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Connie · 11-30-2010, 04:05 PM

Hello ~Otty. This is going to be such a challenge to keep it shorter than your post.

I loved every bit of your post ~Otty, but, I think this bit was my favorite.

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He felt cold hands steady his and he looked at the vacant beautiful eyes of the girl, and the realization of something dark and truly sinister dawned on him as the night did every day on the Count’s floating castle.

I can picture Angel with his grey hair and his skin as if he had seen a ghost. Hmm Do the undead have ghosts? How much scarier could they be? Anyway... he must have been a site to see all washed out looking. Ottery would probably take one look and ask if he had been poisoned also.

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Yes, it's going to be sad. You all know you love the melancholy.

Thanks for the warning. I understand ~Otty, but, I just love your stories. I hate for it to end. Your writing is palpable, and you don't spoon feed your readers. You see why I love it so much then. Please do be gentle with our heros though. They have already been through so much, and I really don't want any of them to not pull through.

But, do as you must. It is after all your story.

I'm sure I will love it.

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I have it on good authority that some of my readers never post so

I remember. Glad you do too.

Great post ~Otty! I'll be watching for your next. Oh, just want to mention I had a feeling you would post last night. I stayed up till 2:15 but, couldn't stay awake any longer on just a feeling you would, so I went to bed. I was so happy to see you did post.

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Connie Puffskein Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Florida Posts: 1,415 Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year	Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions Hello ~Otty. This is going to be such a challenge to keep it shorter than your post.I loved every bit of your post ~Otty, but, I think this bit was my favorite. Quote: He felt cold hands steady his and he looked at the vacant beautiful eyes of the girl, and the realization of something dark and truly sinister dawned on him as the night did every day on the Count’s floating castle. I can picture Angel with his grey hair and his skin as if he had seen a ghost. Hmm Do the undead have ghosts? How much scarier could they be? Anyway... he must have been a site to see all washed out looking. Ottery would probably take one look and ask if he had been poisoned also. Quote: Yes, it's going to be sad. You all know you love the melancholy. Thanks for the warning. I understand ~Otty, but, I just love your stories. I hate for it to end. Your writing is palpable, and you don't spoon feed your readers. You see why I love it so much then. Please do be gentle with our heros though. They have already been through so much, and I really don't want any of them to not pull through. But, do as you must. It is after all your story. I'm sure I will love it. Quote: I have it on good authority that some of my readers never post so I remember. Glad you do too. Great post ~Otty! I'll be watching for your next. Oh, just want to mention I had a feeling you would post last night. I stayed up till 2:15 but, couldn't stay awake any longer on just a feeling you would, so I went to bed. I was so happy to see you did post.