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04-16-2007, 09:43 PM
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04-16-2007, 09:46 PM
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| | Puffskein
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I love your FF! I am like obsessed about it! keep up the good work and PAMS
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04-16-2007, 11:17 PM
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^^ That's a good one. Must have been very painful to Arora. She and Sam are best friends...oh well. I hope you'll post soon!
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04-16-2007, 11:29 PM
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| | Jarvey
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hey! errrr how did she sprain her ankle? *is confuseld* I think I made that word up cunfuseld
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04-17-2007, 08:48 AM
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04-17-2007, 07:48 PM
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Great post Lari!! Arora is having a hard year so far, I hope that her luck improves.
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04-17-2007, 08:37 PM
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Wow, you're a great writer! I stand in awe! Loved it!
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04-18-2007, 09:22 AM
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^   thanks so much for reading !!! Quote:
Great post Lari!! Arora is having a hard year so far, I hope that her luck improves.
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04-21-2007, 09:43 PM
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Okay guys I know I've been really bad at updating but I hope to get the next chapter up by late tomorrow.....I'm sorry I haven't so far!  s you all for reading so far though!  | |
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04-21-2007, 11:03 PM
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no problem!! I love this FF!!!!  Yay!!
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04-22-2007, 11:48 AM
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| | Puffskein
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Fine but still PAMS PAMS PAMS!
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04-22-2007, 04:54 PM
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That's fine for me too!
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04-23-2007, 08:21 AM
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It's a nice long post! I was going to post this yesterday but I couldn't so here it is!
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Chapter 5, Part 1
Arora knew Sam was just trying to help but she was getting both annoyed and tired of him half-dragging her to the hospital wing. It was almost defiantly making the pain worse. “You know what?” she said to him. “I think I can take it from here.” Arora stopped walking and carefully balanced herself on her good ankle. “You sure?” he asked her eyeing her leg and she assured him that she was fine and that she could get to the hospital wing. Sam eventually gave in and went back to the pitch slowly. “Isn’t your captain waiting for you?” Sam looked back at her and swore under his breath as he took off running. Arora smiled and gasped the mouldings next to her as she took a few tentative steps forward. With an impressive pain shooting up and down her leg Arora made her way as slowly and calmly to the hospital wing as possible. “Ah!” Arora gasped as she stepped too quickly on her sprained ankle and she pulled up her leg in pain. It wouldn’t be too long before she got to the hospital wing but she needed a rest. Arora sat down on the side of the corridor her back resting on the wall.
It was peaceful in the corridor. There was a soft light playing on the stone flagging illuminating the soft veins of winding glass trapped deep inside it. Arora’s eyes swept over the scene momentarily distracting her from her mortal pain. A soft summer breeze blew in from the large ornate windows drawing her gaze upwards out to the grounds and the lake. She had never actually realised how lucky she was to be a witch and to have come to Hogwarts-and have any friends at all really. It was funny how that was the only thing her eleven year old mind was afraid of. It wasn’t how her family would react or whether her grades could survive and not even pure elation. Just whether she could make friends in the wizarding world. A world she had no idea existed. The light brightened her dark green eyes and almost livened up her pale skin. Arora didn’t seem to be the ideal companion but the pale mask hid her beauty. One that could not be detected with a glance or a smile but with time.
That was the one thing she needed the most. Time. It was also the one thing she was wasting at the moment. Arora grasped the near by window and pulled herself upwards losing her balance at one point and falling heavily on the space of wall next to the window. Winded Arora tried her best to use her good leg to slide up the wall instead of down it and managed to get upright. Arora took a deep breath and took hold of the window. No one would know that she had cheated. So why shouldn’t she? It’s not like she can’t keep a worthless secret. Arora was intent on making it to the hospital wing on her own when she had sent off Sam but now she wasn’t all that sure. The pain was just too much to bear and so Arora looked along the corridor and enchanted herself. The girl floated upwards as did her brightly striped hair giving her the illusion of flight. Arora carefully flicked her wand forwards and felt herself move forwards slightly. She was enjoying the sensation of the flight and couldn’t resist lying on her stomach while still afloat and out stretching a fist forwards. Superwoman comes to the rescue!
Arora flicked her wand forwards and she flew away, speeding down the hallways and showing no signs of fear and grinning like a wild child. She sped past a few ghosts and relished the looks on their faces as she flew passed enjoying every minute of it. She flew passed an open doorway and realising that it was the hospital wing Arora got herself into a sitting position and then flicked her wand backwards stopping right before the Hospital Wings door. She set herself down and carefully got to her foot again. Arora stepped into the door as best as she could and was about to explain her problem when, “I want Penny!” | |
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04-23-2007, 06:01 PM
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*sneaks in* Surprise Lari  I' here ...  I'm going to start reading your fic after I get out of school for the summer if that's okay, cuz I'm busy with tests and stuff, but I'm subscribing, I didn't know you had one  I never look at the links on people's siggy's I'm so bad 
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04-23-2007, 06:05 PM
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'Tis okay Otty! If you're busy you don't have to read it right now I know! There are so many  Lufs on you for reading!
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04-23-2007, 06:07 PM
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| | Jarvey
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great post Lari!! Superwoman! :LMAO: Penny? is that girl STILL there? ????????? great post!! I am experiminting with new colors 
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04-23-2007, 06:10 PM
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yes superwoman! It's been around and about a day since she was admitted! Thankies! Yes I see that! you for reading!
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04-23-2007, 10:05 PM
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I love it, love it love it. I love the Super women part! LOL!  :heart2: PAMS! I felt bad that she was in the hospital wing at first but than it got funny! PAMS PAMS PAMS
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04-23-2007, 11:03 PM
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This is awesome! I don't blame her for enchanting herself. I would have done that if I were her.  PAMS
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04-24-2007, 05:36 PM
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thanks guys! I love it when it turns out of be funny I'm not even sure if it's possible but oh well
Thankies for reading!
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04-27-2007, 08:04 PM
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Next part!
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Chapter 5, part 2
I looked into the room. Who would be screaming for someone called Penny? “Hello?” Arora called into the room and Madam Pomfrey appeared carrying a sort of doll in her arms. “Hold on dear!” she said and went to a bed that was sectioned off from the rest and I just stood there doing nothing. I couldn’t move, that’s for sure. Though I didn’t have to wait for too long, all the noise that was coming from behind the sectioning curtain had subsided and Madam Comfrey emerged from behind it. “Yes, what is it?” “I...tripped....and I think I sprained my ankle.” Madam Pomfrey looked at me for a second and then she levitated me to a bed. I crossed my arms. I hated being levitated by any one but me but I wanted to get back onto the pitch soon so I put up with it. “Now let’s see...” She touched my ankle and pain shot through my leg to my knee and I winced. Madam Pomfrey looked up at just the right moment and then pulled out her wand, she tapped it lightly onto my ankle and I felt the pain go away. “There you go dear!” she said and got to her feet again. “Madam Pomfrey?” “Yes?” “Who....who’s behind the curtain?” I knew that I probably shouldn’t ask and just go to the practice match but I couldn’t, I just needed to know.
Madam Pomfrey pursed her lips. “ Come with me.” She said suddenly to me and I got up on my perfectly fixed ankle and walked towards the curtain. Madam Pomfrey pulled the curtain back and behind it was a girl. When she saw me she snuggled up in her bed and hid beneath the covers. “It’s okay...” Madam Pomfrey cooed with surprising compassion and motioned for me to come closer, so I did. “She not nice!” the little girl said. She looked like she was about eleven and yet she spoke like a five year old. “Maybe you can help me,” Madam Pomfrey said quietly to me. “I don’t quite know what did this and how I can cure it...and why I can’t seem to. When Sam brought her in....” Sam? As in the Welsh dude that she was friends with? He brought this kid in? “Arora?” “Huh? What? Sorry?” “Just keep a look out for me okay?” I nodded slightly while the eleven year old played peek-a-boo from behind the sheets. “Okay.” I said more confidently. This girl needed to have her life back and I was going to have to help the healer do that. Walking out of the hospital wing was sort of difficult and a relief at the same time, I wanted to stay and help the girl but I wanted to unload on the sky too.
I walked down the way I had come and went to the Quidditch pitch. I could see Sam flying higher than the walls of the pitch and speeding through the players and bludgers. That boy is skilled. It’s true, he really is but I could take him on...I think. Going down to the locker room I went to get my broom again from the shed, being more careful this time. I was so stupid to have half-ran down that slope with all those tree roots sticking out all over the place. I picked up my Nimbus carefully and went down to the pitch signalling to Angela Johnson, my captain, that I was back. She called a time out and pulled me in as a reserve for the game letting Katie rest a little bit. I pushed off from the ground and rose up to the other chasers height and hovered there while Angelina got back up and Madam Hooch blew the whistle. Now it was time to fight. Sam flew passes me and was hot on his tail. I swooped under him and punched the quaffle out of his hands and grab it. I passes quickly as Sam tried to tackle me and I dodged it quickly there was no time to waste. I flew towards the front and Alicia threw the quaffle to me but....it slipped. I raced towards the ground my hair flowing behind me and suddenly- | |
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04-28-2007, 02:26 AM
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Another great post! PAMS This is so good. Behind and suddenly...
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04-28-2007, 04:15 AM
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| | Jarvey
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suddenly..... it always ends in a cliffie but........oh well I will wait! I loved this post !!!!! it is sooo good can't wait for more!!!! yyyyyyyeeeeeeessssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!
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04-28-2007, 08:59 AM
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I have to have a cliffe for the suspence Thanks for reading!!! Mindy and Em!!! I hope to pre-write all my other updates so y'all won't have to wait as long!
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04-28-2007, 01:14 PM
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Lari!!! You can't end with suddenly-.... that just kills me!!! I needs to know more!!! But fine if you need your cliff hangers just fine.... *pouts*..... BUT THOSE POSTS WERE AWESOME!!!! I can'ts wait to find out what happens after suddenly.... POST MORE!!!
PAMS!!!
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