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Old 10-20-2003, 03:15 AM   #1 (permalink)
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When death comes near
When there is pain
when you shed a tear
Just like the rain

When we lose friends
So dear to us
It's not the end
No need to fuss

Are they truly gone
Has their spirit left
Will their be no more song
Their death we need to accept

Them you may not see
But they're still here
They are free
Free of all fear

They're free of all sorrow
Free of all shame
Free of any tomorrow
Free of all pain

You may feel sad
And deep inside
You can't feel glad
Please don't cry

If you do infront of me
I'll cry for eternity

Well, what do you think? You may not understand if you didn't read the fifth book
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its good and I really miss snuffles! :unsure:
 
Old 10-20-2003, 03:19 AM   #3 (permalink)
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WE can cry together Waaaaaaa (lol)
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My heart pounds
The feelings drown
He's gone He's gone

I feel the anger
I once knew
I want revenge upon them
I want be happy again
I know not a soul
I can't be alone
I can't let go
I grasp the aid
I feel all destroyed
I don't think
I don't care
I want to be anywhere, but here
I know nothing but the pain in my heart

The beautiful destorted
The delicate strengthened
I watch my loved ones fall away
Like a petal from a rose
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Amelia Yarborough
Hufflepuff
Seventh Year

Hogwarts RPG Name:
Emerald Peridot "Dot" Ainsley
Gryffindor
Seventh Year

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Its good, maybe you should write some slam poetry
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er, 'slam poetry'?
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One dead and gone
Two friends beside me
Three fighters for life
Four eternity
Five years have gone by
Six more should come
Seven years with friends
Eight all chocolate frogs
Nine minutes left for me
Ten months at school
Many things to expect
Many things to occur

Not my best one^

In the wind
Hope carries
In the song
Hope lives
In the speech
Hope reasurred
In touch
Hope restored
In faith
Hope strives
In life
Hope is there
But In death
Hope dies too

Hmm I dunno^

Save the person
Not easily replaced
Save the fun
That comes once in a while
Save the memory
That needs to be remembered
Save the love
Hopefully not broken
Save the friend
For they may drift away
Save the year
Who knows what will happen
But don't Save
Something you won't apreciate

hmm^

What do you think?
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Old 11-04-2003, 02:59 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Seriously? Thanks! Hey btw I love your fanfic about Hermione getting scary emails!
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Whoa
Don’t leave
Whoa
Can’t believe
Whoa
Take me
Instead


I’ll fight for you
Till the end
I’ll fight for you
You were more than a friend

Whoa
Don’t leave
Whoa
Can’t believe
Whoa
Take me
Instead

I want you
I can’t be alone
I want you
Can’t let you go

Whoa
Don’t leave
Whoa
Can’t believe
Whoa
Take me
Instead
Take me
Instead
Don’t leave me

It’s all over Goodbye *in a whisper*

These are my songs FYI

Hey you
Sitting there
All alone

Hey you
In despair
Got to go

Hey you Hey you Hey you

I have to get out of here
I’ve got to get someone to
Believe
In me
Yeah

Hey you
Not a care
At all

Hey you
Nothing’s fair
Got to crawl

Hey you Hey you Hey you

I have to get out of here
I’ve got to get someone to
Believe
In me
Yeah

Hey you
Eyes of tears
And pain

Hey you
Crying mirrors
Of rain

Hey you Hey you Hey you

I have to get out of here
I’ve got to get someone to
Believe
In me
Yeah

I have to get out of here
I’ve got to get someone to
Believe
In me
Yeah

Got to go
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Good ,Good VERY, VERY, VERY, good

Here have a flower :flowersmile:

Oh, heck have a bunch of flowers :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile:
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This song has the same verse as my second one!

Tears fall from my eyes
All I can do
Is sit and cry
No one will talk
No one will breathe
No one will walk
How can I still be

I have to get out of here
I’ve got to get someone to
Believe
In me
Yeah

There is no song
There is no right
There is no wrong
I just can’t fight
And I can’t bare
To see you dieing
While you sit there
And watch me crying

I have to get out of here
I’ve got to get someone to
Believe
In me
Yeah

Trust
I don’t know where to go
Trust
I can’t be alone
Trust
Trust

I have to get out of here
I’ve got to get someone to
Believe
In me
Yeah

Ooh!
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Old 11-08-2003, 02:49 PM   #13 (permalink)
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Cool poem. I was trying to make a poem about sirius too.
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That is a very good poem. :flowersmile:
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this is depressing but good
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Old 11-12-2003, 04:29 AM   #16 (permalink)
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You should read my poetry portfolio called Red Rose it's here in the poetry forum
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Although I haven't gotten to read the fifth book yet ( Cuz my fiance wants to buy it for me for xmas) I really liked the poem. Good wording. Keep it up! :flowersmile:
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nice one - im liking it a lot. really captures the spirit of teh atmosphere. nije job!
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lovin it lovin it lovin it. totally absolutley amazing. havent read anything this good in ages! nice job keep it up!
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Ahh! I just had inspiration for a new song and I of course had to post it!
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It feels like there’ll be no tomorrow
No one to great my face

It feels like the end of the world
As we know it yea

Everything is standin’ still
As my life flashes ‘fore my eyes
And no one seems to realise

The loss of another
The end of the day
The loss of a father
The end of a ray
Of hope

It feels like the last ship sailed
To the great beyond

It feels like the earth ceased turning
Around and ‘round

Everything is standin’ still
As my life flashes ‘fore my eyes
And no one seems to realise

The loss of another
The end of a the day
The loss of a father
The end of a ray
Of hope

And no one seems to realise

The loss of another
The end of a the day
The loss of a father
The end of a ray
Of hope

As my life ends ‘fore my eyes
No one seems to realise
Me

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Though the road looks hard
And the feelings buldge
And there's no reason to move on

Though the tears they fall
And the pain it crawls
And there's a reason to give in

Sail away
Sail away
Sail away into your dreams
Sail away with the hope
And don't
give in
Sail away oh sail away

Though the hurt hurts
And the faith dies
Along with evrything else

Though the people cry
And the people yell
Along with your heart

Sail away
Sail away
Sail away into your dreams
Sail away with the hope
And don't
give in
Sail away oh sail away

Dont' look back
on your pain
Don't look back
On your sorrow
Don't give up
And don't give in
Keep moving strong
Through the wind

Sail away
Sail away
Sail away into your dreams
Sail away with the hope
And don't
give in
Sail away oh sail away

Hey yea yea


Sail away
Sail away
Sail away into your dreams
Sail away with the hope
And don't
give in
Sail away oh sail away

Ooh! Sail Away
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Help me
I can't speak
Help me
I can't think
Your words linger
In my heart
And I need you

Help me
I can't breathe
Help me
I can't leave
You lying there
Cold as can be
I need you

Help me
I can't sing
Help me
I can't bring
The memory of your life
Stays inside my mind
And I need you

Help me
I can't see
Help me
I can't be
Here in this world
No one cares at all
And I need you

Help me
I'm not free
Help me
I can't agree
With the loss of my
Favourite guy
And I need you
Ooh
I need you

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FYI it's a song
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I definatley love these poems of yours!

Remember this: As long as your poetry comes from your heart, then it can NEVER be bad, ever!

You should be proud of your writing and I just want to say that your wording is complex to understand, but well worth it! Keep up the great work!
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Where did you go
I want to know
Why you left me here
Where did you go
I want to know
Why you're not near

How could you leave me
All alone
I've stopped trying to
Let you go
I can't bear
To see you there
Without me

Where did you go
I want to know
Why did you die
Where did you go
I want to know
Why do I cry

How could leave me
All alone
I've stopped trying to
Let you go
I can't bear
TO see you there
Without me

I need you ooh
Yeah
It's true
I can't breathe
I can't live
I just need
You ooh
You ooh

How could leave me
All alone
I've stopped trying to
Let you go
I can't bear
TO see you there
Without me

Without me

Without me

Without me
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Ooh Inspiration!!!
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Say you will
Say you won't
Say you'll be with me forever
And you'll never leave me behind

I can't take it
Anymore
I see your smile
And I go through the floor

I can't tell with
the way you act
Will you love me
or stab me in the back

Say you will
Say you won't
Say you'll be with me forever
And you'll never leave me behind

You've got to decide
Not later but now
I may stop loving you
Dont' ask how

You've got that smile
written on your face
And Ican't talk to you
Without losing my place

Say you will
Say you won't
Say you'll be with me forever
And you'll never leave me behind

I need you
And you know that
I need you
And I'm taken you back

Say you will
Say you won't
Say you'll be with me forever
And you'll never leave me behind
behind
Oh
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