won’t be long before we get there,” she said her voice surprisingly steady. They were only a few steps away from the castle but they had to wander the hallways to get to the hospital wing and that would take some time. They walked through the large doors and passed the entrance hall using the many hallways to navigate the castle. “Hello there! What’s the matter?” It was the Hufflepuff ghost, the Fat Friar. “She sprained her ankle,” Sam explained. “Oh dear! Well good luck on getting to the Hospital Wing! I would help but I can’t!” The ghost flew of the other direction. Sam was getting tiered of this.
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Arora knew Sam was just trying to help but she was getting both annoyed and tired of him half-dragging her to the hospital wing. It was almost defiantly making the pain worse. “You know what?” she said to him. “I think I can take it from here.” Arora stopped walking and carefully balanced herself on her good ankle. “You sure?” he asked her eyeing her leg and she assured him that she was fine and that she could get to the hospital wing. Sam eventually gave in and went back to the pitch slowly. “Isn’t your captain waiting for you?”
Sam looked back at her and swore under his breath as he took off running. Arora smiled and gasped the mouldings next to her as she took a few tentative steps forward. With an impressive pain shooting up and down her leg Arora made her way as slowly and calmly to the hospital wing as possible. “Ah!” Arora gasped as she stepped too quickly on her sprained ankle and she pulled up her leg in pain. It wouldn’t be too long before she got to the hospital wing but she needed a rest. Arora sat down on the side of the corridor her back resting on the wall.
It was peaceful in the corridor. There was a soft light playing on the stone flagging illuminating the soft veins of winding glass trapped deep inside it. Arora’s eyes swept over the scene momentarily distracting her from her mortal pain. A soft summer breeze blew in from the large ornate windows drawing her gaze upwards out to the grounds and the lake. She had never actually realised how lucky she was to be a witch and to have come to Hogwarts-and have any friends at all really.
It was funny how that was the only thing her eleven year old mind was afraid of. It wasn’t how her family would react or whether her grades could survive and not even pure elation. Just whether she could make friends in the wizarding world. A world she had no idea existed. The light brightened her dark green eyes and almost livened up her pale skin. Arora didn’t seem to be the ideal companion but the pale mask hid her beauty. One that could not be detected with a glance or a smile but with time.
That was the one thing she needed the most. Time. It was also the one thing she was wasting at the moment. Arora grasped the near by window and pulled herself upwards losing her balance at one point and falling heavily on the space of wall next to the window. Winded Arora tried her best to use her good leg to slide up the wall instead of down it and managed to get upright. Arora took a deep breath and took hold of the window. No one would know that she had cheated. So why shouldn’t she? It’s not like she can’t keep a worthless secret. Arora was intent on making it to the hospital wing on her own when she had sent off Sam but now she wasn’t all that sure.
The pain was just too much to bear and so Arora looked along the corridor and enchanted herself. The girl floated upwards as did her brightly striped hair giving her the illusion of flight. Arora carefully flicked her wand forwards and felt herself move forwards slightly. She was enjoying the sensation of the flight and couldn’t resist lying on her stomach while still afloat and out stretching a fist forwards.
Superwoman comes to the rescue!
Arora flicked her wand forwards and she flew away, speeding down the hallways and showing no signs of fear and grinning like a wild child. She sped past a few ghosts and relished the looks on their faces as she flew passed enjoying every minute of it. She flew passed an open doorway and realising that it was the hospital wing Arora got herself into a sitting position and then flicked her wand backwards stopping right before the Hospital Wings door. She set herself down and carefully got to her foot again. Arora stepped into the door as best as she could and was about to explain her problem when, “I want Penny!”
I looked into the room. Who would be screaming for someone called Penny? “Hello?” Arora called into the room and Madam Pomfrey appeared carrying a sort of doll in her arms. “Hold on dear!” she said and went to a bed that was sectioned off from the rest and I just stood there doing nothing. I couldn’t move, that’s for sure. Though I didn’t have to wait for too long, all the noise that was coming from behind the sectioning curtain had subsided and Madam Comfrey emerged from behind it.
“Yes, what is it?” “I...tripped....and I think I sprained my ankle.” Madam Pomfrey looked at me for a second and then she levitated me to a bed. I crossed my arms. I hated being levitated by any one but me but I wanted to get back onto the pitch soon so I put up with it. “Now let’s see...” She touched my ankle and pain shot through my leg to my knee and I winced. Madam Pomfrey looked up at just the right moment and then pulled out her wand, she tapped it lightly onto my ankle and I felt the pain go away. “There you go dear!” she said and got to her feet again.
“Madam Pomfrey?” “Yes?” “Who....who’s behind the curtain?” I knew that I probably shouldn’t ask and just go to the practice match but I couldn’t, I just needed to know.
Madam Pomfrey pursed her lips. “ Come with me.” She said suddenly to me and I got up on my perfectly fixed ankle and walked towards the curtain. Madam Pomfrey pulled the curtain back and behind it was a girl. When she saw me she snuggled up in her bed and hid beneath the covers. “It’s okay...” Madam Pomfrey cooed with surprising compassion and motioned for me to come closer, so I did. “She not nice!” the little girl said. She looked like she was about eleven and yet she spoke like a five year old. “Maybe you can help me,” Madam Pomfrey said quietly to me.
“I don’t quite know what did this and how I can cure it...and why I can’t seem to. When Sam brought her in....” Sam? As in the Welsh dude that she was friends with? He brought this kid in? “Arora?” “Huh? What? Sorry?” “Just keep a look out for me okay?” I nodded slightly while the eleven year old played peek-a-boo from behind the sheets. “Okay.” I said more confidently. This girl needed to have her life back and I was going to have to help the healer do that. Walking out of the hospital wing was sort of difficult and a relief at the same time, I wanted to stay and help the girl but I wanted to unload on the sky too.
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I walked down the way I had come and went to the Quidditch pitch. I could see Sam flying higher than the walls of the pitch and speeding through the players and bludgers. That boy is skilled. It’s true, he really is but I could take him on...I think. Going down to the locker room I went to get my broom again from the shed, being more careful this time. I was so stupid to have half-ran down that slope with all those tree roots sticking out all over the place. I picked up my Nimbus carefully and went down to the pitch signalling to Angela Johnson, my captain, that I was back. She called a time out and pulled me in as a reserve for the game letting Katie rest a little bit.
I pushed off from the ground and rose up to the other chasers height and hovered there while Angelina got back up and Madam Hooch blew the whistle. Now it was time to fight. Sam flew passes me and was hot on his tail. I swooped under him and punched the quaffle out of his hands and grab it. I passes quickly as Sam tried to tackle me and I dodged it quickly there was no time to waste. I flew towards the front and Alicia threw the quaffle to me but....it slipped. I raced towards the ground my hair flowing behind me and suddenly-
Chapter 6- The Match
“Dang.” Ari said as I tackled her. Laughing I passed the quaffle on and Ari sped out in front of me, her hair whipping around her even though it was tied back from her face. She’s just so....her. I sped up towards my team mate and he passed me the ball. Ari was trying to tackle me again so I ducked and sped of in the other direction. Player! I threw the ball to the other side of the stadium and another Ravenclaw player caught it. Not sure who cause one of the Griffindors crashed into me. “Hey! Sammy!” I looked around and there was my captain, flying above the game and pointing to another chaser.
I heard someone whistle and started flying to the Griffindor goal posts. Another whistle and I had the quaffle. There was a space right behind a chaser....shoot steady. I flew off in the other direction and then spun around a tried to shoot. “YaaaaaHOOOO!” Someone slapped me on the back and I smirked, what? I couldn’t help it! “Griffindor is in possession!” Ari. Great timing. “Yo! Ari!” Arora looked back at me. Perfect. “Ravenclaw in possession!” “What?!” Snooze you lose!
We scored again! “That was brilliant!” I screamed at the chaser and she smiled at me. “20-0 to Ravenclaw!” Lee Jordan I think his name was. He was practicing too, I guess. I saw one of our chasers with the quaffle again and flew beside her. Whistling was the trick and she passed to me as I was moving away. Whistle. I passed back to her as she rounded back on the Griffindor goal posts. She caught it and flew right at the posts and then passed to another one of our chasers at the last minute and flew right through the hoop. “Ravenclaw scores!” “Yes!” Ari was frowning. Still looked beautiful. Time to score again. I flew straight at the ball and felt someone behind me and I tried to go faster. I got the quaffle and flew straight upwards to avoid the wall.
WHAM! Ow. That must’ve hurt. The chaser behind me hadn’t seen the wall and flew straight into it. I had to keep flying, I whistled again and saw one of our chasers appear in the corner of my eye. I passed her the quaffle and flew on ahead. Forget about it! I can’t stop playing!
“30-0 to Ravenclaw!” Brilliant! Ari was in front of me now trying to tackle the girl I just passed to and it looked like she’d managed it. Ari was about to shoot! I flew straight at the hoops and tried to block her view, bobbing around to try and grab the quaffle back and not let her shoot at the same time. Ari flew down and I followed her and then, suddenly, she had the quaffle soaring through a hoop. “30-10 to Ravenclaw!” Ari grinned at me and flew off to get into formation for the next pass.
One of the Griffindors had the quaffle and she was speeding down the pitch. I had to get this one back on Ari so I went up to tackle her but one of my teammates got there first. She knocked the quaffle out of her hands and I rolled over and flew underneath to get the quaffle again. “Show off!” I smirked and rolled back into proper position and flew down the pitch passing to my right and then catching it again. I’m great right?
The goals were coming up; then Ari popped up out of nowhere and tried to grab the quaffle. I obviously swerved out of the way and tried to shoot as Ari tackled me and I scored again. “40-10 to Ravenclaw! Those two are making things happen out there! How’d you like my voice?” I smirked and Ari grinned. Lee was the best commentator in Hogwarts...takes your mind off the pressure a bit.
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“Yes. Yes this is Lee Jordan!” The boy said into the magical megaphone. “That’s 40-10 to Ravenclaw for the professor! Oh! Sam’s got the quaffle now! Circling! Passing......caught. Chambers in possession! C’mon Angelina! Crush her! I mean....no! No! Professor I promise! Okay, Chambers passes to...Bradley! Gryffindor! C’mon! Ok! Ok! I got it now, Professor! Ahem, Chambers! Sam! Chambers! Shoots! Scores. 50-10 to Ravenclaw. C’mon Angelia! Ari! Alicia! Urm, okay, professor, I’ll be impartial. Go Sam! Chambers! Bradley! Happy, professor? Okay! Oh! Oh! Ari’s got the quaffle! Ari’s got the quaffle! Passes to Angelina! Alicia! Shoot! C’mon! She passes to Angelina again and.....she scores! Woohoo! Go Gryffindor!”
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A breeze blew in shifting the position of the players slightly as the scoreboard glowed neon announcing Gryffindors' goal. “50-20 to Ravenclaw!” Lee Jordan said bouncing around in his seat jeering at the Ravenclaws to the displeasure of Professor McGonagall. The crowd was cheering, calling out Angelina’s name and the chasers were grinning at her widely. That was a big mistake. Ducking around the girls Sam picked up the quaffle and flew straight at the hoops.
Whistle....Bradley! He had caught it and was making an incredibly difficult shot. Ronald Weasley had come forwards in an attempt to grab the quaffle from the boys’ hands and instead Bradley had twisted upside down on his broom and made a perfect goal. “Oh wow! That was an amazing goal made by Bradley! 60-20 to Ravenclaw!” Lee Jordan said almost happily. Sam grinned at Arora as a wisp of the girl’s hair wandered across her face that was creased in concentration.
Sam gave his captain a thumbs-up. It was all he could do before Alicia Spinet sent him spinning around in circles as she dived for the quaffle. “C’mon Sam!” Another boy was flying past him, his name was Chambers and he was about Sam’s age. The Ravenclaw keeper blocked the hoops as best as he could but the blur of players were too fast for him to follow. The boy dived to the right and the quaffle soared through the left goal hoop. “60-30! Yes! Hahaha!” Lee Jordan was ecstatic in his chair ducking around Professor McGonagall. “We need the snitch.” Sam said to no one in particular.
A roar erupted from the stands as the seekers went into a dive and soon they were level. Chow Chang surged forwards as Ginny Weasley did the same. Their arms flying out to confuse the other as the crowd cheered in anticipation. They reached out and the crowd roared.
Chapter 7-The Celebration
“Yes!” I screamed applauding Harry. We had won! It was only a practice run but we had won! It felt great. After all that...Sam lost! The poor guy sweating through his robes and he didn’t get to win. The crowd was roaring and I really couldn’t believe it! The Ravenclaw seeker was kicking up dust and frowning. It had been her fault really and she knew it. It must have been hard for her.
“Teams shake hands!” Madam Hooch called as we landed, “Congratulations Gryffindor, and a wonderful game played by both sides!” She had said to the lot of us.
It had been tough. Harry just about saved it for us though. He was the best seeker Hogwarts had, we were pretty lucky.
I shook each of the players’ hands but when I came to Sam I couldn’t resist giving him a little punch. “Hey!” He said grinning. Then I went to the Gryffindor Common room to celebrate. Even a practice matches win is a good thing.
“Brilliant Ari!”
“Nicely done!”
“Perfect!”
It was almost like being famous. One of the reasons I had stayed on the team for so long. My robes were dragging on the ground but I didn’t care, although I needed to get my hair down. As I pulled it out of its bundle it kind of unfolded onto my shoulders with my green stripes in my eyes. I had to look cool.
I pushed through the portrait hole and a bunch of hands pulled me in. “Ari! That was brilliant mate!” I grinned. “You were great too, Weasley” I said back to him. The boys had gone all out. There were tankards of butter beer everywhere as well as some new Weasley’s Wizard Wheezes stuff and what looked like chocolate éclairs. Basically everything that made a party.
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Sam walked back to the locker room with a small smile on his face. She was too perfect. He walked into the room and was greeted by a hoard of unhappy, brooding faces. He knew what they were thinking about; they were wondering if it was their fault that Ravenclaw had lost. Or if not was thinking about how the catch was taken and if the Ravens could have won. It was all a matter of thought and for the Ravenclaw captain teamwork, speed and practice. It was going to be a long hard week, but not as hard for him as today would be for Ari. She had detention today with Flitch which meant she would be cleaning something. Earlier in the week the caretaker had told her to be in the dungeons at eight, he just hoped she wouldn’t forget.
Sam changed in silence as did the rest of the team and when he walked out of the changing room her felt slightly downhearted. Misery was infectious. He stopped by the lake on his way to the castle and sat down, then he stood up, he squatted picked up a flat rock and skipped it across the lakes surface. He liked to do that a lot; the giant squid didn’t seem to mind much so he skipped another. Sam sat down. He knew he had to tell her soon but he couldn’t find how, or when, even why and he was sure if he didn’t step up soon, she would be gone. He just needed a little push in the right direction and it was proving hard to find.
Sam’s thoughts turned to his first day at Hogwarts, the Welsh boy had just arrived at Hogsmede and the first thing he saw was Aurora. She had smiled at him before moving towards the carriages and when he motioned to do the same Rane turned up. “Hey wazzup?”
“What?”
“What’s up?”
“The sky?”
Rane burst out laughing, frankly he wasn’t sure how this kid had survived the trip like that but no worries, he would take him under his wing.
“So what’s your name?”
“Sam. Yours?”
“Rane. C’mon we’ve gotta go down to the carriages.”
“Uh right, okay,” Sam had replied. He had no idea what was happening but he didn’t have much time to think about it before they had to pile into the carriages.
The present day Sam snorted unconsciously. He had been so different back then.
“What’s so funny?”
“Ari! What you doing here?” Perfect time to find him wasn’t it?
“Just thinking.” Arora sat down next to him and brought her legs up to her chest.
“Got tired of the party?”
“A lil bit. It was a bit over the top.”
“Oh.” Suddenly they heard a bell sound a tinkling chime and Sam looked at his watch. “Ari?”
“Yeah?”
“You’re supposed to be in detention in two minutes.”
“WHAT?!”
Chapter 8- The Detention
Arora sprinted down the halls of the castle running to the dungeons at full speed.
Come on! Come on! Come on!
“Hey watch it!”
“Sorry!”
Arora crashed into the dungeon room with a clatter, panting like an animal, her voice echoed off the tall unfriendly walls bringing her attention to the figure in front of her.
“Thank you for joining us, Miss Aurora.”
Aurora cringed and sneered back at Professor Snape. “Us?” She asked Flitch glancing at Snape.
“The Professor has agreed to help me with your punishment.” Flitch said, “Rather hand you up by your legs from the roof like in the old days but good old Dumbledore disagrees.”
“Go Dumbledore,” Arora said under her breath.
“Well don’t just stand there! Flitch will lead you to your punishment, in the Forbidden forest.” Snape exaggerated these last few words but Arora wasn’t listening, rather like she did in Snape’s lessons. She thought that he simply wasn’t worth the time.
One thing she did catch however, was the fact that she wouldn’t be having detention with Snape. A smile spread over the girl’s face as she turned around and followed Flitch out of the door.
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“Still think it would do you better to be hanging from the roof,” Flitch said as they walked up the stairs, “builds character.” Flitch continued his rambling for several yards and after what seemed like forever Ari was exiting the castle and making her way to the forest with Flitch in tow.
“Oi! You’re going in there with Hagrid,” Flitch made a face, “and you’re going to be collecting Potions ingredients for Professor Snape.” Aurora grinned at the mention of Hagrid’s name but Flitch didn’t seem to like that very much. “And don’t think you’ll have it easy,” Flitch said leaning over Arora which forced her to lean backwards. Flitch shot her a smirk as he straightened up.
“HAGRID!” He called banging on the door to Hagrid’s hut.
“Keep y’er knickers on! I’m comin’!” Hagrid appeared from behind his pumpkin patch with a towel on his shoulder. “Now what can I do fer y’er?” He asked wiping off his hands.
Flitch scowled. “This one has detention,” he said jerking his head in the general direction of Arora.
Hagrid smiled down at Ari and said, “Well she’s in safe hands now, yer can go back up to the castle now.”
As Filch walked away muttering yet again, Hagrid beamed down at Arora and led her inside his hut.
“Y’er got y’erself in ter a bit of trouble y’er have Ari!” Hagrid said turning around. “Tea?”
Ari nodded slightly as the floor of the hut shook under Hagrid’s weight. She slipped on to a chair on the table, wondering what she might need to find in the forest when Hagrid turned around sharply and dropped a book the size of a small boulder in front of her.
“Well, y’er got to be learning that before y’er get to the forest,” Hagrid said turning back to his tea.
Ari’s mouth dropped open. She stared at the heavily bonded pages that sat before her and was speechless.
Hagrid placed down two gigantic mugs in front of them both and he took a seat before taking a long swig of tea.
Gapping in shock, Ari couldn’t help but say, “Hagrid! This is impossible! You can’t be serious!”
With that Hagrid smiled knowingly and said happily, “Open it.”
Ari peered at Hagrid curiously and opened the book, her eyes still examining the great bearded form before her.
Hagrid lowered his eyes to the text in front of her and Arora did the same. Spelled out clearly in front of her in simple letters was: A Dingbats Guide to Everything Plants. Ari almost fell out of her seat. She flipped to another page and read out to Hagrid in an incredulous voice, “The Semirianan Pod looks rather like a squished potato in a bottle?”
Hagrid chuckled at her disbelief. “Y’er better read that quick if you want ter be back at the castle before morning.”
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Originally Posted by Lari Atari  Ari wasn’t the perfect build but she was wiry and strong and that was good on a windless day. Arora was pale and thin; she was tall for her age and had raven coloured hair. The most unusual thing about her was the vivid streaks of green flowing through her straight black hair.
That was a cool description, I especially love love the part I highlighted. Don't ask me why, but that sounded so cool  seriously. Yup yup. Quote:
Originally Posted by Lari Atari Potions. Arora sighed and pulled the book towards her. She began making lengthy notes on the different kinds of Wargltof and the importance of it in a Cleansing potion. She had just about made it though her piles of hand written notes on the potions they had done in class when Cendie threw up her pen saying, “It’s hopeless.”
You know it's a sign of true creativity when you make up your own stuff. Yup yup. I do it all the time, I mean not just creating original characters, or making up stories, but I mean inventing creatures and things, I think that's neat and brilliant and sadly not lots of readers know that takes a lot of effort. So yay for Wargltof ... sounds like something the Klingons would call each other  Quote:
Originally Posted by Lari queen of the Safari Cendie punched Arora in the gut and Arora clutched her stomach while the laughter subsided. Dood, Cendie's tough.  Quote:
Originally Posted by Lari, she likes to pari erm Party LOL Hagrid [COLOR="Navy"]“Hey man I’m going to supper, you coming?” Sam asked his friend Rane. “Nah, I’m gonna cram for tomorrow.” Actually Lari, that should have been written like this: Quote:
Originally Posted by Ottery he's so hottery, oh yeah! [COLOR="Navy"]“Hey man I’m going to supper, you coming?” Sam asked his friend Rane.
“Nah, I’m gonna cram for tomorrow.”
I don't know if I mentioned it before but every time a new person speaks you need to start a new paragraph so that the readers don't get confused. If I did,  Sorry don't mean to be all repetitive. You know I wuv  you Lari Hatari.
Did I mention I'm totally in love ♥ with Rane? Even his name sounds cool *insert drooly Otty here*  Quote:
Originally Posted by Lari Minary Rane’s hazel eyes hardly left the parchment he was frantically scratching on. Sam smirked and left the Ravenclaw common room, it was so typical of the boy not to study until the night before and then just barely pass a test. Astronomy wasn’t Sam’s subject but he didn’t fail it that often, after all the studying he shouldn’t at all. The thirteen year old boy was blond and had grey eyes. He was a good build and quite muscular, but the most interesting thing about him was his smile. Or smirk rather.
*Ahem* Aside from the fact that Sam is hot ... *cough* the part I bolded should have been a separate paragraph because now you're talking about Sam and not Rane, so it's a bit confusing, but ... I totally loved the descriptions Lari. Yay, the boy's are so cute. I hope you write loads more about them, I'm so like Rane ... leave all the studying until the last minute ZOMG! But I always ace my exams  maybe? Quote:
Originally Posted by Lari heee hari Sam was Welsh. He had transferred to Hogwarts only a year previously and was quite at home now. He and Rane had been friends for that long and Sam enjoyed every moment of it.
Just a suggestion Lari, but I think you should maybe do a flashback or something to show us how Sam and Rane became friends, I think it would be cute. Maybe do it as a separate story ... I'd like to know the story ... please? Quote:
Originally Posted by Lari who writes the cutest boys *Squeeeeeeee* He stepped out on to the last flight of stairs and looked up. “Ari!”
The girl looked down and grinned at him. “Where’s Rane?” She asked leaning on the banister.
“He’s cramming for an Astronomy test!” Sam replied and walked down a few more steps.
“Test?”
“Yeah, I’m alright with it.” Sam said and his black sneakers stepped lightly on to the ground floor.
Arora was speeding down the steps as she usually did and Sam met her as she made it to the ground. “You sure?” Arora said grinning at him. Last time he’d failed.
“Yeah, no prob I studied all week."
Some how Arora’s eyes were disbelieving. “Yeah, sure,”
“What? It’s true!”
Arora laughed and her voice echoed around the space.
Sam smiled faintly and led the way to the entrance hall, his hands in his pockets. The Great Hall was bustling with activity, none of the students would bother staying in their seats and were mixing with the other houses, and the Slytherin tabled was the only table that was detached from the rest of the houses.
^^ Now what I did here Lari Lunari, is I split up your paragraphs (red for Sam & pink for Ari), you should compare it to the original just to see how mine is easier to read. You can tell when someone new is speaking or if it's Sam or Arora more easily because every time the voice changes you start a new paragraph. Yes I know I'm like a boring old English teacher but we do this in all the languages for a reason. To make it easier to read. That said, I loved the way Sam was all excited when he saw Ari can you say love?  <--Otty shipper!!!!!!!11111 Quote:
Originally Posted by Lari doesn't love chickens Lunari “There goes a perfectly good Friday afternoon,” Arora said in an undertone while spearing a piece of chicken. “At least it’s not going to be with Snape.” Sam replied. He had served a detention with Snape after maliciously exploding a potion that spattered on the Professor’s face.
I loved how you described that oh and no one wants detention with Professor Snape   Quote:
Originally Posted by Linda Hagrid Oh, hi Cendie, Sam thought to him self. What a great way to but in! The Jamaican girl sat down next to Arora and said, “So what’s up?” “Ari’s just got herself a detention.” Sam replied grinning at the girl. He was a great actor. “How’d that happen?” Cendie asked her eyes wide. “Set Tina’s robes on fire.” Arora said a small smile appearing on her face. Nice. “I was wondering why she was so ticked.” Cendie said smiling hugely, there was nothing funnier than that, even though she’d missed it. “...with a boy?” Tina had said as though they were announced to be married. Sam smiled slightly again while he hunched over his food.
Okay so this whole paragraph confused me. It seemed like Sam's thoughts were in light blue, and again, everyone is speaking in the same paragraph so it gets confusing as to who says what ...  Sorry loves, but ... especially that "...with a boy?" comment sorry sweetie, I don't get what's going on here?  Maybe I'm just slow ...
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Originally Posted by Lari, she's so romantic, Me so hari I mean happy Sam and Arora hardly had to say anything to her and she talked on and on about mundane things that interested neither Sam nor Arora. Finally they made it to the hall in which Sam had to part from the other two. “ Night!” he called to them as he climbed a flight of stairs and disappeared to callings of good night. Sam’s mind was full of nothing but Arora.
Now that was just ... bloody cute ... *sniffles* I knew I should ship A/S.  They're cute Lari ...
Quote: “Hey you! What d’you thing your doing? You better watch where your going from now on!” “Sorry man,” Sam said rubbing his head while sitting on the floor. “I’m a woman!” the suit shrieked at him. Sam hurried away from it and down the corridor.
That was just funny. Seriously. Lol. Too cool! You should put more funny stuff in your story ... please, funny is good. Give us more funny.
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Originally Posted by Lari she's so tardy LOL Sam thought while he freed himself and landed on his feet on the other side of the entrance. “Help me!” Sam tensed his muscles, ready for anything.
Suspenseful  But I'm done with the first page Yay!!!!!!!11111111 Just don't let it be something super ... uhm, not dangerous Don't PAMS until I catch up Lari  and remember Lari ... I am your father ... *whoosh*
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Originally Posted by The Otter Tree
That was a cool description, I especially love love the part I highlighted. Don't ask me why, but that sounded so cool seriously. Yup yup. Glad you do my Otter Man.... Quote:
Originally Posted by YodaOts, the new treat for all Klingons...
You know it's a sign of true creativity when you make up your own stuff. Yup yup. I do it all the time, I mean not just creating original characters, or making up stories, but I mean inventing creatures and things, I think that's neat and brilliant and sadly not lots of readers know that takes a lot of effort. So yay for Wargltof ... sounds like something the Klingons would call each other   *grinslikemadcowandattacksOtty*  Quote:
Originally Posted by Hehehe, he's afraid... Dood, Cendie's tough. I like that in us girls Dont worry! She doesn't attack often! Okay! That makes sense! Thankies for the tip Otty!  I wonder if my English teacher will get annoyied if I do that in my stories she doesn't like to waste space *pointstocontrolfreak* Quote:
Originally Posted by XD Otty, Rane's #1 fan...:P Did I mention I'm totally in love ♥ with Rane? Even his name sounds cool *insert drooly Otty here* hehehehhehe....yay.... Quote:
Originally Posted by aw! My confused Otter!
*Ahem* Aside from the fact that Sam is hot ... *cough* the part I bolded should have been a separate paragraph because now you're talking about Sam and not Rane, so it's a bit confusing, but ... I totally loved the descriptions Lari. Yay, the boy's are so cute. I hope you write loads more about them, I'm so like Rane ... leave all the studying until the last minute ZOMG! But I always ace my exams maybe? ehheheheheh I think I'll give Rane a ship... Quote:
Originally Posted by Rane+Sam=Flashback *writes*
Just a suggestion Lari, but I think you should maybe do a flashback or something to show us how Sam and Rane became friends, I think it would be cute. Maybe do it as a separate story ... I'd like to know the story ... please?
I think I will! That would be cool since I've already done one for Cendie and Ari... You know...when I read that keeping your points in mind...I got confused! I have some editing to do! Aw! I need a English teacher! You are my Prof Otter! hehehhe! I loved writing that bit... hehehehe I think I would spear the chicken if I got detention.... Okay so it's not that bad! Snape = me .... ehehehheheh I really need to edit my posts now lol I think I'll do an edit on that bit and tell you when you can read it...hopefully it won't be confusing! another post that got me going...No wonder he's confused! Quote:
Originally Posted by A/S? *love*
Now that was just ... bloody cute ... *sniffles* I knew I should ship A/S. They're cute Lari ... hee hee....I'm so going to enjoy writing the next few posts!  Quote:
Originally Posted by Comedy? Me? :D
That was just funny. Seriously. Lol. Too cool! You should put more funny stuff in your story ... please, funny is good. Give us more funny.
hehehehe I'll try It usually comes with inspiration! *thinks*....*waits* Yay! First chapter edits! At least when I'm done it will be all grammar perfect thanks to my Otter Man! I think you might enjoy that post Me father? Oh and I've indexed my first post so you can go straight to the first four Chapters without having to look through the posts Quote:
Originally Posted by jkrsong96 Those posts are great! Just great! 100%-ly...awesome. Mindy! You always ready my updates... I ♥ you! *madattackingglomps*... | |
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06-04-2007, 10:40 PM
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Originally Posted by Lari Yubari I landed on my feet, cat-like and stood up. In front of me were a gaggle of guys grouped around a girl crying and shrieking on the floor. Rene stepped forwards and she screamed, “Get away you freak! Leave me alone!” and then the next second, “Help me!” The guys had no idea what to do and Rene looked especially abashed. He was standing a good five feet away from her now. I stepped forwards and she smiled at him for some reason. “I’m glad you came,” she said. “These idiots have no idea what they’re doing.” Hmm ... this posits and interesting scenario. *Is secretly drooling because Sam made such a cool entrance* He's so kawaii!!!!!!!1111111 I love that Sam is cat like,  nyaow nyaow, I love kitty boys ... *purrs* but you'll see that in my fic laters ... Nice introduction to star Lari Lari, she like to pari! Quote:
Originally Posted by Linda flirts with the otters Hatari What?!? I’d expected her to scream at me like all the others but she hadn’t, she’d been nice-sort of. I must have looked really funny because Rene burst out laughing. I ignored him and stepped forwards again. Nothing, okay cool. I managed to get within two feet of her without another out burst when one of the guys on the outside moved. Rene isn't Rane obviously right, so who is he?  Should I know him? I know I'm a really slow reader and I do forget details especially when I don't keep up but ...  did I miss something Obi Wan K'Lari? Quote:
Originally Posted by Lari I pwn your Atari keelari “Sam! Sam! He’s going to kill you! Sam!” I spun around and saw the kid; he had gone very white and looked very shocked. I smirked at him and he visibly relaxed. No one dared move after that, so I got out my wand and levitated her above my head. “Oh! This is so much fun!” she squealed and I levitated her out of the Ravenclaw common room.
Sam is soooooooooo cool Seriously, if he can make people chill out with just a look he's one bad m-- *Ottery shut your mouth* I'm just talkin' 'bout Shaft Sam *We dig* ...
But yeah, cool. Go Sam ...  I'm wondering who the weird girl is though. OMG! I read too slow. Quote:
Originally Posted by L just call me the Elle Where the heck should I take her? She was kicking and pretending to be swimming all the way and it was starting to get really annoying. “Wheeeeeeeeeee!” I smirked. There wad definitely some thing wrong with that child. It just wasn’t normal to act like a five year old when you’re....eleven? Twelve? I had no idea but I knew she didn’t act like this normally. Okay so the whole girl swimming in the air, that was funny, I could even see her making bubbly noises with her mouth too cute Lari. This is the funny give us more of the funny but don't forget the dangerous and the drama too, did I mention angst and love? Go Lari Hatari. Ottery is your biggest fan-i wait that sounds wrong ...  Quote:
Originally Posted by Hagrid's Bad Temper It sounded pretty stupid. There I was levitating a girl that was “acting like a five year old”. I tried to stop myself from laughing but it was kind of hard so I looked at the floor and then smirked.
At least Sam realizes he sounds stupid Too cute. *glompsSam* OMG! I wuv him. Quote:
Originally Posted by Lagrid??? WTF????!!!! Maybe he wanted to keep talking but I don’t know, I was already asleep and loving it because I didn’t wake up when Rene tried to awaken me and then left because I didn’t react and all the different people that went through the room because the room was spotless when I woke up-just in time for class that was too.
:techni:   :litebulb:  :heart2:   I love how Sam is relating the story in his own words, that really works for him Lari, I don't know why but I love to hear him tell his own story, that's different from the other posts you've written him in no? I can't remember ... I'll have to check but I really like it here. I don't know why but it goes with his independent streak. Yup yup.
Well that's all I have time for today and I might be gone a bit Lari, but never fear I haven't given up on your story ... I'm just on a bit of a lariday = holiday
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06-16-2007, 08:00 AM
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Chapter 7, Part 3
Sam’s thoughts turned to his first day at Hogwarts, the Welsh boy had just arrived at Hogsmede and the first thing he saw was Aurora. She had smiled at him before moving towards the carriages and when he motioned to do the same Rane turned up.
“Hey wazzup?”
“What?”
“What’s up?”
“The sky?”
Rane burst out laughing, frankly he wasn’t sure how this kid had survived the trip like that but no worries, he would take him under his wing.
“So what’s your name?”
“Sam. Yours?”
“Rane. C’mon we’ve gotta go down to the carriages.”
“Uh right, okay,” Sam had replied. He had no idea what was happening but he didn’t have much time to think about it before they had to pile into the carriages.
The present day Sam snorted unconsciously. He had been so different back then.
“What’s so funny?”
“Ari! What you doing here?” Perfect time to find him wasn’t it?
“Just thinking.” Arora sat down next to him and brought her legs up to her chest.
“Got tired of the party?”
“A lil bit. It was a bit over the top.”
“Oh.” Suddenly they heard a bell sound a tinkling chime and Sam looked at his watch. “Ari?”
“Yeah?”
“You’re supposed to be in detention in two minutes.”
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07-04-2007, 07:51 PM
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Chapter 8, Part 1
Arora sprinted down the halls of the castle running to the dungeons at full speed.
Come on! Come on! Come on!
“Hey watch it!”
“Sorry!”
Arora crashed into the dungeon room with a clatter, panting like an animal, her voice echoed off the tall unfriendly walls bringing her attention to the figure in front of her.
“Thank you for joining us, Miss Aurora.”
Aurora cringed and sneered back at Professor Snape. “Us?” She asked Flitch glancing at Snape.
“The Professor has agreed to help me with your punishment.” Flitch said, “Rather hand you up by your legs from the roof like in the old days but good old Dumbledore disagrees.”
“Go Dumbledore,” Arora said under her breath.
“Well don’t just stand there! Flitch will lead you to your punishment, in the Forbidden forest.” Snape exaggerated these last few words but Arora wasn’t listening, rather like she did in Snape’s lessons. She thought that he simply wasn’t worth the time.
One thing she did catch however, was the fact that she wouldn’t be having detention with Snape. A smile spread over the girl’s face as she turned around and followed Flitch out of the door. | |
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07-28-2007, 05:09 PM
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Chapter 8, Part 2
“Still think it would do you better to be hanging from the roof,” Flitch said as they walked up the stairs, “builds character.” Flitch continued his rambling for several yards and after what seemed like forever Ari was exiting the castle and making her way to the forest with Flitch in tow.
“Oi! You’re going in there with Hagrid,” Flitch made a face, “and you’re going to be collecting Potions ingredients for Professor Snape.” Aurora grinned at the mention of Hagrid’s name but Flitch didn’t seem to like that very much. “And don’t think you’ll have it easy,” Flitch said leaning over Arora which forced her to lean backwards. Flitch shot her a smirk as he straightened up.
“HAGRID!” He called banging on the door to Hagrid’s hut.
“Keep y’er knickers on! I’m comin’!” Hagrid appeared from behind his pumpkin patch with a towel on his shoulder. “Now what can I do fer y’er?” He asked wiping off his hands.
Flitch scowled. “This one has detention,” he said jerking his head in the general direction of Arora.
Hagrid smiled down at Ari and said, “Well she’s in safe hands now, yer can go back up to the castle now.” | |
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Chapter 3, Part 1 So I can remember where I last read. Quote:
Originally Posted by The Lari Arora was asleep in the girls’ dorm, her head resting lightly on her pillow and her hair flowing over the pillow. The sheets were heavy on her skin, keeping it warm on a cold night.
I loved that description Lari. Very nice, gets you right in the scene. I love her hair being on her sheets that way ... *Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeee* LOL but yeah, very nice intro. Quote:
Originally Posted by The Lari A tapping could be heard as the night’s breeze fluttered over her face through the window that was slightly ajar. Wait, how could the breeze come in? She had made sure the drapes were firmly shut last night! There wasn’t a gap in it and it wasn’t going to roll out, she was sure of it. Then everything changed.
Okay, that was cool too, and honestly I liked the whole post, I wish I could say more but ... it's late and I don't know if I'll have time. I am reading your story because you r0x0rs Lari, and I think I'm going to try to catch up so ... I hope you don't mind if I don't give you Loooooooooooooooooooong posts like before I will when I catch up completely I promise.
You r0x0rs Lari ... but who's teh ... OMG!
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Originally Posted by Linda Hagrid It was also the day of quidditch practice, she and Sam had tried out together in their second year and this year as well; Cendie wasn’t one to play sport, she was more of a speaker, if that made any sense.
That's so cute ... A/S r0x0rs ... they're too cute. Cendie though I can totally understand ... why would anyone want to ... sports? NOOOOoooooooooo
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Cendie had just been coming back to get her with a couple of slices of buttered toast when Arora had reached the end of the hall. “Oh! So you finally got up!” Cendie said handing her the toast.
See? That's what friends are for ... to get the toast when I'm running late like a crazy cheetah I'm always running late ...  Quote: “Did you just get up, Arora? Oh wait, your always that ugly!” Arora was about to do something along the lines of what she did in the Great Hall but Professor McGonagall appeared her face as stern as ever.
Oh no she did'ent! *Otty rolls up his sleeves* I hope Arora knocks her teeth out later ... with a spell even ...
Overall a good chapter Lari, keep it up. Yup yup. I was gonna say about that whole ... every time someone talks you need to start a new chapter, but I know you already know and I came into this story late ... you could edit them though. I'd volunteer to beta but ... I don't have time and I'm behind in your story so ... that might spoil things for me ... but there are betas here on SS ... go to writers resources ... unless they took it down.
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Chapter 8, Part 3
As Filch walked away muttering yet again, Hagrid beamed down at Arora and led her inside his hut.
“Y’er got y’erself in ter a bit of trouble y’er have Ari!” Hagrid said turning around. “Tea?”
Ari nodded slightly as the floor of the hut shook under Hagrid’s weight. She slipped on to a chair on the table, wondering what she might need to find in the forest when Hagrid turned around sharply and dropped a book the size of a small boulder in front of her.
“Well, y’er got to be learning that before y’er get to the forest,” Hagrid said turning back to his tea.
Ari’s mouth dropped open. She stared at the heavily bonded pages that sat before her and was speechless.
Hagrid placed down two gigantic mugs in front of them both and he took a seat before taking a long swig of tea.
Gapping in shock, Ari couldn’t help but say, “Hagrid! This is impossible! You can’t be serious!”
With that Hagrid smiled knowingly and said happily, “Open it.”
Ari peered at Hagrid curiously and opened the book, her eyes still examining the great bearded form before her.
Hagrid lowered his eyes to the text in front of her and Arora did the same. Spelled out clearly in front of her in simple letters was: A Dingbats Guide to Everything Plants. Ari almost fell out of her seat. She flipped to another page and read out to Hagrid in an incredulous voice, “The Semirianan Pod looks rather like a squished potato in a bottle?”
Hagrid chuckled at her disbelief. “Y’er better read that quick if you want ter be back at the castle before morning.”
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Chapter 9, Part 1
As the sun crested the hills surrounding the castle a figure lay heaped on a fallen tree branch a few feet from the lake. Aurora picked her way carefully out of the forest, her hair tangled and twigs settling on her clothes. She wondered plaintively if she wanted to enter the forest again. Her answer it seemed was a forceful nod.
Aurora tumbled over a log that lay in the tall grass, awakening the figure in the distance. It looked at her and she could just about make out his face...”Sam?” she called out in surprise, scrambling up from the earth.
Sam rose, his hair tousled and sleep ridden he squinted in the general direction of Aurora. He smirked.
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