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04-08-2007, 02:10 PM
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| | Jarvey
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Great Post!!!!!!! I luv:heart2: your FF!!! PAMS Please!!
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04-08-2007, 03:17 PM
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| | Jarvey
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Hi, This is the graphic I made. (I know that it stinks.)
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04-08-2007, 03:20 PM
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 That's some awesome cutting! I love it! thanks so much!  | |
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04-08-2007, 03:36 PM
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| Beware Dramapuffs! Snidget
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Awsome FF! You do a good job on describing!
PAMS PAMS!!
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04-08-2007, 03:39 PM
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Thanks! it will be up tomorrow!
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04-08-2007, 04:25 PM
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| | Puffskein
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OK but no longer! I am addicted to it!
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04-08-2007, 05:03 PM
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Hey I just finished writing it so I decided to put it up anyways! Alex! ************************************************** ******************************** Chapter 2, Part 3
I landed on my feet, cat-like and stood up. In front of me were a gaggle of guys grouped around a girl crying and shrieking on the floor. Rene stepped forwards and she screamed, “Get away you freak! Leave me alone!” and then the next second, “Help me!” The guys had no idea what to do and Rene looked especially abashed. He was standing a good five feet away from her now. I stepped forwards and she smiled at him for some reason. “I’m glad you came,” she said. “These idiots have no idea what they’re doing.” What?!? I’d expected her to scream at me like all the others but she hadn’t, she’d been nice-sort of. I must have looked really funny because Rene burst out laughing. I ignored him and stepped forwards again. Nothing, okay cool. I managed to get within two feet of her without another out burst when one of the guys on the outside moved. “Sam! Sam! He’s going to kill you! Sam!” I spun around and saw the kid; he had gone very white and looked very shocked. I smirked at him and he visibly relaxed. No one dared move after that, so I got out my wand and levitated her above my head. “Oh! This is so much fun!” she squealed and I levitated her out of the Ravenclaw common room. Where the heck should I take her? She was kicking and pretending to be swimming all the way and it was starting to get really annoying. “Wheeeeeeeeeee!” I smirked. There wad definitely some thing wrong with that child. It just wasn’t normal to act like a five year old when you’re....eleven? Twelve? I had no idea but I knew she didn’t act like this normally. She would probably need to see Madam Pomfrey. I levitated her down the halls and all the staircases until I got her to the hospital wing and she seemed a little drowsy now. “Madam Pomfrey! There’s a something wrong with her.” I said awkwardly. What was I supposed to tell her?
“Well what is it?” the healer said impatiently when she’d come out of her office. “Urm...she’s acting like a five year old. Not talking like one but like behaving weirdly. She sat on the floor in the Ravenclaw common room and didn’t let anyone help her, and she kept screaming at them like they were hurting or were going to hurt her.” I said. It sounded pretty stupid. There I was levitating a girl that was “acting like a five year old”. I tried to stop myself from laughing but it was kind of hard so I looked at the floor and then smirked. “I’ve never heard of that happening before!” the healer exclaimed and looked at the girl. “Lay her on one of the beds dear.” I did as I was told and the healer went up to the girl, “How old are you dear?” “Eleven!” The kid giggled and curled up into a ball. “This is strange isn’t it?” I just managed to see her nod her head and put her thumb in her mouth. “Thank you....?” “Sam.” “Thank you Sam, she’ll be safe here.” So I left and was pretty glad to tell you the truth. I was tierd, like you wouldn’t believe and now I had a Qudditch practice tomorrow as well. I walked back up all the steps and down the corridors and made it passed the weird suit of armour that guarded the entrance. “What was that all about?” Rene was still up. “Dunno.” I said to him. “Madam Pomfrey just took her in.” Rene asked a few questions and then he stopped for a bit. Maybe he wanted to keep talking but I don’t know, I was already asleep and loving it because I didn’t wake up when Rene tried to awaken me and then left because I didn’t react and all the different people that went through the room because the room was spotless when I woke up-just in time for class that was too.
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04-08-2007, 05:07 PM
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| | Jarvey
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Wow an 11 year old acting like a five year old! Great post Lari!
~Meg
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04-08-2007, 05:18 PM
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thanks! it was all i could come up with!  it'll get better!I hope ....
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04-08-2007, 09:50 PM
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| | Nogtail
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Get better? Are you kidding? This is one of the greatest chapters yet! Post soon! (It's also quite funny. Five to eleven. or twelve.)
~*Mindy*~
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04-09-2007, 08:24 AM
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 glad you think so! Mindy! *runs around some more*
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04-09-2007, 10:22 PM
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| | Puffskein
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LOL! that was a really funny part! It was like, so coool! Poor Madam Pomfry trying to take care of a five year old! *oops eleven or twelve*!
Anyways PAMS to a great writer!
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04-10-2007, 05:09 AM
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| | Nogtail
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Aww...thanks! Hope you will post soon, Lari!
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04-10-2007, 10:11 AM
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*glomps you both* so happy it was actually funny!!!!! Sorry I didn't post yesterday! I hope I can make today's longer to make up for it!
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04-10-2007, 08:03 PM
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| | Puffskein
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That's not a problem! I really like it so far!
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04-11-2007, 10:14 AM
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okay here's a little extra sort of thing I just wrote....the next update will be up later in the day!
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Chapter 3, Part 1
Arora was asleep in the girls’ dorm, her head resting lightly on her pillow and her hair flowing over the pillow. The sheets were heavy on her skin, keeping it warm on a cold night. A tapping could be heard as the night’s breeze fluttered over her face through the window that was slightly ajar. Wait, how could the breeze come in? She had made sure the drapes were firmly shut last night! There wasn’t a gap in it and it wasn’t going to roll out, she was sure of it. Then everything changed.
She was in a hotel room, the breeze fluttering in through the slightly ajar window, the shutters billowing. Arora’s toes were just peeking out of the end of the bed her long tanned legs perfectly straight and her arms pulled up beside her as she lay on her stomach.She was in an exotic land, the air was hot and sticky and yet a cold but pleasant breeze filled the room now and again. Arora’s eye snapped open and she rolled over taking in a tinge of fruit in the air.
Her hair was short now and no longer had the bright green strips of hair in her face but a shock of auburn hair that flowed in every direction. Arora pulled her legs up, they were surely longer that she had remembered and smoother too. Her arms were tanned and more muscular as well. Arora sat up; this must be in a different time and place obviously. Britain couldn’t be so warm; perhaps she was back in America? In Florida by the looks of it. Yet the air smelled different like it was really a very exotic place.
She ran her hand through her hair; it was wonderfully clean and shiny. Arora went to the mirror, she had really grown up. At a guess she looked at least nineteen or twenty. She was wearing shorts and a simple T-shirt; thankfully it didn’t look like she had become too girly. She looked quite muscular but not to much. That was definitely a good thing. Arora ran a brush through her hair and tied it up behind her. She looked out of the window a saw a palm filled beach, nothing in Florida would be that beautiful.Arora was lost in the beauty of the landscape when a pair of arms wrapped around her. She almost panicked when she turned around and her muscles relaxed.
Arora woke with a start. There was sweat on her forehead and she was breathing heavily. She was back to normal, her old, pale self again. Who did I see? She had been having the dream for a fortnight. | |
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04-11-2007, 04:20 PM
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| | Jarvey
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That was such a great post, I want to find out who the other person in her dream was, I have an idea, but I'm not sure!! I can't wait for more!! PAMS!!!!!!!!!
~Meg
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04-11-2007, 06:15 PM
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*grins* I think you're right heheheh
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04-11-2007, 10:28 PM
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| | Jarvey
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new reader wow that is so cool wonder who the mystery man is? PAMS Em
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04-11-2007, 10:32 PM
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| | Puffskein
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I love the next part! It's like awesome PAMs! I love Arora!
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04-11-2007, 11:14 PM
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| | Nogtail
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I wish I had her hair. Well, maybe not, but it's so cool! It's a very great chapter, yet so mysterious. Post again soon!
~*Mindy*~
__________________ †Luna Lovegood,Evanna Lynch,J.K. Rowling, Sirius Black,Gred & Forge,Dumbledore's Army,Harry Potter,Draco Malfoy,Sibyll Trelawney†
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A true friend | You're here 'til the end
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04-11-2007, 11:46 PM
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| Beware Dramapuffs! Snidget
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Great new chapter! I would never be able to describe like that O.o Anyway, PAMS
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04-12-2007, 02:41 PM
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Great Posts Lari.... I loved 'em.... what's going on with that dream?!?!?!? I can only wonder till you post agian.... POST SOON PLEASE!!!
PAMS!!!
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04-12-2007, 06:54 PM
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new reader wow that is so cool wonder who the mystery man is? PAMS Em
Yay! I'm glad you read Em!!! Quote:
I love the next part! It's like awesome PAMs! I love Arora!
thanks! hehehe I hoped you would! Quote:
I wish I had her hair. Well, maybe not, but it's so cool! It's a very great chapter, yet so mysterious. Post again soon!
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I know! it's cool! thanks! Quote:
Great new chapter! I would never be able to describe like that O.o Anyway, PAMS
Jen
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Great Posts Lari.... I loved 'em.... what's going on with that dream?!?!?!? I can only wonder till you post agian.... POST SOON PLEASE!!!
PAMS!!!
~Sama-Lama-Ding-Dong
thanks for reading again Sama-Lama!
I'm writing the next post as we....post so hopefully I'll have it up soon!
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04-12-2007, 07:36 PM
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Ok! next chapter!!! It looks so short!  ************************************************** ************************************************
Chapter 3, Part 2 It was almost a half dream, like she was half conscious the whole time. Arora was a little shaky as she ran a brush through her black and green streaked hair, this was the first time she had gotten this far into the dream and she remembered it all. There was no time to think of things like that now, her early wakening had forced her to struggle to get to sleep until it was almost 3AM and she had slept into the morning. It was Friday, the day of her detention with Filch and she knew she would be kept up late. It was also the day of quidditch practice, she and Sam had tried out together in their second year and this year as well; Cendie wasn’t one to play sport, she was more of a speaker, if that made any sense.
Arora wasn’t going to be able to have breakfast at this rate, she grabbed her tote bag that was bursting at the seams and hurried down the stairs and out of the portrait hole. Cendie had just been coming back to get her with a couple of slices of buttered toast when Arora had reached the end of the hall. “Oh! So you finally got up!” Cendie said handing her the toast. “Thanks! I was worried about food.” “Aren’t you always?” “Funny.” Arora replied sarcastically. The two of them scrambled off to the Transfiguration classroom for their first class. It was going to be with the Slytherins which most definitely wouldn’t be pleasant.
As it was expected they came face to face with their least favourite people, Trina and Dain, the two most annoying Slytherins. Dain was a boy but from what he looked like and his name you wouldn’t guess it was so. The pair were sneering as best as they could at the two girls as they approached the classroom and Tina decided to put in a scathing remark. “Did you just get up, Arora? Oh wait, your always that ugly!” Arora was about to do something along the lines of what she did in the Great Hall but Professor McGonagall appeared her face as stern as ever.
The students were ushered into the classroom to what was undoubtedly a very hard lesson. “Today we are going to be Transfiguring a rat into a cat,” Arora groaned audibly. Cendie giggled and Tina made a rude noise. The lines around Professor McGonagall’s mouth were getting even more taunt as she told them off. There was something bothering her and it wasn’t a trifle topic at all. | |
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