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04-12-2007, 11:13 PM
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Wonder what is going to happen. Tina and Dain are so mean! (like me lol) PAMS
~*Mindy*~
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04-12-2007, 11:53 PM
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| | Puffskein
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Tina is soo mean!
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04-12-2007, 11:57 PM
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| | Jarvey
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Great post!! I feel bad for Arora.
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04-13-2007, 12:36 AM
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* new reader*
nice story
we need more of harry though
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04-13-2007, 01:45 AM
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| | Jarvey
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great post yeah Tina and dain are mean like Draco but not as good lokking as Draco..........*trails off slaps self* what oh sorry great post! oh and *ish embarressed* I didn't datch your name my brother wanted too get on the comp. so yeah.................lol
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04-13-2007, 12:16 PM
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Wonder what is going to happen. Tina and Dain are so mean! (like me lol) PAMS
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Great post!! I feel bad for Arora.
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nice story
we need more of harry though
Thanks for reading!!!  Yeah I'm still trying to figure out where to put the Trio in this story! Quote:
great post yeah Tina and dain are mean like Draco but not as good lokking as Draco..........*trails off slaps self* what oh sorry great post! oh and *ish embarressed* I didn't datch your name my brother wanted too get on the comp. so yeah.................lol
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04-13-2007, 08:11 PM
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| | Puffskein
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I am glad that you thought that she should have been mean! That was a good plan!PAMS:techni:
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04-13-2007, 08:53 PM
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#58 (permalink)
| | Jarvey
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thanks for pat on back hey you know what that kinda rhyms pat on back pat on back um sorry great job Lari!!
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04-13-2007, 10:58 PM
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| | Nogtail
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^^> *hugs Lari* Thanks! but really, sometimes I am mean. :0
When are you going to post? Hope it's really soon!
~*Mindy*~
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04-14-2007, 09:37 AM
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thanks guys! I'll post sometime today!
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04-14-2007, 01:23 PM
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| | Jarvey
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Great!! I can't wait for the next post!!
~Meg
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04-14-2007, 02:30 PM
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here it is!
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Chapter 4, Part 1
Sam was ready and pumped for quidditch practice. Not only was he going to be on a broom again but he would she Arora playing too. The two of them were chasers and they tried out together each year. This would be the only time one could see Arora with her hair up, she looked beautiful, not that she knew it and Sam wasn’t going to be the one to tell her. The practices were more like matches; two of the houses played each other for pure fun and in the process found out what the opposing team’s weaknesses were. Today it was a practice match between Gryffindor and Ravenclaw and Sam got to play against his friend. Ironic isn’t it?
Sam walked down to the Quidditch pitch with changing into his robes and fetching his broom in mind. He entered the Ravenclaw changing room to a cheerful atmosphere. Their captain was very lax when it was off-season but not when it came to the real games. In those he could almost kill a player for one wrong move. “Hey Sammy!” That was one of the things he hated being called. “Sam!” he said, his voice slightly muffled because of a headlock that had been put on him. “Yep sure,” his captain said to him finally letting go and Sam shook his head slightly. “Let’s go out there and kill them!” Sam’s captain said growling rather like the “wrestlers” Sam had heard about, muggles that fought for a living.
Sam had put on his robes and said to him, “Gees let me get my broom at least!” and walked out of the changing room, his bright blue robes a nice change from the usual black. He saw Arora walking along the pitch towards the Gryffindor changing room. Hmm...She looks just as good with her hair down as when it’s up. Must be the wind then. Sam wrenched his eyes away from the sight of his friend towards the broom closet that he had left his broom in at the start of the term. The door creaked open and Sam stepped inside, he found his broom when he heard a loud creaking behind him and he looked over his shoulder. There was nothing there. I’m losing my mind. Sam heard yet another rather ominous sound that grew louder and louder but didn’t seem to come from any direction when suddenly, "Ahhhhhhhhhhhh!" | |
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04-14-2007, 04:11 PM
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#63 (permalink)
| | Nogtail
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Ahhh! What's happening? A really good post, Lari, but I'm afraid you're going to have to post soon!
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Mindy
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04-14-2007, 05:54 PM
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04-14-2007, 07:44 PM
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| | Jarvey
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*blinks* I think that there is a virus going around! It's called lets all post cliffies syndrome  lol great post! I loved it! even if it is a cliffie............jk jk PAMS!!!!!!!!!! p.s. I think that you have that syndrome ::p:
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04-14-2007, 07:58 PM
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Maybe I do... ...*roar* any ways Sam's fine It Shall All be Revealed....Tomorrow.
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04-15-2007, 03:31 PM
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| | Jarvey
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Great post Lari!!!
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04-15-2007, 03:45 PM
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Thankies!
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04-15-2007, 10:10 PM
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#69 (permalink)
| | Nogtail
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Tomorrow is today! *waits*
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04-16-2007, 08:38 AM
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I'm writing it! don't worry! but in the mean time I have a few extras for you! This is what Sam and Arora look like at Hogwarts!
*will edit when i find them*
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Reason: where'd they go?!? come back!Nooooooo!
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04-16-2007, 02:55 PM
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Lari!!! Those were some great posts.... your wirting is getting better with every post!!! Now you've got me hook, line, and sinker..... now don't keep me in suspence!!! I love your story so please post some more!!!
PAMS!!!
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04-16-2007, 04:02 PM
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| | Puffskein
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I loved this part! PAMS PAMS! You write the characters so well!
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04-16-2007, 07:09 PM
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*yay*  s you both!!!
Thanks! I've been trying to make it work
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04-16-2007, 08:28 PM
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This is a rather uneventfull post....mostly cause I'm tierd but I'll get around to doing a better update soon!
Chapter 4- Part 2
Sam ran outside of the broom closet and found Arora gingerly getting up onto one foot. She was grimacing and cursing under her breath. “You okay?” Sam asked moving to her side. “Urm, no, not really.” Sam smirked and cast a levitating spell on the girl. As she floated up into the air the grimace tuned into a frown. “I can walk! Put me down!” So Sam gently floated Arora to the ground where she could get up. Arora started off towards the hospital wing wincing at every moment. “Okay well at least let me help you,” Sam said. She’d only made a few steps in the general direction of the castle. Arora knew that her case was lost already as she said, “Fine.”
Arora leaned her weight against Sam and he tried to move in unison with her. He was built well enough for Arora’s weight not to bother him at all and the two of them slowly made their way out into the open. “Mate? Are you coming to the game?” It was Sam’s captain. “Yep! Let me just help her to the hospital wing!” “Why don’t you just levitate her there?” “She didn’t want me too.” Sam’s captain smiled almost knowingly and let his chaser go; one of the reserves would get a chance to play at least. Arora was silent during this exchange, her already pale skin going slightly white. It must have been really hurting her, but she didn’t wail or gasp once.
“Are you sure you don’t want me to levitate you there?” Sam asked getting a little worried about her. Arora shook her head. “No, It won’t be long before we get there,” she said her voice surprisingly steady. They were only a few steps away from the castle but they had to wander the hallways to get to the hospital wing and that would take some time. They walked through the large doors and passed the entrance hall using the many hallways to navigate the castle. “Hello there! What’s the matter?” It was the Hufflepuff ghost, the Fat Friar. “She sprained her ankle,” Sam explained. “Oh dear! Well good luck on getting to the Hospital Wing! I would help but I can’t!” The ghost flew of the other direction. Sam was getting tiered of this. | |
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04-16-2007, 08:36 PM
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#75 (permalink)
| | Jarvey
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lol maybe uneventful but funny post I like it hehe yay!!
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