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10-06-2010, 12:10 AM
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|  DIMC Firecrab
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Gemma Rose Black First Year | A Year Without Rain - Sa13+ Disclaimer~ I do not own Harry Potter - J.K. Rowling does The title "A Year Without Rain" is a song/album sang and made by Selena Gomez & The Scene. The song was released September 17, 2010 Chapter 1
“Bye Mum, bye Dad! Bye Hugo! I love you guys!” I called towards my parents and younger brother. “Love you Aunt Ginny and Uncle Harry!” I waved on last time at my family and followed my cousin’s, Albus and James, down the corridor. James, being two years older, led the way.
“Well see you later Rose.” James said kissing the top of my head. Then my older cousin turned towards his brother and smirked. “Don’t be in Slytherin, Al.” With that James Potter was gone, leaving Al and me standing close to one another in the middle of the train corridor.
“Hey Rosie, here’s in empty compartment.” Albus said opening the door and walked in dragging his stuff. I quickly followed him inside and shut the door behind me. “This is so exciting!” Albus said smiling at me as I put my trunk up.
I smiled at my cousin and took the seat across from him. “I can’t wait to figure out what house I’ll be in!” I said happily. My father told me if I wasn’t in Gryffindor that he’d dispwn me but I knew he was joking.
The train lurched forward and all the first year cheered. They were finally on their way to Hogwarts! I looked at Al and I swear my face was about to crack because I was smiling to much.
There was a knock on the door so I got up and opened it. Outside the door was a boy that looked about mine and Al’s age. His white-blond hair was slicked back, and his gray eyes made his face even paler. He smiled at me and said, “I’m Scorpius Malfoy. I’m sorry to bother you but all the other compartments are full. Do you mind I join you?”
I glanced at Albus, seeing if it was ok. He nodded once then returned to the book that had randomly appeared. I turned back to Scorpius and said, “Of course you can sit with us!” I smiled, sitting back down in my seat and watched him.
Scorpius took the seat next to me and looked over both of us. “What are your names?” He asked.
I blushed because I had forgotten to introduce myself. “I’m Rose Weasley and that’s my cousin Albus Potter.”
Hearing his name Albus looked up and smiled. “Nice to meet you Scorpius.” The boys shook hands and without another word Al returned to his book.
I was about to say something but stopped when an announcement came on and told everyone to get their robes on. I quickly threw mine on over my cloths and both the boys did the same.
Just when I was getting ready to sit back down the train came to a halt. I looked out the window and for the first time I saw my school.
~Comment please and thank you~
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10-06-2010, 05:42 AM
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| Plimpy
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Cassidy Euston x1
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Ok, tip. Don't have your writing in that colour. I can't read it! I tried but it was like, 'woah I'm blinded!' So yeah, different colour might help.
Otherwise, what I did manage to read, it was pretty good! The last line you said she could see Hogwarts, well I don't think they could, could they? Don't they stop at Hogsmeade and take the carriages up or the boats? Well I don't know, just a querie!
Ok, that was a ramble... Keep on writing!
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10-06-2010, 04:10 PM
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| Snidget
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That was really good, I would agree with Mordanyes about the colour but don't worry about the last line. Rose may have seen the tip of a turret for all we know. Keep writing, I loved it!!
Is there some Rose/Scorpius action occuring??? hmmm...can't wait!!
Katie xx (Oh and welcome to SS!)
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10-07-2010, 12:14 AM
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|  DIMC Firecrab
Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: Ohio
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Gemma Rose Black First Year | Quote:
Originally Posted by Mordanyes Ok, tip. Don't have your writing in that colour. I can't read it! I tried but it was like, 'woah I'm blinded!' So yeah, different colour might help.
Otherwise, what I did manage to read, it was pretty good! The last line you said she could see Hogwarts, well I don't think they could, could they? Don't they stop at Hogsmeade and take the carriages up or the boats? Well I don't know, just a querie!
Ok, that was a ramble... Keep on writing!  Sorry bout the color! I didn't set it my friend did and hit send before I could change it =( Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP That was really good, I would agree with Mordanyes about the colour but don't worry about the last line. Rose may have seen the tip of a turret for all we know. Keep writing, I loved it!!
Is there some Rose/Scorpius action occuring??? hmmm...can't wait!!
Katie xx (Oh and welcome to SS!) Haha thanks! I always firget that they stop at Hogmead before taking the boats...Opps
~Thank you both for reading!
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10-07-2010, 12:31 AM
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| Firecrab
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Klaus Jäger Fifth Year | Love me or Hate me... Either way atleast you know me ♥
Eppp!! It's up!! =D YAYAYA
I lovesss it so far
Rose and Scorpio?? Ahh young lovee...
Sooo anyway awesome start. Keep writing little firend ♥
xxMorgan
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10-07-2010, 09:33 PM
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|  DIMC Firecrab
Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: Ohio
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Gemma Rose Black First Year | PREVIEW!!!!!!!! Last time~
Just when I was getting ready to sit back down the train came to a halt. I looked out the window and for the first time I saw my school.
"LOOK! LOOK LOOK!" I yelled and grabbed Scorpius's hand and pulled him toward the window. I suddenly relized what I had done and quickly dropped his hand, feeling my face flush.
"Come on firsties. Rose that's nothing! That's only the top of one tower, now come!" Came a voice from behind us. I turned to find James standing in the doorway carring his luggage.
I grabbed my case from off the top of the shelf and followed my cousin out of the train. Albus and Scorpius stood right beside me as we stared at our new surrondings. "Wow" was the only thing I could say.
"Firs' years follow me!" Bellowed a loud voice. I looked over toward the voice and gasped! Standing there was..was a....
OoC~Sorry parents are kicking me off
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10-08-2010, 10:00 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: The Underworld
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Klaus Jäger Fifth Year | Love me or Hate me... Either way atleast you know me ♥
YEA!! I likes the preview can't wait for the whole thing (=
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10-09-2010, 02:37 AM
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|  DIMC Firecrab
Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: Ohio
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Gemma Rose Black First Year | Last time~
Just when I was getting ready to sit back down the train came to a halt. I looked out the window and for the first time I saw my school.
"LOOK! LOOK LOOK!" I yelled and grabbed Scorpius's hand and pulled him toward the window. I suddenly relized what I had done and quickly dropped his hand, feeling my face flush.
"Come on firsties. Rose that's nothing! That's only the top of one tower, now come!" Came a voice from behind us. I turned to find James standing in the doorway carring his luggage.
I grabbed my case from off the top of the shelf and followed my cousin out of the train. Albus and Scorpius stood right beside me as we stared at our new surrondings. "Wow" was the only thing I could say.
"Firs' years follow me!" Bellowed a loud voice. I looked over toward the voice and gasped! Standing there was..was a....GIANT!!!
I screamed..loudly! Everyone turned to look at me. I didn't care though. Suddnely someone placed a hand over my mouth. "That's the ground keeper Hagrid, Rose." Scorpius whispered. His warm breath against my ears made my stomach flutter.
"Sorry."I whispered. "Sorry everyone! I saw a spider!" I called loudly and everyone contuined to the school. I hide my flushed face from Scorp and Al. We reached the lake and I gasped.
'Boats? Really?!' I thought. I was about to protest but Al grabbed my hand and led me to one of the boats. Scorpius followed us and we all sat in the same boat. Another girl joined us. She had dark black hair and brown eyes. Her name was Alice Frost.
Me, being my overy stupid and curious self, stood up on the boat trying to figure out how it led them to Hogwarts. While standing I leaned forward..a little to far and fell into the water.
*SPASH!!!*
Next thing I knew I was underwater trying not to drown and failing. I felt something tug on my leg. I screamed sending bubbles up. I grabbed my wand from my pocket and thought a curse. Sparks went out from my wand and the thing let go. I finally surfaced and grinned glad to see the boat had waited. I climbed in with the help of my friends grinned madly.
"What the heck Rose?! WHy on Earth would you do that?!" Albus and Scorpius yelled at the same time. They looked at each other and smiled.
I glanced at Alice and winked. Then I felt really cold. Before long I was shivering and Scorpius draped his robe over my shoulders.
Love it, Hate it? Comment PLease!! (=
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10-09-2010, 04:48 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Orchid Danelli Simmons Fifth Year |
I think it's okay but I guess maybe it just has a slow start? Anyways PAMS!
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10-09-2010, 05:11 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Septimus "Sep" Galen Fourth Year |
new reader! luv it! pams!
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10-09-2010, 10:49 AM
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| Snidget
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Good job!
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10-09-2010, 04:29 PM
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|  DIMC Firecrab
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Gemma Rose Black First Year | Quote:
Originally Posted by SarahLestrange I think it's okay but I guess maybe it just has a slow start? Anyways PAMS! Sorry bout the beginning! Anyway thanks for reading. Quote:
Originally Posted by hermione23 new reader! luv it! pams! I love new readers! Thank you (= I'll try to post more soon Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP Good job!  Thank you!
xo Sara
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10-10-2010, 02:03 AM
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| Plimpy
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Cassidy Euston x1
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Loved the last chapter! Giggled at her falling in!
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10-19-2010, 11:39 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Gemma Rose Black First Year |
OoC~ HEYY!! Sorry I haven't really posted much! Umm anyway I've been away thinking about the story and I relaized that them being firsties is boring sooo...I had an idea!! (= Hope you like itt~~
(A, B, C, D, E, F, G, H, I, J, K, L, M, N, O, P, Q, R, S, T, U, V, W, X, Y, Z) Last Time~
I glanced at Alice and winked. Then I felt really cold. Before long I was shivering and Scorpius draped his robe over my shoulders.
We made our way up to the castle. Might I say it was HUGEEEEE!! A professor lead us into the Great Hall. Everyone turned to look at us. I saw James with his friends and waved. He waved back.
The Headmaster had us line up and she started to call us up. "Adam, Chris!" A boy with curly blonde hair walked up. Headmaster McGonegall placed a hat on his head. "RAVENCLAW!" It yelled. Everyone clapped.
She went through the list. I only noticed when Alice got called. She was a Gryffindor, hopefully I would join her. Now the Headmaster was on L's.
"Malfoy, Scorpius!" He looked at me and smiled. I smiled back. The hat had barely touched him before it screamed, "SLYTHERAIN!" Scorpius walked towards his new table.
N, and O went. "Potter, Albus!" I watched my cousin go up. Before the hat was placed on his head Al looked at James with a sad frown. The hat was talking softly to Albus. Al nodded once and the hat said,"SLYTHERAIN!"
I looked over at James. He was frowning and shaking his head. Albus walked passed me and sighed.
I zooned out for a couple of minute. Believe me you would to if you were one of the last! "Weasley, Rose!" My head snapped up and I grinned. I walked towards the front, trip, and had the hat placed on my head.
'Hm..What a brain you have. Ravenclaw maybe?' I shook my head. 'Ah.. I see you are very brave and a kind friend. Yes, yes that will do.' "GRYFFINDOR!" I smiled took the hat off and made my way to my new table. James hugged me when I got there.
My first 5 years at Hogwarts passed without much to note. Me and Scorp grew closer and I guess maybe fell in love?
Just after I had finished taking my OWL in DADA, Scorp pulled me outside. We went to the lake and we sat there silent for a few minutes. Finally Scorpius took both my hands in his and kissed them both.
Looking straight into my eyes he said, "Rose Jean Weasly, I love you and I alway have." He kissed me and I kissed him back.
When we pulled apart I smiled and whispered, "Scorpius I have always loved you."
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I woke up wrapped tightly in bed sheats. 'This isn't my room.' I think confused. There are wired tapped up to me. 'WHAT?!' I try to scream but I can't find my voice.
"Oh good your awake!" Comes and unfamiliar voice. I try to sit up to see who it is but I'm to weak. Finally a twentyorsomething women comes to stand next to me. "Hello Rose. I'm Carla. Do you know where you are?" I shake my head. "Your at St. Mungo's."
Like it??
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10-19-2010, 11:47 PM
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| Firecrab
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Klaus Jäger Fifth Year | Love me or Hate me... Either way atleast you know me ♥
AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! o.O Twisty twist (=
I loves itt!
...Rose is in the hospital?! Ah why?!!?
PAMS!!
Your Best Friend,
Morgann
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10-22-2010, 08:55 PM
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| Gnome
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Septimus "Sep" Galen Fourth Year |
ooooookay... that was a little confusing.
why's she in the hospital? how'd albus end up a slytherin?
AND WHO THE HECK IS CARLA, ANYWAY?!?!
pams!
~Kassie
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10-23-2010, 12:09 PM
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| Snidget
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Hmmmmmm  Very interesting!!
Need to know if she is alright!!!!
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10-23-2010, 03:48 PM
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|  DIMC Firecrab
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Gemma Rose Black First Year | Quote:
Originally Posted by hermione23 ooooookay... that was a little confusing.
why's she in the hospital? how'd albus end up a slytherin?
AND WHO THE HECK IS CARLA, ANYWAY?!?!
pams!
~Kassie I'm sorry if it was confusing =(
teehee read more to figure out why she's in the hospital!
Carla is no one really. Just Rose's nurse. *shrug* Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP Hmmmmmm  Very interesting!!
Need to know if she is alright!!!! Hahaha! Thanks.
You gotta read to find out
Love you both!
Sara♫
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10-23-2010, 03:59 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ruby Cynthia Ciao Fifth Year | Gleek in Disguise ll Doctor Who! Daughter of Hades ll Leslie-loo-whoo ♥ I only have one thing to say................AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I absolutley love it Post more soon please! PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS |
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10-24-2010, 12:32 PM
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| Snidget
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Love You Too Sara
PAMS PAMS!!!
We need to find out if she is OK!!!!
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10-25-2010, 01:31 AM
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|  DIMC Firecrab
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Gemma Rose Black First Year | Last time~
"Your at St. Mungo's."
I frown. "Why?! What happened?!" I demanded and cursed.
"You're here because...Do you remember anything?" She asked looking at me. I shake me head again and she sighs. "You're here because," Carla sighed deeply then continued. "Because after on of your Qudditch matches a stray Bludger hit you straight in the stomach. Well you fell quite a few feet. People were suprised to find you didn't have any broken bones considering the height. You were rushed to the hospital straight away."
"Did we win? The match?" I asked. Carla nodded.
"How..How long? Have I been out, I mean." I really don't want to know the answer to this question but..
"Almost a full year." Something dinged. "Oh! Visiters. Before they get here on more thing....You have a daughter."
"WHAT?!" I screeched. A daughter? How? What? When? "Who?" I whispered.
"Vladimir Krum."
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10-30-2010, 09:47 PM
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| Gnome
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Septimus "Sep" Galen Fourth Year |
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my only comment is "WHAT THE HECK JUST HAPPENED?!?!"
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11-01-2010, 11:22 PM
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|  DIMC Firecrab
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Gemma Rose Black First Year |
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11-05-2010, 12:51 AM
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|  DIMC Firecrab
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Gemma Rose Black First Year | Last time~
"WHAT?!" I screeched. A daughter? How? What? When? "Who?" I whispered. "Vladimir Krum."
I felt the sudden urge to cry. Vladimir Krum?! Ugh! I'm so stupid! I thought bitterly. Carla patted my hand and smiled. "Your family's here." With that hse turned on her heel and left.
The door opened and I saw flaming red hair. "Rosie!"
"Ginny!" I cried as my auny hugged me and kissed my forehead. I saw my uncle Harry walk in followed by my three cousins. "Harry, nice to see you. James!" I winced as James wrapped my into a bear hug.
"Sorry, Rose." He smiled and hugged me again before backing away. Albus walked towards me and he smiled.
"Hey Al." I whisper as he huggs me and Lily takes his place.
Granny Weasley walked in with Grandpa Wealey. Bill and Fleur walked in followed by their three children, Victorie, Dominique and Luis. Charlie was followed by Percy and his wife Audrey. Molly and Lucy followed their parents. One by one everyone hugged me.
Uncle George walked in hand in hand with his wife, Angelina. The couple was followed by my two cousins, Fred II and Roxanne. They all hugged me and smiled.
The next person to come in was my brother Hugo. He grinned at me and hugged me tightly. My father came in. Tears were running down his face.
I smiled. "Hi Daddy."
"Hi sweetheart." My mother walked into the room. She was leading a small child behind her.
"Hi baby." My mother said placing the girl on my lap.
Once I saw her I burst into tears. My daughter had snow white hair and sparkly green eyes. Her hair was in tight perfect ringlets that framed her pale skin. She reached out her small hand and touched my face. "Momma." She cried out happily. Through my tears I smiled.
"Whats her name?" I asked looking at my mother.
"Calista Rose Weasley." She asnwered softly.
I smiled at my child. "I love you, Calista." I muttered as I kissed her head.
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Most everyone had left. Aunt Ginny, Al, Hugo and mum and dad were still with. Oh and Calista!
My daughter was sleeping in my arms. She fit so perfectly! The day had been rough but I was glad to just have my child with me.
Al looked at me and grinned, like he knew something...I frowned at him but he just chuckled and looked away.
Suddenly there was a ding. "A visitor?" My mother said going to the door. "I thought everyone had came." 'Was it Vlad? Oh gosh I hope not!' I almost burst into tears again but held them back by closing my eyes tightly shut. If it was Vlad thenI'd be strong.
"Umm...Rose?" My mother said tentivly. "Do..Are you able to one more person?" When I nodded she sighed.
"Hey Rosie." Came the soft familiar voice that always made my knees give way. I opened my eye to find corpius Malfoy starring straight at me.
Tada!  Comments welcome
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11-05-2010, 01:57 AM
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|  X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Doxy
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ruby Cynthia Ciao Fifth Year | Gleek in Disguise ll Doctor Who! Daughter of Hades ll Leslie-loo-whoo ♥ I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Calista is so cute!!!
She is Scorpius' daughter right?
Cause the hair and the eyes there is no way she is a Krum, right? RIGHT!?
I have to know! You can't just leave it on a cliffy like that? 
Please Post more soon!!
PAMS PAMS PAM PAMS PAMS
-Leslie
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