Great chappie Maxie!
For someone who is a girl...

You have captured the joking and playing around of us guys very well! I can see me and my friends talking like this, really!
Quote:
I say you pack your bags and move into the lake. I'm sure you'll find a pretty female Gryndilow some day that'll make you forget this unattainable love.” He looked at John, all grins in a 'See? I just solved your problem for you!' manner.
Loooved this bit!

Rylon's such a good friend, eh?!