Poetry: Dee's Poem

[Cho Chang 611]

i made a poem today...i dunno why, but i felt like writing this.

Goodbye
why does it always seem
that you and i go between
some kind of love and hate
one minute everything seems,right
but then we get into a great big fight

all this is so confusing
nothing you do now seems so amusing
somehow i feel
that something is wrong
i feel that you and I just dont belong
so now I say, goodbye

we have got to accept
that we are not meant to be
I am letting you go
so, now you are free

so, goodbye
i don't want you here
just leave, just go away
don't go back,
thinking everything is okay
there's nothing you can do
i'm finally saying goodbye to you...

[*Dracosxlilxhunni3*]

wow!Great poems!

[IluvTom]

oOoOo nice

[Chick_14luvsHarry]

very good!

[Cho Chang 611]

haha, thanks.
if its about me... i'll never tell!

[Cho Chang 611]

and another poem, this one isn't as great as the other one. I was inspired by my friend...

Why does everything has to be your way,
Because of that, our love has been decayed.
I now have to say good bye...
All this just makes me want to cry

I don't want to see you ever again,
So please don't come back
Just go, leave, go away.
Don't even think of coming back
Tomorrow, or any other day.

Sometimes I sit and think,
What would I do without you
Would I be able to live?
Would I've been able to share,and give?
But then I saw your bad side,
All I wanted to do is go blind.

I look at the roses you gave me so long ago
Their still there stuck to my shelf
I think and wonder,
why I still have it,
But to tell you the truth,
All this makes me want to hate myself.

Look!
Look what you've done!
You terrorized me!
You made me forget about my dreams,
and made me want to flee!
You made me forget what love even means...

Sometimes I look back,
to see what we've gone through.
There were many bad times,
but there was good too.
The way you touched me,
they was you kissed my cheek,
the way I thought you loved me,
it made me go weak.
Then you change, as if by magic.
You gained so much power
You controlled my life,
which made me want to kill myself with a knife.

I couldn't believe
the way you pushed and shoved me,
how I ended up on the floor.
I felt that there was no way out..
No windows, no doors.
Now...
Look what you've done!
But to bad, because this time I won...

ahh...that was long hmm?

[Cho Chang 611]

ooh look another poem!

I just wanted you to tell me the truth...

I just wanted you to tell me the truth,
the truth if you really loved me, or not.
i just can't understand,
why you can't see the love that we got.

loving you...
is the only thing i want to do.
I just want to be in your arms,
be with each other,
loving me won't do any harm.

boy, i just can't understand,
why you do such stupid things,
thinking that i'm in love with another man.

why cant you see?
that you and I are just meant to be.
heaven brought us to earth together,
we belong with each other...
forever.

you don't know what you'll do,
if you leave me,
alone, with out you.
I'll run and cry,
tears will fill my eyes.

but,
i won't stop you,
from loving me.
if you want,
you can just go away,
but don't think everything between us will ever be okay.

[Alyonna]

interesting.... i like them a lot. nice job!