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Old 11-04-2009, 01:05 PM   #101 (permalink)
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She still couldn’t figure out what had gone wrong. She was doing everything correctly as Professor Wood had described, and she was able to fly fairly well. Suddenly, she lost balance and fell off the broom. But surprisingly enough, the broom stood erect in the air.
It does make you wonder.
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Professor Cecelia Waters was tall and dark, and tied her hair in a tight bun. She had kind and soft eyes, and a smile that could never let anyone get scared even if she scolded them.
I bet Neville Longbottom would have done better if she had been the Potions Professor when he was in school.
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`Spying? Oh no—not at all! You see, the extendible ears weren’t working so I decided to follow you to the common room and ducked behind the pillar as Professor Waters hurried past me!’ James replied, slyly.
It sounds like James is quite a handful. I hope Rose can overlook him. I enjoyed your post Tina, and hope your able to post more soon.
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Now that was a really good chapter Tina I liked it a lot. Yup yup.

I have to admit James eavesdropping was evil, but a bit cute. He's so naughty. I liked the password for the common room too, now I just have to look it up to see what it is LOL

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Neways, back to your riveting tale of love, betrayal, and naughty brooms. I'm starting to wonder from the way you started this fic if the brooms weren't hexed or something ... acting naughty I mean don't tell me, but I mean Rose said this:

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She still couldn’t figure out what had gone wrong. She was doing everything correctly as Professor Wood had described, and she was able to fly fairly well. Suddenly, she lost balance and fell off the broom. But surprisingly enough, the broom stood erect in the air.
Hmm. A broom that drops its rider? Or one of it's riders? The other one could have been invisible, no? I'm just curious. I mean, why would a broom stay up in the air without a rider, no?

Neways my favorite part was this, hands down :

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She glanced at Albus and Scorpius at the other side of the room. She felt her cheeks turn deep pink and looked away.
How cute! I love that she's blushing. I'm assuming the boys didn't see anything because they're boys and they probably weren't paying attention, right? Just curious.

I'm glad you posted Tina, I really enjoy your story. Take your time but don't take too long I really love reading your updates. *fires the cannons* I love your story and all the sweet things I say about your story are only because they're true. Pams when you cans
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Old 11-14-2009, 10:44 PM   #103 (permalink)

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Old 12-03-2009, 12:43 PM   #104 (permalink)
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aw...good one james is really annoying sometimes but cute all the same...waiting for more...it was sweet how Rosie blushes sneaking a glance at Scorpius...
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Aw! Rose is thinking about Scorpius! That's so cute! Naughty James for eavesdropping. He definitely takes after Marauder James. I'm glad Rose showed James and Vinnie by walking into the common room.

Sorry once again for not commenting for a long time! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
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Old 12-23-2009, 03:24 PM   #106 (permalink)

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Aww Rose was thinking about Scorpius!! cute
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OMG! I'm sorry I haven't posted in forever! I LOVED the past posts!! I'm really excited and I gasped a lot(: PAMS!!
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Ottsy: Thanks, thanks and thanks!!!! The password was just something that occured to me as the password! LOL, and Rose's broom was definitely a very naughty one!! And yes, knowing boys, they didn't notice Rose even looking at them. Though James did...

Lily: Yes, I think you did say that enough and thanks!!!

Connie: Poor neville, Snape was hard on him! I guess you're right when you say that neville would've done better with Waters.

EmilyMalfoy: Thanks!! And thanks once more for reminding me about that McGonagall thing! (But you know what, it wasn't my fault that mcGonagall made a mistake while making her speech! She wasn't under the Imperius Curse!)

Harita: Thanks a lot!!! The next chappie will be up in about two hours!


Kita: It really isn't your fault that you didn't comment in a long time!!! Maybe I don't even deserve comments cuz I've not posted in quite a while!!!I like james too!! He's cute and funny!! BTW, I love your new siggy!!! Just wondering, why've you got Indian actresses as Jess, Kita and Angel???


Evangeline: Welcome and Thanks!!! The Sorting Hat song was written in a hurry so it wasn't thjat good, but I'm glad you still liked it!!! I liked the flying lesson too...

Angela: Thanks a lot! I've missed you!!! BTW, your Fic was great too!!! I'm glad you're back!!


Thanks a lot, all of you for being there all this time!!! I don't blame you if you've started hating me, but I had forgotten my password, AND I've my exams going on AND I don't really get time on the Indternet. Whatever time I do get, is spent on Facebook!! So I'm really, truly sorry!!!!!!!! I love you all!!!!
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That very evening, Rose was in the library, looking up all the information that she could find about a bezoar. Nine inches of an essay was certainly not “a lot of homework” for Rose Weasley, but that day it suddenly seemed like a very difficult task. She kept taking down notes and wondering why the evening seemed too long. Maybe it was because she wasn’t concentrating on bezoars. Maybe it was because, even while she was doing her homework, she was actually thinking about the flying lesson. For the first time in ten years, Rose was actually tired of studying.

She stood up and went to put the book back in its place on the shelf. As she was walking, she heard a husky voice behind her say, “Excuse me, are you done with the book? I think I’m going to need it too.”

A startled Rose turned to look at the person who owned the voice and of course, it was Scorpius Malfoy. Rose’s face went through several shades of red and her mind went blank. She was about to drop the book as she started feeling dizzy.

At the very moment, Scorpius cried,” Rose? Are you okay?”

Rose found herself in front of Scorpius again, only this time, Scorpius was shaking her by her shoulders and the book was lying beside her on a table.

“I’m okay… what are you doing here? “ Rose said.

“I asked you for the book and you kept staring at me and then your eyelids started flickering and you looked like you were about to fall. So I snatched the book from your hands and started shaking you! That’s about all—are you sure you’ll be all right?”Scorpius said, relieved.

“Oh, I’m perfectly fine! Thanks. Er… it’s getting dark. Do you really want to study right now? If you want, I can give you my notes too,” Rose replied shyly.

“Er... Sure. Thank you! “Scorpius said, surprised.

“Then let’s go,” Rose said, walking out of the library, with Scorpius following her.

Rose and Scorpius walked alongside each other and even though none of them figured it out, both were feeling uncomfortable yet happy. Rose was blushing madly throughout the time, while Scorpius was wondering why Rose wasn’t mad at him anymore.

“So, Scorpius, I never really got around to thank you for kind of saving my life this morning! I really thought I was dead,” Rose said cheerfully.

“Oh, that was just—I wanted to see how I would fly, so I thought it would be a good way to start,” Scorpius said, feeling stupid for giving such a bad excuse. Undoubtedly though, he got his answer for why Rose was behaving nicely with him.

As they reached the portrait of the Fat lady, both of them said the password at the same time, and flushing as they did so. Upon entering the common room, they found it hard to avoid the stares of Vanessa, Gabrielle, Albus, Jacob and James together. None of them spoke a word, and Rose just smiled kindly at Scorpius before going to the Girls’ Dormitory.
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“Oh, that was just—I wanted to see how I would fly, so I thought it would be a good way to start,” Scorpius said, feeling stupid for giving such a bad excuse.
Aren't boys so adorable? Loved this post Tina! Post agian when you can.
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Awww! I love it!! They are sooo cute PAMS!
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First of all, I'm so glad you're back and writing here again Tina *fires the cannons for you he's so happy*

Secondly, OMG! I'm so sorry I missed your update ... I kept seeing people post to your story and I was wondering if they weren't just spamming or going PAMS all the time so I thought I'd pop in to check

I'm so glad you're posting. I love this story. I promise I'll keep better track of it in the future, I promise.

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That very evening, Rose was in the library, looking up all the information that she could find about a bezoar.
There's a shocker. I love Rose Weasley, she's so cute.

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Maybe it was because, even while she was doing her homework, she was actually thinking about the flying lesson. For the first time in ten years, Rose was actually tired of studying.
That there was too cute. Rose is lost in thoughts of flying ... I wonder why? You wrote that so cutely Tina, is it any wonder I love your fic?


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“I asked you for the book and you kept staring at me and then your eyelids started flickering and you looked like you were about to fall. So I snatched the book from your hands and started shaking you! That’s about all—are you sure you’ll be all right?”Scorpius said, relieved.
OMG! Scorpius is such a Romeo to have that kind of effect on girls *Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeee* Sorry, I couldn't help it. He's too cute.


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“Oh, I’m perfectly fine! Thanks. Er… it’s getting dark. Do you really want to study right now? If you want, I can give you my notes too,” Rose replied shyly.
I'm so glad Rose's attitude towards Scorpius has changed. It was so cute how she got all blushy and then dizzy and now she's sharing her notes with him? OMG! Sorry, it's just ... nice after how mean she was for so long and he being so sweet and ... I ship them ... *fires the cannons*


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Rose and Scorpius walked alongside each other and even though none of them figured it out, both were feeling uncomfortable yet happy. Rose was blushing madly throughout the time, while Scorpius was wondering why Rose wasn’t mad at him anymore.
I think the way you wrote this whole post was toooooooooo cute. I like them walking with each other, all weird because suddenly they don't dislike one another and they start to realize that maybe they like each other too and all this going on and them feeling weird about it and all of it being so cute. OMG!

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As they reached the portrait of the Fat lady, both of them said the password at the same time, and flushing as they did so. Upon entering the common room, they found it hard to avoid the stares of Vanessa, Gabrielle, Albus, Jacob and James together. None of them spoke a word, and Rose just smiled kindly at Scorpius before going to the Girls’ Dormitory.
Loved it. Pams when you cans Tina. Your story is made of awesome and I love it. Give us more ... please. When you can obviously. Good luck with school and all ... but don't forget us, okay? We love your story. I'll always be back. Even if I'm late
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I noticed the name of this Fan Fic, very close to one I started! how awesome, although the story lines are completely different!

You have a very great story going on here! I love the Scorpius twist, and its adorable that Rose is blushing around him!!! I can't wait to read more! You are doing very well, especially for being 12! That is wonderful!

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Tina you need to post ... this story is too awesome to just go away. *gives you inspiration*
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Thanks a lot guys!!! I'll post after the 15th of March. My exams will be over then!!!!!!! But I love you guys and I miss you!!! Don't hate me PLEASE!!!!!!!!
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Thanks a lot Connie, seriously I don't know where I'd be if it weren't for your encouraging words... Just two days to go!!!!!! yay!!!! Thanks a lot guys and remember to check after two days... there'll be a lot waiting for you!!!
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