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02-19-2008, 09:29 PM
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#101 (permalink)
| Bundimun
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Hogwarts RPG Name: unsorted | Im dying 4 the next chapter!!! |
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02-20-2008, 04:11 PM
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#102 (permalink)
| Formerly: hrmy_lvr_4evr  Love Detective Jobberknoll
Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Pigfarts?
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurelie Rylen Sixth Year | Fiyero ♥ | RED VINES! | FOR NARNIAAAAAAAAAAA | "Always." ♥| SupermegafoxyAWESOMEhot! Yeah. As I've said, we're both really busy. And Susi says that her word processor is kind of not working. But she will try to get it up soon.
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02-29-2008, 11:23 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Hogwarts
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melina "Mel" Abraham Second Year | Yup took me forever. Well hrmy wrote the part in BLUE and I wrote the part in RED
I walked down to Hagrid's hut on the 21st of
November. I was relieved my punishment wouldn't
would be carried out by him, who had been wrongly
expelled from Hogwarts at the age of thirteen, and
therefore could not use magic against me (but then, he
never would anyway.) Plus, he was kindhearted, even if
he was a bit intimidating. However, I did have a black
eye, because Alecto Carrow could pack quite a punch.
Luna had a slit caused by a knife across her pretty face,
and Ginny's nose had been broken. I met them at
Hagrid's pumpkin patch, gave Luna a quick hug and
kiss, and patted Ginny on the back.
" 'Lo there!" Hagrid said. "I'll be righ' with yeh." He
put down his gloves and the dead ferret he had been
feeding the hippogriff, Buckbeak--I mean Witherwings.
"We'll be goin' inter the forest today, I need some
help with a couple o' things."
"Th-the forest?" I gulped. The Forbidden Forest was
utterly terrifying. It was full of furry creatures and evil
whatnots.
"O' course! The forest won' hurt yeh!"
"I"m not worried about the forest hurting me." I
muttered under by breath. "It's what's in it I'm worried
about." Hagrid seemed not to hear. "All righ', time to go!" he
said loudly. He led us into the forest behind his small
hut. The minute we passed about three trees, we were in
darkness. "Neville?" came a voice. Luna's. I remembered
that she had never been in the forest but once, two
years ago, but it was daytime then. I took her hand and
we walked on.
Soon we came to a claring. We could now see into the
trees. Something moved behind us. I spun around
quickly.
The strangest thing i'd ever seen came waddling
towards us. It had tiny purple hippo's ears, an enormous
orange nose, buck teeth, (strangely white) a pink horn
right between its eyes, a huge green belly that touched
the ground, and fat, short legs. It looked kind of like
what Slughorn would look like if you turned him into
an animal. Beside me, Luna gave an excited squeak.
"It's a Crumple-Horned Snorkack!" she exclaimed.
Hagrid frowned, "What're yeh on about?" he asked,
clearly confused. Luna actually giggled. "Daddy and I
have been looking for one of these for years, wait until I
tell him, he'll be so pleased!"
And so ended our detention.
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02-29-2008, 11:24 PM
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#104 (permalink)
| Gnome
Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Hogwarts
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melina "Mel" Abraham Second Year |
Oh BTW mt formating is messed up
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02-29-2008, 11:29 PM
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#105 (permalink)
| Formerly: hrmy_lvr_4evr  Love Detective Jobberknoll
Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Pigfarts?
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurelie Rylen Sixth Year | Fiyero ♥ | RED VINES! | FOR NARNIAAAAAAAAAAA | "Always." ♥| SupermegafoxyAWESOMEhot! Yay! It's finally up! You know I already have the next chapter written.
heh heh this looks even funnier in print! didn't read the part at the top till after I read the chapter so I was like "what are the colors for?" But I get it now.
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03-01-2008, 07:00 PM
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#106 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Forks,WA (I Wish!)
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Leah Dorn | *New Reader*, I really like it, I support neville and Luna Ships. A Crumple-Horned Snorkack?? woooow... |
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03-01-2008, 09:31 PM
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#107 (permalink)
| Formerly: hrmy_lvr_4evr  Love Detective Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurelie Rylen Sixth Year | Fiyero ♥ | RED VINES! | FOR NARNIAAAAAAAAAAA | "Always." ♥| SupermegafoxyAWESOMEhot! Yeah. That was her idea. she just made me put it to life. haha lol
I haven't started with the chapter for this yet because I'm busy with the Hogwarts four one, but I will get right to it. Promise!
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03-02-2008, 08:34 PM
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#108 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Forks,WA (I Wish!)
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Leah Dorn | pamspamspamspamspamspams:techni:
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03-03-2008, 12:44 AM
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#109 (permalink)
| Gnome
Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Hogwarts
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melina "Mel" Abraham Second Year |
you don't know how hard it is to type Hagrid speak *clears throat* uh... I mean Yeh donno 'ow 'ard tis to type 'Argid speak. (no' i am not making fun of him...)
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03-03-2008, 01:41 AM
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#110 (permalink)
| Blast-Ended Skrewt
Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: State of Confusion
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Vera Brinley Thanatos Gryffindor Graduated Hogwarts RPG Name: Mandrake Beery Slytherin Fifth Year | Anashti l Brat Pack l Sally & Dr. Finklestein
if its hard to speak Hagrid you didn't show it. You did a marvoulus job...both of you.
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03-03-2008, 01:52 PM
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#111 (permalink)
| Bundimun
Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 26
Hogwarts RPG Name: unsorted |
That was amazing..
Love the Crumple-Horned Snorkack!! Yay:techni:
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03-03-2008, 08:08 PM
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#112 (permalink)
| Gnome
Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Hogwarts
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melina "Mel" Abraham Second Year |
since we each wrote half of that I presume it's hrmy's turn but she needs to tell me.
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03-03-2008, 09:27 PM
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#113 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Forks,WA (I Wish!)
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Leah Dorn | Well, either way, Can't wait!! |
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03-03-2008, 09:37 PM
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#114 (permalink)
| Formerly: hrmy_lvr_4evr  Love Detective Jobberknoll
Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Pigfarts?
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurelie Rylen Sixth Year | Fiyero ♥ | RED VINES! | FOR NARNIAAAAAAAAAAA | "Always." ♥| SupermegafoxyAWESOMEhot! Yes yes, it's my turn, I am almost done, keep your socks on all of you
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03-05-2008, 11:46 PM
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#115 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Forks,WA (I Wish!)
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Leah Dorn | I don't mean to rush you or anything but, well...... HURRY!!! |
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03-06-2008, 09:15 PM
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#116 (permalink)
| Formerly: hrmy_lvr_4evr  Love Detective Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurelie Rylen Sixth Year | Fiyero ♥ | RED VINES! | FOR NARNIAAAAAAAAAAA | "Always." ♥| SupermegafoxyAWESOMEhot! I can't believe my luck. I took about half an hour typing up the chapter and I copied and pasted it onto this ting, and I forgot to save it, and I don't have it written down by hand, and my stupid computer crashed. I don't have time to re type it because i have to go to a chorus concert tonight, but I will get it up sometime tomorrow, promise.
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03-07-2008, 10:18 PM
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#117 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Forks,WA (I Wish!)
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Leah Dorn | Its ok.... |
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03-07-2008, 11:33 PM
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#118 (permalink)
| Formerly: hrmy_lvr_4evr  Love Detective Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurelie Rylen Sixth Year | Fiyero ♥ | RED VINES! | FOR NARNIAAAAAAAAAAA | "Always." ♥| SupermegafoxyAWESOMEhot! I got it typed! It's really long though. Here's the first part:
It was finally here. The day before Christmas break. I made my way into the
Great Hall for breakfast and sat down next to Ginny.
“Hey, Neville!” she said brightly.
“Hi Ginny,” I replied. “What are you doing over Christmas break? Are you
going anywhere?”
She shook her head. “Nope. I’m just going to go home and be with my family.
You?”
Before I could reply, someone came and sat down on my other side. I turned to
see who it was.
“Hey, Luna!” said Ginny.
“Hi Ginny! Hello, Neville!” said Luna brightly.
“Oh, no! I still have to pack!” said Ginny, alarmed. She jumped up and ran out
of the Great Hall.
“I can’t believe it’s almost Christmas!” said Luna. I could tell she was excited.
I wasn’t, though. I was going to miss Luna very much. I looked down at my
porridge. (I had been making a smiley face in it with the cinnamon.) I looked
back up at Luna. “Walk with me,” I suggested. We stood up and left the Great
Hall. (The porridge sat forgotten.)
“What are you going to do over vacation?” I asked Luna.
She shrugged. “Oh you know…I’ll be at home and visit with Daddy. I haven’t
told him about the Crumple-Horned Snorkack yet; he’s going to be so
excited!” Her large misty eyes shone. We were alone in the corridor. I think
everyone else was at breakfast.
The light in Luna’s eyes went out. She looked down. “But I expect it will be
very lonely. Daddy will be away most of the time at a press conference for
the Quibbler. So I’ll be all my myself…Maybe I’ll go and visit the
Weasleys…” She looked up at me. “I’m going to miss you, Neville.” She took a
step towards me, her face close to mine. I drew in my breath and her eyes
closed.
Just then, a bunch of giggling third-year Hufflepuff girls came around the
corner. Luna pulled away, embarrassed, and turned and fled down the
corridor. “See you on the train, Neville!” Next part coming really soon!
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03-08-2008, 03:13 PM
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#119 (permalink)
| Formerly: hrmy_lvr_4evr  Love Detective Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurelie Rylen Sixth Year | Fiyero ♥ | RED VINES! | FOR NARNIAAAAAAAAAAA | "Always." ♥| SupermegafoxyAWESOMEhot! Here's the next part, also by me.
Later, on the train, I sat in an empty compartment, waiting for Ginny and
Luna. They came in together, laughing about some joke. (I never found out
what it was though.) They sat down, and the train began to move.
About an hour later, the train came to a sudden screeching halt. Ginny and I
looked at each other. Was it a dementor again? I had no wish to relive what
had happened when I was thirteen.
There was a loud commotion outside. I got up and poked my head out to see
what was going on. My eyes widened and I quickly sat down again.
Two large men pushed their way into out compartment. They both had their
wands out. I could see a tattoo of a skull with a snake sticking out of its
mouth on the forearm of the one nearest me.
Death Eaters.
Ginny screamed; Luna’s eyes widened too. I have no idea what I looked like
but I’m prepared to bet a million Galleons that it wasn’t pretty. I felt all the
color drain from my face.
Ginny whipped out her own wand. “What do you want?” she cried. The bigger
of the two men, Rowle, glared at her. “We want Loony Lovegood,” he
growled.
Luna let out a terrified squeak. I took out my own wand. The other man
narrowed his eyes at Luna. “So that would be you, I presume, pretty?” He
grabbed her arm. “Your father’s becoming too outspoken in his stupid
magazine. So you’re coming with us.” They dragged her out, each holding an
arm. She was struggling and screaming and trying to hex them the whole
time. Ginny and I tried too; believe me, but it just wasn’t enough. Ginny’s
spells all missed the Death Eaters by a hair. I missed them too, but one of my
spells hit Zacharias Smith and turned him into an enormous Jelly Slug.
“No!” I cried desperately. “Luna!”
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03-09-2008, 04:54 PM
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#120 (permalink)
| Formerly: hrmy_lvr_4evr  Love Detective Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurelie Rylen Sixth Year | Fiyero ♥ | RED VINES! | FOR NARNIAAAAAAAAAAA | "Always." ♥| SupermegafoxyAWESOMEhot!
Next chapter should be up soon. I think.
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03-09-2008, 11:53 PM
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#121 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Forks,WA (I Wish!)
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Leah Dorn | Hi |
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03-11-2008, 12:41 PM
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#122 (permalink)
| Gnome
Join Date: Nov 2007
Posts: 280
Hogwarts RPG Name: Yvonne Ginevra Potter First |
Thats a good 1! sorry ive been away for such a long time....but im back!
Bravo!PAMS!
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03-17-2008, 12:26 PM
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#123 (permalink)
| Gnome
Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Hogwarts
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melina "Mel" Abraham Second Year |
whoa uber long... does this mean i can make the next one really short? no? ok... i have a new story in other stories hrmy can join me in that one but it may be a bit to dark for her liking....
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03-17-2008, 02:09 PM
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#124 (permalink)
| Formerly: hrmy_lvr_4evr  Love Detective Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurelie Rylen Sixth Year | Fiyero ♥ | RED VINES! | FOR NARNIAAAAAAAAAAA | "Always." ♥| SupermegafoxyAWESOMEhot! Don't know what you're talking about but I'll go check it out...
Do any of you readers out there have any suggestions for the next chapter for this?
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03-20-2008, 10:37 PM
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#125 (permalink)
| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Leah Dorn | Ummm.... Neville could freak out or something, idk... |
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