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10-20-2003, 03:15 AM
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| Banned Chizpurfle
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| HarryPotterfreak82's Poems
When death comes near
When there is pain
when you shed a tear
Just like the rain
When we lose friends
So dear to us
It's not the end
No need to fuss
Are they truly gone
Has their spirit left
Will their be no more song
Their death we need to accept
Them you may not see
But they're still here
They are free
Free of all fear
They're free of all sorrow
Free of all shame
Free of any tomorrow
Free of all pain
You may feel sad
And deep inside
You can't feel glad
Please don't cry
If you do infront of me
I'll cry for eternity
Well, what do you think? You may not understand if you didn't read the fifth book
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10-20-2003, 03:16 AM
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| Guest | its good and I really miss snuffles! :unsure: |
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10-20-2003, 03:19 AM
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| Banned Chizpurfle
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WE can cry together Waaaaaaa (lol) |
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10-31-2003, 03:14 AM
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| Banned Chizpurfle
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My heart pounds
The feelings drown
He's gone He's gone
I feel the anger
I once knew
I want revenge upon them
I want be happy again
I know not a soul
I can't be alone
I can't let go
I grasp the aid
I feel all destroyed
I don't think
I don't care
I want to be anywhere, but here
I know nothing but the pain in my heart
The beautiful destorted
The delicate strengthened
I watch my loved ones fall away
Like a petal from a rose
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11-01-2003, 11:30 PM
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| Fwooper
Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: the void
Posts: 21,838
Hogwarts RPG Name: Amelia Yarborough Hufflepuff Seventh Year Hogwarts RPG Name: Emerald Peridot "Dot" Ainsley Gryffindor Seventh Year
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| HOLISTIC ACTRESS {X O} EVERYTHING IS CONNECTED
Its good, maybe you should write some slam poetry
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11-03-2003, 03:32 PM
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| Banned Chizpurfle
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er, 'slam poetry'?
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11-03-2003, 03:47 PM
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| Banned Chizpurfle
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One dead and gone
Two friends beside me
Three fighters for life
Four eternity
Five years have gone by
Six more should come
Seven years with friends
Eight all chocolate frogs
Nine minutes left for me
Ten months at school
Many things to expect
Many things to occur
Not my best one^
In the wind
Hope carries
In the song
Hope lives
In the speech
Hope reasurred
In touch
Hope restored
In faith
Hope strives
In life
Hope is there
But In death
Hope dies too
Hmm I dunno^
Save the person
Not easily replaced
Save the fun
That comes once in a while
Save the memory
That needs to be remembered
Save the love
Hopefully not broken
Save the friend
For they may drift away
Save the year
Who knows what will happen
But don't Save
Something you won't apreciate
hmm^
What do you think?
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11-04-2003, 02:59 AM
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| Guest |
these are good!
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11-04-2003, 05:33 AM
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| Banned Chizpurfle
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: in the twilight zone doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
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Seriously? Thanks! Hey btw I love your fanfic about Hermione getting scary emails!
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11-04-2003, 08:38 PM
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| Banned Chizpurfle
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: in the twilight zone doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
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Whoa
Don’t leave
Whoa
Can’t believe
Whoa
Take me
Instead
I’ll fight for you
Till the end
I’ll fight for you
You were more than a friend
Whoa
Don’t leave
Whoa
Can’t believe
Whoa
Take me
Instead
I want you
I can’t be alone
I want you
Can’t let you go
Whoa
Don’t leave
Whoa
Can’t believe
Whoa
Take me
Instead
Take me
Instead
Don’t leave me
It’s all over Goodbye *in a whisper* These are my songs FYI
Hey you
Sitting there
All alone
Hey you
In despair
Got to go
Hey you Hey you Hey you
I have to get out of here
I’ve got to get someone to
Believe
In me
Yeah
Hey you
Not a care
At all
Hey you
Nothing’s fair
Got to crawl
Hey you Hey you Hey you
I have to get out of here
I’ve got to get someone to
Believe
In me
Yeah
Hey you
Eyes of tears
And pain
Hey you
Crying mirrors
Of rain
Hey you Hey you Hey you
I have to get out of here
I’ve got to get someone to
Believe
In me
Yeah
I have to get out of here
I’ve got to get someone to
Believe
In me
Yeah
Got to go
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11-06-2003, 08:16 PM
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| Fire Slug
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: America (Georgia)
Posts: 146
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Good ,Good VERY, VERY, VERY, good
Here have a flower :flowersmile:
Oh, heck have a bunch of flowers :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile:
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11-06-2003, 11:57 PM
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| Banned Chizpurfle
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: in the twilight zone doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
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This song has the same verse as my second one!
Tears fall from my eyes
All I can do
Is sit and cry
No one will talk
No one will breathe
No one will walk
How can I still be
I have to get out of here
I’ve got to get someone to
Believe
In me
Yeah
There is no song
There is no right
There is no wrong
I just can’t fight
And I can’t bare
To see you dieing
While you sit there
And watch me crying
I have to get out of here
I’ve got to get someone to
Believe
In me
Yeah
Trust
I don’t know where to go
Trust
I can’t be alone
Trust
Trust
I have to get out of here
I’ve got to get someone to
Believe
In me
Yeah
Ooh!
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11-08-2003, 02:49 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: United States
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Cool poem. I was trying to make a poem about sirius too.
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11-10-2003, 02:57 AM
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| Guest | That is a very good poem. :flowersmile:
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11-12-2003, 03:30 AM
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| Guest |
this is depressing but good  :bouncepea:
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11-12-2003, 04:29 AM
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| Banned Chizpurfle
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: in the twilight zone doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
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You should read my poetry portfolio called Red Rose it's here in the poetry forum
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11-12-2003, 08:29 PM
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| Dugbog
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: New Jersey
Posts: 113
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Although I haven't gotten to read the fifth book yet ( Cuz my fiance wants to buy it for me for xmas) I really liked the poem. Good wording. Keep it up! :flowersmile:
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11-13-2003, 02:02 AM
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| Imp
Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: At your neck!
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nice one - im liking it a lot. really captures the spirit of teh atmosphere. nije job!
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11-13-2003, 02:09 AM
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| Imp
Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: At your neck!
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lovin it lovin it lovin it. totally absolutley amazing. havent read anything this good in ages! nice job keep it up!
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11-13-2003, 05:24 AM
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| Banned Chizpurfle
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Ahh! I just had inspiration for a new song and I of course had to post it!
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It feels like there’ll be no tomorrow
No one to great my face
It feels like the end of the world
As we know it yea
Everything is standin’ still
As my life flashes ‘fore my eyes
And no one seems to realise
The loss of another
The end of the day
The loss of a father
The end of a ray
Of hope
It feels like the last ship sailed
To the great beyond
It feels like the earth ceased turning
Around and ‘round
Everything is standin’ still
As my life flashes ‘fore my eyes
And no one seems to realise
The loss of another
The end of a the day
The loss of a father
The end of a ray
Of hope
And no one seems to realise
The loss of another
The end of a the day
The loss of a father
The end of a ray
Of hope
As my life ends ‘fore my eyes
No one seems to realise
Me
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11-14-2003, 06:06 AM
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| Banned Chizpurfle
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Though the road looks hard
And the feelings buldge
And there's no reason to move on
Though the tears they fall
And the pain it crawls
And there's a reason to give in
Sail away
Sail away
Sail away into your dreams
Sail away with the hope
And don't
give in
Sail away oh sail away
Though the hurt hurts
And the faith dies
Along with evrything else
Though the people cry
And the people yell
Along with your heart
Sail away
Sail away
Sail away into your dreams
Sail away with the hope
And don't
give in
Sail away oh sail away
Dont' look back
on your pain
Don't look back
On your sorrow
Don't give up
And don't give in
Keep moving strong
Through the wind
Sail away
Sail away
Sail away into your dreams
Sail away with the hope
And don't
give in
Sail away oh sail away
Hey yea yea
Sail away
Sail away
Sail away into your dreams
Sail away with the hope
And don't
give in
Sail away oh sail away
Ooh! Sail Away
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11-15-2003, 12:10 AM
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| Banned Chizpurfle
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: in the twilight zone doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
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Help me
I can't speak
Help me
I can't think
Your words linger
In my heart
And I need you
Help me
I can't breathe
Help me
I can't leave
You lying there
Cold as can be
I need you
Help me
I can't sing
Help me
I can't bring
The memory of your life
Stays inside my mind
And I need you
Help me
I can't see
Help me
I can't be
Here in this world
No one cares at all
And I need you
Help me
I'm not free
Help me
I can't agree
With the loss of my
Favourite guy
And I need you
Ooh
I need you
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FYI it's a song
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11-15-2003, 08:04 PM
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| Dugbog
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: New Jersey
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I definatley love these poems of yours!
Remember this: As long as your poetry comes from your heart, then it can NEVER be bad, ever!
You should be proud of your writing and I just want to say that your wording is complex to understand, but well worth it! Keep up the great work!
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11-17-2003, 03:06 AM
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| Banned Chizpurfle
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Where did you go
I want to know
Why you left me here
Where did you go
I want to know
Why you're not near
How could you leave me
All alone
I've stopped trying to
Let you go
I can't bear
To see you there
Without me
Where did you go
I want to know
Why did you die
Where did you go
I want to know
Why do I cry
How could leave me
All alone
I've stopped trying to
Let you go
I can't bear
TO see you there
Without me
I need you ooh
Yeah
It's true
I can't breathe
I can't live
I just need
You ooh
You ooh
How could leave me
All alone
I've stopped trying to
Let you go
I can't bear
TO see you there
Without me
Without me
Without me
Without me
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11-19-2003, 03:39 AM
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| Banned Chizpurfle
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Ooh Inspiration!!!
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Say you will
Say you won't
Say you'll be with me forever
And you'll never leave me behind
I can't take it
Anymore
I see your smile
And I go through the floor
I can't tell with
the way you act
Will you love me
or stab me in the back
Say you will
Say you won't
Say you'll be with me forever
And you'll never leave me behind
You've got to decide
Not later but now
I may stop loving you
Dont' ask how
You've got that smile
written on your face
And Ican't talk to you
Without losing my place
Say you will
Say you won't
Say you'll be with me forever
And you'll never leave me behind
I need you
And you know that
I need you
And I'm taken you back
Say you will
Say you won't
Say you'll be with me forever
And you'll never leave me behind
behind
Oh
behind
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Not depressing one but had to write it
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