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08-26-2007, 03:06 AM
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|  !!!!Awesome!!!!Jobberknoll
Join Date: May 2004 Location: in Howarts offcourse
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Hehehehe sorry I was so rude not writting my name!!
I'm Mari and I adore your story!!!
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08-26-2007, 10:06 AM
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| | Horklump
Join Date: May 2007 Location: live next door to a star
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Hey!! you weren't rude about forgetting your name, it happens to everyone! hehe! lol 
Thanks so much, Mari, I will post more today! yay!! *does a dance*
-*~ Shirel ~*-
Oops! Chuvvy forgot to sighn out!!! Sorry, well it's really me -Shirel...
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Reason: I just realized I used someone elses account!
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08-27-2007, 03:45 PM
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|  DA News OfficerPuffskein
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PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!
Katie
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08-27-2007, 06:50 PM
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| | Horklump
Join Date: May 2007 Location: live next door to a star
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hey
gr8 post
i get it better now
cant wait 4 the next post!
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08-27-2007, 07:17 PM
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| | Firecrab
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same here. Can't wait for the next post!!
PAMS PAMS!!
<3 Lilly
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08-28-2007, 07:46 PM
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| | Snidget
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Far away from you...
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First Year |  the next post will be up in 89 to 90 seconds!!! ;) FanFic Enthusiast
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Originally Posted by LyonLover417  PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!
Katie Guess what Katie!! I am finally posting in like 90 days! just kidding in like 90 seconds!!!!!! It really helped me that you wrote again, it told me *wake up Shirel, people are waiting for you to post!!!!* lol Quote:
Originally Posted by chuvvy hey
gr8 post
i get it better now
cant wait 4 the next post! Hey Chuvvy!!! Thanks sooooo much!! I'm sooo glad you get it! *sigh amd wipes forehead*
I will post before you know it!!
Oh, and one more thing, we really have to start walking again!!
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Originally Posted by D/hr4evr same here. Can't wait for the next post!!
PAMS PAMS!!
<3 Lilly YAAAY!! A new reader!! Thanks soooo much for reading my ff!! By the way did you get the name Lilly from Harry's mother??? I'm just kidding! I read what you posted on my other fic 'a war of love'! no insults here.
Still, thanks soo much for reading, it means a lot to me!!
I will post in like, hmmm... 89 seconds! lol
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08-28-2007, 07:54 PM
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| | Snidget
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Far away from you...
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First Year |  Danger! Here is posted a very dangerous chapter... lol (kidding) FanFic Enthusiast
Hey everyone! I'm really sorry it took me such a long time to post this chapter. I have no excuses so the blame is all on me!
Well anyway... Here is the next chapter! (Finally! lol hehe)
Chapter six: ~ A Malfoy Problem ~
The next morning Hermione woke up early so she could leave the room without being noticed or seen by Malfoy.
She rummaged through her messy trunk looking for brand new robes. She decided not to shower when Malfoy was around. Even if he was sleeping it was a risk of being seen somehow, you can never know when it comes to magic, but she made a mental note for herself to check the library for any enchantments to put on a bathroom.
When she finally applied some makeup and did her hair into a messy bun, she took her book bag and went to do her homework that she had not done yet in the library. When she had got to the library she pushed the door open but it wouldn’t budge. "It's probably not open yet," she muttered while hitting the door in frustration. It was no use waiting for it to open so she marched down to the Great hall for breakfast.
The Great Hall was practically empty except for a couple of students here and there at each table. She took a seat all the way down at the Gryffindor table and grumpily laded her plate with some salad and toast. She gobbled the food down in just a matter of minutes and washed it down with some pumpkin juice. When she drunk the last drop of it, she gathered up her stuff and rushed out of the great hall down to the lake so se could finally do her homework and "not fail this year," as she always says.
When she walked through the front doors she smelled the fresh air and was glad for such nice weather. She felt like running towards the lake and feel the wind beating on her. She looked around and made sure no one was outside before lifting her arms into the air and running down the hill over to the lake. She sat against her favorite tree and pulled out her charms book and read the home work.
"Write a ten inch essay on how to perform a freezing charm.” She smiled to herself at how simple that was going to be. She pulled out her ink, parchment and quill, and set off to work. When she was done, she opened her Defense against the Dark Arts and when she didn't find anything she realized that they only had charms yesterday since potions were canceled. "I really need to start getting a little more organized, this whole Malfoy thing is ruining my life!" she thought angrily.
Sighing, she put all her books neatly back into her bag and headed to her first class; Herbology. She walked across the grounds towards the green houses but stopped suddenly when she heard angry voices. She turned around and ran to where the voices were coming from. It was coming from the dark forest, she quickly ran over and stopped when she recognized the two voices, they were arguing, one was a boys voice and the other was a girls voice who was clearly crying. Now she could hear their voices much clearer.
"Draco, you can't!" Parkinson cried.
"Then what do you want me to do? It's the only way!" yelled Malfoy.
"Please, Draco, you have to listen to me, there's got to be another way!" she pleaded.
"Well there isn't! If I don't do it, I will be killed, you heard him didn't you?" but there was no response, Pansy Parkinson just wailed louder.
Hermione couldn’t believe what she was hearing. But before she could think about anything to say to them, she realized she was late for Herbology. She quickly ran towards Green house number twelve and opened the door.
"You’re late Miss Granger," said professor sprout.
"I know...I had something to do... I won't be late again," she said losing confidence.
"Well, since it's our first class I will let you off today but I don’t want this to happen again." Hermione nodded and went to stand between Harry and Ron. They each gave her curios looks and she gave them the I-will-explain-later look.
The rest of lesson passed pretty fast. Hermione wasn't really concentrating on what Professor Sprout was saying, she was thinking about Malfoy’s and Parkinson's argument. It troubled her, "what was it that Malfoy had to do?" she asked herself, "Last year, his mission was to kill Dumbledore, or, he was threatened, his whole family would be killed...What was it this time?"
"Hermione! Are you there?" a voice asked, bringing her out of her thoughts.
"Wh- what?" she asked puzzled.
“Class is over, you’ve really been day dreaming,” said Ron, “Let’s go, we have a free period now, what do you say we head out and sit by the lake?”
“Sure,” said Hermione, glancing nervously at Harry, “let’s go!” So Hermione, Harry and Ron grabbed their book bags and the three headed towards their favorite spot by the lake.
“So,” said Harry, “how’d it go last night?”
“Don’t ask, It was a nightmare!” said Hermione.
“What happened?” asked Ron nervously, his ears slightly red.
“Well,” began Hermione, “When McGonagall left, I walked in and he threw something at me. He said it was my entire fault he was stuck with me. And boy, the way he acted, you’d think he was trying to kill me!”
“That wouldn’t be a first,” muttered Ron.
“But Hermione,” said Harry puzzled, “Why were you late to Herbology this morning?”
“You won’t believe who I bumped into on my way to the green house!” and she told them all what she had heard. When she finished, Ron stared at her opened mouth.
“I bet You-Know-Who told him to kill Harry for him,” said Ron.
“No Ron, You-Know-Who wants to kill Harry himself,” said Hermione.
“Ok,” said Harry annoyed, “while you fight over who’s going to kill me I’ll just start on my Herbology homework.”
“You’re right,” Hermione quickly said, “I’m sorry Harry.”
“Maybe Voldemort want’s Malfoy to help him get into the castle,” tried Harry.
“Maybe…” said Hermione, lost in thought.
“Hey, I’ve got a great way how to find out what he’s up to,” said Ron.
“And what’s that, Ron?” asked Hermione.
“You,” he pointed at Hermione, “you have to make Malfoy like you enough to trust you and then somehow, he’ll tell you what he has to do!” said Ron excitedly. Hermione rolled her eyes.
“Yeah, that’s a great idea, make him like you. Jinx him or something,” said Harry.
“Forget it, I won’t do it!” said Hermione.
“Come on,” said Ron.
“Find someone else to do it and besides, Malfoy would never fall in love with someone like me!” said Hermione madly.
“What if-” said Ron.
“Look, just drop it okay?” said Hermione.
“We better go, we’ve got Transfiguration in ten minutes,” said Harry, and him, Ron and Hermione got up and walked across the grounds toward the castle for their next class.
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I hoped you liked!
Tell me what you think!
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08-28-2007, 11:36 PM
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| | Fwooper
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great!
PAMS!! PAMSOID!!
XOXO,
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08-29-2007, 03:39 AM
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| !!!!Awesome!!!! Jobberknoll
Join Date: May 2004 Location: in Howarts offcourse
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ohhhh I love it!!!!!!! What's Draco supposed to do???? I can't wait please post as soon as possible!!
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08-29-2007, 07:33 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: I live in the Malfoy
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Oh I love it! I wounder if she is going to go out with the plan and trink Malfoy. And I wounder who Malfoy is supposed to kill. Harry? HERMIONE??? lol!!
Cant wait until you post more!!
Love ya
Jen!
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08-30-2007, 02:32 AM
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| | Nogtail
Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Hogwarts School of W
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Great update! I think Hermione would do it, to help her friends, but maybe...perhaps...it works, but in the other way around...?
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08-30-2007, 03:11 AM
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| DA News Officer Puffskein
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Nice post Shirel! PAMS!
Katie
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08-31-2007, 01:35 AM
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| | Imp
Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: In a strange and unfair world.
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great update, i lurve your story. PAMS!
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09-01-2007, 01:53 AM
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| !!!!Awesome!!!! Jobberknoll
Join Date: May 2004 Location: in Howarts offcourse
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09-02-2007, 01:30 PM
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| | Moke
Join Date: Feb 2006
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Second Year | Hope is the only thing stronger than fear.
Okay 1)New reader very faithful
2)I loved it.Harrys sarcasm is funny.
3)Pmas when you can
~*<3*~
Heather
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09-02-2007, 02:35 PM
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| Formerly: DanFan4eva Billywig
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NEW READER HERE!
Your story is going great so far!
It's really good.
PAMS!
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09-04-2007, 12:54 PM
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| | Snidget
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Far away from you...
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First Year |  I am sooo sorry for not posting for a loooong time! FanFic Enthusiast
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Originally Posted by G00DGIRLG0N3BAD great!
PAMS!! PAMSOID!!
XOXO,
Tara
Oh, thanks Tara! I love that you read my story!! Quote:
Originally Posted by Mari of the Ocean ohhhh I love it!!!!!!! What's Draco supposed to do???? I can't wait please post as soon as possible!! Mari, thanks sooooo much! you're soo sweet! Well, as for draco, you'll have to wait and see! *grins*
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Originally Posted by dracosmine** Oh I love it! I wounder if she is going to go out with the plan and trink Malfoy. And I wounder who Malfoy is supposed to kill. Harry? HERMIONE??? lol!!
Cant wait until you post more!!
Love ya
Jen! Awwww! thanks Jen! I love keeping you guys in suspence! hehe
You only heard like three sentences from Oansy and Draco and you're already getting close to the plot! lol
Well don't worry the post will definitly be up soon!! yay
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Originally Posted by jkrsong96 Great update! I think Hermione would do it, to help her friends, but maybe...perhaps...it works, but in the other way around...? Thabjs Mindy! Well, I would love to comment on my story and guess what might happen but since I am the author, I can't guess cause I might give the plot away! lol *smiles at Mindy*
don't worry I wont keep you guys in suspence for much longer!!!! *cheers*
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Originally Posted by LyonLover417 Nice post Shirel! PAMS!
Katie Thanks Katie!!!! More will be up soon! *cheers*
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Originally Posted by dracoismysmexyone great update, i lurve your story. PAMS!
-Jenna Thank you from the bottom of my heart, Jenna!!!! ah, I love you guys sooooo much and that's what keeps me writing!
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Originally Posted by Mari of the Ocean Pams Pams Pams Pams Pams Pams Lol!!! I'm soooo sorry to keep you waiting, school is such a killer!!!
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Originally Posted by springbaby Okay 1)New reader very faithful
2)I loved it.Harrys sarcasm is funny.
3)Pmas when you can
~*<3*~
Heather HEY Heather!!!! Thank you sooo soooo much for reading my story! I laughed at your 1,2, 3's! You're soo sweet!
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Originally Posted by DanFan4eva NEW READER HERE!
Your story is going great so far!
It's really good.
PAMS!
..:Lisa:.. OMG!! thanks sooo much for reading Lisa!! It means soooo sooo much to me! okay, now i am starting to get a little hieyper (I so spelled that wrong!!) and my mom wants me to do my homework so blah!!! lol
Okay, everyone, I am sooooo sorry for making you guys wait this long! school is TORTURE!! I am writing the chapter now and I will try really really hard to post it today, the latest tomorrow! I hoppe you guys aren't suffering school! LOL! *high fives you and laughs*
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09-04-2007, 05:26 PM
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| DA News Officer Puffskein
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School is torture, I start Senior year tomorrow, and it's going to be tough! So much stuff planned! WHOOO!!! PAMS Shirel, and don't worry about the waits, just post!
Katie
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09-04-2007, 10:09 PM
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| Formerly: DanFan4eva Billywig
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OMG!! thanks sooo much for reading Lisa!! It means soooo sooo much to me!
Aww, No problem.
but seriously you story line is genius and I LOVE it!
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09-05-2007, 03:27 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: I live in the Malfoy
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Am I really close to discovering it??? lol!
Urgh! School is torture. Tomorrow I start my first day of college! I am so nervous.
Anywayz! Cant wait until the next post but take your time, school comes girst, even though we dont want it to! lol!
Love ya
Jen!
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09-06-2007, 01:52 AM
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| !!!!Awesome!!!! Jobberknoll
Join Date: May 2004 Location: in Howarts offcourse
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ahhhhhh I don't want to wait!!!!!!!!!!! Please post as soon as you can. No stress!! hehehe
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09-06-2007, 12:38 PM
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#72 (permalink)
| | Horklump
Join Date: May 2007 Location: live next door to a star
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its really good!!!!
& dont worry shirel - i really do mean it!
PAMS!!
(& dont call me the t word or else....)
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09-08-2007, 02:42 AM
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| !!!!Awesome!!!! Jobberknoll
Join Date: May 2004 Location: in Howarts offcourse
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Pams Pams Pams Pams Pams Pams Pams Pams Pams Pams Pams
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09-09-2007, 06:08 PM
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| Formerly: DanFan4eva Billywig
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Please PAMS!!
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09-10-2007, 10:36 AM
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| | Puffskein
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coolies....post more soon love you xxx
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