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Oh good a new reader! (Thank you.) I think Susi is typing up the next chapter now. She told me it was really long. So be patient my pretties, it shouldn't be too long (hopefully.)

Good I'm glad it'll soon be up.

It has been almost two weeks since we last got a comment on this and that's because the new chapter isn't up. I don't know what's going on with Susi but i'm going to talk to her.

Ok really soon now like within an hour.

Yeah sorry it took me so long.

I walked down to breakfast contemplating the day

ahead. It was Friday November 13, 1997. Not good. I

have always been superstitious. Who can blame me that

my Grandma had a black cat sent from hell? I sighed,

tonight Ginny had made me agree to what I thought

was the stupidest plan imaginable Steal the Sword of

Gryffindor. Stupid, stupid, stupid. But Ginny Weasley is

very persuasive, that is she threatens to hex you into

the next centery. I sat down next to Seamus at the

table.

"There you are Neville!" Ginny exclaimed and

launched into a speech I had heard ten time already.

"...and then we'll have an advantage over you-know-

who." Seamus and I finished. Ginny glared at us, "It's

not funny you know!" Ginny said. I had met Mrs.

Weasley once or twice and the look she had given Fred

and George that day when they had dropped Percy's

prefect badge down the tolit emulated Ginny's

expression perfectly.

"We meet at eight." she said sternly and turned to go.
***
I jogged down the corridor my dark brown hair (which

was growing quite long because, in the middle of a War

one doesn't have mush time for cutting one's hair.)

whipping at my face. It was 8:03. My death sentence.

Bye Luna, know I have loved you. Ok shut it Neville

hopefully Ginny won't be the hard on you.

"You're late Neville." Ginny said obviously trying hard

not to lose it.

"And you sound like Umbridge when you say the, now

lets get this done." I said equally tried. Just then Luna

spoke up.

"Ok, lets go now." Luna said giving us each a gentle

shove towards the Heads office.Marveled at how soft her

hands were against my bare arm but pushed the

thought away.

"Ok, Neville get the sword." Ginny ordered, once we

were in the office.(The password had been The Dark

Lord, Hagrid had told us.)

"Why me?" I asked.

"Because I am a coward and Luna is a Ravenclaw."

Ginny said, as if stating the obvious.

"I'm a coward too!" I protested.

"Don't tell me your a coward Neville Longbottom,

you're leading a gang of teenage rebels for goodness

sakes!" Ginny exclaimed.

"Stop bickering!" Luna said and opened the glass case

and extracted the sword.

"What the-?" I asked.

"How did you-?" Ginny asked. Luna shrugged and

handed me the sword, it did not have the power Harry

had said it had, no energy rushed through my veins.

"Somethings wrong..." I said.

"Yes Longbottom I agree., what are you doing in my

office?" Uh oh.

Aren't I the evilest person on the plant?

Finally!

I will get writing soon

Susi you need to spell check your posts. (LOL)

lol my Word pad doesn't have a spell checker

great post

How can it not have a spell checker?

I have a study hall tomorrow so I'll write the next chapter then.

Susi!!! You're just.....evil! Poor neville!

haha i had a much worse cliffe but i didn't want to torture Luna(or hrmy for that matter she woulda killed me)

No I wouldnt've! I'd have had neville punch the lights out of whoever was doing the torturing. Anyway, I am typing the chapter now. It should be up by the next couple of days.

MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! whoa sorry about that... i have issues

Since you can't see me, maybe you should know...I'm raising one eyebrow.

Okay I have the next chapter. It's really long....


Luna's eyes were wide with fright. Ginny had a similar expression. Slowly, I

turned around, terrified of what I knew I would see.

Severus Snape was standing in the doorway, a raised wand in his hand and

an unpleasant leer on his ugly face. I let out a terrified squeak and stumbled

backward into Ginny. Snape laughed softly. "I don't think so, Longbottom." He

clicked his thin fingers. "Get them." He stood aside as two hulking figures

burst through the door. Amycus and Alecto Carrow advanced, leering, and

three more figures darted through. Draco Malfoy pinned Ginny to the wall,

wand held aloft, and both Crabbe and Goyle went for me. Each took one of

my arms and they smashed me into one of the cabinets. "Oof." I groaned

with pain. I looked past Goyle's shoulder to see the Carrows advancing on

Luna. She held up the sword defensively. Alecto flicked it out of her hand

effortlessly. Luna blanched.

WHAM.

Crabbe slammed his fist into my stomach and I doubled over. "No!" I slammed

my shoulder into his stomach and stood up, pulling my wand out of my

pocket. "Stupefy!" I cried, pointing my wand at Goyle. It struck him

square in the chest and he fell over. The same fate awaited Crabbe.

"Stupefy!"

Ginny punched Draco in the nose, hard, and then performed her legendary

Bat-Bogey Hex. It hit Malfoy in the face and he stumbled backwards and

landed hard on his butt. "Ow! Get 'em off! Get 'em off!" he whimpered.

"Nice one, Ginny!" I yelled, and then I looked over my shoulder wildly at the

sound of a scream.

My heart nearly fell out of my body.

Luna was slumped on the floor, whimpering, while both Amycus and Alecto

stood over her. Amycus, I saw, had his wand pointed at her heart. I realized

with terror that he was using the Cruciatus Curse on her. My eyes widened. I

was on the verge of crying out when suddenly, Luna kicked out at the

Carrows. They both stumbled back, surprised. Luna picked up the abandoned

Gryffindor sword and pointed it threateningly at them. "Don't you dare come

near us," she said, and all the dreamy quality was gone from her voice. She

sounded nearly as hard as Professor McGonagall, and there was a dangerous

glint in her eyes. The Carrows looked at each other and in that moment, I

made a run for it. I grabbed Luna's hand and ran out the door. Ginny was

right behind us. Severus Snape was waiting for us at the bottom of the

stairs, but (by some unbelievably amazing luck) he had fallen asleep. We

crept past him and ran, ran down the corridor as fast as we could.

We stopped behind a suit of armor. I looked at Luna concernedly. "Are you all

right?" She had a bleeding cut on one cheek and a bruised lip, but other than

that she seemed fine on the outside. "Oh, Neville, I feel as though I've been

run over by the Hogwarts Express," she groaned. Ginny took her hand

comfortingly. "You were amazing, Neville," she beamed at me.

"Yeah, thanks, Ginny. So were you. You both were." I told them proudly.

Aching all over, we headed back to our common rooms with a promise to

meet at breakfast at the Gryffindor table. It was half an hour later, safe

under my covers in the dormitory and looking at Harry's and Ron's empty

beds, that I realized we had left the sword in Snape's office.

loved it who's making fun of whom?

OMG! You guys, this is all so good!! Loved it!

*I secretly hoped for Neville and Luna to end up together in the series, but, oh-well, JKR thought differently*

New Reader

Very good,i fell in love with the story...you shuld be an author xxx

Thank you Ms. Diggory and TalithaWhite. Susi told me the next chapter should be up soon.

oh, good! Keep it up!

is is great love neville's bravery....... new reader keep on writing amazin g stuff:read!:

GrEAT STORY!I really like it!

-<3Molly

[New reader]

Luvit Luvit Luvit Luvit Luvit Luvit Luvit !!!!!!!

This is amazing I always thought Neville and Luna would be great togeather!

:read!:

Thanks to Voldemort&88, Mrs Molly Weasley, and HarryPotter=<3! Welcome all new readers! We're glad to have you!

Susi told me that she has the next chapter written, both for this and for The Hogwarts Four, our other fan fic. She still has to type them up though. We've both been really busy lately.